Postive additon to your university; Reference letter-- Scholarship

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Can you see my reference letter for a student to get a scholarship. Do you mind correcting my grammar mistakes and structures. please help me as soon as possible!

Dear Sir/Madam...
I am writing this reference at the request of Le Phuong who is applying for...
I have known Le Phuong since I taught her class Pharmacy English last year. She was the monitor and I contacted with her class through her. She has completed all duties that I gave her with a care and highly concentration.

Although I only taught her for a year, I was impressed by her abilities and skills. Not only does she have a smart way to learn, but also she has a suitable timetable for social work and many activities at school. In my English class, she was always the one who first volunteered to answer my questions; whether it was wrong or right, I appreciated highly her spirit. Moreover, I was very attracted with a large number of new ideas that she presented in my periods. In addition, she usually supports her classmate with difficult exercises and she really has a good skill in team work.

In conclusion, I would highly recommend Le Phuong . If her performance in my class in any indication of how she'd perform in your position, Le Phuong will be a positive addition to your universities. If you should ever need any additional information you can contact me at ... Or by email ...

Sincerely,

DearSir/Madam ...To Whom It May Concern:

I am writing this reference at the requestof for Le Phuong

She was the monitor and I contactedconnected with her the class through her

She has completed all duties that I gave her with a care and highly concentration.

she was always the one who first volunteered first to answer my questions; whether it was wrong or rightand , I highly appreciated highly her spirit.

Moreover, I was very attractedinterestedwith ain the large number of new ideas that she presented in my periods. In addition, she usually supports her classmate with difficult exercises and she really has a good skill in team workteam work skills .

Le Phuong will be a positive addition to your universitiesuniversity . If you should ever need any additional information you can contact me at ... Or by email ...say all contact info

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