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I am... (abstract/concrete/truthful ideas and statements) poem


Avioz 1 / -  
Sep 16, 2010   #1
I have to present a poem tomorrow, and I need help on what to write.

I am...
I am...
I am... 4 abstract Ideas
I am...

I am...
I am...
I am... 4 concrete Ideas
I am...

I am...
I am...
I am... 4 abstract and concrete Ideas
I am...

Really I am...
Really I am... Truthful statements

Can anyone like give me an example please?
Thanks in advance
ty_garber 1 / 1  
Sep 17, 2010   #2
I think only you can say some of these things that represent yourself.
But for me, I would say:

I am (abstract idea) what no other can understand, an unanswered question.
I am (concrete idea) a young woman eager for the future.
Really I am (truthful statement) fearful for what my life will turn out to be.

Just think about yourself and you will be able to do it. :)
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Sep 19, 2010   #3
Coon Tyler, that is a great example!

So, this is a pretty interesting assignment. Do you understand abstract and concrete? Try thinking of several abstract things first. Use a metaphor.

I don't think the truthful statement necessarily needs to be a confession. It can be an affirmation.
xynare 3 / 6  
Sep 21, 2010   #4
I agree that for this poem you need to consider what is abstract and what is concrete... however I have to say that I don't agree with

I am (concrete idea) a young woman eager for the future.

for the concrete, go through the words as you put them down, young woman is concrete, however, future is not. A concrete noun is something that you can hold in your hands, feel, touch, see, taste. "I am (concrete idea) a young woman eagerly waiting for the letter from my husband"; a letter is concrete. ( I do love the unanswered question for the abstract through! I love that idea; it makes me smile.)

Metaphor's are going to help a lot with this poem, just take your time, and thinka bout what is abstract and what isn't.


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