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|I am targeting for the scholarship Erasmus Mundus school - Motivation Statement Guidelines
3 - Well Haris, to think of applying for a scholarship is already a challenge and to take on that first...
Scholarshipharisabbasi89 - Nov 23, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 24, 2015
|Erasmus Mundus Letter of Motivationon Information Technologies for Business Intelligence
2 - Ishaqur, this is definitely, as you put it "too verbose". The reason it became that way is because you...
ScholarshipIshaqur - Nov 23, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 23, 2015
|"moving the corporate ladder" - Chevening Career Plan
ScholarshipHanan125 - Nov 2, 2015 / Hanan125 - Nov 22, 2015
|Motivation to return to Africa after graduation
2 - Nana, I agree with the remarks and corrections that Irham did above, it will definitely enhance your essay if...
ScholarshipEmma123 - Nov 22, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 22, 2015
|'computers & books (stories & novels)' - Need Proof Reading In My SOP
Scholarshipprince_ta - Nov 17, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 22, 2015
|In UWC I will represent my country and share my culture and tradition, help it in any way possible.
3 - Pravin, I'd like to share my thoughts on your essay. I believe you have a well written essay,...
Scholarshipschoolboy124 - Nov 19, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 22, 2015
|Olympiads, Chemistry Club and tutorial classes - NTU Scholarship Essay on my achievements
11 - @vangiespen Thank you for your help. I will start rewrite my essay. Thanks @irfan727 thank you for the corrections....
Scholarshipjo7098 - Nov 20, 2015 / jo7098 - Nov 22, 2015
|"I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work" - My plans for the next four years
3 - Emmanuel, in my opinion, your essay could actually be shorter and more prompt responsive if you just eliminate the...
ScholarshipSketches - Nov 21, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 21, 2015
|This is my Motivation Letter for a Scholarship opportunity from DAAD
8 - Education not only affects the country's development, but also it influences the environment. Studying is the most critical...
ScholarshipdooD - Nov 18, 2015 / Clark Kent - Nov 21, 2015
|How you contribute to your household and what would have happened during your absence?
Scholarshipasantee170 - Nov 21, 2015 / Clark Kent - Nov 21, 2015
|Describe a figure or movement which has provided inspiration within your own life.
6 - Hi Yan , your topic selection is good, your writing describes the essence. i think you should review the...
Scholarshipyan500 - Nov 19, 2015 / qamar3811 - Nov 20, 2015
|"Being a Computer Prefect" - Leadership Roles essay
3 - Vangiespa, I don't know what to say to you. Truly, you are awesome. Please keep on with the good...
Scholarshipyan500 - Nov 19, 2015 / yan500 - Nov 19, 2015
|Math - more numbers and less English
ScholarshipMsoe10 - Nov 16, 2015 / Ssakshijain - Nov 16, 2015
|Which of the world's great fights will you fight-and why? UT Austin Freshman Honors Application
ScholarshipSamm22 - Nov 16, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 16, 2015
|I believe obtaining Masters in UK / Physiotherapist Chevening alumni - Study UK Question
3 - Usman, I'd like to let you know that the screening for the Chevening Scholarship is due any moment and...
Scholarshipusman015 - Oct 31, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 16, 2015
|Math and history. Each of these subjects happen to be my favorite.
4 - Hai Taylezz. apparently you have to pay attention with your organization idea. Furthermore, I also found some unimportant words...
Scholarshiptayleez - Nov 13, 2015 / Ra_fhli - Nov 15, 2015
|Primary versus Secondary Education - Advantages of Teaching Foreign Language
8 - Hello! Thank you for your response. IELTS have indicated that they would give more points on complex sentences...
ScholarshipOctocaesar - Nov 1, 2015 / Octocaesar - Nov 14, 2015
|Bill Gates Millennium essay #1 describing my saxual practices
3 - Thank you so much, I'll redo the essay. And 'saxual practices' was intentional...The title bar said to be unique...
ScholarshipTRaw98 - Nov 13, 2015 / TRaw98 - Nov 13, 2015
|Describe your education & career goals & explain what or who has inspired or helped shape these goal
2 - Hi Javier, I attempt to give you some suggestions. There are some grammatical error that you have done. About...
ScholarshipJcamp9827 - Nov 10, 2015 / fahmisadja - Nov 11, 2015
|The Proportion of overseas students graduated from universities in different Canadian provinces
3 - - A comparison of the number of the proportion - is illustrated byin the bar chart. - students graduated...
