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eng102 research essay about treatment based diversion instead of incarceration



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Sep 12, 2026   #1
Hello,
I am submitting this research paper for my ENG102 course at Rio Salado College. My topic is whether treatment-based diversion should be used instead of incarceration for eligible nonviolent drug offenders.
I would especially appreciate feedback on these three areas:
1.Organization and flow: Does the paper move logically from the problem to the research, opposing viewpoint, and conclusion? Are there places where the ideas seem repetitive or out of order?
2.Strength of my argument: Is my thesis clear, and do my body paragraphs provide enough evidence to support my position? Are there places where I need more explanation or stronger evidence?
3.Use of sources and MLA citations: Do I introduce and explain my research effectively rather than relying too heavily on sources? Are my in-text citations clear, and does anything appear to need additional citation?
The assignment requires an 8-10 page research paper that presents a clear position, uses credible research, addresses opposing viewpoints, and includes MLA documentation.
Thank you for reviewing my paper. I would appreciate any additional suggestions about grammar, clarity, paragraph structure, or areas that could be strengthened before I submit my final draft.

Treatment Instead of Incarceration: A Better Response to Nonviolent Drug Offenses



For many years, the criminal justice system has relied heavily on incarceration as a response to illegal drug use and drug-related crime. When someone is arrested for possessing drugs or committing another nonviolent offense connected to substance use, one possible consequence is jail or prison. Incarceration may remove that person from the community temporarily, but it does not necessarily address the reason the person continues using drugs. After release, an individual who still has a serious substance-use problem can return to the same addiction, environment, financial problems, and behaviors that existed before incarceration. This can create a continuing cycle of drug use, arrest, incarceration, release, and rearrest.
Treatment-based diversion offers a different approach. Rather than automatically placing every eligible nonviolent drug offender behind bars, courts can require certain offenders to participate in supervised treatment programs. These programs can include drug courts, residential or outpatient substance-abuse treatment, counseling, drug testing, probation supervision, regular court appearances, and other requirements. Diversion does not have to mean that people escape responsibility for committing crimes. Instead, it can combine accountability with an attempt to address the problem contributing to the criminal behavior.
There are legitimate concerns about whether treatment programs work for everyone and whether people who break the law should receive alternatives to incarceration. No program can guarantee that a participant will never use drugs or commit another crime. However, research indicates that treatment and carefully supervised diversion can reduce drug use and criminal behavior for many participants. Although incarceration remains necessary for people who present a serious threat to public safety, treatment-based diversion should be used more often for appropriate nonviolent drug offenders because it addresses substance-use problems, can reduce repeated criminal behavior, may lower long-term costs, and gives people a greater opportunity to become stable and productive members of society.

The Connection Between Substance Use and the Criminal Justice System

One of the main problems with relying only on punishment is that punishment and treatment serve different purposes. Jail or prison can punish someone for violating the law, restrict that person's freedom, and protect the community while the person is incarcerated. What incarceration cannot automatically do is eliminate a substance-use disorder.

Substance addiction can affect many areas of a person's life. Someone struggling with serious drug use may lose employment, damage family relationships, experience housing instability, develop health problems, or make decisions that the person would not normally make while sober. Drug use does not excuse criminal activity, but understanding its role can help society choose a response that is more likely to prevent additional crime.
The National Institute on Drug Abuse has examined substance-abuse treatment specifically among people involved in the criminal justice system. Its research-based guidance explains that untreated offenders with drug problems are more likely to return to drug use and criminal behavior. The agency identifies treatment as an important way of interrupting the cycle between drug abuse and criminal justice involvement (National Institute on Drug Abuse).
This distinction is important. If a person is incarcerated for a drug-related offense but never receives effective treatment, society may punish the offense without addressing a major factor contributing to it. When the person's sentence ends, the problem can still be waiting outside the prison gate.
That does not mean every person arrested for a drug offense has an addiction, and it does not mean substance use causes all criminal behavior. Courts should evaluate individuals instead of assuming everyone has identical needs. However, when an assessment shows that substance use is a major factor in an offender's behavior, addressing that problem can become part of protecting the public.

