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|WHAT THE YOUNGER GENERATION NEED - JOURNALISM, AN ESSAY FOR TURKIYE SCHOLARSHIPS
3 - @Holt Hi, thanks for your advice! but if I may know, how to write a compelling first sentence so...
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|My Study Plan for writing the Language Proficiency Test and the GRE
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|Productive high-school years - UWC scholarship essay
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|The Global UGRAD Program is for young leaders committed to serving their home communities
3 - I believe that you had better not use contractions like ''didn't''. Instead, just write did not. Be aware of...
Scholarshipdinoraachilova - Jan 14, 2021 / AbdelrahmanWal4 - Jan 26, 2021
|Why did you choose the Master of Taxation at the University of Sydney? AAS Supporting Statement
2 - Since this is a word limited response, you need to balance the presentation to reflect a proper discussion for...
ScholarshipStephan - Jan 26, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
|An ardent passion for the electric energy industry. Erasmus program motivation letter 2021
2 - Remove the link to the article. Believe me, the reviewer isn't going to read it. Your narration should tell...
Scholarshipmic - Jan 25, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
|Security and gender - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Personal Statement
2 - I feel like there is a missing link in this presentation. As this is a personal statement, it has...
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|Applying the time with industry experts in Sweden to the Ghanaian construction industry
2 - The second paragraph is more direct to the point and should open the statement response. However, only the first...
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|Senior Teacher at the University of Adelaide and Monash University? Why?
2 - Your backstory is too long. Summarize that part and immediately present the reasons why you chose this masters course...
ScholarshipKyaw Min - Jan 25, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
|The structural engineering field - Application to an Erasmus Scholarship
2 - The first paragraph that you wrote is really unnecessary. The reviewer already knows the purpose of the motivation letter...
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|Statement of Purpose GKS Food Science Major
2 - You need more specifics in this statement of purpose. You have already worked in a nutritional laboratory and done...
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|Describing how my experience and knowledge in my study abroad can be applied.
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|Business Administration: Personal Statement for KGSP Application
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|HRM impact - reasons have encouraged me to apply the Global Korea Scholarship Program
2 - If your parents are the ones saying this, then there should not be a reference to Nelson Mandela....
Scholarshipitsmeemyyy - Jan 20, 2021 / Holt - Jan 21, 2021
|Statement of Purpose_ Erasmus + EPOG Joint Master's Degree Programme
2 - There is no evidence of you having an interest in learning about Economics in a manner that is not...
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|Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus CLMC programme scholarship
2 - The personal statement is good. However, there are sections that would better serve a purpose in your motivational letter....
ScholarshipRS09 - Jan 19, 2021 / Holt - Jan 19, 2021
|[NTU Scholarship Essay] Values And Beliefs You Hold Strongly To - 'to start to be great'
3 - @Holt Noted with thanks. Here's the second draft. A math teacher once told me that, whenever a daunting...
ScholarshipDksDZFwC - Jan 17, 2021 / DksDZFwC - Jan 19, 2021
|The Ashram visit - a personal life experience that has had particular significance for you
3 - @Holt I have modified the essay. Please take a look and suggest any more changes. Thank you for...
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|Pharmacist - Personal Statement & for Commonwealth PhD Scholarship Application
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|Motivation Letter for Erasmus+ EMJMD Management and Engineering of Environment and Energy+ (ME3)
2 - Dear concerned who? For a proper opening salutation, simply address the members of the scholarship admissions committee. Say, "To...
ScholarshipWaseem071 - Jan 15, 2021 / Holt - Jan 16, 2021
|[KGSP-G] - International Trade Studies (GSIS) - Personal Statement
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your helpful comment. I will fix it according to your suggestions. Have a...
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|Stipendium Hungaricum - Mechanical engineering
2 - - This is not an acceptable reason for the reviewer. Remember, you completed an English language course in...
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|Water Resource Engineering - motivation letter for Sweden scholarship
4 - @Kaung Htet please help me i need your comment on my motivation I am motivated by Ethiopia's lack...
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|Undergrad Scholarship Essay About My Beliefs and Values - "Cooperation, Diligence, and Duty"
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|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Can professional background be far more greater favorable than academic
2 - Paragraph 5 should be placed int he SOP, not in the motivation letter. That reference is more relevant to...
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|Stipendium Hungaricum - Motivation letter to apply for Phd program in Neurosciences
3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I would have never thought how the Bold actually looks ! also thank you...
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|Stipendium Hungaricum - Political Science and International Relations BA
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your swift feedback. I wrote this 3rd paragraph in order to explain the...
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|Arts and Social Sciences - Korean MBA program - government GKS (Personal statement)
3 - @Holt Thanks so much for the feedbacks! Just to clarify, the MBA program that I'm applying is a non-thesis...
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|ICT teacher - Scholarship essay about achievements
3 - @Holt Thank you for your response and I will take your advice and talk about an activity that...
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|Applying the knowledge and experience gained from study in Sweden in your organisation and country
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|My dream goal is to be a lecturer. Personal Statement for GKS-G 2021
5 - Hello! *First of all, from your essay it is almost impossible to understand which major you want to...
