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Flexibility Over Fixation: A Personalized Retirement Age



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May 2, 2026   #1
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A society's population can expand due to increasing fertility rates, declining mortality, migration, improvements in health, technology and living conditions. This phenomenon may develop new issues that require immediate solutions. Although we face a slower population growth rate in this decade than in previous decades, the United States is no stranger to such occurrences. A recurring topic due to our current population trends is whether the set age to receive retirement benefits should be increased by the government. Public opinion is split between wanting to retire and reap the benefits of their labor early, and breaking traditions to work as long as their bodies allow. This essay will explore how this issue arose, the demographic it affects, and suggestions on how it can be resolved.
According to the U.S. Census Bureau, older adults currently outnumber children in nearly half of the counties in the United States. An attribute is the aging of the baby boom generation born between 1946 and 1964. This demographic was born right after the war and the depression and has lived through great technological advancements that promote a healthier and prolonged life. Simultaneously, more women are choosing to be either child-free or to have children later in life. More career opportunities are accessible to women in the 21st century than ever before, allowing them to pursue fulfilment in other ways than child rearing. There's a sharp decline in teenage pregnancies due to education and increased access to birth control. These statistics were not predicted when Roosevelt created the Social Security Act of 1935.
This program began as an idea to ensure the economic well-being of the disabled and elderly, financed through taxes and premiums from working-aged citizens. There was a time in American history when war veterans were the only people who benefited from government-funded systems. The Civil War Pension program created in 1776, helped combat-disabled Union veterans, widows and orphans. Confederate veterans and their families were not lucky enough to benefit from such policies at the time. Eventually, the Pension program expanded to include surviving Union veterans and their widows in 1906. Companies began to introduce pensions to working-class Americans. Concurrently, more changes in American culture emerged. People moved from farms to the cities, the extended families broke down, reliance on wages to survive increased, along with people's life expectancy, and aging workers were simply fired for subpar work performance. Millions of former workers faced the risk of dying in poverty with no one to care for them. (Cooper).
President Franklin D. Roosevelt's Social Security Act created a federal social program to provide a steady income to retired workers aged 65 or older for the rest of their lives. Unlike state pension plans, this was funded through a system where a retiree can contribute during their working lives through payroll deductions. Employers got on board and began to contribute as well, Congress extended the benefits to cover workers' spouses, underage children, elderly parents and the disabled. A notable amendment to Social Security occurred in 1956, when the retirement age for women (an option soon extended to men) decreased from 65 to 62. This allowed retirees to collect smaller checks since they expected to receive benefits for a longer period in theory. Lawmakers feared minimal economic growth and initiated predictions that the trust fund would be depleted by the baby boom generation. Over the years, welfare programs like Medicare were introduced, incentives were provided to those who delayed their retirement and the fear of the funding crisis gradually increased the normal retirement age to 67 in 2027.
European governments in France, Germany, and Spain have started to implement a higher retirement age. This is simply attributed to people living longer and healthier lives, which is expensive for governments to finance. While increasing the retirement age may help to address financial concerns regarding Social Security, it can also create unequal challenges. According to Barbara Mantel, Social Security faces long-term funding challenges that could require significant policy changes if not addressed. This explains how the issue does not just affect when individuals retire, but also about maintaining a system that many Americans rely on.
Some working Americans, on the other hand, may disagree with this idea. They can argue that the fear of economic instability is largely due to unnecessary government spending. The growing need for care in an aging society strains healthcare workers, for example. Although they require years of education and experience to stay skilled, medical doctors also face burnout in this demanding field. The early retirement of physicians in this ageing population has led to a shortage as well. If this issue were prioritized, the government budget would likely focus on redistributing assets and contributing to the care of the ageing population.
The United States' current government budget is largely due to immediate consequences. States with stricter budget rules adjust spending more sharply when the revenue goes up or down, while those with relaxed policies fall into steady spending habits. These budget rules can cause states to spend more during economic booms and cut back during downturns, which can make economic downturns even stronger (Biolsi and Kim).
One potential solution to disagreements about the retirement age is to increase funding for retirement programs like Social Security. Higher contribution rates can increase pension benefits, which raises people's overall lifetime income. If retirement benefits are stronger, individuals may feel less pressure to work longer just to support themselves. This could make earlier retirement more realistic and reduce conflict over raising the legal retirement age.
