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|Form an opinion of Jane McGonigal's "Reality is Broken"
2 - I really liked your essay. Especially A very common saying from parents to their children is... This paragraph...
Research Paperswarstolrem - Dec 21, 2015 / marialuisadcl - Dec 26, 2015
|Concussions and Football: Do helmets really help? CTE Research Paper
2 - Because your paper is such an intense topic, I would try to have a stronger beginning such as "the...
Research Paperskenro85 - Dec 20, 2015 / joxxelle - Dec 22, 2015
|The Link Between Diet, Exercise, and the Incidences of Cancer in the United States
2 - I don't know if the sentences above are accurate grammatically. Instead of "paper has gone over" or "...
Research Papersahhhhllly - Dec 10, 2015 / Sh1987 - Dec 11, 2015
|HOT Topic: The Right to Bear Arms - Gun Control Vs. Gun Rights (ESSAY)
2 - I would maybe change it to "The majority of people in this group argue that guns kill people,...
Research Papersdrivas13 - Dec 10, 2015 / Sh1987 - Dec 11, 2015
|If there's a will, is there a way? Obesity essay
3 - Jaime, after reading through your paper, I can say that it is written well, here's a detailed analysis of...
Research Papersjaire78251 - Dec 5, 2015 / justivy03 - Dec 5, 2015
|ENG102 On the Rise Of Virtual Reality
2 - Brennan, your introduction is engaging and strong. It offers a clear overview of the topics that you will be...
Research Papersbrennannormand - Dec 3, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 4, 2015
|Thimerosal and Autism: Myth or Fact
3 - Taylor, as much as you mentioned that you don't want a critique on the research as a whole, I...
Research Paperstaylorjenkins36 - Nov 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 30, 2015
|Service Dogs: Helping those with Special Needs.
3 - Brad, I would honestly tell you right now, your research paper lack a whole lot of important elements that...
Research Papersbbarnett84 - Nov 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 29, 2015
|Review my research paper regarding obesity and depression.
1 - Depression and obesity has been the study of a lot of different research. We see people every day whom...
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|Persuasive Research Essay for ENG 200 "NASA: Why We Must Continue Exploring"
6 - Robert, you made quiet a following here and it's very true that your essay is very well written. A...
Research Papersrmcvey4051 - Nov 22, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 25, 2015
|Traditional Indian musical instrument TABLA (drum)
4 - Tabla is a rich traditional musical instrument which has beat sensation like our heart beatsuch a heart beating. It...
Research PapersMaTa31 - Nov 16, 2015 / anggicaroot - Nov 23, 2015
|Research Essay- The Fight Against ALS
3 - Blake, you have a well guided remark here coming from Louisa, I hope you follow through on that, I...
Research PapersBlake_Will - Nov 13, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 23, 2015
|DOES CHILD PROTECTIVE SERVICES DO MORE HARM THAN GOOD
3 - Michelle, I did a proof reading session on your essay and here's what I have; - presentation wise,...
Research Papersbluekitty - Nov 20, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 22, 2015
|"Food Security" - A look at poverty in America
5 - Terra, your thesis statement is not as complete as it should be. As an overview of your research, you...
Research PapersTerra T - Nov 20, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 22, 2015
|Does private school or public school matter to you? Private vs. Public School - Need a peer-review
4 - I feel like you need to write it in a more formal way. Anyway, there couple of feedback and...
Research PapersRegine - Nov 15, 2015 / ayaelsaka95 - Nov 15, 2015
|Abolishment of the death penalty - 8th amendment from the Bill of Rights does not mention it
5 - Thank you very very much!!! I appreciate your time reading my paper. I know, there is a lot to...
Research PapersIsabellaRes - Nov 11, 2015 / IsabellaRes - Nov 15, 2015
|"To vaccinate or not to vaccinate", need someone to complete a peer-review
2 - Nasir, there is more information, data, and figures available regarding the vaccination debate than you have presented in your...
Research Papersnasir2012 - Nov 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 14, 2015
|Different aspects of video games, apart from violent content, that affects behavior.
3 - Regino, I run through your research paper and I feel very intrigued with your approach, video games on a...
Research PapersKyrsium - Nov 12, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 13, 2015
|Wright Brothers research paper and valuable characteristics
3 - Hi, I must agree that your essay is indeed written quiet well. A few modifications and proof reading...
Research Paperssmunozas23 - Nov 1, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Exercise & Mental Health: Creating Healthy Habits
4 - Vanetta, I run into your essay again and I started reading for the second time, I believe as much...
Research Papersriovwendel - Nov 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|What Can Psychopaths Teach us about Success?
