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|(University track) KGSP 2019 PERSONAL STATEMENT
3 - Thank you so much. I really appreciate your review. I will revise the statement again to check grammatical mistakes....
Scholarshiphangvo2806 - Feb 8, 2019 / hangvo2806 - Feb 10, 2019
|The cosmetic and pharmaceutical market - KGSP Study Plan
3 - Jazmin, this is not an effective goal of study and study plan. The purpose of this essay is to...
ScholarshipJazzmin - Feb 8, 2019 / Holt - Feb 8, 2019
|KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT. CULTURAL EXCHANGE AS A SOURCE OF PEACE AND COEXISTENCE
3 - Maroly, your essay definitely needs major revision, without the use of a translator as you did in this essay....
ScholarshipLYNN22 - Feb 7, 2019 / Holt - Feb 8, 2019
|What it means to me? Essay on Leadership and influence - question for Chevening Fellowship
8 - Thanks for your feedback. Just one intervention here is that I am not applying for Masters Course but...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 20, 2018 / mohit2k6123 - Feb 8, 2019
|Helping all humans - My Personal Statement for KGSP Program
Scholarshipiseoulu - Feb 1, 2019 / Holt - Feb 2, 2019
|Study plan - Master's Program - Japan - Kyoto Institute of Technology
4 - Han, do not follow the advice given above. That is irrelevant to a Study plan. A study plan is...
ScholarshipHan95 - Jan 31, 2019 / Holt - Feb 1, 2019
|The Mechatronics has changed our lives and today the results can be seen everywhere. KGSP essay
4 - I will contribute to help revise your grammar, My curiosity grew little by little about .... (My curiosity is...
Scholarshipkhaoula - Jan 26, 2019 / Heinna10 - Jan 31, 2019
|Empower People - Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL Program - Statement of Purpose
Scholarshipangela12 - Jan 16, 2019 / angela12 - Jan 31, 2019
|Erasmus Mundus BIM+ Master Motivation letter
3 - Afaf, this motivation letter is too long and does not really contain a direct reference to your motivation and...
Scholarshipafaf_93 - Jan 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 29, 2019
|Escaping - how you have overcome financial or social difficulties, physical or emotional problem
4 - It does not apply because you are discussing UNIST for most of the essay, which is a university in...
ScholarshipKumka - Jan 26, 2019 / Holt - Jan 28, 2019
|"A medium to inspire others to take the initiative" - Local Scholarship Leadership Essay
2 - Christopher, I believe that the essay requires more of a backgrounder and insight as to why and how you...
Scholarshipinc1 - Jan 26, 2019 / Holt - Jan 27, 2019
|Describe your academic interests and explain how you see these interests shaping your future
3 - @jjaida09 Please ensure that you connect your future aspirations to your academic interests if the essay is to be...
Scholarshipjjaida09 - Jan 23, 2019 / skizire - Jan 24, 2019
|Erasmus Mundus IMSISS - personal statement; motivation for applying, educational background, future
ScholarshipCenildinhafonc31 - Jan 23, 2019 / Holt - Jan 24, 2019
|Supporting Statement: WHY DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION?
2 - Dylan, your essay can use with some content editing. Please focus your academic goals, developed skills, and professional ambitions...
ScholarshipDylavenda - Jan 23, 2019 / Holt - Jan 24, 2019
|She is a determined, hardworking person. Writing Chevening recommendation letter to British Embassy
3 - You need supporting examples for the communication, interpersonal and professional skills. A recommendation letter must support the belief of...
Scholarshipvania - Jan 21, 2019 / Holt - Jan 22, 2019
|A chance to become a physician-scientist in cancer biology program. KGSP (Personal Statement)
2 - Rolanda, you have approached this essay from the point of view of a college applicant, rather than the point...
Scholarshiprolanda - Jan 19, 2019 / Holt - Jan 20, 2019
|Importance of human resources - My self-introduction letter for 2019 KGSP
3 - Thanks for your review, I'm going to check it out the translation and re-uploaded again my essay...
ScholarshipNatGhi - Jan 17, 2019 / NatGhi - Jan 19, 2019
|Security, Intelligence and Strategic studies Erasmus Mundus Scholarship 2019
2 - I hope this helps a little. The one year plus I have spent post-graduation has been life-changing. ...
ScholarshipOfficially Alice - Jan 19, 2019 / rolanda - Jan 19, 2019
|Commonwealth Scholarship- Using Gender Studies to address a development challenge
ScholarshipViashima - Jan 15, 2019 / Viashima - Jan 16, 2019
|Purpose essay for the gilman scholarship. a study abroad scholarship. helping me go to france
2 - Darrin, as a statement of purpose, I do not believe that the LGBTQ topic factors into this discussion. The...
Scholarshipchuckieg98 - Jan 11, 2019 / Holt - Jan 12, 2019
|Personal Statement for Erasmus : GLOCAL Programme Global History and Creative Cities Pathway
5 - Fulvia, this is a much better developed essay that covers all the major concerns of the prompt except, you...
