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|"TransJogja" bus - personal statement of scholarship to Korea 2017
3 - Hello i have some advice to your essay, but actually your essay was good I intend to undergraduate...
Scholarshipkejora24 - Sep 19, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 19, 2016
|Life Lessons Essay: What was the most dramatic change you ever had to make?
3 - If this is for a scholarship, I would say to not include some of the graphic details about your...
Scholarshipgmuturi - Sep 17, 2016 / angeli6778 - Sep 18, 2016
|Writing about the motivations with which I apply for the KGSP Undergraduate 2017 program
3 - Thank you, mem77. That was very helpful for me. Is the following version of my first sentence is good?...
ScholarshipThiviya - Sep 15, 2016 / Thiviya - Sep 16, 2016
|The hope to realize my dream in Chevening! Leadership & influence question
4 - Thank you @sinahector I feel very proud and fulfilled that many beneficial projects are initiated and progressed with...
Scholarshiptulip1989 - Sep 14, 2016 / tulip1989 - Sep 14, 2016
|What do your parents think about your studying in Japan? (unlimited words)
7 - Dear@Thicun, I'm sorry for replying your comment this late. I've ready your suggestions and for me, they are...
Scholarshipjamienguyen0911 - Sep 9, 2016 / jamienguyen0911 - Sep 13, 2016
|My dream is to get a bachelor degree in my dream country - Korea!
3 - Dear ichanpants89 I am really thank you for your advise. I'll rethink about it and come back with a...
ScholarshipRebekah - Sep 11, 2016 / Rebekah - Sep 11, 2016
|Individuals with strong networking skill and influence to lead others
Scholarshipchoyhar2002 - Sep 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 9, 2016
|You've got a ticket in your hand. Where will you go? What will you do?
ScholarshipLexusnguyen1995 - Sep 7, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 7, 2016
|I am applying for Chevening Scholarship. I would like to have your thoughts on my essay below.
2 - I like your essay you have a very resume and experience. However, try not to use the same transition...
ScholarshipUgEddie - Sep 7, 2016 / Lexusnguyen1995 - Sep 7, 2016
|Chevening scholarship; they are looking for the right individuals with proper skills.
NEW - Hi , dear all, please kindly assist me in applying the scholarship, thank you so much. Chevening scholarship:looking...
Scholarshipchoyhar2002 - Sep 2, 2016 / — -
|Just one day in a variety of many; describe a typical day in your life in the future UWC scholarship
2 - Greetings Mr/Mrs Duong Thi to speak frankly, when I read yours, I feel like I'm the subject and experience...
Scholarshiphuonggdng - Sep 2, 2016 / ramzi06 - Sep 2, 2016
|Chevening. I hope to teach my students and colleagues the true English culture and ethics I lived
2 - Hi Ehab, I am an American, but maybe you will accept my comments and suggestions for your essay nonetheless....
ScholarshipEhab - Sep 1, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 2, 2016
|'I am really interested in this program' - Statement for Korean Government Scholarship Program 2017
2 - Hi Yolanda, welcome to EssayForum :) I can see that you've struggled really hard in composing this essay...
Scholarshipyolastarie - Aug 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 29, 2016
|Why are you interested in pursuing careers in healthcare? (NM Discovery App, 300-500 char)
Scholarshipthebslee - Aug 26, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 29, 2016
|Networking skills - crucial determinants of one's performance in any field of work - Chevening essay
NEW - Hey guys, this is my essay for the networking skill in the Chevening application. I want it to look...
Scholarshipnazzia30 - Aug 28, 2016 / — -
|Hi ! i'm Nathanya , help me correct my Personal Statement for apply KGSP Scholarship
4 - Hi Here are my some suggestions. I learn........... by myself . to re present my class on our...
Scholarshipnathanyasascia - Aug 26, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 27, 2016
|'Master of cancer drug discovery is only available at Bradford' - applying Chevening Scholars
3 - Hi @ichanpants89! I am very delighted because of your advice. I will make sure the courses and post y...
