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"I Am" poem help

ImSuchADreamer 1 / -  
Aug 29, 2012   #1
Hi there! I am doing an "I Am" poem. I'm stuck on a few lines and I need some help. Anything is much appreciated! Thank you!

I am...
I wonder what my future looks like.
I hear...
I see...
I want to be happy and carefree.
I am...

I pretend things don't bother me.
I feel...
I need...
I worry that I won't be good enough.
I cry my feelings out.
I am...

I understand that everything happens for a reason.
I believe...
I dream that things will be perfect.
I try to put others before myself.
I hope my dreams will someday become a reality.
I am...

The ... are what I need suggestions with! Thank you for your time, I really appreciate it!
ace 5 / 66 5  
Sep 1, 2012   #2
"I am ... still young."
"I hear ... life is not easy."
pretty3295 - / 6  
Sep 1, 2012   #3
I see the person i can aspire to be
I feel as if the world stops for me sometimes
I need to feel like im needed
I believe that i can survive

(hope these helped :))
iamsexy14 - / 1  
Sep 9, 2012   #4
This is mine... I hope it helps:

I am fun and outgoing.
I wonder what the world will be like in 20 years
I hear angels singing beautifully
I see unicorns flying over rainbows
I want to graduate from an Ivy League college
I am fun and outgoing

I pretend that I am a celebrity with fame and fortune
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch the soft, fluffy clouds in the sky
I worry that there may be World War III
I cry when I hear about innocent people's lives being taken away
(Please do not copy this, for that is plagiarism, and that is illegal?)
I am fun and outgoing

I understand life isn't easy, and you have to work for what you earn
I say "Anything is possible if you just believe"
I dream about becoming a doctor
I try my best in school
I hope one day a harmless cure for cancer is found
I am fun and outgoing
dia123 - / 2  
Sep 9, 2012   #5
I believe in myself
I am myself
chess1921 1 / 11  
Sep 9, 2012   #6
Try to think of a theme for your poem to revolve around. It will be much easier for you to write the poem if you know what you are writing about.

Heres mine hope it helps- the themes music- violin

I am a dreamer girl, with a violin.
I wonder how child are prodigies born, "am I one."
I hear the announcement, "I got into Julliard."
I see a Stradivarius violin in my hand, making sounds that sing soap operas, and music by Franz Strauss.
I want to be able to change people with my music, maybe even change the world some day.
I am a dreamer girl, with a violin.

I pretend to be playing with the Youtube Symphony orchestra, my body like a tree, gracefully flowing to the music, as I am performing at the Sydney Opera house, in Australia.

I feel my heart beating as I am about to go on stage and play for millions, the president himself, is there to watch me.

I touch the precious violin, handed down from the greatest violinist herself, Sarah Chang.
I worry, "am I really any good."
I cry, my song is a bee's nectar, sweet and vivacious, while also having a hint to veracity to it.
I am a dreamer girl, with a violin.

I understand only some people make it into the music business.
I say" it's okay, I'll be fine."
I dream, "I am not erroneous, I am one of those few, who are born mastermind, who never screech, and who are always perfect."

I try to focus, and practice, some days I get carried away and practice for 12 hours.
I hope someday, I am a product of excellence.
I am a dreamer girl with a violin.
SEGER 1 / 3  
Sep 30, 2012   #7
I am sad but strong
I wonder why you did that
I hear you because I listened
I see your hurts
I want to hug them all away for you
I am sad but strong

I pretend I'm okay
I feel unloved,unwanted and unneeded
I touched your heart long ago
I worry that I won't reach it again
I cried and cried, because I am lost
I am sad, but strong

I understand even though I don't always want to
I say to myself many times "Where are YOU?"
I dream that life will give us both one more chance
I try to convince myself that it will
I hope that we both can realize WE need each other
I am sad but strong
SEGER 1 / 3  
Sep 30, 2012   #8
I am crying inside!
I wonder WHY, we met
I heard your voice
I saw your smile
I wanted you close and now,
I am crying inside!

I pretend you are here
I feel your presence
I touch your heart
I worry you won't stay
I cried because you are gone, and now
I am crying inside!

I understand why we parted
I say I am so sorry
I dream of touching you again!
I try to convince myself I don't hurt!
I hope you are truly happy, and now
I am crying inside!
giaaahhh28 3 / 6  
Oct 2, 2012   #9
I am human.
I hear lies.
i see a world that needs help.
i am me.

i feel neglected.
i need your love.
i am helpless.
SEGER 1 / 3  
Oct 2, 2012   #10
Can I please have some feedback on my two poems? I think I should have posted them in a thread rather than here. How do I do that?

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