Scholarshipfulvia - Dec 24, 2018 / Holt - Jan 9, 2019
|Knowledge advancement - how to approach this Scholarship application question?
3 - For the first question, you need to approach it from a 5 year career plan consideration. Think about the...
ScholarshipAmanGo - Jan 5, 2019 / Holt - Jan 5, 2019
|2019 KGSP-G Personal Statement, Public Relation, the unseen heroes in a company
2 - Your education and work experience narrative is too long. That is why your essay ran over one page. Do...
Scholarshipnilayasmin23 - Jan 3, 2019 / Holt - Jan 4, 2019
|I am a good candidate for UGRAD Program, because of high motivation and desire to develop myself
2 - Nadia, the first half of your essay and the reference to Condoleeza Rice make it appear that you are...
ScholarshipKasandra - Jan 3, 2019 / Holt - Jan 4, 2019
|Describe an instance where you had to be a leader in your community. Any lesson about yourself?
5 - Thank you for your lovely advise though I couldn't edit the essay since the deadline was already passed. But...
Scholarshipanare - Dec 28, 2018 / anare - Jan 3, 2019
|Globalization and Europe - International Master Global Markets, Local Creativities (ERASMUS)
2 - Aya, you need to connect your masters degree studies with specific program offerings or class relations as the prompt...
Scholarshipice - Dec 31, 2018 / Holt - Jan 2, 2019
|Studying Biology at NYU will open doors to opportunities - NYU supplement essay
3 - Summaya, your reasons for choosing NYUAD is so flimsy, the reviewer will not even consider your application reason. The...
Scholarshipsumayya_99 - Dec 31, 2018 / Holt - Jan 2, 2019
|My motivation to become a lawyer - check for my personal statement
3 - Truc, it is unfortunate that your essay is being prevented from becoming a proper personal statement because of your...
Scholarshiptruclinh2504 - Dec 31, 2018 / Holt - Jan 2, 2019
|ESSAY for GLOBAL UGRAD. UGRAD, Me and My Society
3 - Please refer to the following link as to why using Grammarly to check your essay means you end up...
Scholarshipraja23 - Dec 31, 2018 / Holt - Jan 2, 2019
|Why are you a good candidate for the GLOCAL programme, what are your motivation to participate?
3 - Rhys, this essay seems too exhaustive for the reviewer to finish. As I reviewed the prompt requirements, it occurred...
Scholarshiperasmusmundus - Dec 29, 2018 / Holt - Dec 31, 2018
|Call Center - UGRAD. My participation in this experience triggered my will to grow more as a leader
4 - @Rociomaria Thank you so much ! Too bad I have to change it, because it's not related to community...
Scholarshipnisrinajaafari - Dec 29, 2018 / nisrinajaafari - Dec 30, 2018
|I am applying for the GLOCAL - Global Markets and Development pathway
2 - Kubaja, this is not an essay that will impress the reviewer because it neglects to answer some specific questions...
Scholarshipmhm0146801 - Dec 28, 2018 / Holt - Dec 30, 2018
|KGSP Future Plan in Korea after Graduating
2 - You are presenting a cut and dried response rather than a detailed explanation of how you intend to achieve...
ScholarshipJunghakkyo - Dec 28, 2018 / Holt - Dec 29, 2018
|Electronic Engineering: Personal Statement - PTDF Scholarship
5 - @vrathore2001, @Holt, @Alao0702 I'm really want to appreciate your honest contributions to my essay. I shall rewrite it taking...
ScholarshipMudinero - Dec 24, 2018 / Mudinero - Dec 28, 2018
|Agriculture is the backbone of civilization. Stinpendium Hungaricum Scholarship; Motivation letter
ScholarshipNaub123 - Dec 27, 2018 / Naub123 - Dec 28, 2018
|Wireless Communications Engineering - motivation letter for scholarship
3 - Azzam, this motivational letter contains pertinent information that can help you explain your motivation to apply for the scholarship....
Scholarshipazzam - Dec 27, 2018 / Holt - Dec 28, 2018
|Applying EuroPubHealth+ Erasmus Mundus - Master in public health field
2 - NInin, your motivational letter is strong and truly represents your strengths as a candidate in relation to your motivations...
Scholarshippipitgo - Dec 27, 2018 / Holt - Dec 28, 2018
|Why I want to study Portuguese in Brazil
4 - Theodore, it appears that your essay is focused on the social aspect of the project. You are not predominantly...
Scholarshipltheodore24 - Dec 27, 2018 / Holt - Dec 28, 2018
|I decided to take one step ahead. Motivations with which you apply for the KGSP program
2 - Nur, this is not a motivational paper. You have not written anything in this essay that signifies a clear...
ScholarshipNurSyakirin - Dec 26, 2018 / Holt - Dec 27, 2018
|Dedication and spirit - Global UGRAD program will be a great opportunity and new wonderful challenge
ScholarshipCrabsinus - Dec 25, 2018 / Crabsinus - Dec 26, 2018
|What's a Study Plan? Is this what it should look like? Graduate School in Korea application
5 - You should write a totally new essay so that you can focus more on representing the study plan requirements...