What Treatment-Based Diversion Means

Treatment-based diversion can take several forms. One of the best-known examples is the drug court. Drug courts combine treatment with supervision from the criminal justice system. Participants may be required to appear regularly before a judge, submit to drug testing, attend counseling or treatment, meet with probation officers, maintain employment or pursue education, and follow other court-ordered requirements.
This is different from simply dismissing a criminal case and telling an offender to seek help. Participants can face consequences if they violate program rules. Depending on the program, consequences can include increased supervision, additional treatment requirements, sanctions, or removal from the program.
The National Institute on Drug Abuse explains that substance-abuse treatment can be incorporated into criminal justice settings in different ways. These include drug courts, treatment while a person is incarcerated followed by continued community treatment, and treatment required as a condition of probation or parole (National Institute on Drug Abuse). This shows that society does not have to choose between accountability and rehabilitation. Both can exist within the same system.
A strong diversion program should also recognize that addiction does not exist separately from the rest of a person's life. Someone may need more than weekly counseling. Effective programs may need to consider mental health, transportation, employment, education, family relationships, housing, and other barriers to recovery. A person who finishes a treatment session but returns each night to homelessness or an environment where drugs are constantly available faces significant challenges.
For this reason, individualized assessment is important. One offender may need intensive residential treatment, while another may be able to succeed in outpatient treatment while working and living with family. Another person may have a co-occurring mental-health condition requiring additional services. Treating every participant exactly the same would ignore these differences.
Treatment and Recidivism
One of the strongest arguments for diversion is its potential effect on recidivism. Recidivism generally refers to a person's return to criminal behavior after previous involvement with the justice system. If the goal of the criminal justice system includes preventing future crimes, then a sentencing approach should be judged partly by what happens after the sentence is imposed.
Research on drug courts has produced encouraging results. The U.S. Government Accountability Office reviewed studies of adult drug courts and found that, in studies showing rearrest differences, drug-court participants had rearrest rates that were six to twenty-six percentage points lower than comparison groups. Among people who completed their drug-court programs, rearrest rates in the studies were twelve to fifty-eight percentage points below comparison groups (U.S. Government Accountability Office, "Adult Drug Courts: Studies Show").
These numbers do not mean every drug court produces identical results. Programs differ in quality, eligibility requirements, treatment options, supervision, and the populations they serve. Still, the findings provide evidence that well-designed programs can reduce repeated criminal behavior.
The National Institute of Justice has also reported research showing reductions in recidivism among drug-court participants. Earlier studies reviewed by the agency found lower rates of rearrest among drug-court participants compared with similar offenders under traditional processing or probation ("Do Drug Courts Work?").
Research from Arizona is especially relevant when considering how diversion can work in local communities. An NIJ-listed study examined thousands of drug-using offenders eligible for diversion into community treatment in Maricopa County. The researchers followed participants over several years and examined treatment exposure and later arrests (Hepburn). Research like this demonstrates that diversion is not only a theoretical idea. Arizona has had real-world experience examining treatment alternatives for drug offenders.
Reducing recidivism benefits more than the individual participant. Every new offense can create additional costs for police, prosecutors, courts, probation departments, correctional facilities, victims, and families. If successful treatment prevents even some future crimes, its effects extend beyond the person receiving treatment.

Treatment Is Not the Same as Being "Soft on Crime"

