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|CHANGE IS THE FIRST STEP TO SUCCESS: My value and belief_NTU scholarship essay
2 - Quan, in order to bring more clarity to your presentation, you need to kick off the essay with an...
Scholarshipquantran_hust - Dec 12, 2018 / Holt - Dec 13, 2018
|My love for chemistry and personal investment in biology and medicine, Ph.D. in pharmacology
2 - Hi Kylie, I really believe that the last 2 paragraphs of your essay more than accurately responds to the...
Scholarshipkjluther135 - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|Tourism- the key to cultural coherence; being a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program
2 - Inoya, your third paragraph is not well developed. The grammar is imperfect and as such, created a confusing and...
ScholarshipInoyatillo - Dec 10, 2018 / Holt - Dec 11, 2018
|GLOCAL EMJMD PERSONAL STATEMENT
3 - Thank you for pointing that out. I thought I had addressed this in bits and pieces in various paragraphs...
ScholarshipSanamHasnani - Nov 17, 2018 / SanamHasnani - Dec 10, 2018
|Personal statement for pursuing a joint masters in Tourism Development and Culture in UK
2 - Patricia, don't exaggerate in your essays, reviewers hate that. Sentiments such as "the best decision I made in my...
ScholarshipPat94 - Dec 9, 2018 / Holt - Dec 10, 2018
|Undegraduate/Scholarship/ - Difficulties I have overcome - the door to my inside world
2 - Karina, this over dramatized essay is not speaking of the correct topic. The prompt is only asking about any...
ScholarshipKumka - Dec 7, 2018 / Holt - Dec 8, 2018
|Erasmus Master Scholarship Essay - motivation for choosing the GLOCAL programme
2 - Vania, your essay is extremely choppy to read. It needs to be edited for continuity, transition, and chronological significance....
Scholarshipvania - Dec 3, 2018 / Holt - Dec 4, 2018
|A responsible student - Recommendation letter for scholarship
NEW - It gives me great pleasure to testify the abilities of x. I write this letter in order to give...
Scholarshipjing29 - Dec 4, 2018 / — -
|I want to be a participant in the Global Ugrad program not only for my own benefit
2 - Maria, the essay shows that you have good academic qualifications for the program. You have admirable intentions for your...
Scholarshipmaricedd - Dec 2, 2018 / Holt - Dec 3, 2018
|The passion for excellence is a value that I exemplify and uphold the most. NTU Scholarship
2 - Lorems, your passion for excellence is not clearly explained in this essay. As a student, you are not supposed...
Scholarshipliubang - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
|Promoting Reading Habit in Indonesia - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
2 - Maria, please do not repeat information in this essay. What I mean to say is, do not repeat the...
Scholarshipmarian6591 - Nov 24, 2018 / Holt - Nov 25, 2018
|The leadership has been existing in me without my knowledge
4 - @nhancau12345 thanks a lot for the correction though is just a draft of the essay will correct that. point...
Scholarshipkwendo98 - Nov 23, 2018 / kwendo98 - Nov 24, 2018
|Personal statement for outside scholarship
Scholarshipanastasiiaovchar - Nov 22, 2018 / nhancau12345 - Nov 24, 2018
|"What excites you" question. Does the answer reflect values, inclusivity and tapping into potential?
Scholarshipbilis - Nov 21, 2018 / bilis - Nov 23, 2018
|Writing Task 2: Capital City Problems
2 - The absence of original topic makes it harder for people to judge your work. rising number of newcomers...
ScholarshipUlfaidrus_flip - Nov 16, 2018 / Tunanut - Nov 22, 2018
|Plan of Study - Master's degree in Programme and Project Management - The University of Warwick
ScholarshipPeterIroga442 - Nov 21, 2018 / PeterIroga442 - Nov 22, 2018
|Motivation for choosing the GLOCAL programme - personal statement for this project
2 - Yuyi, it seems like you did not even bother to read the prompt requirements before you wrote this essay....
Scholarshipyuyi - Nov 20, 2018 / Holt - Nov 21, 2018
|Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship, Groundwater Master Program.
3 - Hi Holt! I really appreciatte your coment and surely will take it into account, Im gonna keep working on...
Scholarshippfernandam92 - Nov 20, 2018 / pfernandam92 - Nov 21, 2018
|Setting Up International Networking (Chevening scholarship).
5 - you are right, as a new-hand, I am preparing for the next year's Chevening Scholorship. To be honesty, In...
