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|If it was easy everyone will get it. My personal statement for applying scholarship
3 - Hi, I would like to leave some comments. My interest began when iI played 'the sims'''The Sims'' ....
ScholarshipJs1998 - May 6, 2016 / Victoria1015 - May 6, 2016
|Suppporting statements; Why in Monash University? Experience of study in Australia and future career
3 - Hi Lisa, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website helpful to...
ScholarshipLisa_Listiana - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Study objectives statement for Public Policy and specialization in International development
3 - Hi Nazia, I believe we can still enhance your essay, I'll work on the first 2 paragraphs of your...
Scholarshipenzyk - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|Opinion on my personal statement for Fulbright scholarship for Governance and Public Policy program
Scholarshipenzyk - May 1, 2016 / enzyk - May 3, 2016
|I plan to take all my prerequisite classes and then apply to the Dental Hygiene program. Goals essay
5 - Hi Theresa, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, it is one of the reasons that fuel...
Scholarshiptheresaknight13 - Apr 19, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|Situation in the country where you live / why Bradford? GLOBAL DEVELOPMENT SCHOLARSHIP IN THE UK
3 - Hello Mersad, the words are unlimited and the instructions tell us to be detailed as possible....
Scholarshipfirebaby - May 2, 2016 / firebaby - May 2, 2016
|Show how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connection you will gain from your scholarship
Scholarshipadhesti - Apr 28, 2016 / adhesti - Apr 30, 2016
|Efforts to obtain information on your study options / selection of proposed course and institutions
7 - Adhesti, I think that your grammatical accuracy is already good. Yet, unfortunately the first, second, or even third sentences...
Scholarshipadhesti - Apr 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 30, 2016
|Proposed study contribution / making improvements by implementing change or reform. Scholarship
5 - Hi Adhesti, no worries, we are here to assist you. Please find the remarks for the 2nd prompt. ...
Scholarshipadhesti - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 30, 2016
|An MBBS program study essay on how I chose my proposed course and institution
2 - Hi David, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, whenever we log in, its always a good...
ScholarshipGreat - Apr 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 29, 2016
|Skills necessary for implementation of modern information and communication technology (ICT)
2 - Hi Muhammad, I would like to share a few insights to your letter. Overall, I believe the letter...
ScholarshipMian Ji - Apr 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 27, 2016
|Supporting Statements for the Australia Award Scholarship.
2 - It's a well-written essay overall. Still, I suggest you re-checking the use of articles since I found that some...
Scholarshipabstracism - Apr 26, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Apr 26, 2016
|A friend's letter of recommendation for the HENAAC Scholars Program
3 - HI Juan, as much as I like the heartfelt writing technique in this letter of recommendation, I would not...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Apr 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 25, 2016
|Master of Architecture scholarship essay - Passion of art and design
4 - Hi Justivy03, thanks for the feedback . It is quite helpful seeing from the other person perspective. I have...
Scholarshiptintin_tin - Apr 14, 2016 / tintin_tin - Apr 25, 2016
|Aiming to be a Professional Translator, a Personal Statement to the AAS
7 - Thank you very much. I do apologize that I posted same thread. Thank you for your consideration and comments....
Scholarshipakbartaufiq25 - Apr 22, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Apr 25, 2016
|AAS Application Essay: How will the proposed study contribute to your career*?
3 - Hi Fatma, I would like to share some thoughts in your essay. Overall, you have a well written essay,...
Scholarshipfatmajanna - Apr 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 24, 2016
|KGSP-Undergraduate Personal Statement; what introduced me to Korean culture and educational system
Scholarshiphyungnari - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 22, 2016
|Assist a girl out, trying to get into dream school
ScholarshipiSasha - Apr 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 22, 2016
|'idea to simplify the system in more efficient and effective way' - Implementing change or reform
3 - Hi Alvius, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be helpful and useful...
ScholarshipAlviusTinambunan - Apr 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2016
|Gained Information - AAS - How did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Dear Fatmajanna, It is a pleasure to be working with you today. Reading your essay was quite motivating....
Scholarshipfatmajanna - Apr 18, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Apr 18, 2016
|I will do whatever it takes to reach my goal (Scholarship)
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Apr 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 14, 2016
|Organisation needs, professional experience and education background - course and institution choice
7 - Hey Treasa, your effort and time is clearly being portrayed in this essay. I can easily understand your motive...
