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Chevening-Career plan (Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan)

2 - You have shown a tendency to overshare in all of your essays. You are not properly focused, nor actually...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Collaboration, building trust, and inspiring - Chevening Leadership and influence

3 - Nice essay But if you can use the STAR approach and show leadership skills beyond your schooling, that will...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / faisalidina - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening - Relationship building and shared learning

2 - Unfortunately your essay speaks of an internship, which should not be confused with a person performing a networking task...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Compliance/Internal Control Manager - Leadership and influence-Chevening

3 - thankyou for ur insight...

ScholarshipMelissa231 - Oct 31, 2024 / farrazmi - Nov 1, 2024
chevening relationship building and Shared learning

3 - thankyou for the insight...

ScholarshipOlowo3310 - Oct 26, 2024 / farrazmi - Nov 1, 2024
Mastercard Foundation Scholarship at the University of Edinburgh

5 - @alian Thank you very much for your contribution. I really appreciate it and I will heed to it. Thank...

ScholarshipShamsuddeen - Oct 21, 2024 / Shamsuddeen - Oct 31, 2024
Digital Transformation (Product Owner) - Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay

2 - This is a well developed leadership and influencing essay that shows how you are professionally leading changes within the...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Oct 31, 2024 / Holt - Oct 31, 2024
Career Plan Chevening - Creating an AI innovation centre for long term

2 - You have wrongly referenced the organization work in your country. It is not about what they could provide...

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Resilience, determination, and compassion - Application for Mastercard Scholarship

2 - Consider using more specific examples of the traits you mentioned. The way that you describe these in your essay...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening - Leadership - Aspiring Sustainable Business Leader

2 - Show team leadership. A true leader works and develops these procedures in consultation with industry partners, team members,...

Scholarshiprngrtm - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Study in the UK Essay for Chevening - Modules and Access to Research Labs

3 - @Holt Thank you so much Holt....

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening: The Meaning of Leadership for An Entry-Level Employee

5 - @harepanther I think that this is pretty good (but I'm not that good of a writer). But one thing...

Scholarshipharepanther - Oct 21, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
UK government in Indonesia - Chevening about Career Plan

2 - You need to present a more specific timeline for the short and long term goals. Be very clear and...

Scholarshippuputfn - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship - Civil Engineering

2 - You sound more like you are applying for a college admission than a prestigious and extremely competitive technical student...

Scholarshipmilan123 - Oct 27, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
"A project coordinator" - Chevening: Leadership and influence

2 - Chevening is looking for current community and prpfession based leaders who have the potential to develop into future...

Scholarshipjklk - Oct 27, 2024 / Holt - Oct 27, 2024
My Vision for AI in Ghana - Leadership and Influence Chevening

3 - @Holt Thank you for reading and providing feedback. I just have a few questions. I don't understand what you...

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 27, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 27, 2024
It's not about authority - chevening leadership and influencing skill

2 - Do not talk down to the reviewer. You are not being been seen in a good light with...

ScholarshipOlowo3310 - Oct 26, 2024 / Holt - Oct 27, 2024
Medical field and politics - Chevening leadership essay

2 - So, This is a leadership and influencing essay where you are asked to prove that you are a person...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 25, 2024 / Holt - Oct 26, 2024
"The quarantine" - Leadership and influencing Chevening

4 - You need to make your post more fluent and connected, don't talk about irrelevant life events, and focus on...

Scholarshipalian - Oct 25, 2024 / a_sm - Oct 25, 2024
SOP - Erasmus Mundus Joint Master in Managing Art & Cultural Heritage in Global Markets (MAGMa)

2 - It does not. You are not the the only applicant who will have this or a similar, or...

Scholarshipanujmahotraa - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
GKS-G - love for arts and vision

2 - If you are planning to enroll via the university track, then you should be writing a shorter draft of...

Scholarshipalmukhanbetova - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
Environment, Politics and Development - Leadership and influencing Chevening

3 - Try and shorten your sentences as there is too many uses of commas ','. This will make your work...

ScholarshipNing Jar Lawn - Oct 22, 2024 / Chiedu_10 - Oct 23, 2024
Msc Artificial Intelligence - Chevening Networking Essay Review

2 - There is a key phrase present in the writing guide that you have overlooked: The professional capacity means...

