I don't get poems.
I wouldn't be able to digest one even if it is forced through my wrong end. Hence, to make such an imbecile appreciate this, you must have done something right.
Could you tell what color I'm writing about without looking at the title?
Yes, I think that was pretty clear to me. You don't need to worry about that.
Can you tell which stanza represents which sense?
Let's see...the first one is on "feels like," second on smell, third on taste, fourth sound, and fifth on "looks like"... am I right?
If I'm right, then I think in the first stanza the word "goodness" doesn't fit.
This is a typo I believe --> Straigh
t into my ears
I love the fourth stanza.
There you go, my first poem critique. You can of course dismiss it as a load of tosh.