ScholarshipAngela Nang - Aug 26, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 27, 2016
|'eldest child in my family' - Essays for applying Chevening Scholars
ScholarshipAngela Nang - Aug 25, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 26, 2016
|'being a pharmacist is liked being blessed' - Essay for applying Chevening Scholars
ScholarshipAngela Nang - Aug 23, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 25, 2016
|Effective communication, harmonized networking means fruitful achievements. Chevening Scholars essay
ScholarshipAngela Nang - Aug 24, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 25, 2016
|UWC scholarship : Describe a challenge and how you overcame and its impacts
Scholarshiphuonggdng - Aug 20, 2016 / pacifyxer - Aug 25, 2016
|Clear post-study career plan; career goals related to UK priorities in your country - for Chevening
4 - To be replicated- by replicating The lives of the people there- the lives of local people I will use...
Scholarshipnazzia30 - Aug 23, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 24, 2016
|Describe your motivation and commitment to return to Africa after graduation and out line a brief pr
ScholarshipDennis65 - Aug 22, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016
|WHY ARE YOU INTERESTED IN STUDYING AT UBC? HOW DO YOU SEE YOURSELF FITTING INTO THE UBC COMMUNITY?
ScholarshipDennis65 - Aug 4, 2016 / Dennis65 - Aug 22, 2016
|Chavening essay regarding to leadership and networking skills.
2 - Hi Jordan, As for my comprehension to the charactors that a good leader should own, the foremost is...
ScholarshipJordan366 - Aug 22, 2016 / Lansium - Aug 22, 2016
|"A voyage to the oceans of characters" - "Let your life speak". United World College Scholarship
2 - Hi Hien, welcome to EssayForum :) At first, I was quite confused about your essay. I was struggling...
Scholarshiphienlent1300 - Aug 21, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 22, 2016
|Becoming either Data Scientist or Machine Learning Software Engineer. Career Plan for Chevening
3 - hai akurniawan... there are some correction : - ... countries in the world hashave already been taking... -...
Scholarshipakurniawan - Aug 21, 2016 / ayu sasmita08 - Aug 21, 2016
|A MSc in Development Studies will help me to develop a skill-set that I can effectively put in use
2 - Hi Nazia, welcome to EF! :) I believe that this essay has already well-written. You have successfully answered...
Scholarshipnazzia30 - Aug 20, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 21, 2016
|Korean government regulations affected the internet, music lyrics, broadcast, movies, games, etc
Scholarshipkwonuhy000 - Aug 21, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 21, 2016
|I have written my essay for chevening scholarship and need your comments for corrections
3 - Hi Smahsmah, these are my corrections and suggestions... ... Music Director, etc.avoid abbreviation and produced meaningful (...), I...
ScholarshipSMAHSMAH - Aug 19, 2016 / SunnyM - Aug 20, 2016
|'Nature is an envelop of natural phenomena and the most beautiful gift on Earth' MSC SOP FOR PHYSICS
ScholarshipSunnyM - Aug 18, 2016 / SunnyM - Aug 20, 2016
|I have come to agree with John C. Maxwell that leadership is not titled, position but influence
3 - thanks for your input. do you think the article answered the mentioned question in a bright way. do you...
Scholarshipfreebeejay - Aug 18, 2016 / freebeejay - Aug 18, 2016
|Media electronics should change their programmes (writing task 2)
2 - Hi Ayu. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am delighted to tell you that you have chosen the right medium...
Scholarshipayu sasmita08 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Personal Statement for Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP) 2017.
2 - Hi Pisal, while it is necessary to address all the prompts for this personal statement, I suggest that you...
ScholarshipPisal - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|I learned that success was collective, not personal.
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|'I served as the Treasurer and Events coordinator' - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION
4 - Hi Aaron, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to provide you with the most...
Scholarshipchukky24 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|I have learned that even if you fail or lose, there is no reason to give up. Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipCaronte16 - Aug 16, 2016 / pujakurniawan19 - Aug 16, 2016
|Every Human being is a leader in his own right. Chevening Leadership & Influence Question.
NEW - Chevening Leadership & Influence Question: My Answer is TOO LONG, & I can't short it ?! Every Human...
