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Sense Poem (an example of a trust sense poem?)


May 16, 2011   #1
Hello?
I need help with a sense poem, my topic is trust.
Can you give me an example of a trust sense poem?

Hear is the example:

Line 1 : Tell the color of the subject _____________________________
Line 2 : Tell what it looks like _____________________________
Line 3 : Tell what it tastes like ______________________________
Line 4 : Tell what it smells like ______________________________
Line 5 : Tell what it looks like ______________________________
Line 6 : Tell how it makes you feel _____________________________

* War *
War is brown.
It sounds like thunder.
It tastes like bitter grapes.
It smells like yesterday's garbage.
It looks like an ancient ruin.
It makes you feel like crying.

How is it? Although I thought of this first, but I want to do trust. Can you give me an example I can use?

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May 18, 2011   #2
Cool, I like both of these. They demonstrate that you understand the way to write this kind of poem. I think you should "trust" your ideas, and when you do, it will look like confidence. :-)

This kind of poem teaches us the importance of IMAGERY WORDS. Thanks, both of you, for sharing your work.
I especially like the color part in both poems. But what is the significance of sea salt or dessert as the taste?
May 18, 2011   #3
Thanks!

I need to write a Villanelle now, and it seems hard... ;p
I try to come up with one my self but I just don't know what should I do.
Please help me....
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May 19, 2011   #4
Well, here are your examples: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Villanelle
That wiki page has everything you need. Keep your lines short and powerful. Write something great, and we'll help you make it perfect. Please START A NEW THREAD when you write this new poem.

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