davidgoes 5 / 13 Jan 1, 2010 #1Write a haiku, limerick, or short (eight lines or less) poem that best represents you.I jump to the sky but fall back downI reach for the stars but always fall shortFailure is sometimes necessaryTo humble the soulBut out of failure arises thirstSo I build a ladder to the skyI fly my spaceship to touch starsWho said anything was impossible
qomoco 24 / 107 Jan 1, 2010 #2honestly, it's a great poem. yup, nothing is impossible. and I like the failure part, failure does teach you lessons.can you read mine please
rawrfest 3 / 7 Jan 1, 2010 #3the last line sounded a bit awkward to me its probably the combination of the who and anything can't you just say nothing is impossible?/find a less cliched version of that. other than that its a really good and creative poem