Scholarshipshadow7 - Aug 16, 2016 / — -
|Outline why you have selected your chosen courses and how this relates to your plans for the future
Scholarshipadidistortion - Aug 13, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 13, 2016
|My leadership style combines democratic, empowering, directing and motivating at the same time
2 - Hi, here are my little correction for u: - My leadership style is a combine ofbetween democratic,...
ScholarshipSullycrams - Aug 13, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 13, 2016
|What would you guys change in this paragraph to make it smoother
4 - Well, you open your paragraph in a proper way; establishing what will be the content of it. Also, the...
ScholarshipDavidg021 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
|Wanting make a change by revolutionizing the aerospace industry
2 - Hi Juan, as I go through your writing,you definitely continue to impress us in making sure that each and...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Aug 9, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|"The benefits that derive from studying abroad": a 2-paged KE Scholarship Personal Statement
Scholarshipp_leighton - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Scholarship Essay - Contribution to Diversity; I did not let any of obstacles I met to get me down
4 - Hi Anne! You've gotten some good feedback so far with ideas on how to make your essay less wordy....
ScholarshiplemarP - Jul 28, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jul 29, 2016
|Learning gave me direction and purpose
5 - Hi Juan, no worries at all if you forgot the prompt, well, it is definitely helpful for us to...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|INSPIRATION FOR MY MAJOR SCHOLARSHIP - FILM
2 - Your primary influence is you want this career for your own good.And at last you are presenting problems of...
ScholarshipiSasha - Jul 26, 2016 / tyjoke - Jul 26, 2016
|What can you gain from learning cultures? What aspect of french history and culture interests you?
Scholarshipsnarkalert - Jul 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|Essay about "The Greatest Success Of My Life" for one of the scholarship requirements.
Scholarshipashrinp - Jul 12, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 14, 2016
|Why would you like to attend Wreck Camp and how will it help you succeed?
2 - Juan, it is also nice to be working with you. As always, your essay is always almost flawless. It...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Jul 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 14, 2016
|Write a letter to the number five explaining why five is important
2 - Wow, I really enjoyed reading this - you are quite a talented writer. Here are my suggestions: ...
Scholarshipawsde - Jul 12, 2016 / TJLuschen - Jul 12, 2016
|Why I feel that I deserve this scholarship (150 words)
9 - Thank you very much for the positive feedbacks everyone, I will take your comments into consideration....
ScholarshipDennis65 - Jun 18, 2016 / Dennis65 - Jul 11, 2016
|Study Objective and personal statement, I want someone to advice and check my essay.
ScholarshipNaing Win - Jul 1, 2016 / Naing Win - Jul 3, 2016
|Mental Health Scholarship Essay - your life with mental illness, the struggles you've encountered...
5 - Thanks Ivy and Mochtar. The full essay ended up being exactly 3 pages. I know it looks like one...
ScholarshipHiddengrace - Jun 24, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jul 2, 2016
|Scholarship application essay for Laws school - postgraduate law degree in Liverpool
Scholarshipkie - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 1, 2016
|Statement of purpose for an internship research program in mechanical engineering
5 - Hi Timbo, my apologies for the late response. Anyway, I would like to stress, for future writing reference that,...
Scholarshipaspergerkid - Jun 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|Reflecting on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the school/college? Why UWC?
3 - Hi Tallialvin After reading your essay, I see that it is pretty organized and clear. You answered all the...
Scholarshiptallialvin - Jun 14, 2016 / trangiabao - Jun 26, 2016
|'I thrived at my job'; How my program benefits me and I benefit it - scholarship essay
4 - Hi Karrin, indeed WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, just like you who aspire for excellence, us here on...
Scholarshipninakarrin - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|Friend, I am leaving to Mars next month, and I need your help.
5 - Hi Juan, no worries at all, we are always here to help you with all your writing projects, no...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|Difference in my personal life is my dream and new career-ENDEAVOUR SCHOLARSHIP ENTRY
7 - Hi Alima, indeed, there's no harm in trying, however, apart from trying hard you have to give it your...
ScholarshipNyx1413 - Jun 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|Scholarship essay about how my master's degree would further my career
3 - Hello Rodolfo, I believe that this is a very solid essay. Congratulations on that. I just have a few...
Scholarshiprods2292 - Jun 19, 2016 / bwodajo - Jun 23, 2016
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