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A thesis/ if-then statement for my essay (the poem "Experience" by Dorothy Livesay)


meee 1 / 1  
Sep 28, 2010   #1
I would need to write an if-then statement, and theme statement for my essay on the poem "experience" by Dorothy Livesay.
Anyone have any ideas?
What if/then statement can i write for this poem?

Poem:

"For your own good" they said,
And they gave me bread
Bitter and hard to swallow.
My head felt tired after it,
My heart felt hollow.

So I went away on my own road
Tasting all fruits, all breads:
And if some were bitter, others were sweet --
So I learned
How the heart is fed.
oldmanbootzz 1 / 1  
Sep 28, 2010   #2
Heres a couple possibilities:

If one does not conform to his or her surroundings, then contentness is bound to ensue.
If one learns solely from outside forces, then one will never know what it is to feel content.
If one seeks to feed ideas to a population, then one must deny any free-thinkers.

Hope this helps.
OP meee 1 / 1  
Sep 29, 2010   #3
Thank's for the help! :)

Would you by chance have any ideas on how i can start my paragraph describing the situation and speaker?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Oct 2, 2010   #4
Hi Alexandra,

You have to offer something first... just a little idea for us to work with. If you just post the challenge without trying to take a shot at answering it, then it is like other people are doing your work you you... so... first tell us what you think of the poem! :-)

Try this to get started:
If bread represents XXXXX in this poem, then the heart represents YYYYYYYY.


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