A common argument against diversion is that people who commit crimes should face consequences. Some may believe that sending offenders to treatment instead of prison rewards them for breaking the law or sends the message that drug offenses are not serious.
This concern deserves consideration because accountability is an important part of the justice system. Victims and communities have a reasonable expectation that laws will be enforced. However, treatment-based diversion does not have to eliminate consequences.
Drug-court participants can be subject to strict rules that people outside the criminal justice system do not face. They may have to attend frequent court hearings, complete treatment, provide drug tests, follow probation conditions, attend recovery meetings, meet educational or employment requirements, and demonstrate progress over an extended period. Failure can result in sanctions or removal from the program.
In some ways, completing a structured diversion program may require more sustained effort than simply serving a short jail sentence. A person must actively participate in changing behavior over time. The purpose is not to pretend that the offense did not occur. The purpose is to make the consequence more useful in preventing another offense.
Public safety should ultimately be measured by results. If two offenders commit similar nonviolent drug offenses and one receives incarceration without treatment while the other receives strict supervision and treatment, the better approach is the one that makes the person less likely to commit another crime. Punishment may satisfy a desire for immediate consequences, but a sentence that reduces future crime provides a longer-term benefit to the community.
The Financial Cost of Repeated Incarceration
Another issue is cost. The criminal justice system uses public resources at every stage of a case. Police make arrests, prosecutors and defense attorneys handle cases, courts conduct hearings, jails hold defendants, prisons house sentenced offenders, and probation and parole departments supervise people after release.
Treatment programs also cost money. Counselors, treatment facilities, drug testing, probation officers, judges, and program administrators must be paid. It would therefore be misleading to claim that every diversion program is automatically cheaper.
The Government Accountability Office found this issue to be more complicated. In one major review, many drug-court programs cost more to operate initially than conventional case processing because they added treatment, supervision, monitoring, hearings, and testing. However, evaluations of seven programs found positive net benefits ranging from approximately $1,000 to $15,000 per participant, primarily because reduced recidivism avoided later criminal justice and victimization costs (U.S. Government Accountability Office, "Adult Drug Courts: Evidence").
A later GAO review found mixed cost-benefit results across studies, showing why claims about savings should not be exaggerated. Some programs generated significant benefits, while others did not (U.S. Government Accountability Office, "Adult Drug Courts: Studies Show").
This evidence actually strengthens the argument for carefully designed diversion rather than weakening it. It shows that policymakers should not simply create a program, label it a drug court, and assume it will work. Programs should be evaluated using evidence. Courts should examine completion rates, drug use, rearrests, costs, and long-term outcomes and change programs that are failing.
The important question is not whether treatment has an upfront cost. The question is whether the money creates better long-term results than repeatedly arresting and incarcerating the same individuals.
The Effects on Families and Communities
The consequences of incarceration extend beyond correctional costs. When people are incarcerated, families can lose income, children can lose daily contact with parents, employers can lose workers, and housing can be lost. Some of these consequences are unavoidable when incarceration is needed to protect the public, particularly in violent or dangerous cases. However, they should matter when courts are dealing with offenders who may safely participate in community-based treatment.
A person who remains in the community under supervision may have the ability to continue working, pay bills, care for children, attend school, and rebuild family relationships while also complying with treatment. These responsibilities can contribute to stability.
Employment can be particularly important. A person who leaves incarceration with no job, no transportation, no stable housing, and untreated addiction has several obstacles at once. Treatment programs that help people develop stability may improve their ability to remain outside the justice system.
Communities also benefit when people stop cycling through arrest and incarceration. Successful recovery can mean fewer drug-related emergencies, fewer crimes associated with obtaining drugs, improved family stability, and more people participating in the legal workforce.
This does not mean every participant will succeed. Addiction recovery frequently includes setbacks, and some individuals will violate program conditions or commit new crimes. Diversion programs therefore need standards and consequences. However, the possibility of failure should not be used as evidence that treatment itself is useless. Traditional incarceration also has people who reoffend after release.
Limitations and Opposing Evidence
A strong argument should recognize research that does not support every claim for diversion. One example comes from an evaluation of Kansas Senate Bill 123, which created community supervision and treatment for certain nonviolent people convicted of first or second simple drug-possession offenses.
According to the National Institute of Justice summary, people sentenced under the program initially showed lower incarceration and revocation filings than people receiving standard supervision. However, by twenty-four months, differences in recidivism measures had disappeared ("Alternative Sentencing Policies").
This finding is important because it shows that diversion is not a guaranteed solution. A program may produce short-term improvement without maintaining the same advantage over a longer period. Treatment quality, duration, participant characteristics, community services, and follow-up support can all affect outcomes.
There is also the issue of program completion. Some participants leave treatment, continue using drugs, or violate court requirements. If studies count only graduates, programs can appear more successful than they actually are because people who fail to complete treatment are excluded from the most favorable results.