Scholarshiptaniiia - Jan 3, 2021 / mikka - Jan 8, 2021
|(GKS-G/KGSP-G) Personal Statement - Global Studies Major
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT/ Masters in Human Nutrition in South Korea / [SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION]
3 - Merged: 2ND DRAFT-PERSONAL STATEMENT/ Masters in Human Nutrition in South Korea / [KGSP APPLICATION] PERSONAL STATEMENT ...
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum, for Bsc in The Electronics Industry field
3 - Dear @ Holt Thanks for your advice. I will post the revised Motivational Letter based on your points....
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|Dublin - Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus in GLOCAL Programme, Global Markets
2 - Your first paragraph sounds more like something out of the website rather than an original thought that is supposed...
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|How to apply to Glocal Erasmus Mundus Track D Industrial dynamics and sustainability
2 - Shorten your relevant experience and background. Simplify that presentation so that you will still have space to discuss how...
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|Personal Statement, Erasmus Scholarship: GLOCAL Master program, study track Sustainable Business
4 - This essay has good structure and flow. My suggestion is you have proof-read and grammar check for your essay...
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|Egypt student - what does make you candidate for this program?
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for MSc inn Electrical Engineering
2 - You have covered almost all of the required information in the given discussion list. However, the first part, is...
ScholarshipMurtaza Ali - Jan 5, 2021 / Holt - Jan 6, 2021
|Studying International Relations in Hungary - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter
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|Stipendium Hungaricum Motivational Letter For Architecture
7 - @mairanoor I think this is a very expanded explanation of one simple question. you should answer this question more...
Scholarshipmairanoor - Jan 3, 2021 / Murtaza Ali - Jan 5, 2021
|An impact (college application); Cite any cases in which you thought and/or made attempts in ways...
ScholarshipElee_Akin - Jan 3, 2021 / Elee_Akin - Jan 4, 2021
|Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter for Geography Major
4 - @haneejah You also have to answer the following points: How will you apply your new skills and qualifications when...
Scholarshiphaneejah - Jan 3, 2021 / Muneeb10 - Jan 4, 2021
|Essay to enroll in the global studies program
Scholarshipelsha - Jan 2, 2021 / elsha - Jan 4, 2021
|Deeper understanding of the world - United World College (UWC) application essay
2 - You sound like you are merely mouthing the information that is readily available on the website of UWC rather...
ScholarshipShadman - Jan 2, 2021 / Holt - Jan 3, 2021
|Scholarship application - relating academic objective with future goal
6 - @Murtaza Ali Thank you very much for your time reading my answer and giving suggestions where relevant. I have...
Scholarshipsajedul123 - Dec 24, 2020 / sajedul123 - Jan 2, 2021
|Erasmus Mundus scholarship- Global market, local creativity SOP
3 - This is a revised version, is there any point to improve? Thank you in advance. Since Thailand...
ScholarshipPorchao - Dec 30, 2020 / Porchao - Jan 2, 2021
|Reasons and motivations to study in Korea (education studies)
2 - This is a solid representation of the prompt discussion instructions. You have covered all of the bases in terms...
ScholarshipAlfredoCruz - Jan 1, 2021 / Holt - Jan 2, 2021
|Children's Literature, Media, and Culture program
3 - Hey, thank you for your feedback. It really is helpful. I did not make any change for the third...
Scholarshiptzky - Dec 29, 2020 / tzky - Dec 31, 2020
|Stipendium Hungaricum - Motivation letter bachelor scholarship Europe
3 - @Holt Thankyou very much for your review, I will try my best to fix my letter. Once again, Thankyou...
ScholarshipAlex113 - Dec 30, 2020 / Alex113 - Dec 30, 2020
|My motivation essay for Stipendium Hungaricum, masters program, bachelors in Accounting & Finance
4 - Hi, I have one suggestion that is instead of listing your achievements numerically you could get into more details...
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|I wanted good grades - PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP
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|Scholarship essay open topic for engineering - Puzzle Pieces
2 - This portion of any application is always meant to help you focus on a particular talent, ability, skill, or...
Scholarshipkaching00 - Dec 27, 2020 / Holt - Dec 28, 2020
|NTU Scholarship - Subject of Personal Importance: Curiosity
ScholarshipTurtaNinja - Dec 23, 2020 / TurtaNinja - Dec 24, 2020
|KGSP- GRADUATE, From engineering to teaching languages, is this possible?
3 - Thank you so much. I will take the advice to improve my application. Sadly, I can't retake the exam...
Scholarshipdjv93 - Dec 23, 2020 / djv93 - Dec 23, 2020
|Water Resources Engineering - Application Essay for Masters Programme
3 - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE I would like feedback on my statement of purpose essay for the flood risk management...
ScholarshipMiirs - Nov 20, 2020 / Miirs - Dec 21, 2020
|ESSAY REVIEW ON SWEDEN SCHOLARSHIP MOTIVATION LETTER.
4 - Thanks for your review, I have written different motivations, I will post them here so that you will review....
ScholarshipSadeeq0705 - Dec 18, 2020 / Sadeeq0705 - Dec 21, 2020
|The role of Local Government to Develop Local Industries
2 - The reference to your membership in the Indonesian Society of Botanical Art is not related to the actual masters...
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|Courses choice - University College London, University of Glasgow and the University of Birmingham
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|Scholarship essay on a subject of personal importance - NTU essay for scholarship
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