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Supply chain management - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING MASTER DEGREE

2 - Your essay carefully balances your human context with an obvious AI polish throughout the essay. It created an interesting...

Scholarship starstruck076 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Passionate about textiles - Personal Statement Master at Brunel University

2 - Most masters degree students believe that they need to reference their childhood interest in a particular field or course...

Scholarship bakhtawa445 - Feb 8, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Bulsari scholarship, application for Medicine.

2 - The reason that you are having a difficult time editing this letter for length is simple. You did not...

Scholarship rink - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Study plan in Taiwan - molecular immunology and biomedical research

2 - Okay. The actual study plan starts at paragraph 4. That is where this essay should begin. It should end...

Scholarship Thang0807 - Feb 5, 2026Holt - Feb 5, 2026
From flipping patties to winning awards GKS-G personal statement for Korean Studies major Emb.Track

3 - Thank you Holt for the feedback! I appreciate it!...

Scholarship mkaru37 - Feb 3, 2026mkaru37 - Feb 4, 2026
Gks Ug Personal statement for computer engineering

2 - I am not sure why you posted the same essay twice in the box. It did not help me...

Scholarship Navya - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Letter of Intent for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Undergraduate, Automation and Control

2 - You can further develop your graduation thesis in the essay to show your theoretical and skills development at an...

Scholarship hiraeth - Jan 30, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Msc Marketing - 300 word scholarship essay

2 - You have written a scholarship essay that is heavily AI assisted. While it makes your application look polished and...

Scholarship minhln02 - Jan 20, 2026Holt - Jan 21, 2026
GKS-U Embassy Track Application, Visual Communication Design

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review, I'll change it based on what you said! ^-^...

Scholarship cel27hala - Jan 18, 2026cel27hala - Jan 19, 2026
Economic activity and people's lives - SOP FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS GLOCAL PROGRAM STUDY TRACK B

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I tried to do in last minute what you said....

Scholarship Ant3333 - Jan 14, 2026Ant3333 - Jan 15, 2026
Craft is a form of inheritance that continues to breathe through time - applying to MAGMa

2 - I would have to say that this is a solid piece of writing in relation to an EM scholarship...

Scholarship azkasami - Jan 14, 2026Holt - Jan 15, 2026
Path towards Medicine at Semmelweis (Stipendium Hungaricum)

2 - Having repeated several times in the essay that Cambodia badly needs doctors and surgeons, I would have liked to...

Scholarship Phalvichet - Jan 13, 2026Holt - Jan 15, 2026
Stipendium scholarship bachelors for engineering

3 - I see thank you, 4534 characters is where my essay is right now including spaces. Should I cut...

Scholarship Serod - Jan 13, 2026Serod - Jan 15, 2026
NTU Scholarship Essay - Showcase of Leadership

2 - I realize that this is a word limited essay but the way it was portrayed was one dimensional to...

Scholarship lucas_hanz - Jan 13, 2026Holt - Jan 14, 2026
How to convey feelings to the reader in a motivational essay - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The essay is not going to stand out among the sea of applicants. That is because of the one...

Scholarship akiro - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Microorganisms and fermentation - Study plan to Taiwan Scholarship

2 - Since this is a study plan, the first paragraph of this essay is totally unnecessary. It does not contain...

Scholarship Thang0807 - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Theory and real-world impact - Erasmus mundus motivational letter

2 - While EM actually accepts undergraduate scholars into their program, they only accept exceptional undergraduates who show academic excellence, internship...

Scholarship Madika - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
It Starts with Small Act toward Bigger Impact (Erasmus Mundus: GLOCAL - Track I)

3 - Well noted. Thank you for the suggestions, Holt! I'll try to revise this ASAP for your final suggestion....

Scholarship apnindyaa - Jan 3, 2026apnindyaa - Jan 4, 2026
children's books - Erasmus Mundus CLMCE Program (Motivational Letter)

2 - The essay is very personal to you, but highly confusing to the reviewer. You speak in great length about...

Scholarship zien - Jan 3, 2026Holt - Jan 3, 2026
Personal Statement for GKS scholarship (Embassy Track)- Graduate in Spanish Philology

2 - This portion should be discussed in the language study plan essay. Delete this paragraph from this essay as...

