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MLA ENGLISH RESEARCH PAPER- Ramifications of GMO Food in School Lunch


CHEIL42571 1 / 3  
Feb 2, 2014   #1
***File not attaching. Reads File Too Large. Any Ideas? I tried .rtf and .wps from my word document. The document is 8 pages in length.

The rough draft of my research paper is exactly that, rough. I have collected plenty of information regarding why GM foods are harmful and how schools can implement changes. However, through the abundance of scholarly references, the organization of these ideas has been difficult. I personally feel as though I am blurting out random facts regarding the harms of GM foods in school lunches, but do not have a polished plan in place for the schools. Also, I am having a difficult time finding my voice in the paper and feel overrun by the quoted or summarized sources. The introduction and the conclusion need work in order to grab the attention of the reader and finish with a full understanding on what needs to be done in school cafeterias and why. The thesis statement has been changed several times, but I am willing to take advice on revision to further the understanding of the audience. Some work for summary citation must be made in the final draft of the research paper. Grammar and spelling corrections were reviewed but final revisions will be made by several peer reviewers and myself. The MLA format was considered but the paper will be revised to meet all requirements under this standard. This paper will need to be 8-10 pages (not including Cover Page or Works Cited) in the final draft.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Feb 2, 2014   #2
Hello Chelsea Hays

The document is 8 pages in length.

.. If too length, you might post number the pages consecutively.

The introduction and the conclusion need work in order to grab the attention of the reader and finish with a full understanding on what needs to be done in school cafeterias and why.

I couldn't agree more. Introduction is the vital key to lead your readers coming into the content of your writing, and also the concluding paragraph(s) will recall the information stated. So, in my personal view, the idea to post your writings consecutively here is noteworthy.

Thanks.
OP CHEIL42571 1 / 3  
Feb 6, 2014   #3
I do not currently have Microsoft Word. I have Microsoft Works. Looks as though it will not accept this format. Will repost when MS Word is purchased.

Thanks for your help readers.


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