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|How to show that the highlighted row is my addition to the research?
Research Papersproud2000 - Dec 9, 2017 / proud2000 - Dec 10, 2017
|PTSD Service dogs research paper. There are many ways that a dog can lend a helping hand..
2 - Donna, the information in the essay is highly interesting. However, the hook does not effectively entice the reader. The...
Research Papersdonna21 - Dec 4, 2017 / Holt - Dec 5, 2017
|Canadian flag debate, Medical care act, Terry Fox's marathon of Hope/ Canadian History
Research PapersSyedShahriar - Jan 16, 2011 / bozka4251 - Dec 1, 2017
|Eng 102 research paper on the recent decline of nurses
2 - Cammie, the information in this essay is heavy on the theoretical side but not informative at all on the...
Research Paperscammiedixon1 - Nov 26, 2017 / Holt - Nov 26, 2017
|Addressing an issue in my country with my degree choice
2 - Ameh, paragraph 2 is actually irrelevant to the prompt question. Your paragraphs 1, 3, and 4 are actually more...
Research PapersCodex1717 - Nov 25, 2017 / Holt - Nov 25, 2017
|Peer-Review Needed for ENG102 course. Managing the Unmanageable
2 - Laura, as the questions above are meant for peer review responses from your classmates, I will refrain from answering...
Research Papersbristerlaura - Nov 21, 2017 / Holt - Nov 21, 2017
|An article review on the intercultural communicative competence and language teaching
2 - Nguyen , since I do not have access to the original article that your review was based upon, I...
Research PapersDalatkitty - Nov 20, 2017 / Holt - Nov 21, 2017
|The Connection Between Type 2 Diabetes, Obesity, and Insulin Resistance
2 - Rachel, are you writing this as a paper for your peers or a paper for lay people? The audience...
Research PapersRay15 - Nov 19, 2017 / Holt - Nov 19, 2017
|CRITICAL THEORY: CHRISTIANITY AND SOCAIL TIES, LIKEMINDEDNESS, & EMOTIONALITY
3 - My professor explicitly instructed to introduce my subject using 1-3 sentences. Followed by a point that someone else makes,...
Research Paperspchaulk - Nov 15, 2017 / pchaulk - Nov 16, 2017
|Pornography: A Research Paper on the Devastating Drug
2 - Mattisen, this essay, being a research paper, should be written from the third person point of view. The researcher,...
Research Papersmattiemfree - Nov 14, 2017 / Holt - Nov 14, 2017
|The Impact of Being in an Unhealthy Relationship
2 - Hi Daniel, I really like the topic that you chose for your essay. Self-Love is something that people need...
Research Papersdsmith - Nov 10, 2017 / Holt - Nov 11, 2017
|School Uniforms, The Good and Bad - research
2 - Juliana, you have listed this as a research paper. While your research does strongly support the advantages of having...
Research Papersjewlz1019 - Nov 8, 2017 / Holt - Nov 8, 2017
|A critique of my English Research Essay on Pretrial Release (Criminal Justice)
3 - @Holt Thank you so very much for the feedback, greatly appreciated and I will make the corrections you recommended!...
Research Papersverusha1975 - Nov 2, 2017 / verusha1975 - Nov 3, 2017
|Fake News in Financial Literacy
Research PapersGILFZ59241 - Nov 3, 2017 / Holt - Nov 3, 2017
|Memorizing TV - ROUGH DRAFT RESEARCH ESSAY
2 - Caylin, the essay needs a more definite thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. As a reader,...
Research Papersmscaycay - Nov 3, 2017 / Holt - Nov 3, 2017
|Cancer Sentence outline! Cancer Prevention Recommendations
2 - Hmm, well. Your outline is very basic. The outline itself makes sense and is all tied together. However, the...
Research Papersohwowwaitwhat - Oct 21, 2017 / kaylaZZ - Oct 21, 2017
|Climate Change - An existential treat? Blackwater in Iraq. Pol Sci - Research Question
2 - Kerem, perhaps you can frame the securitization discussion through the context of the current political climate in America where...
Research PapersKerem89 - Oct 20, 2017 / Holt - Oct 21, 2017
|The Right to Euthanasia. Feel free to give any response for this Sentence Outline!
2 - Angela, your proposed discussion outline is clearer than the thesis statement that you wrote. I am highly confused as...
Research Papersohwowwaitwhat - Oct 15, 2017 / Holt - Oct 15, 2017
|A short evaluation report on an given proposal - solar cap
Research Paperstangtang - Sep 24, 2017 / Holt - Sep 24, 2017
|What is Hobbes' argument for the absolute nature of sovereignty? Is it convincing?