Scholarshiphasbi - Nov 11, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 11, 2015
|Answers to the Mandela Washington fellowship for young leaders
5 - Final remarks for your essay. Question 3:Describe the role you play in your community. Outside of your professional...
ScholarshipMammusi83 - Nov 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 10, 2015
|How can study in Sweden and Masters degree help you reach your goal? Your Future plans? M.Letter
3 - - I decided to pursue a master's degree in Sweden whichas they are known to prioritizes real world problems....
Scholarshiplakshmi_k - Nov 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 9, 2015
|Maritime defense - Chevening (leadership) to write essays as answers for their questions
3 - Neo, I'd like to share my thoughts on your essay, well, indeed it's last minute and the Chevening Scholarship...
Scholarshipashleen - Nov 2, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 9, 2015
|Fast Food? sholud be banned ? - help me to correction or maybe add something in my essay.
7 - Sharah, it's better to use first person on your subject, so "you" is the better one, I mean that's...
Scholarshipsharahma - Nov 5, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 9, 2015
|Leadership is not about titles, positions, or flow charts. It is about one life influencing another.
2 - Anvar, pulling your leadership essay from a quote is a refreshing way to begin your essay, I have seen...
ScholarshipTimer89 - Nov 3, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 7, 2015
|How computers change our working conditon?
3 - Loung, this are my remarks for the rest of your essay. 3rd paragraph - Another point worth stating...
Scholarshiplacusclyne - Nov 6, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 6, 2015
|I have organized a mega sport event. Will this fact help me to convince on my leadership skills?
3 - HI, I'd like to share my thoughts on your essay. Reading throughout your essay, I must say that...
Scholarshipkhadija liaquat - Oct 30, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 6, 2015
|Leadership is all about having a vision of where you want to be and working to achieve that vision
Scholarshipahmad1989 - Nov 2, 2015 / lacusclyne - Nov 6, 2015
|I hope to expand my social and professional network and meet more people in Chevening
3 - Julia, I hope you understand how serious the Chevening scholarship is, it's a very competitive scholarship that builds students...
ScholarshipJoulyaH - Oct 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 5, 2015
|My dream is my advanture - Chevening
3 - Deli, I believe you made your research before you decided to apply for the Chevening Scholarship and by now...
Scholarshipdeli0890 - Oct 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 5, 2015
|[Chevening Scholarship] From Zero to a Gradual Strive in Education Sector
4 - Dylan, reading through your essay, I have a question, did you take into account that you have word count...
ScholarshipDylanTK - Oct 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 5, 2015
|I was the topper and class representative for 3 consecutive years, leading a group of 50 students
Scholarshiphamidy - Nov 2, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 3, 2015
|Leadership through working in a pharmaceutical company - Chevening application essay
5 - There are definitely notable improvements in this revised essay Hanan. It made the essay much more informative and solid...
ScholarshipHanan125 - Nov 1, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|LEADERSHIP THROUGH DISASTER. - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP QUESTION
14 - Hi Farzana, I'm always happy to review your other application essays for you. So far, I have noticed a...
ScholarshipFARZ1 - Oct 18, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|How to be future leaders or influencers in you Home Country
2 - Mohammad, I read through your essay and honestly, it needs a lot of work, as I advised all other...
Scholarshiphaider2010 - Oct 26, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 2, 2015
|Global sales in five different cell phone brands from 2009 to 2013
NEW - A comparison of the number of sales in five different cell phone brands in the world between 2009 and...
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|'I like famous Vince Lombardi quote about leaders' - Answers to Chevening scholarship questions
2 - Medgat, your first two paragraphs, the quote and then your mentioning your desire to become a Chevening scholar are...
ScholarshipMedgat - Nov 2, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|Chevening networking essay : networking helped me secure my first job
2 - Hanan, this extremely detailed and impressive networking narrative is exactly the kind of essay that has a very good...
ScholarshipHanan125 - Nov 2, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|'commercial photography market in Russia' - Chevening scholarship. Post-study career plan.
4 - Hi Oxana :-) I'll be more than happy to clarify these points for you. I hope my explanation can...
Scholarshipbolardz - Nov 1, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|LEADERS BORN NOT MADE - Chevening essay about Leadership and influence
4 - Maulana, here is the thing that can immediately shorten your essay. Delete everything from the first paragraph stopping only...
