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"Jump to the sky" - NYU write a poem which best represents you


davidgoes 5 / 13  
Jan 1, 2010   #1
Write a haiku, limerick, or short (eight lines or less) poem that best represents you.

I jump to the sky but fall back down
I reach for the stars but always fall short
Failure is sometimes necessary
To humble the soul
But out of failure arises thirst
So I build a ladder to the sky
I fly my spaceship to touch stars
Who said anything was impossible
qomoco 24 / 107  
Jan 1, 2010   #2
honestly, it's a great poem. yup, nothing is impossible. and I like the failure part, failure does teach you lessons.

can you read mine please
rawrfest 3 / 7  
Jan 1, 2010   #3
the last line sounded a bit awkward to me its probably the combination of the who and anything can't you just say nothing is impossible?/find a less cliched version of that. other than that its a really good and creative poem
DeusEx 3 / 14  
Jan 1, 2010   #4
Good read. maybe "leap" to the sky?


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