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|Four points of the Personal Statement for UGRAD Exchange program (250 word limit)
3 - Muhammad, there is no reference to your personality in the essay. The story about your dad would have been...
ScholarshipALAM121 - Sep 27, 2017 / Holt - Sep 28, 2017
|Essay about the Chevening leadership question: is this progression right?
ScholarshipAPW - Sep 26, 2017 / APW - Sep 27, 2017
|Surging Through Time (Scholarship Essay)
3 - Jenny, this prompt does not call for a creative essay. This is a prompt that calls for a reflective...
Scholarshipwanderer02 - Sep 27, 2017 / Holt - Sep 27, 2017
|LEADERSHIP - How to fulfill this requirement, citing examples.
4 - @Holt Thanks, for the excellent tips. I'll rewrite, taking in consideration yours valuable tips. @shswafe Thanks,...
Scholarshipjudi_soares - Sep 24, 2017 / judi_soares - Sep 26, 2017
|Need your kind attention to review my response to Chevening Scholarship question.
4 - Respected Holt I have amended as per your instruction I am intending to do my postgraduate studies in one...
ScholarshipTanveer Ahmed - Sep 23, 2017 / Tanveer Ahmed - Sep 26, 2017
|KGSP 2018-Personal Statement - Shape yourself for the future
2 - You have a problem with your tense usage. You are constantly talking about things that happened in your past...
ScholarshipGabrieland - Sep 26, 2017 / Holt - Sep 26, 2017
|A team needs a leader to effectively accomplished its goals. Leadership and influence Question
ScholarshipNavti - Sep 25, 2017 / Holt - Sep 26, 2017
|Becoming a successful doctor. Personal statement for Ugrad Scholarship programme.
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your valuable and detailed advice. means alot. i just wanted to clarify somethings....
Scholarshipspartan1 - Sep 25, 2017 / spartan1 - Sep 25, 2017
|'A leader from the ground' Leadership Essay [CHEVENING]
3 - @Holt Thank you for your comment. I totally understand what you are pointing out for me. Surprisingly, I...
Scholarshippenahouse - Sep 25, 2017 / penahouse - Sep 25, 2017
|KGSP study plan about language - my problem is in speaking
Scholarshipcustard1 - Sep 22, 2017 / custard1 - Sep 24, 2017
|Here is my essay`s answer for the leadership and influence for applying to a Chevening scholarship.
4 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your help and support. actually this my first essay to a Chevening scholarship, certainly...
ScholarshipNicola Ojena - Sep 24, 2017 / Nicola Ojena - Sep 24, 2017
|Chevening Scholarship - a launch pad for my career in cardiology
7 - @Holt thanks alot. i quite understand your point, and do realise that might be a weak point for my...
Scholarshipmakarios - Sep 19, 2017 / makarios - Sep 24, 2017
|After coming to Korea, I will focus more on practicing speaking and listening - Essay for KGSP 2018
2 - Farah, this is an impressive study plan for Hangul. I am just wondering if you think that your English...
Scholarshippluviophile - Sep 24, 2017 / Holt - Sep 24, 2017
|Challenge plus Creativity (my personal statement for Korean Government Scholarship Undergraduate)
2 - Norshahida, it seems that you only read the last 3 requirements for the essay and that is what you...
Scholarshipkgsp_aspirant - Sep 24, 2017 / Holt - Sep 24, 2017
|The job of a leader- LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION- CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP
3 - Great essay I think, It's very clear and specific about your leadership explanation, you are capable to show how...
Scholarshipphamductuan - Sep 16, 2017 / ruby selenium - Sep 24, 2017
|My team as a family. CHEVENING essay about leadership and impacting others
5 - I think you can answer what the essay's question asked, but you mainly tell about your experience as university...
Scholarshipfikkybla3e - Sep 10, 2017 / ruby selenium - Sep 24, 2017
|Chevening Essay for university choices-clear enough
6 - @Holt I have edited my essay. I hope is better than the the previous version. I would be very...
Scholarshipkary1890 - Sep 3, 2017 / kary1890 - Sep 23, 2017
|I'd love to hear your thoughts on this leadership essay for the Chevening Scholarship Application
4 - @Holt Holt, this is great advice. Thank you very much, I will write about my current job as a...
Scholarshiprodrigodfe - Sep 22, 2017 / rodrigodfe - Sep 23, 2017
|KGSP: motivations why you apply for this program, experiences, achievements, influencers, activities
2 - Farah, try to first introduce yourself to the reviewer before you discuss the motivations you have for studying in...
