You are 4 words under the minimum word count. You did not meet the minimum word presentation requirement so expect to have a percentage of deductions due to this error. It will be the starting score for your essay. From this point on, all other errors will be added to this section, which will then determine the final score of your essay. There are several word usage errors in this presentation which made the error difficult to understand. The GRA error also shows a lack of proper vocabulary usage and understanding on your part, which will result in additional deductions to your LR score. I am afraid you will not get a passing score with this essay. Let me show you a few of these errors below:
my and my friend choosed
-My friend an I chose
establish a birthday for my boss,
- celebrate the birthday of...
your wallet forgot
- your waiter
These are just some of the immediately visible errors in your essay. There are also GRA / sentence structure errors that further show a lack of proper English grammar usage in the letter. This is not an essay that would allow you get a passing mark in the test.