2 - Fang, you have to lessen the in-text citations in your paper. Any paper that contains more than 30% citations...
Research Papersxbaqsh246 - Sep 20, 2017 / Holt - Sep 20, 2017
|Research paper outline: The role of Globalization in relation to popular culture
2 - Ashley, globalization on a popular culture context is too broad a topic. You need to narrow it down some...
Research Papersabrow317 - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 7, 2017
|The essay will be to analysis the business of Starbucks
Research Papersjessieluo - Sep 6, 2017 / jessieluo - Sep 7, 2017
|Shark Survival is Vital for Humanity - ENG102 Final
2 - Ashley, your essay is suffering from a severe case of TMI. The presentation of the varying degrees of information...
Research PapersAshleyVirnelson - Aug 29, 2017 / Holt - Aug 29, 2017
|Is the war on terrorism fueling the opioid crisis?
2 - Anthony, I understand that the history of Opioid abuse dates back centuries. However, trying to trace and discuss the...
Research PapersApaiano - Aug 26, 2017 / Holt - Aug 27, 2017
|Drones, The Civilian Frontier Presents New Regulatory Challenges for America
2 - Chris, the opening statement needs more definitive thesis statement towards the end. What is the whole purpose for this...
Research Papersindyirl1 - Aug 17, 2017 / Holt - Aug 18, 2017
|Research Essay on the effects divorce has on families and the ways it can be treated
2 - Sara, this is a very interesting topic to discuss. However, the thesis statement that you created is unclear. It...
Research Paperssmcastr7 - Jul 25, 2017 / Holt - Jul 26, 2017
|The overrepresentation of ELLs in special education programs-Specific Research Question(s)
2 - Yardly, your research is survey intensive. In order to come up with the trend of the saturation of ELLs...
Research Paperslylyjo - Jul 24, 2017 / Holt - Jul 24, 2017
|"Steroids: What are They Really?"
4 - The essay is not bad, however it lacks specific information. Try to fill it a little bit. If you...
Research PapersGeordan - Jun 17, 2017 / Bravi - Jul 3, 2017
|Research abstract: "Experiences of nurse survivors on disaster"
2 - @SHanafi For the background, I could hardly understand what you were trying to say. This study purposes to explore...
Research PapersSHanafi - Jul 2, 2017 / Babbie419 - Jul 3, 2017
|The Identity of Postpartum Depression and Treatments Available
2 - Pricilla, you need to separate the first paragraph into your thesis statement and then the start of your second...
Research PapersPricilla1965 - Jun 27, 2017 / Holt - Jun 28, 2017
|Persuasive Research Paper on Government Cost (Ethical, Financial) of Safety though Surveillance
Research PapersSeanCav - Jun 22, 2017 / SeanCav - Jun 24, 2017
|Vegetarianism vs meat eating; health, environment and animal cruelty
2 - Carly, your opening statement is all wrong. Academic rules do not allow for the introduction of facts and figures...
Research Paperscarlybano - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|Defeating the Military Lifestyle: A Rough (Draft) Proposal
2 - Dwight, I assume that the first part of this paper is your Abstract presentation. As such, it should only...
Research PapersDeweyG - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|Sustainable Business Research based project
2 - Yes, the case studies already exist for sustainable business projects. You will normally find these case studies online using...
Research Papersbenlai1910 - Jun 1, 2017 / Holt - Jun 1, 2017
|Ocean's Pollution - Lesson 11 Essay RD--Need on all of it
2 - Cassandra, your thesis statement is not clear in the opening paragraph. There is a sense of disconnection between the...
Research Papersccahill07 - May 30, 2017 / Holt - May 30, 2017
|Essay On Early Childhood Play and Education
Research PapersAmerzy1588 - May 22, 2017 / ezgifilik - May 23, 2017
|Violent Video Games are A-OK
2 - Jason, the first improvement that you can make to this essay is further developing your opening statement to include...
Research Papersjasonlongjr - May 22, 2017 / Holt - May 22, 2017
|The Effects of Video Games on Kids - English 102 Essay
2 - Burton, complete your thesis statement, that it's, your introductory paragraph by closing it with information about what you hope...
Research PapersNegativebob1 - May 21, 2017 / Holt - May 21, 2017
|The Importance of Korean Community to The Philippines
2 - Han, what is the point of this essay? The introduction doesn't make any sense. Your first paragraph must properly...
Research Paperszyxpeha - May 20, 2017 / Holt - May 20, 2017
|Introduction - The influence of celebrity worship on college students
Research Papersvanessaaleung - Apr 17, 2017 / vanessaaleung - May 14, 2017
|Prescription Drug Abuse among kids, Teens, and Adults
2 - Noah, I can see that you have included a listing of your reference material at the end of the...
