Hi everyone
please give me some feed back regarding this letter...
I would like you to know that I appreciate the help and support you have showered on me from past four years. With your support and help, you have indeed made a difference in my life.
I wanted to thank you from depth of my heart for changing my life and attitude towards life.
Three years ago I was just an -------girl, but now I feel, I am not only a girl, but I am a responsible member of this society and a responsible human being.
I feel proud to b called as Josephite, attending College liberated me and allowed me to not only explore a wider array of subjects, including Math's, Accounts and business but also explored myself. And exposed to different types of societies. I grew into a strong independent woman.
A sense of responsibility, attitude, dedication and commitment has arisen within me; this could happen only after studying in such an esteemed college.
These developments were aided by JRS and especially you.
Abundant of thanks to you "Father"
I have already discussed with you about my sister ( ----------).
She is particularly interested in studying Computer Application offered in St. Joseph College of Art & Science., I believe that studying in St. Joseph College of Art & Science would deepen her understanding of not only the language, but of the culture, the people, and their history.
She is an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and inter-cultural relations. Especially her friends and classmates, describe her as a team player who cares about her group members. She is ambitious and likes to handle challenging tasks and to take the responsibility for it, Thus she has taken a rigorous curriculum and maintained I and II grade in school.
College is a time for new and exciting experiences as well as a time to explore diverse and innovative ideas. What could be better than traveling to a foreign country to learn about their ideas, history, and culture? I believe studying abroad is something that every college student should do to help to avoid ethnocentrism, to expand their horizons, and to appreciate everything the world has to offer.
Here is an undeniable advantage of living and studying in India, Not only she will learn about India, but she will also come to appreciate other countries in the world from a different point of view. She will be able to apply her new-found knowledge to her entire life and the way she looks at the world around her. What could be more exciting than that?
Academically, it is very important to her that she continues studying in India. Going to India gives her the chance to learn in a different and higher standard environment, and I do not think there is any better way to internalize a language and develop fluency.
She would enjoy studying at St. Joseph college of Art & Science which has a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. In normal circumstance, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, she is keen on looking beyond her own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. She is looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at St. Joseph college of Art & Science and to make a great contribution to the college community and the world at large.
Dear Father!
I experienced the difference in education system of India and Afghanistan; it is very much obvious that it Afghanistan universities are lower than the world standard.
You are aware of current political and educational obstacles in Afghanistan, Getting a seat in her desired subject by way of Kankor exam is something impossible for my sister due to the corrupt situation of my country and studying in private colleges costs more than a middleclass family's turnover. Moreover; Sahar is very much interested to be as Josephite like her elder sister and have the social exposure.
Sahar will finish her 12th Standard by end of November; she has got A+ or O grad so far,
She is good in mathematics and science subjects, she attends English classes in the morning too.
Dear Father!
Behind the strong desire to learn. I hope that she completes her Bachelor's degree over the next years. And she would learn to evaluate life and her experience. It's through that, that I hope she become an instrumental member of society, using all of her energies to bring about constructive change and create a path to the "good life," not only for herself but also for others.
I am requesting you to consider this application and give her a change to prove herself, and support her further education through RJS.
Thank you in advance for considering my application.
Yours Sincerely,
From depth of my heart , I wanted to thank you from depth of my heart for changing my life and attitude towards life.
Three years ago I was just an -------girl, but now I feel, I am not only a girl, but I am a responsible member of this society and a responsible human being. This sentence makes me think like majority of girls are not as good as boys, which is not true. I wouldn't have that sentence in my essay.
I feel proud to be called as Josephite.A ttending c ollege liberated me and allowed me to not only explore not only a wider array of subjects, includingsuch as Math's , Accounts ing, and business but also explore d myself. And exposed to different types of societies.I grew into a strong independent woman.
One big thing you missed in this post is the prompt. Would you please let me know the prompt so that I can help you further?
