response letter to matt
Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to share with you about how to improve my english in this new school year.
I think i will listen english on youtube as Nasdaily channel for 30 minutes everyday. On listening, i listen all a clip and write some vocabularies which i don't know in mybook, then i listen again to write spelling.
Beside listening, i also learn english grammar, i learn how to use words in english as do a lot of works english grammar
I also find a partner to practise speaking english. We will meet threetimes a week in a park to practise speaking english as talk our actives on the week.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon
Hey, welcome here. Hopefully, my feedback is sufficient in giving you insight on how to improve your writing for the long-run.
First and foremost, try to present sturdier introductions to your writing. For example, omitting small lines such as "I think" will heavily influence the rest of your writing. These particular phrases do not show a bolder portrayal of writing because they are quite flimsy when you place them onto your writing. Try to use more concrete wordings when you are establishing the fundamental details of your writing.
Furthermore, intertwining the sentences in a smoother manner would also help enhance the overall writing that you have. If we take a look at the second paragraph, it is noticeable how the first sentence itself doesn't flow well because of how "run-on" it appears to be. Focus more on the entire flow of writing.