Scholarship katedeska - Jan 1, 2026Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Motivation Letter for the IMSISS Erasmus Mundus Application - Conflict Institute

3 - Thanks so much for taking time,to critically highlight the areas that need improvements in my essay.I am making the...

Scholarship ester_policy - Jan 1, 2026ester_policy - Jan 2, 2026
ERASMUS MUNDUS INT'L MASTERS IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND LOCAL CREATIVES: GLOBAL MARKETS & DEVELOPMENT

2 - This is the information that the reviewer will be looking for. You started with some pretty irrelevant information...

Scholarship THEOPHILUS - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Seek your inputs-Statement of Purpose-Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL-Sustainable Business Development

2 - This aspect should be highlighted as the foundation of your motivation. Being a very strong statement coming from...

Scholarship sonle1024 - Dec 29, 2025Holt - Dec 30, 2025
Fashion Design major - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS

3 - Thank you so much I really appreciate your help. I'll fix my personal statement....

Scholarship norceulea - Dec 24, 2025norceulea - Dec 27, 2025
Why Studying Abroad is Life Changing – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busines

2 - Your response is not well rounded. The reviewer will be looking for a response that mixes the social life...

Scholarship loonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Impact on Master's in my home country – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Busine

2 - This does not provide an impact full opening to the paragraph. You can actually start with the 2nd...

Scholarship loonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Career Impact of This Programme – Erasmus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - I think it would be better to say you will evolve into a biomedical engineer with leadership skills...

Scholarship loonatheworld - Dec 23, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Health applications - Erasmus Mundus Master in Medical Technology and Healthcare Business

2 - You successfully pointed out the problem that you are facing in your line of medical technology and care. However,...

Scholarship loonatheworld - Dec 20, 2025Holt - Dec 21, 2025
Sustainable Engineering- Erasums Mundus

2 - You have not done enough research on the Erasmus Mundus Sustainable Engineering program. It shows in the way that...

Scholarship tart_Ahmd - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Study plan research laboratory of Land Improvement and Management

2 - You fail to present a coherent research topic once you arrive in Japan. You do not present a current...

Scholarship arri18 - Nov 20, 2025Holt - Nov 21, 2025
leadership and service - Women in Engineering - mastercard foundation

3 - sorry, I didn't give the full prompt on the essay. "Tell us about a current idea or project...

Scholarship Aattayo_sandra - Nov 19, 2025Aattayo_sandra - Nov 20, 2025
Nigeria ecosystem and education - Mastercard Foundation Scholarship Program

2 - There is no sense in including a reference to your father in the essay. It does not serve a...

Scholarship Mystro_Dynamic - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Transformation of Mining Challenge into Smart Mining in Developing Country

2 - As a Fulbright scholar applicant, there are several aspects that you need to discuss in your essay. These are:...

Scholarship Imamjafarsh - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSC Sustainable energy system. University of Edinburgh. Mastercard foundation - Future goals

2 - The first paragraph is actually a bit interesting to read. Then you lost the focus of the Future Goals...

Scholarship Aattayo_sandra - Nov 17, 2025Holt - Nov 18, 2025
MSc in Sustainable Energy Systems - Mastercard University of Edinburgh

2 - Your reasoning is personal, which means it lacks the professional aspect that the program requires. Based on the prompt...

Scholarship biggy1621 - Nov 16, 2025Holt - Nov 17, 2025
GKS G - Personal statement Human AI Interaction interest

2 - The 2nd to 4th paragraphs are superfluous when applying for a masters degree acceptance. Try to focus on the...

Scholarship kittyts - Nov 15, 2025Holt - Nov 16, 2025
Global Markets, Local Creativities - Motivation Letter

2 - Avoid giving information that makes it sound like it came from your job application resume. This appears to...

Scholarship Seera - Nov 11, 2025Holt - Nov 11, 2025
Story Essay for Mastercard Foundation (Sustainable Energy Systems at University of Edinburgh)

2 - This is an extremely shallow reference that most scholarship reviewers actually find laughable. They prefer that students do...

Scholarship biggy1621 - Nov 8, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
To work as a policy analyst - ERAMUS MUNDUS MAPP ISS-TRACK APPLICATION

2 - I find the start of the motivational letter a bit confusing. There is something missing in the middle. I...

Scholarship heppichee - Oct 21, 2025Holt - Oct 22, 2025
GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

2 - Your realization comes across as a plagiarized version of the John Stewart Mills ethical theory related to Ulitarianism. Yes,...

