Melodi 1 / - Feb 27, 2008 #1FriendshipA single wordA simple wordA great word that mean a lot to usA wonderful word that would able to make us smileWarA single wordAn innocent wordBut not in meaningA horrible word that mean a lot to usA cold word that would make us cryIf we had to chooseWhat would we choose?What would we feel?What would it mean to us?Why do we even choose?
EF_Team2 1 / 1,708 Feb 28, 2008 #2Greetings!I think you have a great start to your poem! I like the line about war being an "innocent" word. :-) Let me give you a few suggestions about the grammar:A great word that means a lot to usA wonderful word that can make us smileA horrible word that means a lot to us - There is an implication with the phrase "that means a lot to me/us" that the thing is good, rather than bad; it might be better to say something like "A horrible word with grave meaning.."Keep up the good work!Thanks,Sarah, EssayForum.com