3 - Stephanie, first stop, your essay is written in a manner that the reading panel will understand what psychopathy is...
Research Paperssrubio9270 - Nov 11, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Rough draft of alternative treatment plans for children diagnosed with ADHD
3 - Jennifer, I did about 5 research before yours and sad to say you share the same predicament as the...
Research PapersJenwomble86 - Nov 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|How are Arizona's children being affected by low state funding education levels?
3 - Jose, your research is by far the longest and the clearest research I have read, KUDOS on that!!! You...
Research PapersJoePhx26 - Nov 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Alternative Methods to the Traditional Therapy "What Is There To Talk About"
3 - Stacie, I'm afraid I have to agree that your research needs a little bit of revision and the following;...
Research Paperssandsmom - Nov 11, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Stop the killing of dogs in shelters
3 - Theresa, indeed, your research paper is a rough draft, there is still a few improvements that can be done...
Research Paperstjepsen0314 - Nov 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Adverse Childhood Experiences Effecting the Workforce
4 - Lean, with all the other EF contributors who reviewed your research paper, I agree that it does need a...
Research Paperslleannn - Nov 11, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Fighting For An immigration Reform
3 - Miriam, after going through your paper, here's my thoughts; - the paper is written pretty well - paragraphing...
Research Papersmiralicia - Nov 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 11, 2015
|Denial of a Fathers' Rights and the Negative Effects
4 - Thank you so much for your feedback...
Research PapersMrsCarbonell - Nov 8, 2015 / MrsCarbonell - Nov 11, 2015
|Research Paper- Benefits of Technology and Children- Peer Review due tonight!
2 - Kendra, here's my thoughts on your research paper. Positives: - you made a very interesting paper on modern...
Research PapersKen2168946 - Nov 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 7, 2015
|Postpartum depression - Research Paper - Looking for constructive criticism
2 - Felicia, I'd like to share my thoughts on the better part of your essay. - The partner and/or...
Research PapersFeliciaR0326 - Nov 6, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 7, 2015
|Assisted Suicide: Who truly has the right over our death
2 - - Physician Assisted Suicide: Who truly has the Rightright over our Deathdeath - remember,contractions such as...
Research Papersrags0613 - Oct 31, 2015 / ochio - Nov 1, 2015
|'Managing time between distraction' - it's a research essay on time management
2 - Hi Nice piece. Let me point out a few corrections 1.a valuable asset that guarantee the success in life...
Research Papersciuffomj123 - Oct 13, 2015 / Xab - Oct 14, 2015
|Reviewing the New Serpentine pavilion in London.
3 - Thank you very much for your edits. though I was looking forward for any opinion in the review. such...
Research Papersyamenkh - Oct 7, 2015 / yamenkh - Oct 7, 2015
|Violent Video Games a moral panic - the unexplainable acts of youth crime
2 - Brandy, here are some suggestions for the improvement of your research paper. The media focus on one or...
Research Papersbrcoak - Oct 4, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 5, 2015
|Help me choose a research question for a thesis from specified topics
8 - All the topics on your research are very interesting, given time, I would love to write for all the...
Research Paperslfc1892 - Sep 19, 2015 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2015
|Obesity from the Beginning
3 - - ...legitimately sum up to what's been... - ...going on in the lives of many peoples("people" is a plural...
Research Papersevode - Sep 19, 2015 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2015
|The Effects of Peer Review on Writing--Research Paper
4 - @Selena, I'd like to give a few more inputs. - Ⅳ. Conclusion - SinceAs writing is a way......
Research PapersSelena Han - Sep 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Sep 9, 2015
|Like the Phoenix: Heavy Metal's Inevitable Rebirth (Research Paper for English class, Rough Draft)
3 - Jared, at first, I actually thought you were writing about "metal", as an element, it took me a while...
Research Papersjaredf1995 - Sep 2, 2015 / justivy03 - Sep 7, 2015
|Staying Analog in a Digital World (Eng102 Research Paper)
4 - - Now to closeIn conclusion , I'm all for these advances we've had in the society. - In many...
Research PapersDano84 - Aug 5, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
|Curing Yourself the Natural Way
3 - Tlwash, upon proof reading your essay, I have a few questions; - when you say plant diet, what...
Research Paperstlwash31 - Aug 24, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 25, 2015
|Benefits of Preschool Prior to Kindergarten
3 - Here are my points; - Citations are made to cite a study, proof of fact and should be...
Research Papersmraihtnyc - Aug 16, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 20, 2015
|'Research paper topic' - Writing a process paragraph
3 - To add to @Icturn87, I have a few remarks below; - ChoosingTo choose a topic for a research...
