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|NTU Scholarship : "a subject of personal importance" - exchange program to Italy
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback! Since I am applying to become an engineer if I could...
Scholarshipazulamikaelson - Dec 13, 2020 / azulamikaelson - Dec 13, 2020
|Raised in Amazon, Brazil - PERSONAL STATEMENT
4 - @Holt I adjusted all the corrections. Would you mind reading it again to make sure it's not confusing the...
Scholarshipsousula - Dec 10, 2020 / sousula - Dec 12, 2020
|Leading International Vaccinology Education (LIVE) Personal Statement Scholarship Essay
3 - @Holt Thanks for your suggestion. I have revised my letter as below. The max character is 4500 which my...
Scholarshipstelixstelicis - Dec 3, 2020 / stelixstelicis - Dec 10, 2020
|What is the hardest you have ever worked on something in your life?
4 - The impact upon yourself is clear in the essay. It fails to explain how your experience has helped others...
ScholarshipSami1994 - Dec 7, 2020 / Holt - Dec 8, 2020
|Scholarship essay on self reference in third person. (300 words)
5 - There is a lack of balance in your presentation regarding what the reviewer needs to know about. you should...
Scholarshiplobodobo - Nov 29, 2020 / Murtaza Ali - Dec 2, 2020
|Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Euroculture: Society, Politics and Culture in a Global Context
Scholarshipeuroculturer - Nov 28, 2020 / euroculturer - Nov 29, 2020
|Why the University should select me for the scholarship for masters
3 - @Holt thanks a lot for your suggestions. I am applying for masters program at the National University of Malaysia....
ScholarshipMurtaza Ali - Nov 28, 2020 / Murtaza Ali - Nov 28, 2020
|Scholarship essay on academic objectives and how they'd be relevant for my long term goal. 100 words
3 - @Holt Thanks for replying! Ok, so from what I've understood, you're saying that my essay was too general correct?...
Scholarshiplobodobo - Nov 27, 2020 / lobodobo - Nov 27, 2020
|[GKS-G/KGSP-G] Statement of Purpose (Goals of study and Study Plan)
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback! I will do my corrections, hope you can check them once...
ScholarshipItziMh - Nov 25, 2020 / ItziMh - Nov 26, 2020
|[GKS-G/KGSP-G] Personal Statement - International & Area Studies Master's Program
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback, I took into account the comments you have given me and...
ScholarshipItziMh - Nov 22, 2020 / ItziMh - Nov 22, 2020
|[GKS-G/KGSP-G] Biological Sciences Personal Statement - Motivations, education, work, study reasons
2 - For starters, if the focus of your college major will be Biological Studies, then you should be focusing your...
ScholarshipMikaLee98 - Nov 12, 2020 / Holt - Nov 12, 2020
|Creativity, hard work and commitment - NTU essay for Scholarship - about values and beliefs
2 - Creativity is not a value of belief system. You should remove that from this essay. You should stick to...
ScholarshipDustin - Nov 11, 2020 / Holt - Nov 11, 2020
|Chevening essay about International Project Management
3 - The Chevening Scholarship asks the students to write a Leadership and Influencing essay. It does not ask the student...
Scholarshipsuryaadiwiguna - Nov 10, 2020 / Holt - Nov 11, 2020
|An enthusiast of Data Science - Tell us your story
3 - In summary your essay should tell why you are interested in Data Science, for now what I read there...
ScholarshipHammed_Olayinka - Nov 4, 2020 / ndangalasi - Nov 9, 2020
|Languages and business related subjects - GKS GRADUATE SCHOLARSHIP. PERSONAL STATEMENT
2 - I am confused by your presentation. Are you applying for an MA in a Language OR Business course? You...
ScholarshipChinny89 - Nov 8, 2020 / Holt - Nov 9, 2020
|Motivation letter for Master's scholarship in data science of Australia Government
2 - The first paragraph can be modified to provide a more motivational academic reason for your studies. The passion should...
Scholarshipkainan - Nov 4, 2020 / Holt - Nov 6, 2020
|How to Gain Buy-in for Millennials at the Office: A Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your constructive feedbacks, Holt. Well noted. I will improve my essay writing based...
Scholarshipsheilakartika - Nov 2, 2020 / sheilakartika - Nov 3, 2020
|Unique and Specific Course to Address My Problems: A Chevening Essay on Studying in the UK
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback and constructive inputs. I just submitted my application and fortunately deleted...