Scholarshipbellalee - Nov 17, 2018 / bellalee - Nov 19, 2018
|What a PTDF 2019 overseas scholarship would do for me
2 - John, your first paragraph is not very relevant to the given 3 prompt questions. You should just remove that...
Scholarshipomgtzsammie - Nov 15, 2018 / Holt - Nov 16, 2018
|How the proposed activity will enhance collaborative partnerships with key institutions in Indonesia
2 - Dininta, you should use only the l3rd paragraph of this essay as the basis of your revised essay. That...
Scholarshipdinidininta - Nov 15, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|Set out the skills and attributes you possess that will enable you to develop as a leader
2 - Dininta, you are not offering an impressive leadership essay here. You are focused on your academic leadership when all...
Scholarshipdinidininta - Nov 14, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|University of Technology Sydney will assist my professional development and career
2 - Dininta, Your first paragraph is irrelevant. You are wasting valuable word count by narrating your previous experience. You need...
Scholarshipdinidininta - Nov 14, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|Summarise how the proposed activity aligns with Australian Government priorities
2 - Don't try to cover too much ground with your response. You are throwing in all possible responses in here...
Scholarshipadhananj - Nov 15, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|Enhancing the Internationalisation for Australia's education, training and research sectors.
4 - Aaritha, you misunderstood the following question in the essay: -Describe how these partnerships will strengthen the capacity of...
Scholarshipadhananj - Oct 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|Master at the University of Melbourne to taking my networking and leadership skill to the next level
2 - S, for this leadership essay, you have neglected to explain in simple terms what this course of study in...
Scholarshipstheo - Nov 13, 2018 / Holt - Nov 14, 2018
|I decided to leave my family and my friends for a year in the USA
2 - ... have never made overcome/ surmounted it through ten months ... R]But I knew it was the best decision...
Scholarshiprachele09 - Nov 13, 2018 / themetalfinger - Nov 14, 2018
|My potential contribution towards Mozambique development - Commonwealth Scholarship
2 - Walter, there seem to be a number of missing references in your essay. Either the references are missing or...
Scholarshipgmeigo9 - Nov 12, 2018 / Holt - Nov 13, 2018
|Enhance and increase Australia's influence in Education and Health-Endeavour
4 - It would be best if you did additional research regarding the specific collaborative efforts that Australia has with the...
Scholarshippeacock34 - Nov 9, 2018 / Holt - Nov 12, 2018
|Summarize what your proposed leadership activity is intended to achieve; internships dates, location
3 - Dear Holt, I have almost finished writing my endeavour essays and can you please comment on following 4 essays?...
ScholarshipSainzaya - Oct 29, 2018 / Sainzaya - Nov 12, 2018
|Suffering grades - to overcome a significant obstacle to reach a goal
3 - Ogundepo, your essay is pretty straightforward and lacking in emotion. Since this was a particularly trying time for you,...
ScholarshipToluClassics - Nov 11, 2018 / Holt - Nov 12, 2018
|Real estate contractor manager - Chevening leadership and influencing skills essay
5 - If you wish to withdraw your application at this time then you may do so. Yes, you still have...
Scholarshipmoo3 - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 12, 2018
|The need to develop the energy infrastructure in Kenya through clean and renewable sources
ScholarshipGeo73 - Nov 10, 2018 / Geo73 - Nov 11, 2018
|Helping the Poor - MasterCard scholarship Application essay
ScholarshipChris bella - Nov 10, 2018 / Chris bella - Nov 11, 2018
|Self-introduction essay to get a graduate scholarship in Korea
6 - Nguyen, in that case, you should consider approaching the personal statement from the traditional standpoint. As a traditional personal...
ScholarshipSancho - Nov 10, 2018 / Holt - Nov 11, 2018
|Endeavour Leadership Essay Question - how MDPH assist my career development
3 - Dear Holt, thank you very much for your response and really appreciate it. I will revise like what you...
Scholarshipplus - Nov 10, 2018 / plus - Nov 11, 2018
|Leadership is my drive. I love to influence people. It is in my blood since the childhood. Chevening
NEW - Please help me to review the essay below. Thank you in advance. Chevening is looking for individuals who...
ScholarshipIlya Il - Nov 11, 2018 / — -
|Chevening networking essey - my tips and tricks
ScholarshipAnn Pow - Nov 10, 2018 / Holt - Nov 11, 2018
|Chevening leadership essey - I never had innate leadership skills
3 - Anna, this is very good personal statement, for a college application essay or a scholarship application for a program...
ScholarshipAnna Petrova - Nov 9, 2018 / Holt - Nov 10, 2018
|Improving the capacity of Australia's education through language proficiency
2 - I think you have included enough information or data background regarding the language proficiency in Indonesia, and it seems...