Research Papersnamen772 - May 13, 2017 / Holt - May 14, 2017
|I need a peer review of a 10 page research paper about the effects of TV viewing on young children.
2 - Kassi, the firs thing that I noticed about this paper was that the title was misleading. If you are...
Research Papersklayton - May 12, 2017 / Holt - May 12, 2017
|Research paper about the life of a jazz musician in the 1920s
2 - Allison, you have not properly discussed this essay. The instructions asked you to choose one side of the 3...
Research Papersasilver427 - May 10, 2017 / Holt - May 10, 2017
|Research paper for an English 102 class about the dangers of social media
2 - Cameron, you cannot quote actual information in your opening statement. That is not allowed in an academic paper because...
Research Paperscollinscameron11 - May 7, 2017 / Holt - May 8, 2017
|Should Parents Vaccinate Their Children Rough Draft. Need help on content and in-text citations
2 - Ryan, your thesis statement is not clear on the first paragraph of the essay. While you did present the...
Research Papersbigdogmadness - May 7, 2017 / Holt - May 8, 2017
|Classification of research methodology based on its application.
2 - Peter, what is the purpose of this essay? What are the parameters by which your research information should be...
Research PapersPeter Truong - Apr 28, 2017 / Holt - Apr 29, 2017
|Memory Essay: Interference between auditory and visual memory
2 - Not being an expert in this field, I feel that you have somehow, managed to educate me about a...
Research PapersRdunn07 - Apr 24, 2017 / Holt - Apr 25, 2017
|Title: Why should people pay more attention to protect forest? - Introduction
6 - Hi @tieuvohonghan, It is unfinished essay, right? Actually, I like the way you introduce the prompt, you have a...
Research Paperstieuvohonghan - Apr 23, 2017 / Anhy chan - Apr 25, 2017
|Data mining for fake account detection by content analysis
3 - No,i mean something else. I concluded that for my senior thesis, work in the field of Detect fake...
Research Paperswave525 - Apr 21, 2017 / wave525 - Apr 25, 2017
|Compare/Contrast Research Paper, help with grammar/conventions, only present tense and no 1st person
2 - Caitlin, you need to change up the use of the word "perpetrator" and "abuse" in your essay. Get a...
Research Paperscntoniazzo - Apr 17, 2017 / Holt - Apr 19, 2017
|Research on Ethics of Cloning (Wooly Mammoth)
2 - John, you are trying to discuss too many topics all at once, without giving yourself the benefit of a...
Research PapersJoSmoBoBo - Apr 16, 2017 / Holt - Apr 16, 2017
|The Evolution of Board Games and Their Future in Society
5 - Maybe in the conclusion you should add some personal opinion (could be written in a passive voice) whether it's...
Research PapersKKearney - Apr 14, 2017 / Rich Monte - Apr 15, 2017
|Essay for English: Legalization of Marijuana: The Future is here
2 - Kory your essay is composed of more than 30 percent of quotes. This is something that poses a problem...
Research Papersbballkid19 - Apr 13, 2017 / Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The influence of gory games for behaviour of gamers in reality. Research on Video Games and Violence
2 - Estevan, when writing a research paper, you must do so from a third person point of view. In order...
Research Papersestgilvid - Apr 12, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|Understanding your credit and how it affects your life. "NEED" Peer Review
2 - Joshua, this essay is really difficult to read. The premise is unclear, the point of the discussion needs to...
Research Papersdeckerjnohatin - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Some solutions aimed at increasing students' attendance
3 - Chu, this research paper is severely flawed. The most well developed portion needs to be the thesis statement. That...
Research Papersngocanh_97hanu - Apr 10, 2017 / Holt - Apr 10, 2017
|The Struggles Women Face Entering or Rentering College
3 - @miana13 Hi Miana, this research paper is very informative and well prepared. My only suggestion is for you to...
Research Papersmiana13 - Apr 9, 2017 / Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|Plato and Aristotle on today, in the 21st century... Peer review
2 - Joel, the title of your essay does not match the research that you have presented. The thesis statement should...
Research Papersrungejm - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Breastfeeding: Maternal Benefits & Support.......Motivation to keep going!
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback. Your response is exactly what was missing, but I couldn't figure...
Research Papersjaldrich - Apr 7, 2017 / jaldrich - Apr 8, 2017
|How are turbo-chargers more effective than superchargers?
2 - Eric, in reference to your second paragraph. Do not make any statement that already makes an indirect choice for...
Research Papersesoriano - Apr 6, 2017 / Holt - Apr 7, 2017
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