ScholarshipChiedu_10 - Oct 22, 2024 / Holt - Oct 23, 2024
Networks for positive impact - Chevening

2 - The essay does not prove that you are capable of building a professional network. The networking essay requires the...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 22, 2024 / Holt - Oct 22, 2024
The Art of Living - Master Program SoP

3 - I liked your essay. It is indeed a little long, but it does not bother me personally. If it...

Scholarshipvhl000 - Oct 16, 2024 / Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Challenging yourself outside of the comfort zone - Loran scholarship essay

2 - I believe that there is a lack of clarity when it comes to describing what your comfort zone is....

Scholarshipsholokha - Oct 15, 2024 / Holt - Oct 16, 2024
Most significant contribution to your school or extended communities - scholarship essay

3 - @Holt Ok, thank you so much for the feedback!...

Scholarshipandrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024 / andrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024
Mastercard Scholarship - Msc Public Policy Essay

2 - Avoid opening the essay with a defeatist attitude and negative character presentation. You want to make a positive impression...

Scholarshipbadoe - Oct 14, 2024 / Holt - Oct 15, 2024
Become main front-end developer - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

3 - Hello, How can I contact you Holt? Please. See the email above for my private (paid) consultations (ie....

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024 / elizabeth1991 - Oct 12, 2024
Managing the internship program - CHEVENING - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE SKILLS

5 - hello, I think you need to highlight your impact on what you contributed when you led the intern...

Scholarshiptrisyafahira - Sep 15, 2024 / habib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024
Non commmunicable diseases - commonwealth masters scholarship statement

3 - You've effectively highlighted the global prevalence of NCDs. Consider briefly mentioning the socioeconomic factors that contribute to this crisis...

ScholarshipWandi - Oct 6, 2024 / Nandia20060709 - Oct 11, 2024
Career Development and Coaching Studies MA - Leadership and Influence Chevening

2 - Show it, do not say it. This sentence makes you sound so unprofessional. It is like a high...

Scholarshipbiamendes - Oct 5, 2024 / Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Commonwealth Masters Scholarship Pharmacology and Drug Discovery MSc

3 - Thank you so much for taking your time to review my essay....

ScholarshipDambaniDeborah - Oct 2, 2024 / DambaniDeborah - Oct 3, 2024
Experience as an exchange Erasmus student - Chevening essay on Leadership and Influence

2 - Your presentation is dull and not interesting. So you were an EM scholar in the past. So what? There...

Scholarshipabunwer61 - Oct 1, 2024 / Holt - Oct 2, 2024
Development Impact Part 1- Cybersecurity / Commonwealth Scholarship

2 - For the global part of the essay, try to find a more specific cybersecurity threat that you feel will...

Scholarshipjitu_kamaliza - Sep 25, 2024 / Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Ensuring healthy lives of people - Chevening essay on career plan

2 - The main consideration for this essay should be how you will assist the DFID in their healthcare programs related...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 24, 2024 / Holt - Sep 25, 2024
Health and Public service - why you have selected your chosen three university courses

2 - The essay is direct to the point and presents the barest reasons for your choice of university. It is...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024 / Holt - Sep 24, 2024
Qualities of survival - Chevening leaders or influencers in their home country

2 - Influence is a part of leadership qualities, but is not applicable to this prompt. Rather, influence is something that...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024 / Holt - Sep 24, 2024
TripWithCommunity / Tourism - Chevening leadership and influence

3 - Thank you very much for this feedback and I will improve it....

ScholarshipMiranass58 - Sep 22, 2024 / Miranass58 - Sep 23, 2024
Civil consultant - personal statement GKS-U

2 - The information about your name, what it means, how to pronounce it, who named you, their rank in the...

Scholarshiphaidin - Sep 22, 2024 / Holt - Sep 23, 2024
My GKS-U Personal Statement (Computer Science and Engineering)

2 - I must say that you have a truly unique and interesting background for a GKS applicant. However, this "special"...

Scholarshipkhhnao - Sep 21, 2024 / Holt - Sep 22, 2024
God's plan for me - Gks undergraduate personal statement for medicine

2 - Remove the reference to medical television shows as inspiration for your desire to become a doctor. Reviewers prefer that...

ScholarshipOctavia_20 - Sep 15, 2024 / Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Feminism and Empowerment - scholarship requirement, your own leadership examples

2 - I am guessing that you are writing this leadership essay as a part of your Chevening scholarship application. Sad...