Scholarshiphaekal - Nov 9, 2018 / peacock34 - Nov 9, 2018
|Summary of proposed leadership activity - Endeavour Leadership Program
Scholarshipdinidininta - Nov 8, 2018 / dinidininta - Nov 9, 2018
|Proposed leadership activity Monash university Applied linguistic
3 - thank you dininta, much appreciated, yes this is only just a draft, an almost ready one at that point,...
Scholarshiphaekal - Nov 8, 2018 / haekal - Nov 8, 2018
|Good leaders are trailblazers, who make a path for others to others to follow; Chevening scholarship
3 - Matthew, you began writing your Chevening scholarships too late. There isn't enough time for you to correct this essay...
ScholarshipCandos - Nov 8, 2018 / Holt - Nov 8, 2018
|I choose The Master of Design, by the University of New South Wales - design and digital media area
2 - Fernanda, placing myself in the position of a lay reader, I cannot understand what your proposed leadership activity is...
Scholarshipfemelo - Nov 7, 2018 / Holt - Nov 8, 2018
|Studying in UK - I choose these three Innovation and Entrepreneurship programs
Scholarshiptaufikadytia - Nov 7, 2018 / Holt - Nov 8, 2018
|Innovative Project Manager - Chosen course and Career Plan for Chevening
3 - Vania, you do not clearly explain how your academic and professional experiences have prepared you for these course choices....
Scholarshipzshooooo - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 8, 2018
|Leadership - great leader's courage to fulfill his vision which comes from passion, not position
2 - @Amedia the first half of your paragraph need to be revised. The definition if leadership is of no importance...
ScholarshipAmedia - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 8, 2018
|Master Degree for pursuing Future Goals as CEO Startup- Chevening Essay (Personal Statement)
2 - Ratu, this essay is not yet the Study in the UK essay. This particular personal statement covers only your...
ScholarshipRatudestiani - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|Mid-level management position - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP
4 - Ayouazi, the essay you wrote goes too far back into your childhood to make a difference. In fact, that...
ScholarshipPaterne225 - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|The Relationships Building Skills I learned and the Professional Network I build
2 - Dina, you have explained the foundation of your networking skills. But I have not seen any real use for...
ScholarshipDinaHosam - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|My cover letter will be used to apply the scholarship
2 - @Popcornko the first paragraph should be split into several parts. The first part will be the introduction to your...
ScholarshipPopcornko - Nov 6, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|Set out skills and attributes you possess- Endeavour essay
3 - Aathira, I believe that you should depict the experience first, then the lessons learned from the activity second. That...
Scholarshipadhananj - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|An inexperienced individual becoming a true leader - My Leadership Chevening Essay
3 - Rozak, first up, STOP SHOUTING AT THE CHEVENING REVIEWER! You are not writing a casual letter to a friend,...
Scholarshiprowaidazak1 - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 7, 2018
|Exchange program in Korea. I have dreamed of studying abroad ever since I was in junior high school.
2 - Through this essay I can feel your ambition of attending this program, but the purpose of this essay should...
ScholarshipYyya_s - Nov 5, 2018 / ronia85516 - Nov 7, 2018
|How building networks can widen your array of possibilities - Chevening Networking Essay
2 - Leylamoh, Chevening is not interested in your travel history. The reviewer is also not interested in your past work...
ScholarshipLeylamoh - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 6, 2018
|The chosen courses to develop my current capability in systems development and business analysis
2 - Safaa, you need to elaborate upon how your current profession has helped you prepare to take any of the...
Scholarshipsafaasoliman - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 6, 2018
|The quality of a leader. How to write a good leadership essay for Chevening scholarship
5 - Emilio, you have not properly justified your claims that you are a current leader and influencer in your line...
Scholarshipemil1412 - Nov 4, 2018 / Holt - Nov 6, 2018
|Taking Initiative at the Workplace - Leadership Essay for Chevening Application
3 - Ayu, what you wrote is a methodology presentation. As such it cannot function in the capacity of a leadership...
Scholarshipayunovianti - Nov 4, 2018 / Holt - Nov 6, 2018
|With my existing and Chevening network, I hope to promote and improve health policies in my country
NEW - Chevening Essay on Networking In 2013, during my 3rd year of medical school, I took a course in...
Scholarshipmzseffy - Nov 5, 2018 / — -
|Sustainable policies for country development - Career plan- Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipAlaa Badawi - Nov 5, 2018 / zshooooo - Nov 5, 2018
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