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My debut poem about "Love."

2 - I have to be blunt here - the last line of your poem left me flat out - it...

Poetrylankasulaim - Aug 21, 2011 / linmark - Aug 22, 2011
Why do I love you so much...

4 - Don't capitalize that W. I don't like the repetition of that line. I think it makes the...

Poetrytrulyblessed - Jul 11, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jul 12, 2011
POEMS REVIEW ON ANIMALS or creatures

5 - go with your mind and what you know about the topic.a let your mind be your guide...

Poetryasdftyqweqaz - Jun 12, 2011 / trulyblessed - Jul 11, 2011
"A cry for love." - poem

5 - I would have probably written more, but we had to write a sonnet. However, even if the poem were...

Poetryamrosca - Jun 17, 2011 / amrosca - Jun 20, 2011
Poem about the summer with 5 senses

5 - I think the word mesmerizing might not fit in the first line. The last line might not have enough...

PoetryHappystar - Jun 18, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jun 20, 2011
Poetry Analysis on " To an Athlete Dying Young"

5 - Great assignment! Okay, so... type 1 sentence about each of these elements. Then, look for each element in the...

PoetryBrittneyG_93 - Aug 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 26, 2011
comparative war poetry essay on comradeship between soldiers of WW1

2 - Grades are given based on an specific teacher's criteria. If I give a grade, it will be based on...

Poetryhumayrah - May 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2011
Sense Poem (an example of a trust sense poem?)

4 - Well, here are your examples: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Villanelle That wiki page has everything you need. Keep your lines short and powerful....

Poetrykyle101 - May 16, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 19, 2011
Youth Leadership Club-My First Speech -Topic-Introducing Myself

4 - Hey thank you so much...was really happy to see your feedback.I will definately work on your suggestions!!! :)...

Poetrysweet_sabah - May 13, 2011 / sweet_sabah - May 17, 2011
Compare and Contrast Poets (two pieces and a specific aspect)

6 - Hey thanks both of you guys for the tips really appreciate it...

Poetryshades927 - May 11, 2011 / shades927 - May 12, 2011
[teenage] wasteland and nihilism - feedback

3 - allure... I think. not a lure. Unless you were using lure in some cool way. Um... teenage wasteland...

Poetrylivk - May 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - May 5, 2011
Parker's "General Review Of The Sex Situation" VS Shakur's "Love Is Just Complicated"

2 - So Google one ofr these terms with the title of one of the poems. You'll find discussions of,...

Poetryhagirndt - Apr 4, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2011
"A place that has a meaning" - writing a senses poem help

2 - You could fill them in any way you like. Look around you right now, this moment. What do you...

Poetrybriamacfarl12 - Mar 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 29, 2011
"I was born in Korea and might die in Norway."

4 - Wow, intriguing title. I just wanted to mention that it is even more powerful if it is shorter:...

Poetrywooyong - Mar 27, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 28, 2011
A road less traveled by Robert Frost - poem analysis

3 - I understand what Mark means, but in some classes the teacher requires a bit of explanation first. So,...

Poetrystammy07 - Mar 23, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 26, 2011
Ultimate freedom; 'Tell me if it isn't true for you?'

6 - Hi Rajiv, I think the expression, "Who was that masked man?!" comes from some kind of old movies...

PoetryRajiv - Feb 25, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2011
"Harlem" by Langston Hughes and "Design" by Robert Frost - comparison/contract essay

3 - Google this: compare contrast alternating opposing essay Decide whether you want to use the alternating or opposing type....

PoetrycrazyD478 - Mar 3, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2011
Another Sunday morning

5 - Have you wander about life today? Yeah, every single day~...

PoetryRajiv - Feb 10, 2011 / SDtoto - Feb 19, 2011
Lineage by Margaret Walker

7 - I'm not telling! You can't just post assignments here to avoid doing the work. If you are willing...

Poetrypanmit - Jan 10, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2011
"Desire" - (imperfect sonnet)

2 - i really enjoy your poem. it gives the reader a lot to think about..so actually i would leave it...