These limitations are reasons to improve diversion programs rather than abandon them. Criminal justice policies should be based on evidence, not the assumption that either incarceration or treatment always works. Courts should determine which individuals are appropriate for diversion, which treatment methods are effective, and what level of supervision is necessary.
Diversion also should not automatically apply to every offense involving drugs. A person charged with serious violence, trafficking, weapons offenses, or conduct presenting a major danger to others may require a different response. The strongest case for diversion involves appropriately screened nonviolent offenders whose substance use is directly connected to their criminal behavior and who can reasonably be supervised in the community.
What an Effective Diversion Program Should Include
If treatment-based diversion is expanded, quality matters. Programs should begin with professional assessments instead of giving every participant the same treatment plan. Courts need to determine the severity of substance use, the person's risk of reoffending, mental-health needs, criminal history, and ability to function safely in the community.
Programs should also use evidence-based treatment. Counseling should be provided by qualified professionals, and participants with mental-health disorders should have access to appropriate care. When medically appropriate, people with certain substance-use disorders should have access to medication-based treatment rather than being excluded simply because the program follows one particular philosophy of recovery.
Frequent monitoring is another important part of diversion. Drug testing, probation contact, court reviews, and treatment attendance can provide accountability. Participants should understand what is expected of them and what happens when requirements are violated.
At the same time, programs should recognize the difference between a setback in treatment and completely abandoning criminal behavior requirements. Substance-use disorders can involve relapse. A positive drug test should be taken seriously, but automatically responding to every relapse with lengthy incarceration may defeat the purpose of treatment. Courts can use graduated responses that become more serious when violations continue.
Support after the intensive part of treatment is also necessary. Someone who performs well in a structured residential facility may have difficulty when returning to the community. Continuing counseling, recovery support, employment assistance, transportation, housing resources, and other services can help make progress sustainable.
Finally, programs must be evaluated. Courts should collect data on completion, rearrest, substance use, employment, costs, and other outcomes. If a program is not producing results, officials should determine why and make changes. Treatment-based diversion should be supported because evidence shows it can work, not simply because treatment sounds more compassionate than incarceration.
Rehabilitation and Personal Responsibility Can Coexist
One reason the debate over drug offenses becomes difficult is that rehabilitation and accountability are often treated as opposites. They do not have to be.
A person can be responsible for committing a crime while also having a substance-use disorder that requires treatment. Recognizing addiction does not mean that every decision made while using drugs becomes excusable. It means the justice system considers all relevant factors when deciding how to reduce the likelihood of another offense.
Most people convicted of crimes eventually return to society. Therefore, the justice system has an interest in what condition they are in when they return. If an individual leaves the system sober, employed, connected to treatment, and capable of making better decisions, the entire community benefits.
In contrast, if incarceration leaves the causes of repeated behavior untouched, the community may eventually face another arrest involving the same person. This cycle is expensive, disruptive, and often ineffective.
Treatment-based diversion also gives individuals an opportunity to demonstrate responsibility. Completing months of treatment, remaining sober, appearing in court, keeping employment, paying fines or restitution when required, and rebuilding relationships all require personal effort. The offender still has to make choices. Treatment simply gives that person better tools for making different choices.
Conclusion
The debate between incarceration and treatment should not be reduced to a choice between being tough on crime and being sympathetic toward offenders. The more important question is which response is most likely to reduce future crime and improve public safety.
Incarceration remains necessary in many cases, especially when an offender presents a serious danger to other people. However, automatically incarcerating every nonviolent drug offender can waste an opportunity to address the substance-use problems that may contribute to repeated criminal behavior.
Research on drug courts and other treatment programs shows that well-designed programs can reduce rearrests and drug use for many participants. Research also demonstrates that the results are not identical in every program and that some benefits disappear over time. These limitations are important because they show the need for carefully designed, evidence-based programs rather than a one-size-fits-all policy.
For eligible nonviolent offenders, treatment-based diversion provides a way to combine responsibility with rehabilitation. Participants can remain under court supervision, complete treatment, submit to testing, follow probation requirements, work, care for their families, and demonstrate that they can change their behavior. When these programs successfully reduce future crimes, the benefits extend to taxpayers, families, courts, potential victims, and communities.
Punishing an offense addresses what a person has already done. Effective treatment can also address what that person may do next. A criminal justice system should consider both. For appropriate nonviolent drug offenders, treatment-based diversion offers a more constructive approach because it attempts to stop the cycle that keeps bringing the same people back into courts, jails, and prisons. Rather than choosing between accountability and rehabilitation, society can use both to create a criminal justice system focused not only on punishment, but also on preventing the next crime.

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Sep 13, 2026   #2
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