naazth 1 / - Oct 23, 2010 #1My teacher want us to choose a health issue appropriate to the child bearing and child rearming family. I am riting my scholarly research paper on cerebral palsy in children and parental stress.My thesis stament is parenting a child with cerebral parsy can cause stress and challeges to the family. so just wondering is it a good thesis statement or not
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Oct 27, 2010 #2child rearmingSounds dangerous!Parenting a child with cerebral parsy can cause stress and challenges to the family.No, it is not good, because it is too obvious.It is supposed to be "arguable." Google this: arguable thesis.Can you think of a thesis statement that is about YOUR opinion that you formed after reading about the subject or experiencing it?Try to think of one that some people would agree with but other people might not agree with.