Scholarshipsheilakartika - Nov 2, 2020 / sheilakartika - Nov 3, 2020
|The national and international level - Strong leadership and personal influence - Chevening
Scholarshipmadinamodesta - Nov 3, 2020 / madinamodesta - Nov 3, 2020
|Using clear example, explain how you meet the networking skills requirements
Scholarshipkabri - Nov 1, 2020 / madinamodesta - Nov 3, 2020
|Reason for Studying in UK - Chevening Essay; knowledge required to achieve my career goal in Nigeria
3 - Your first 2 paragraphs are irrelevant. You need to discuss your undergraduate certification in that section. Prove that you...
ScholarshipAda1998 - Nov 2, 2020 / Holt - Nov 3, 2020
|CHEVENING POST-STUDY PLAN ESSAY - Infrastructure Development
Scholarshipegina - Nov 1, 2020 / sheilakartika - Nov 2, 2020
|"One day or Day One" - 2021 GKS Public Administration Personal Statement
Scholarshipocculus001 - Oct 26, 2020 / occulus001 - Nov 2, 2020
|The Chevening committee is looking for people with networking skills to create a national network
2 - This is the most amateur networking essay I have ever read in relation to a Chevening scholarship application. There...
Scholarshiposinakayah - Nov 1, 2020 / Holt - Nov 2, 2020
|Hydroelectricity power - Carrer plan Chevening scholarship essay
2 - This is not a proper Chevening Post Study Plan. The career plan should reflect how you will be using...
ScholarshipFunkTenseToker10 - Nov 1, 2020 / Holt - Nov 2, 2020
|Chevening - My choice of courses and why
3 - The first paragraph of this essay should explain the relevance of your undergraduate certification to your chosen courses. The...
Scholarshipody0397 - Nov 1, 2020 / Holt - Nov 2, 2020
|Leading by identifying issues and implementing impact driven solutions to incubate change
5 - @egina Thanks so much for your incredible insights I have Incorporated the suggestions. Dear Holt. Thank you for your...
ScholarshipKshah - Nov 1, 2020 / Kshah - Nov 1, 2020
|Essay for Chevening Scholarship - Study In The UK and preferred courses
4 - Hi @Brelyantika16 in terms of choice of courses, I think you should emphasize the specialties of this university which...
ScholarshipBrelyantika16 - Oct 24, 2020 / ody0397 - Nov 1, 2020
|I'm a teacher applying for Chevening this year Leadership and Influence
Scholarshipdhmch - Oct 30, 2020 / dhmch - Oct 31, 2020
|Personal statement for kgsp graduate program master degree in medical laboratory science
2 - You have not read the application requirements for the masters course GKS sponsorship. Your personal statement does not provide...
ScholarshipMrafi almahi - Oct 30, 2020 / Holt - Oct 31, 2020
|Zoom Learning Process - Essay on Leadership and influence
4 - If you carefully review your presentation, you have not given a justified example of a leadership role. Rather, you...
Scholarshipanfau - Oct 30, 2020 / Holt - Oct 30, 2020
|My three courses choice to study Business analytics in the UK - essay for Chevening scholarship
4 - Hi imgroot, As Holt has stated, putting your training experience in such great details at the beginning is...
Scholarshipimgroot - Oct 28, 2020 / dhmch - Oct 30, 2020
|Chevening Essay 2020 - Career Plan - Digital Security Business, Emerging Technology
3 - @alfa95 As highlighted by Holt previously that Phd doesn't make a sense in your essay so kindly remove it....
Scholarshipalfa95 - Oct 29, 2020 / imgroot - Oct 30, 2020
|Essay on Leadership and influence - for Chevening Leadership Fellowship 2021
Scholarshipbmky_astu - Oct 28, 2020 / bmky_astu - Oct 29, 2020
|Woman Engineers Networking Benefits - Chevening Networking Essay
3 - There is a point in this essay where you veer into a leadership and influencing statement. You should remove...
Scholarshipdevilwearsnike - Oct 28, 2020 / Holt - Oct 29, 2020
|I identify problems and find effective solutions - MasterCard challenge essay.
2 - You should be further detailed with regards to the incorrect grading issue that you fought for. Your first paragraph...
ScholarshipJoana - Oct 28, 2020 / Holt - Oct 29, 2020
|Leading an Improvement around Senior Engineers - Chevening Leadership Essay
4 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you for the suggestions. I will try to find bigger scope examples then. If not,...
Scholarshipdevilwearsnike - Oct 28, 2020 / devilwearsnike - Oct 29, 2020
|Bringing people together - Chevening scholarship advice on the networking essay.
4 - I think your miss out the importance of networking. Kindly show how you network with people and how you...
ScholarshipKawalano - Oct 26, 2020 / imgroot - Oct 28, 2020
|My leadership journey for Chevening.
4 - There is not real leadership nor influencing traits presented in this essay. You have shown your charitable side and...