Research Paperssucimaulina - Aug 19, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2015
|Research paper on college athletes. Basketball prospects at schools.
2 - Hi. I'll help with the punctuation and grammar in your paper. ________________________ I would omit the...
Research PapersLOR2179521 - Aug 4, 2015 / ChristineB - Aug 5, 2015
|New species of Hoplolaimus.
2 - hanhbich, I will help you with a few things. ______________________________ Be sure you italicize the genus/species names you...
Research Papershanhbich - Jul 27, 2015 / ChristineB - Jul 28, 2015
|Global Warming Is A Problem, but it can be stopped - research paper.
4 - Hello, I can help you with any changes needed to your last two paragraphs of your essay. 3rd...
Research Papersailehman - Jul 24, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 26, 2015
|What's The Truth? Ralph Nader vs. The Automobile
3 - Nicole, since Christine already made corrections on the first few paragraphs, I'll work on the last few ones. ...
Research Papersnicolew1996 - Jun 14, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 17, 2015
|Hillary Clinton Research Essay: experience, presidential run, moderatism and widespread appeal..
3 - That's a valid point but you could also mention crony capitalism here. Plus something about her age and...
Research PapersZhou1801 - Jun 12, 2015 / Rich Monte - Jun 13, 2015
|"Pain or Glory" - 3 areas of improvement in my research paper
3 - Misyoungblood, I brush through your essay, quite long but good enough for a research paper. I'm not sure how...
Research Papersmisyoungblood - May 22, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 9, 2015
|The legislative actions on the oldest profession - Prostitution
3 - - It seems unlikely that the oldest profession in the world would also obtain the title ofas one of...
Research PapersNicoleRose - Jun 3, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 4, 2015
|Research Thesis on Orchid Hunting during the Victorian Era
2 - - During the Victorian Era, European orchid collectors have seen the orchid as a signifier ofsignificant unknown, undiscovered places...
Research PapersBlair_K - May 29, 2015 / justivy03 - May 31, 2015
|Parents HAVE to vaccinate their children. It is a duty as a Parent
2 - Hi, kalinaskyy. I'll work on your word choice and style: In the early 1900' s, poliomyelitis, a disease...
Research Paperskalinaskyy - May 22, 2015 / ChristineB - May 25, 2015
|Whats eating our children? Research paper.
2 - Hi, please find my suggestions below. It can be hard to cook a well-balanced meal every night and...
Research Paperslisagreene89 - May 23, 2015 / Trias - May 24, 2015
|NELSON MANDELA; An important Leader - he gave freedom to black skin people
2 - - Rephrasing first paragraph; The world we are living there, has witnessed some famous and affected leaders such...
Research Papersalidalalbashi - Jan 7, 2013 / justivy03 - May 13, 2015
|The Problems and Risks Associated with Induction of Childbirth Labor - A Research Paper
2 - Closetnerd82, I am impressed with your research, you did well. I did my research as well regarding your...
Research Papersclosetnerd82 - May 12, 2015 / justivy03 - May 12, 2015
|ROTC and Security Awareness Research - Need critique for the conceptual framework
6 - - Simply put, security awareness is in itself is important, since public support.. The sentence above is what...
Research Papersrja2015 - May 8, 2015 / justivy03 - May 10, 2015
|HUMAN RESOURCE MANAGEMENT: ethics, hiring process; Research paper 2
57 - I'm confused about the question because I've never heard of a company receiving a scholarship. If the scholarship involves...
Research PapersFun Bob - Dec 19, 2007 / lcturn87 - Apr 28, 2015
|Obesity in children research paper
2 - Hi @janeenmorris9 Obesity in children is a very serious medical condition. and it is said to say that...
Research Papersjaneenmorris9 - Apr 26, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 26, 2015
|Traffic congestion and pollution, in the last few decades, have grown significantly; how to fix it?
2 - 1st paragraph: Take out the comma after decades. When you use the word these you are discussing more than...
Research Papersfarhan110991 - Apr 25, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 25, 2015
|ENG 102 - Research Paper Needs Review 3 Weaknesses - "Global Gender Inequality"
2 - Hi @adr2165850 Gender discrimination is presentpresenting in many ways within our professional careers. note: "has been" (repetition) put...
Research Papersadr2165850 - Apr 24, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 25, 2015
|Paying for the American Dream. - An English 102 Research paper that needs review -
2 - American graduates are starting adult life with enormous debt unknown to previous generations. Currently, the average student debt...
Research Papersnkizer - Apr 23, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 23, 2015
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