ScholarshipJunghakkyo - Dec 21, 2018 / Holt - Dec 24, 2018
|Economic and environmental impacts of petrol stations. Statement of purpose for PTDF scholarship
2 - @lawal lawal If you will just remove the references to your educational background and professional credentials, your essay will...
Scholarshiplawal lawal - Dec 20, 2018 / Holt - Dec 21, 2018
|Reasons, How the Program Fits Your Education and Future Plans, FLTA Essay
2 - Dany, your reasons are too shallow when referenced in your writing and too generic overall. You do not indicate...
Scholarshipd2ny - Dec 19, 2018 / Holt - Dec 21, 2018
|Korean Scholarship- Personal Statement- Masters Degree
2 - I can see that you have a impressive background. However, you should take some time to make it more...
ScholarshipJunghakkyo - Dec 20, 2018 / Alicelanphuong - Dec 21, 2018
|Personal statement for Tourism Development and Culture Erasmus Joint Masters Degree
3 - Mariana, your essay is more of a creative writing piece than it is a statement of purpose for Erasmus...
ScholarshipDannyalc92 - Dec 17, 2018 / Holt - Dec 18, 2018
|Common wealth development impact essay
5 - Thanks a lot, holt for your comments and positive reply!! You're doing a great work to help us!!...
Scholarshipmbaruck - Dec 11, 2018 / mbaruck - Dec 16, 2018
|Potential contribution that you'll make to international development if you're awarded a scholarship
4 - What I meant to say was that with the collection of proper taxes from local businesses, Nigeria can increase...
ScholarshipWhandhey95 - Dec 13, 2018 / Holt - Dec 15, 2018
|CHANGE IS THE FIRST STEP TO SUCCESS: My value and belief_NTU scholarship essay
2 - Quan, in order to bring more clarity to your presentation, you need to kick off the essay with an...
Scholarshipquantran_hust - Dec 12, 2018 / Holt - Dec 13, 2018
|My love for chemistry and personal investment in biology and medicine, Ph.D. in pharmacology
2 - Hi Kylie, I really believe that the last 2 paragraphs of your essay more than accurately responds to the...
Scholarshipkjluther135 - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|Tourism- the key to cultural coherence; being a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program
2 - Inoya, your third paragraph is not well developed. The grammar is imperfect and as such, created a confusing and...
ScholarshipInoyatillo - Dec 10, 2018 / Holt - Dec 11, 2018
|GLOCAL EMJMD PERSONAL STATEMENT
3 - Thank you for pointing that out. I thought I had addressed this in bits and pieces in various paragraphs...
ScholarshipSanamHasnani - Nov 17, 2018 / SanamHasnani - Dec 10, 2018
|Personal statement for pursuing a joint masters in Tourism Development and Culture in UK
2 - Patricia, don't exaggerate in your essays, reviewers hate that. Sentiments such as "the best decision I made in my...
ScholarshipPat94 - Dec 9, 2018 / Holt - Dec 10, 2018
|Undegraduate/Scholarship/ - Difficulties I have overcome - the door to my inside world
2 - Karina, this over dramatized essay is not speaking of the correct topic. The prompt is only asking about any...
ScholarshipKumka - Dec 7, 2018 / Holt - Dec 8, 2018
|Erasmus Master Scholarship Essay - motivation for choosing the GLOCAL programme
2 - Vania, your essay is extremely choppy to read. It needs to be edited for continuity, transition, and chronological significance....
Scholarshipvania - Dec 3, 2018 / Holt - Dec 4, 2018
|I want to be a participant in the Global Ugrad program not only for my own benefit
2 - Maria, the essay shows that you have good academic qualifications for the program. You have admirable intentions for your...
Scholarshipmaricedd - Dec 2, 2018 / Holt - Dec 3, 2018
|The passion for excellence is a value that I exemplify and uphold the most. NTU Scholarship
2 - Lorems, your passion for excellence is not clearly explained in this essay. As a student, you are not supposed...
Scholarshipliubang - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
|Promoting Reading Habit in Indonesia - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
2 - Maria, please do not repeat information in this essay. What I mean to say is, do not repeat the...
Scholarshipmarian6591 - Nov 24, 2018 / Holt - Nov 25, 2018
|The leadership has been existing in me without my knowledge
4 - @nhancau12345 thanks a lot for the correction though is just a draft of the essay will correct that. point...
Scholarshipkwendo98 - Nov 23, 2018 / kwendo98 - Nov 24, 2018
|Personal statement for outside scholarship
Scholarshipanastasiiaovchar - Nov 22, 2018 / nhancau12345 - Nov 24, 2018
|"What excites you" question. Does the answer reflect values, inclusivity and tapping into potential?
Scholarshipbilis - Nov 21, 2018 / bilis - Nov 23, 2018
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