ScholarshipTreasa - Mar 22, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Apr 11, 2016
|Graduated from Cairo University, Faculty of Engineering, Petroleum Department with EXCELLENT degree
2 - Hi Mohamed, your essay is interesting. You have only minor grammatical errors, you have a good grammar consistency in...
Scholarshipdream448 - Apr 7, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 7, 2016
|This is an essay of my study plan which is necessary for me to enroll for a scholarship
2 - Hi Ekbadin, I just finish reading your essay and for some reason, I got tired reading it, here are...
ScholarshipSpecialOne - Apr 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 6, 2016
|Walk with me in this journey I call life. (Scholarship)
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Apr 4, 2016 / abbukanithi - Apr 6, 2016
|Leadership Experience and how it made me a good leader. (Scholarship essay)
Scholarshipabbukanithi - Apr 3, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Apr 4, 2016
|The war frustated my dreams about becoming a dentist
ScholarshipSawsana - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
|Why am I a good candidate for the scholarship? (Scholarship for housing near the university)
2 - Hello Juan Sebastian Let me comment your essay Today, I'm a different person compared to a few years...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Apr 2, 2016 / adrian21 - Apr 3, 2016
|Educational goals and a leadership experience in high school - I am someone who the team can lean on
7 - Hi Nhat, well indeed it will be helpful if there is a clear guideline to the number of words,...
Scholarshipnphan94783 - Mar 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 31, 2016
|"You have to learn the rules of the game. And then you have to play better than anyone else."
2 - Hi Yesenia, as I finished reading your essay, I must conclude that this is a fairly written essay, I...
Scholarshipcyclone96 - Mar 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 31, 2016
|What does being Hispanic mean to you, and how do your life experiences shape your answer?
2 - - proud of being Hispanic. - and struggling withstruggle on the English language . - would tells me...
Scholarshipcyclone96 - Mar 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 31, 2016
|Striving to gender equality and good human resource in workforce-personal statement for scholarship
Scholarshipmdwijati - Mar 29, 2016 / mdwijati - Mar 30, 2016
|Great chance to gather and interact with Koreans and experience various aspects of their culture
2 - I would recommend putting more specific details to what you want out of this new experience and how it...
Scholarshipldaycat - Mar 29, 2016 / cyclone96 - Mar 30, 2016
|Supporting Statement for AAS 2017 Intake - three practical examples of using skills from scholarship
2 - Hi Yoga, WELCOME to EssayForum, I hope you find this website helpful in creating well written articles. Honestly, the...
Scholarshipyogagm - Mar 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 30, 2016
|Sri Lankan citizens suffering from blackouts; application for the commonwealth shared scholarship.
Scholarshipncbdrck - Mar 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 30, 2016
|'Trains, cars, skyscrapers, games' - Questbridge Quest for excellence essay for STEM
Scholarshipkitkat2 - Mar 21, 2016 / Menduch - Mar 27, 2016
|School should cut off art and music out of curriculum to avoid the pressure on young students
4 - Hello Miss Avini, i have read your writing, let me give you suggestion. in the first paragraph, you...
Scholarshipaviniwirastri - Mar 21, 2016 / yonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016
|Studying in South Korea is a way to in realize my future goal - KGSP Graduate Scholarship
Scholarshipfelixyustian - Mar 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 23, 2016
|What does being Hispanic mean to you? Scholarship essays geared for Hispanic students.
3 - Hi Juan, I have written additional corrections below, I hope it helps; - humbleness and interconnectednesshumble self...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Mar 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 22, 2016
|"Coming into a new culture and my love of math" QuestBridge Biographical Essay
Scholarshipmaiengelberg - Mar 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 22, 2016
|'member of Sudanese-Korean Friendship association' Writing KGSP graduate Letter of Self-introduction
5 - HI Tassa, I feel good reading your feedback and believe it or not, there's no other thing that makes...
ScholarshipTassa - Mar 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 22, 2016
|"To have a dream is not to follow it, but to chase it." My scholarship essay for a better world. :)
ScholarshipNoorEffah24 - Mar 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 21, 2016
|A hidden gem in the multitude of people. Work hard and it will pay off. Scholarship essay.