Scholarshipranuarga - Nov 1, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|My vision is to influence the telecommunication industry in my country - essay draft for Chevening
2 - Ahmed, I caution you against concentrating this essay on your college project. Regardless of the difficulties that you faced,...
ScholarshipMakhzanji - Nov 1, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2015
|'Being a leader, is a big role to fill in' - Chevening essay about leadership and influence
2 - Mohamed, what made you think that your leadership experience in the military, however mandatory would be frowned upon? I...
ScholarshipZMsM - Nov 1, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 1, 2015
|Chevening - I have chosen all three courses in the translation and interpretation field
ScholarshipLinaBB - Nov 1, 2015 / LinaBB - Nov 1, 2015
|"The Period Company" CAREER and returning home PLANNING
ScholarshipFARZ1 - Oct 31, 2015 / FARZ1 - Nov 1, 2015
|Chevening Scholarship outline - It's my first time to apply for it and I just came across this site
3 - Thank you Octocaesar. That is very good advice. Hmm I think I have more idea now. I really appreciate...
Scholarshipsreyphy - Oct 30, 2015 / sreyphy - Nov 1, 2015
|My ability to innovative, past experience and my future plan - UK questions essay
Scholarshiprayan82 - Oct 31, 2015 / Octocaesar - Nov 1, 2015
|'At my age, I'm confident of my achievements' - Chevening Leadership essay
2 - Masfa, when you write a leadership and influence essay for a Chevening scholarship, you have to keep in mind...
Scholarshipmasfa - Oct 31, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 1, 2015
|Worked at 4 different countries, 7+ years of experience in the supply chain field; Chevening scholar
3 - Hi Mohamed, let me give you some more focused advice for the improvement of your essay aside from the...
Scholarshipragabforever - Oct 31, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 1, 2015
|Leadership and influence are like hats / famous Egyptian rugs - Chevening response
2 - Hi Aysha! In my opinion, your first essay should be written focusing on leadership skills you have showed...
ScholarshipSlidingdoors - Oct 31, 2015 / asas4me - Oct 31, 2015
|Expansion of the underground space usage - Career Plan Question _ Chevening Scholarship
NEW - Hi everyone! This is my essay for the career plan question of the Chevening scholarship application. I would appreciate...
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|I'm applying for Chevening for the first time and came to know about this school just a few days ago
2 - Hi Suleman, In my opinion, your essay has quite good leadership examples. In order to turn your...
ScholarshipSulemanMalik - Oct 28, 2015 / asas4me - Oct 31, 2015
|I will learn from the best and use those skills to influence my country - Chevening essay
2 - Sarah, this is definitely not an essay that you should even consider submitting to the Chevening committee. The formatting...
Scholarshipsarah511 - Oct 30, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 30, 2015
|ESSAY - The universities I selected are intrinsically connected to my past experiences
4 - Mayara, the format of your essay is really very good. It is clear and offers you enough space to...
Scholarshipm4louso - Oct 27, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 30, 2015
|United World Colleges (UWC) Application Essay
Scholarshipderri - Oct 25, 2015 / justivy03 - Oct 30, 2015
|My main idea about leadership is to make a new challenge - an Essay for Chevening Scholarship
3 - - belief that a challenged spirit is - whothat influences on others - but also the improvement of the...
Scholarshipkwanjini - Oct 25, 2015 / justivy03 - Oct 30, 2015
|Chevening scholarship. The next pace setter of the world. Are you one of this?
3 - thank you for the advice, i will correct it. what about the idea? did it answer all questions well?...
Scholarshipamaliah - Oct 27, 2015 / amaliah - Oct 29, 2015
|[Chevening Essays] Building networks was essential for me to get my first internship
9 - Mayara, It is consistency essay and shows your clear plans, I have fix few things. par #1 Throughout...
Scholarshipm4louso - Oct 24, 2015 / rockprincess - Oct 29, 2015
|Where did the dream come from? Studying in the UK Question - Chevening Scholarship
8 - Amanda, you really need to review this essay with regards to the way that you use capitalized letters. You...
Scholarshipasas4me - Oct 28, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2015
|Who do you want to be in the next 10 years? (minimum 50 words, maximum 150 words)
2 - Brian, the essay that you wrote is quite generic in feel. It does not offer any solid information that...
Scholarshipbrianzz2405 - Oct 29, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2015
|We need "Management" in our lives - Chevening
NEW - Hi, I will be applying for chevening scholarship and this is my draft for the four questions: 1-...
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