Hello! I'll gladly help with your grammar and word choice.Due to her strong work ethic and professionalism, I feel confident in recommending her to your school.
"Due to" is not quite right here. Here's how I would stay this:Due toHaving witnessed her strong work ethic and
sense of professionalism, I feel confident in recommending her to your school.
Ms. XXX began working for XXXX.Co.Ltd in July of 2014 until end of August 2015. As the Management trainee of this company.
Since you're describing the entire time frame when Ms. XXX worked for you, you should leave out the word, "began." The sentence fragment that stats with "As" can be combined with the sentence to give a unified thought. "Management" should be lower case. I'll reword some other things to improve the style. I'll show you:Ms. XXX
began workingworked for XXXX.Co.Ltd
infrom July
of 2014 until
the end of August 2015
. Asas the
company's managementManagement trainee
of this company .
Her main duties involved maximizing sale, staff development and customer service.
"Maximizing" is not the best verb for all three of these tasks. Let me propose a different way to say what you want to say:Her main duties involved maximizing
salesales ,
fostering staff development
, and
improving customer service.
Moreover she also takes responsible about personnel department, coordination with supplier and analyzing sales.
"Moreover" is not necessary since you have an "also." "Takes responsible," "coordination," and "supplier" are the wrong form of the words to use here. Let me demonstrate:Moreover sheShe also
takes responsible abouttook on the responsibility of working with the personnel department,
coordination with suppliercoordinating with suppliers, and analyzing sales.
Throughout the work Ms.XXX can support me very well.
I think I understand what you're trying to say. Let me suggest you say it like this:Throughout the work Ms.XXX
contributed greatly to the well-being of my company during her time herecan support me very well .
She can help me to achieve sale target 6 month continue and she train a lot of potential staff for my store.
She
can help me tohelped the company achieve
its six-month salessale target
6 month continue and she trainand traineda lot of potential staff for my store.
I hope that helps you some!