I'm thinking about to studying abroad. So I wrote a motivation letter. What do you think about it? Your feedback matters to me..
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apply for the Master's Degree Programme in International Business Administration at Hamburg University. I studied Business Administiration in Trakya University and graduated last summer. I would like to continue my education in order to gain better knowledge and vision.
During my studies at University, I applied for the Erasmus Programme and I had a chance to study abroad with a scholarship in Mannheim, Germany. It was a marvellous experience and I had a great time both educationally and socially. This led me to think about studying in Germany once again. While I was studying I organized many social activities and events for students such as educational seminars, vacation events and parties. With the money I earned from these organizations, I had a chance to travel all around Europe as a backpacker and experienced European culture.
After I graduated, I worked in an advertising agency for 8 months. While I was working, I realised that I am capable of communicating well and I was interested in the job. Accordingly, getting into such a Master's Degree Programme would definitely help my career and is needed to reach my goals.
My future plan is to be able to work in a well-known international company while continuing my studies in a PhD degree, so I can come up with a sensational thesis which I will adapt to the business world.
I consider myself a leader and at the same time a good co-worker. I'm very ambitious about the ideas I have and I work hard to realize them. I believe that work that is done with constant disipline and passion will be successful.
The reason I have chosen your university is that I would like to learn business administiration from a different perspective which, I believe, will help me to understand the international dimension of Business Administration since I will be abroad. Plus, the internship that your university provides is a great opportunity for experience. Accordingly, I hope my application will be accepted and I am looking forward to studying in the University of Hamburg.