Scholarshipfarah04 - Sep 22, 2017 / Holt - Sep 22, 2017
|I learn Korea and Korean language intensively, from now on - essay for KGSP
ScholarshipMfdh - Sep 16, 2017 / Mfdh - Sep 22, 2017
|Leaders choose to lead - Chevening Scholarships
4 - you need to add more example to make your argument stronger. yet, your essay is pretty good enough....
Scholarshipfahimaibrahimi - Sep 20, 2017 / Nuraya - Sep 21, 2017
|Chevening scholarship opportunity to pursue postgraduate studies in UK
4 - @Holt Thank you for your review and comments. I will take them into consideration. @IELTS_Academic Thank you....
ScholarshipJakwath - Sep 20, 2017 / Jakwath - Sep 21, 2017
|Are You Really Can Change Yourself? - KGSP Self Introduction
ScholarshipSeilaKey - Sep 20, 2017 / SeilaKey - Sep 21, 2017
|The most pressing social issue in Vietnam - UWC Scholarship
NEW - Hi everyone, I have finished drafting my essay for UWC Scholarship. Please help me to proof-reading, check and correct...
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|My post study career plan for Chevening for your kind review
ScholarshipTanveer Ahmed - Sep 19, 2017 / Holt - Sep 19, 2017
|My motivation letter to make the scholarship committee would be impressed
3 - Dear Holt, Thank you so much for your correction, I appreciate it You are right that this is my...
Scholarshipferdy - Sep 18, 2017 / ferdy - Sep 19, 2017
|Vision, innovation and dedication levels are vital to determine if a leader can reach his/her goals
4 - @Holt Thank you so much, unfortunately i followed the direction of an essay I have seen in internet. Yes...
Scholarshipfahimaibrahimi - Sep 17, 2017 / fahimaibrahimi - Sep 18, 2017
|'To make a positive improvement' - Chevening Essay : Individuals with strong networking skills
2 - Binari, you need to create more interesting hook for the reviewer than the one that you have now. I...
Scholarshipbnrdhmsnt - Sep 17, 2017 / Holt - Sep 17, 2017
|Continuous maintaining and expanding the network as an important part of my professional success
2 - Ganesh, you need to consolidate the information in your essay into related paragraphs. I want you to adjust the...
ScholarshipGanesh Mumar - Sep 16, 2017 / Holt - Sep 17, 2017
|Scholarship Essay on "My goals as a graduate student of XYXY (Department)"
4 - @Wulf Thanks for the tips and sample paragraph on breaking down that horribly long run-on sentence. Really good idea...
Scholarshipmisslittlelime - Sep 15, 2017 / misslittlelime - Sep 16, 2017
|My teacher trusted me to handle my group. Leadership and Influence Essay for Chevening
4 - @Holt Thank you for the constructive advise. I admit i have no idea about what i have to write...
Scholarshipnsybp - Sep 12, 2017 / nsybp - Sep 15, 2017
|I would like to express my deepest gratitude for this opportunity to apply for KGSP scholarship
3 - Actually am applying for undergraduate degree. The diploma i studied was just not to be idle as i couldn't...
ScholarshipStarheart - Sep 14, 2017 / Starheart - Sep 14, 2017
|My priority is to learn Korean language. Study Plan for application of KGSP 2018
3 - @Holt Thanks for the guidance! I will take note of your advice and hopefully I'm able to come out...
Scholarshipfrustrated - Sep 14, 2017 / frustrated - Sep 14, 2017
|MY CONTRIBUTION FOR MY COUNTRY - Career Plan Question for Chevening
2 - Ni, the one thing that Chevening scholars prides itself in is having the network to help you achieve your...
Scholarshipniputusri - Sep 14, 2017 / Holt - Sep 14, 2017
|"New beginning, new HOPE" The KGSP Personal Statement essay
Scholarshipjimmyx - Sep 13, 2017 / Holt - Sep 14, 2017
|KGSP - my world expanded from the small red dot of Singapore to endless amount of possibilities
3 - Hello Qiling.. As the essay about personal statement, you should claim that you are the best candidate to be...
Scholarshiphyotsootuff - Sep 12, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 13, 2017
|STRONG NETWORKING PREPARES ME TO BE READY IN THE FUTUTRE - Networking Question for Chevening
3 - Thank you very much @Holt for your nice comment. I will try to expand the discussion about my most...
Scholarshipniputusri - Sep 12, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 13, 2017
|Learning Korean language is necessary for taking a bachelor's degree in this country
3 - Hello Mohja.. In my opinion, delete the first paragraph regarding to psychology. Just straight to the point that...
Scholarshipmohja92 - Sep 9, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 12, 2017
|My Suitability for The Course - Personal Statement of Exeter
2 - Ni, the best way to shorten your essay is to focus on the prompt requirements in the proper manner....
