Dec 3, 2009 #1
is an archaeologist with sharp scissors
& red sidebrushes
(if rid of weather)- trims morsels of time
birthdays assembled in a riddle on the foor
pale & raw beneath rounded bifocals
an artifact of boyhood & hot summers
all for $12 plus tip
This is a going to be a submission to my school's litmag, and I would love to have it critiqued before sending it off.
Thank you everyone!