UNIPDU FT C - this is a latter to Achmad Fatchur Roziq
Assalamualaikum wr.wb. Roziq how are you there ? i hope you are good. I miss you because we have not met in long time, do you miss to ? if you are on vacation i hope you can visit Jogja, im sure you will love it, because this city is unique. i will take you many palaces like a Malioboro, Borobudur tample , Parang Tritis bech, that all is a beutyful place in Jogjakarta. I know that you like shoping and selfie in the beautyful place. I recomend you to visit here a couple of week
Hopefully we can meet soon, my best friend.
ps : don't forget your camera when you come here.
do you miss me
sure you will love it, ...
i will take you to
like a Malioboro, Borobudur
, Parang Tritis
that all is a those are the beutyfu beautiful
in Jogjakarta. I know that you like
and selfie in the
you to visit here a couple of weeks
we can meet soon, my best friend.I found many misspelling words in your writing. pay attention to every word and the quantifier noun agreement.
Rizky, you need to work n the sentence structure. The thought process is clear, but you have a problem with gramma development. Let me show you an example of how this letter can be better written: Hi Roziq,
How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. It's been so long since we last saw each other that I miss you so much already. Do you miss me? If you ever go on vacation, please consider coming to visit me here in Jogia. I am sure you will enjoy visiting here because my city is unique. We can visit places like the Borobudur temple, Parang Tritis beach, and Majiolobor. I hope you can visit soon. Could you possibly visit me a couple of weeks?
PS - Don't forget to bring your camera when you come to visit.