Scholarship geulsseth - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 7, 2025
Undergraduate dental education in Sudan - Chevening Leadership

2 - You discussed your teaching experience. A teacher is not the same as a leader. Yes, you seem to be...

Scholarship ririavera - Oct 6, 2025Holt - Oct 6, 2025
Diverse social networks - Chevening Relationship building and influence

2 - Focus on your relationship with iRise Hub. Expand on the background of the meeting. What was the importance of...

Scholarship arri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
Essay for bachelor degree in a German university - data analyst

3 - @Holt I'm applying for International Excellence Scholarship which targets international applicants with excellent academic and extracurricular achievements. I'd really...

Scholarship manifesting - Oct 5, 2025manifesting - Oct 5, 2025
Many educational obstacles - Chevening leadership essay

2 - Kindly review the prompts again. You should focus on a single leadership problem that best highlights your leadership skills,...

Scholarship arri18 - Oct 5, 2025Holt - Oct 5, 2025
GKS 2026 essay, University Track. Mechanical Engineering.

5 - You don't need to downgrade one area like education quality to elevate another. Also, instead of listing a bunch...

Scholarship Marty - Sep 15, 2025hinuyenthihue111 - Oct 4, 2025
A plastic sheet - Chevening leadership essay

2 - When Chevening speaks of leaders in their home country, they refer to people who are contributing to the development...

Scholarship SRaihan - Sep 28, 2025Holt - Sep 30, 2025
Natural aptitude or skill / values and behavior - Questbridge essay

2 - Do not give the reviewer a lesson in word definition and pronunciation. He will view that as insulting and...

Scholarship lyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Creating spaces outside the classroom - Questbridge essay

2 - Reviewers prefer when the students do not use exaggerated terms such as "I love". Since this is an academic...

Scholarship lyassal - Sep 26, 2025Holt - Sep 27, 2025
Unexplainable universe - short application essay

2 - Your question is confusing and without direction. The only clear reference is that you want to ask a question...

Scholarship Sanaa224 - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Crisis in Business

2 - Are you familiar with the idiom; "There is no I in Team"? Read your reference paragraph. It is full...

Scholarship prnka - Sep 21, 2025Holt - Sep 21, 2025
Looking for Volunteer Friends - Chevening - Relationship Buildings

2 - The minute I read the word "community' in your essay, I knew that you had misunderstood the topic requirement....

Scholarship FutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025Holt - Sep 20, 2025
Mental health in Indonesia - Chevening - Career Plan and Impact

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll improve my essay based on your suggestions and questions....

Scholarship FutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 20, 2025
My Networking Story From Frozen Logistics to Fresh Water Solutions - Chevening Networking Essay

2 - Do not bore the reviewer with irrelevant details. There is a reason that you were given writing questions...

Scholarship prnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Education and business - Chevening Leadership Essay

2 - Try to use a more recent leadership action that you had to take. Your references are far too old...

Scholarship prnka - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 19, 2025
Chevening - Teacher from Indonesia

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I'll recall my other experiences and rewrite another essay on leadership....

Scholarship FutureLeader - Sep 16, 2025FutureLeader - Sep 17, 2025
Chevening Networking Essay - Bridging People Through Projects

2 - Do not confuse the discussion by presenting you previous career. Focus on your current career that you hope to...

Scholarship outstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Leadership Essay - Leading CSR in the Midst of Natural Disaster

2 - The discussion is too fast. You need to slow down and be more specific. Since we live in the...

Scholarship outstandingfield - Sep 16, 2025Holt - Sep 16, 2025
Chevening Essay - Building Network in the Creative Industry

2 - As per the discussion instructions, you need to present information about your strongest network building collaboration. Just one. Not...

Scholarship u_utmaut - Sep 12, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
Extent of active participation in Ireland as a student Essay for Goi-Ies scholarship

2 - The essay must be revised. You are quite fond of using long winded introductions that do not really help...

Scholarship Iykeibe - Sep 11, 2025Holt - Sep 14, 2025
A finance professional - Government of Ireland International Scholarship

2 - What is this? The reviewer is not familiar with it and he will not take the time to...

Scholarship Iykeibe - Sep 10, 2025Holt - Sep 13, 2025

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