Poetrydraconlord - Jan 2, 2011 / ninasong - Jan 2, 2011
"Obediance" or "Brush Your Teeth" for my final poem?

4 - You have to follow your inspiration to improve one. I like the first poem more, because it expresses a...

Poetryxynare - Dec 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 19, 2010
"Don't describe me in 5 stanzas"- Virginia TECH (poem)

2 - Cool line! Hey, I think the word "above" should be taken out of that last line. ...

PoetryRyanVi16 - Dec 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2010
LAMENTATION OF OUR BRAIN

2 - We lived, our belongings rest their bosom. ours is black, snow thy brain, thy talent rests beneath the grave.---don't...

Poetrypoet adedara - Dec 9, 2010 / EF_Susan - Dec 12, 2010
"chasing time often" - My first poetry (If this can be called as poetry)

8 - Thanks for liking it.. I couldn't find any word to follow the word impeccable.. Is there any way I...

Poetrycute8934 - Oct 27, 2010 / cute8934 - Dec 12, 2010
"totally like whatever you know" and "a mending wall" - compare/contrast poems

2 - Hi Josh, if you make a post like this asking for help, you should show a little effort by...

Poetryjstovall31 - Nov 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 23, 2010
My assessment entitled five senses poem (tastes/sounds/smells/looks/makes)

6 - lol thanks Kevin, I tried!!...

Poetrycornelia - Nov 3, 2010 / auds - Nov 15, 2010
"My Sleepy Girl" - is this poem fine?

7 - Nope, comely is correct, too! Google the word comely to see what it means! :-)...

PoetryAustyboy08 - Oct 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2010
Ideas about writing and acrostic poem

3 - Hi Dan and Edward, The acrostic poem is simple and easy to make! en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acrostic Just think of...

Poetrytombo - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
"I'm an extinct human" - personal poem

3 - I'm a inimitable human--no one can find a similar....

Poetryvan82 - Nov 1, 2010 / Mohamed123 - Nov 7, 2010
Monologue intro on a love poem - a girl leaving a guy because he treated her bad.

9 - I can't improve this! It's excellent. I hear it playing as a song with a fast base line but...

Poetrybraja - May 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 1, 2010
"I recall your gentle touch" - Poem Corrections

5 - In the morning, as I gaze at the luminous colours of spring, Other than that it sounds good!...

Poetrythepackagekings - Oct 12, 2010 / Austyboy08 - Oct 17, 2010
Essay on the comparison of War Poetry - advice and opinions

2 - This is a solid essay. You should be confident about it. But how about the MLA citations? Shouldn't you...

PoetrySophieH - Oct 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 10, 2010
What poetry means to people,what can we learn from it - need help

2 - The way to get better at writing is to read. The way to get ideas about poetry is to...

Poetrysunshine213 - Oct 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 10, 2010
A thesis/ if-then statement for my essay (the poem "Experience" by Dorothy Livesay)

4 - Hi Alexandra, You have to offer something first... just a little idea for us to work with. If...

Poetrymeee - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
Stepmother: Poem with a themes

2 - Is that part of the assignment? If so, it is a very impressive assignment! The teacher must be...

Poetryxynare - Sep 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Sep 23, 2010
I am... (abstract/concrete/truthful ideas and statements) poem

4 - I agree that for this poem you need to consider what is abstract and what is concrete... however I...

PoetryAvioz - Sep 16, 2010 / xynare - Sep 21, 2010
critique for my "5 senses of your favorite color" poem

10 - Oh yeah, I see how that can cause confusion....

Poetryxynare - Aug 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Sep 1, 2010
Suggestions for my poem : "My Flight".

10 - Yes, it's as Azeri said. Give some ideas to other writers by clicking on UNANSWERED and just talk...

Poetrykamalpaad - Aug 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 14, 2010
1 sense poem 'When I'm at the beach I hear...

9 - Cool! Take out that comma, though. The 'crunch of fresh fish and chips' is a great phrase. ...

PoetryChoccyblock - Aug 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 10, 2010
Writing a Narrative Poem/Short Story

7 - Hey Goto124, You have chosen a very good topic for your poem. If you use your imagination, all...