Scholarshipimgroot - Oct 27, 2020 / Holt - Oct 28, 2020
|Chevening Essay - network is the investment for my personal growth
3 - @Holt I agree with your comment about the result of networking. Actually, my idea was to put a...
Scholarshipnugisk - Oct 27, 2020 / nugisk - Oct 28, 2020
|Chevening Leadership Essay - Leading Ourselves And People
4 - wow, I never thought having this complete review. I really appreciate it dude, and I will revise it...
Scholarshiplinduputra16 - Oct 27, 2020 / linduputra16 - Oct 27, 2020
|My responsibility. Kindly assist with review of my Leadership and Influencing Skills essay below
Scholarshipivymogotsi - Oct 27, 2020 / ivymogotsi - Oct 27, 2020
|Chevening - Network elevates yourself
Scholarshipody0397 - Oct 27, 2020 / Holt - Oct 27, 2020
|DEVELOPING AN AFFORDABLE ONLINE ENGLISH COURSE FOR MIDDLE-LOWER LANGUAGE LEARNER NEEDS (#1 ESSAY)
2 - The influencing skills are not very impressive in this presentation. Mostly because the students were already eager to learn...
Scholarshipmiftayu - Oct 26, 2020 / Holt - Oct 27, 2020
|Bring positive changes to the team, Leadership Chevening Essay
3 - Though grammatically incorrect, this essay has just the right balance of influencing (first) and leadership (second). The way that...
Scholarshipfitriice - Oct 26, 2020 / Holt - Oct 27, 2020
|Orphan's life - Personal importance that influence my life
2 - The story title is The Life of an Orphan. An orphan is someone who has lost both parents, the...
ScholarshipAbubakar00 - Oct 26, 2020 / Holt - Oct 26, 2020
|Chevening Essay Networking - Meaningless Intelligence
4 - @indahristya You are describing your duties. You may need to include examples which shows how did you connect, and...
Scholarshipindahristya - Oct 25, 2020 / JTore - Oct 26, 2020
|Leadership skills would take you where you want to reach, Chevening leadership essay
3 - @Sam11 From your essay you seem not to use the STAR approach. Clearly outlining the situation and address it...
ScholarshipSam11 - Oct 26, 2020 / JTore - Oct 26, 2020
|Chevening Essay Leadership & Influence - Learning leadership without status
Scholarshipindahristya - Oct 25, 2020 / indahristya - Oct 26, 2020
|A new project in my village to help children learn English. Chevening Career plan
2 - Does Chevening support any educational programs in your country? How can you help support that program in your home...
ScholarshipOmnia - Oct 25, 2020 / Holt - Oct 26, 2020
|Reflecting on your life so far, tell us how you meet the key selection criteria for Scholars Program
Scholarshiposinakayah - Oct 24, 2020 / osinakayah - Oct 24, 2020
|Essay about Leading your superior and supervisor
3 - @Holt Thank you Holt, Appreciate your feedback, time and will work more on the grammar and better wordings....
Scholarshipody0397 - Oct 23, 2020 / ody0397 - Oct 23, 2020
|"Tree Planting Advocates" President - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCING
ScholarshipOlusola - Oct 22, 2020 / Olusola - Oct 23, 2020
|A project-surveyor - help to apply for the Chevening Masters scholarship.
2 - You are rushing through your presentation. You do not need a summary of your perceived leadership abilities. You need...
ScholarshipKawalano - Oct 22, 2020 / Holt - Oct 23, 2020
|'Leadership is within you' - Chevening essay about leadership
Scholarshiphrdyntmar - Oct 22, 2020 / hrdyntmar - Oct 23, 2020
|NETWORKING -CHEVENING ESSAY - EDUCATION FIELD
ScholarshipWenGa - Oct 21, 2020 / WenGa - Oct 22, 2020
|Leader is the one who responsible - Chevening Essay
3 - Avoid referencing perceived undergraduate leadership and influencing skills as best as you can. Your reference in this essay is...
ScholarshipSepcan - Oct 20, 2020 / Holt - Oct 21, 2020
|CHEVENING Networking Essay - One man show will not work
3 - You can remove your opening paragraph and go directly to the second paragraph instead. Do not waste the time...
ScholarshipJoeycooky - Oct 20, 2020 / Holt - Oct 21, 2020
|Chevening leadership essay - leading web transformation end encourage others
2 - Hi i think this is good, but could be better if you can elaborate more example rather only give...
Scholarshipfatmajanna - Oct 18, 2020 / dsari1602 - Oct 20, 2020
|CHEVENING Leadership and influence essay - Leader as a team player
3 - @Holt Thank you for your swift respond, I've found it very useful to read your comment in other threads....
ScholarshipJoeycooky - Oct 20, 2020 / Joeycooky - Oct 20, 2020
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