Another possible solution is creating a more flexible, voter-driven retirement system. Retirement age preferences differ based on income, but a majority voting process tends to settle on a middle-ground age that reflects the "median" worker (Lacomba and Lagos). Allowing citizens to vote on retirement age could make the system feel fairer and more representative, since it directly reflects what most people want. This approach could reduce frustration by giving people a voice in a policy that affects their entire working life.
A combined approach may be the most effective since strict legal retirement ages can improve funding but may force some people to work longer than they prefer, while flexible systems give freedom but may weaken the system financially. By increasing funding while also allowing some level of choice or democratic input, policymakers could balance financial stability with personal freedom. This kind of compromise could ease public disagreement by addressing both economic concerns and individual preferences. Overall, these solutions aim to give people more support and a greater sense of control over their future.
Though these solutions may ease the symptoms of this socio-economic issue, some long-term solutions aim to make the retirement system financially stable, fair across income groups, and adaptable as the population changes. Some policymakers and economists argue that increasing the retirement age is necessary to keep Social Security financially stable as people live longer. They believe that without changes, the system will struggle to support future generations. The increasing life expectancy has created pressure to adjust policies to maintain economic stability (Field), thereby raising the retirement age. Others may disagree and bring up the disproportionate effect that it will have on lower-income workers, who often rely more heavily on these benefits and may not be able to work longer (Mantel). My view is that a more flexible and personalized retirement system is a better solution since it considers individual differences. I believe it balances both economic needs and fairness for workers.
Economists suggest that fully flexible systems can weaken funding, while strict legal ages can limit personal choice. A hybrid system would ensure people work at least a minimum amount of time (supporting the system financially) but still allow flexibility based on individual needs, health, and income. This approach reflects how many real-world systems already try to balance fairness and stability.
Finally, a key long-term strategy is encouraging private savings and retirement planning alongside public pensions. If individuals rely less solely on government benefits, there is less strain on the system overall. Generally, employers match no more than a 6% to a worker's 401(k) contributions. This may seem little in the short term, it also incentivizes hourly workers to put in more hours. People are encouraged to invest in the stock market to make up for inflation in the future, thereby fueling economic growth. This also gives people more control over when they retire, reducing dependence on a single legal age. Over time, this can create a more resilient system that doesn't rely entirely on government adjustments.
The United States' retirement plan has traditionally been tied to a fixed age for working-class Americans, which is when they can stop working and begin receiving their benefits. However, this one-size-fits-all approach does not accurately reflect the realities of the current workforce. Today, people are living longer, working in a wide range of occupations that require various physical or mental labor. These different jobs have varying effects on the health of Americans, so a fixed retirement age places unfair burdens on workers with physically demanding jobs for example. In a utopic system, the United States would offer personalized retirement packages, considering factors such as health, job type, and financial readiness. Long-term solutions should focus on stability, flexibility, and shared responsibility. Instead of reacting to problems as they arise, these strategies aim to build a retirement system that can adapt to economic changes, population aging, and differences in income across society.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16087  
May 3, 2026   #2
The sense of writing that has been provided lacks a true human voice. While a majority of the essay uses human provided research, the writing is actually empty and devoid of the human point of view that this sort of paper should have. The beginning of the essay shows heavy AI assistance in the drafting process since it does not provide an actual thesis statement, as a human would provide. by telling the reader exactly what the essay hopes to accomplish in an almost ad verbatim form, the way the instructions were fed to the AI to help it in drafting parts of the essay, you are giving the teacher an automatic admission that the paper is an AI hybrid.

This paper shows that it is an AI hybrid paper, with an 80% AI result for the Ai portion of writing. While you did write 20% of this essay and provided the research work that was used, you neglected to include your voice in the essay. The humanization of the input would have removed the empty discussion that was provided because you would have given insight and experiences or added a human element to the reference discussions in a manner that an AI is incapable of doing.

My advice, revise the essay. Use the sources provided but rewrite everything in your own words. That is the only way that you will overcome the eagle eye of the detector software or avoid accusations of pure AI writing in the essay. The information provided is good and useful, but it doesn't sound like a student wrote the paper. It is too polished in some sections and uses grammar that a student would not normally be seen using.Since is just a rough draft, you can still reverse the AI tone to make it sound more like you as a student.


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