Poetrygoto124 - Aug 3, 2010 / kamalpaad - Aug 10, 2010
This is the first poem I've ever written - "Sorrow"

7 - I like how despair rhymes a little bit with "where's" from the beginning of the next stanza. I...

PoetryAzeri - Jul 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jul 30, 2010
a poem of the senses + an acrostic poem - assignment on poems

6 - Too simple!! Easy for me to say when I don't have to write it. Let me be honest, though,...

Poetrymissy - Jun 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jun 20, 2010
Letter to a girl (need help with articulation)

6 - Hi, I agree that it is too wordy. I see that this is all about the "physical" relationship....

Poetrycrazyman - May 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 31, 2010
Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts

10 - The U.S. has no official language, because it is a nation of diversity. Some people in the United...

PoetrySmira Roberts - May 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 25, 2010
ESL art poem - Mona Lisa

9 - The best kind. This poem planted a familiar and powerful image in my mind (the Mona Lisa) and...

Poetryvincenthessel - May 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
Chaos Into Fourteen Lines + Catch - Compareing and Contrasting two Poems

3 - Great advice! You can also start with a cluster of ideas -- what are the points of comparison that...

Poetryfonzynator - May 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 11, 2010
Times Square: A description of my haiku?

9 - Simplicity and complexity spill into one another. I think it's cool that the nature of reality is like that....

Poetryalswn95 - Apr 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 8, 2010
Mirroring poetry

3 - This is an interesting assignment!! PLease please tell your teacher that Kevin at EssayForum admires her for this inspired...

Poetrynatalieerachel - May 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
How is my analysis of The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost??

6 - You should check out these figures of speech.. like... "unlock new path" is not quite right. "opportunity doors" is...

Poetryalswn95 - Apr 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
"Damsel's Nightmare". What do you think about my limerick and the description?

6 - Nice!! it would be even better if it said: Caught swine on her way to Peru. That...

Poetryalswn95 - Apr 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
"On this autumn day" - My concrete poem along with the description

2 - I like your poem! The speaker (no comma here) is observing the last maple leaf lingering on its...

Poetryalswn95 - May 4, 2010 / EF_Susan - May 4, 2010
What if? - What do you think about my cinquain poem and my description?

4 - Well, you get to decide what case example will illustrate it best. Give a paragraph about a person who...

Poetryalswn95 - May 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2010
Reminiscence of Childhood: Help with my messy paragraphs?

5 - Again, the conclusion needs work. Plus my body paragraphs are messy and doesn't flow well. Can anyone please help...

Poetryalswn95 - May 1, 2010 / alswn95 - May 4, 2010
A poem about an unhappy woman

4 - Notoman , I think it's a bit unarranged. Though, thank you. It is a big help for me. ...

PoetryAina - Mar 23, 2010 / Aina - Apr 29, 2010
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day" Pardoy

5 - This is such a great poem. I love how you changed Shakespeare poem into a contemporary poetry. Keep out...

Poetrymbiscoe25 - Apr 27, 2010 / alswn95 - Apr 29, 2010
T. S. Eliot's The Waste Land--Sex and love

7 - Nice, congratulations. I told you it was worth an A!!...

Poetryamandahart - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
Venus and Adonis poem, common characteristics?

3 - Thank you so much for your help as well as correcting my grammar still learning...

PoetryMSNYCBRATTY - Apr 21, 2010 / MSNYCBRATTY - Apr 22, 2010
poem on war

2 - I want 1,250 thanks, or the deal's off! amber-tinted what? The greens and reds, the browns and...

PoetryZZsleepyZZ - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 16, 2010
Five sense poem about an emotion

7 - Jealosy Jealousy smells like is the smell of a bittersweet summer romance. I like this ... in the...

Poetrynevaeh - Apr 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 15, 2010
My Five Senses Poem about Compassion: Any ideas/suggestions? :/

4 - I think you can find a better feeling than kindhearted. I think the word "it" could be omitted so...

PoetryPorkissimo - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2010

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