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Mar 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 21, 2016
|How I choose course and institution for master degree
Scholarshipgianti - Mar 18, 2016 / gianti - Mar 20, 2016
|I learned the value of a friendship by helping a friend succeed in college.
2 - Hi Juan, I could not find anything wrong with the essay, you wrote it well. Minor changes which I...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianR - Mar 18, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Mar 18, 2016
|I chose to study Bachelors in Architectural Design due to reasons I have acquired in my life.
4 - Hi Meyani, thank you for appreciating our work here in EF, I hope you will have a revision soon...
ScholarshipMeyani - Mar 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 18, 2016
|How did you choose your university? Strong desire to help all people live their possible happy lives
3 - Dear Amirulmumin, Thanks so much for your great feedback and comment, which I really appreciate....
Scholarshipsamnangyang - Mar 16, 2016 / samnangyang - Mar 18, 2016
|The one advantage that stands the test of time...is people. KGSP Study plan; Business Administration
7 - Hi Ahlem, as I read the revision of your essay, I find it more straight forward than the original...
Scholarshippanda_bbc - Mar 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 16, 2016
|"You must study hard for your future". KGSP programm self introduction.
4 - Put (,) after "first" Currently living and working in Korea with my family Currently, I am working and...
Scholarshipemmyjohn - Mar 13, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Mar 15, 2016
|Short ESSAY(400 WORDS) for AUSAID Scholarship 2017 intake! Practical examples of...
NEW - Please see how I've written this essay and comment on it's faults. ASAP before it's closing date this month!...
ScholarshipMeyani - Mar 15, 2016 / — -
|"Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship" Undergraduate Motivation Letter (need structure advice)
2 - Hi, Boldsaikhan, Nice try. However, I found that you need to refine your essay carefully. Sometimes, you...
Scholarshipketrshine - Mar 15, 2016 / Crystal812 - Mar 15, 2016
|My passion is to entertain - KGSP 2016 letter of self introduction
4 - Thank you for the feedback @Lynn88Mr and @zeyel . @Lynn88Mr , I will try giving comment on your...
Scholarshiptheea - Mar 6, 2016 / theea - Mar 15, 2016
|"Journey through foreign language & culture" - KGSP 2016 Letter of Self-Introduction
ScholarshipEandreski - Mar 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 14, 2016
|KGSP letter of selfintroduction. To much about my family and to little about me? Need some advice.
2 - Hi Ilona, yes you are right, too much about your family history and nothing about your career goals, your...
ScholarshipIlona - Mar 13, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Mar 13, 2016
|KGSP - 'An opportunity for me through which I can become a strong professional of my own field'
7 - Thank you very much for youe valuable time and opinion. Actually this is the first time I am expressing...
Scholarshippallabi - Mar 9, 2016 / pallabi - Mar 13, 2016
|My choice of the course and institution. Essay for Australia Awards Scholarships commencing in 2016
3 - Hi Ssakshijain! I really appreciate your advice. And, thanks a lot for your effort on my essay. :) :)...
ScholarshipJulynyein - Mar 12, 2016 / Julynyein - Mar 13, 2016
|Self Introduction Essay - Agent of Change on Urban and Regional Planning
Scholarshipisyelsnitch - Feb 29, 2016 / isyelsnitch - Mar 10, 2016
|'the strong will and the motivation' - Self introduction for KGSP scholarship
2 - Hi Fatema, your essay was too general to read, it was like reading your resume. You got so and...
ScholarshipMinah_03 - Mar 10, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Mar 10, 2016
|Fresno Unified scholarship Fund essay - my career goals, special circumstances, awards, abilities...
4 - Becoming an artist. Not sure if my essay is what it is suppose to - Fresno Unified scholarship Fund....
Scholarshipklee72 - Mar 9, 2016 / klee72 - Mar 9, 2016
|Rejection as The start of another better future - Self Introduction Essay for KGSP/Master's Program
10 - @LynnMr88: Yes..I'm aware of that..and thanks a lot for the support. I really hope both of us can meet...
Scholarshipbloomingdaisy - Mar 4, 2016 / bloomingdaisy - Mar 9, 2016
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