ScholarshipRanme231 - Sep 10, 2024 / Holt - Sep 15, 2024
The Good Physician - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS

3 - Thank you so much for the corrections and compliment i will make sure to work on those you point...

ScholarshipLilly FLOWER - Sep 5, 2024 / Lilly FLOWER - Sep 7, 2024
Personal Statement for GKS-U 2025 - Business Administration Major

3 - Thank you for your response! The concrete business plans are included in the study plan so I decided it's...

Scholarshippgesbn - Sep 5, 2024 / pgesbn - Sep 6, 2024
An opportunity to study in China - Schwarzman scholarship essay

2 - This is a combined personal statement and motivation letter. As such, it should focus on your personal insights and...

ScholarshipJaveria123 - Aug 31, 2024 / Holt - Sep 1, 2024
Chevening Essay on Leadership and Influence - Cybersecurity Background

2 - You have to understand that the leadership qualification you should be presenting is singular but highly notable in terms...

Scholarshipplankton - Aug 29, 2024 / Holt - Aug 30, 2024
BEYOND BORDERS:How the gks-U scholarship will help unlock my full potential in civil engineering

3 - @Maria22 It effectively conveys your passion and determination in civil engineering, especially in overcoming challenges. It's inspiring and clearly...

ScholarshipMaria22 - Aug 26, 2024 / Henry56 - Aug 28, 2024
The world of law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship

4 - @Vera24 Your draft effectively captures your passion for law and determination. It's engaging, but simplifying transitions and reducing repetition...

ScholarshipVera24 - Jul 26, 2024 / Henry56 - Aug 28, 2024
Degree in Law in South Korea - Personal statement GKS

2 - You must underscore from the very beginning that you plan to pursue a degree in international law and not...

ScholarshipHenry56 - Aug 21, 2024 / Holt - Aug 22, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose your specific plan for university

2 - Do not focus the discussion in the university, the course you want to take, or the program you plan...

Scholarshipueyreurysjs - Aug 19, 2024 / Holt - Aug 22, 2024
Finance background and logistic transit - CHEVENING ESSAY ABOUT CARRER GOAL

2 - This is good. Where specifically do you plan to get a job? Why there? How would your training...

ScholarshipMyma - Aug 12, 2024 / Holt - Aug 14, 2024
SOP for scholarship application in plant health in sustainable cropping systems

2 - Your story shared at the beginning of this essay is way too simplistic in approach. It does not even...

ScholarshipNazysazy - Aug 12, 2024 / Holt - Aug 14, 2024
Improving my language skills and culture - language study plan

3 - @omoju precious Your narrative effectively showcases your deep passion for Korean culture and language. To enhance it, consider emphasizing...

Scholarshipomoju precious - Aug 8, 2024 / Vera24 - Aug 13, 2024
To become a good student, what qualities are needed? Propose a specific plan for university

2 - A screenwriter writes for films. A copywriter does scripts for advertising. You might want to change the title...

Scholarshipuyenmynguyenle06 - Aug 12, 2024 / Holt - Aug 12, 2024
Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea

4 - Okay. there is a huge, glaring problem with your application. You are planning to study Korean Law, which will...

ScholarshipVera24 - Aug 4, 2024 / Holt - Aug 11, 2024
GKS-U Personal Statement Psychology / university track

5 - Personally I feel stating your scholarship with the Brazil government is irrelevant, not so irrelevant but the way you...

ScholarshipEduarda - Jun 29, 2024 / omomoh_peace - Aug 10, 2024
GKS-U personal statement (PNU - tourism and convention)

4 - @starssssy Your statement is strong in terms of personal motivation and connection to Korea. However, to make it more...

Scholarshipstarssssy - Aug 3, 2024 / Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
Gks-U medical major personal statement

4 - @Beacon of hope Focus on making the essay more concise by emphasizing the key moments that shaped your passion...

ScholarshipBeacon of hope - Aug 7, 2024 / Vera24 - Aug 8, 2024
GKS-G KOREAN LANGUAGE MAJOR, PERSONAL STATEMENT

4 - @vivibimil I'd recommend focusing more on your transformative experiences in Korea, detailing how they shaped your academic and personal...

Scholarshipvivibimil - Jul 15, 2024 / Vera24 - Aug 4, 2024

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