k__katerina 1 / - Feb 9, 2014 #1i really can't decide with the most suitable title for it. i do hope somebody will be able to help me giving some propositions and in addition perhaps some critics:)I'm enslaved and he's still hereAnd he knows that I'm in fearI am sure he can masterAnd his movements are much fasterAll my efforts are in vainAnd his presence brings me painHe is stronger and I feelThat we'll never make a dealThis incessant voice is hereAlways speaks inside my headAnd I can't get rid of fearVoice reminds me what I've hadIt pursues me all the timeAll the feelings left behindI can't listen anymoreSomeone, close this open doorShould I think it's not the end?May I hope for help from friend?I'm possessed by voice's noiseI'm afraid I have no choiceThough I'd tried to contendCame the time to understandI'm exhausted - he's untiringAnd his victory is comingThis incessant voice is hereAlways speaks inside my headAnd I can't get rid of fearVoice reminds me what I've had
mika1998 4 / 13 3 Feb 11, 2014 #2it was really great:)just in here i think voice must have an article such as that or the.Voice reminds me what I've hadn also i think its better 2 say noise of voice that is also suitable for choice in next verse n more grammatically trueI'm possessed by voice's noiseI'm afraid I have no choicenice poet, good luck:))