Scholarshipniputusri - Sep 10, 2017 / Holt - Sep 10, 2017
|Mathematics - Personal Statement of KGSP : Motivations, Background, Risk, Experience etc.
2 - Hinata, the first thing that you have to do is change the format of your presentation. It must be...
Scholarshiphinatamikuatadis - Sep 8, 2017 / Holt - Sep 9, 2017
|KGSP scholarship to become one of the best film editors
ScholarshipTaeyangie - Sep 8, 2017 / Taeyangie - Sep 8, 2017
|I wrote about one university to know if I completed this way or not
5 - Thank you very much for your guidance,it became clearer. Please start a new thread and/or make it Urgent for...
ScholarshipAliaaFY - Sep 7, 2017 / AliaaFY - Sep 8, 2017
|Describe your most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your field of study and/or future
4 - Robin, the essay doesn't need to be longer, it just needs to be presented in a better manner. The...
ScholarshipEjumakayshun - Sep 7, 2017 / Holt - Sep 8, 2017
|Graduate Statement; further information relevant for assessing your suitability for the course
4 - @Holt Thank you very much. I got your points. I failed to mention motivation factors related with my current...
ScholarshipGanesh Mumar - Sep 6, 2017 / Ganesh Mumar - Sep 8, 2017
|AGENT OF CHANGE IN THE FUTURE - Leadership and Influence Question for Chevening
4 - Thank you @Rinnegan45 for your grammar correction.. I will pay attention with grammar in my essays.. @Holt Thank...
Scholarshipniputusri - Sep 7, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 8, 2017
|Chevening Scholarship will give me a opportunity to develop my personal skills as a leader
ScholarshipVuthy - Sep 7, 2017 / Holt - Sep 8, 2017
|'I made some successful modification' - leadership and influence question
4 - @ashraf mohamed LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION I have worked in work at a power station (...) 2014,. I...
Scholarshipashraf mohamed - Sep 7, 2017 / Ejumakayshun - Sep 7, 2017
|Higher studies in Korea because it has a great educational program
Scholarshipjahantrisha - Sep 6, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 7, 2017
|Answers Draft for Scholarship Interview
3 - Hi, Putri... Regarding to the first question, I would suggest you to look back of the achievements that...
Scholarshipflykitten - Sep 7, 2017 / niputusri - Sep 7, 2017
|10 years in the leadership role. CHEVENING ESSAY - FUTURE LEADER AND INFLUENCER
2 - Eva, do not tell the reviewer what your leadership and influencing skills are. You need to show him how...
Scholarshiproose7 - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 7, 2017
|Leadership - laying the groundwork for others' success (Chevening application)
ScholarshipChiechie - Sep 6, 2017 / Chiechie - Sep 6, 2017
|University Choices in UK - Chevening Question
3 - Ni, remove the first 2 paragraphs of the essay because that contains information that you should be explaining in...
Scholarshipniputusri - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 6, 2017
|Chevening Essay - Networking Skills to make positive impact
2 - Alee, this essay is tremendously confusing. There are only a series of events that depict how you got recommended...
Scholarshipaluzaja178 - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 6, 2017
|Different experiences enhanced my responsibility towards my country and boosted my self-confidence
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your help,appreciate it. i will re-draft and focus on what you say....
ScholarshipAliaaFY - Sep 4, 2017 / AliaaFY - Sep 4, 2017
|Leadership skill - creating relaxing atmosphere combined with motivation
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I reread the 2nd paragraph and there was a bit confusion as you suggested....
ScholarshipGanesh Mumar - Sep 4, 2017 / Ganesh Mumar - Sep 4, 2017
|"Journalism is my way to dedicate myself to society"
ScholarshipLukyaa - Sep 4, 2017 / Lukyaa - Sep 4, 2017
|KGSP statement: Motivations, background in family and education, experiences, activities, skills...
Scholarshipden_holms - Sep 3, 2017 / Holt - Sep 4, 2017
|The leader leaves a 'fingerprint' in minds he inspires - Chevening essay for leadership
ScholarshipNada ph - Sep 3, 2017 / Nada ph - Sep 3, 2017
|There's one word that stands out throughout my life, and it's adaptability
3 - Excellent essay Leslie! The content truly helps the reviewer to get to know you better as a person and...
Scholarshiplesliechacon - Sep 3, 2017 / Holt - Sep 3, 2017
|Fulbright ETA Russia Statement of Purpose - looking for critical eyes
2 - Richard, you confused the personal statement with the statement of purpose. The statement of purpose is should contain exactly...
Scholarshipangstyteen - Sep 1, 2017 / Holt - Sep 1, 2017
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