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|CHEVENING LEADERSHIP ESSAY - Self Driven & Empathetic Leader (Need Input)
4 - Hi @Hiwi_Life & @Holt Thank you so much for your input. Will definitely keep those in mind when...
Scholarshipegina - Oct 18, 2020 / egina - Oct 20, 2020
|Chevening - Leadership (Policy Development and Environmental Movement)
2 - There is a lack of clarity as to whether these are all amateur leadership and influencing experiences or, if...
Scholarshiprawraisin - Oct 17, 2020 / Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Skills with technology - Chevening scholarship - Leadership and influence essay
3 - Thank you so much for your feedback 🙏 I will revise my essay and pay attention to everything you...
Scholarshipmaimana_xx - Oct 16, 2020 / maimana_xx - Oct 17, 2020
|Those three chosen courses to build up my present capacity in interior design
2 - You speak of inspiration and reasons for choosing the courses at these universities. However, there is a failure on...
ScholarshipAlshaimaa - Oct 16, 2020 / Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Leadership is People Development
3 - Since you asked for some help , herewith is my thougths. Your third sentence, you have be specific about...
ScholarshipAda1998 - Oct 14, 2020 / Messiah - Oct 16, 2020
|STUDY PLAN LANGUAGE GKS (BEFORE AND AFTER CAME TO KOREA)
3 - As a part of your preparing to study in Korea, reference that you are taking formal Hangul classes, and...
ScholarshipFly High - Oct 16, 2020 / Holt - Oct 16, 2020
|Leadership is more than just giving orders - Chevening Leadership Essays
2 - Your college leadership and influencing experience is too lightweight. It needs to be more specific. Why were you chosen...
Scholarshipamal95 - Oct 16, 2020 / Holt - Oct 16, 2020
|Studying in the UK Chevening Scholarships - Data science careers
2 - You are over the word count by 4 words. That is because you over expanded on the discussion of...
Scholarshipdaigonzur - Oct 16, 2020 / Holt - Oct 16, 2020
|MasterCard Foundation Scholarship at University of Edinburgh about a chosen program
3 - The essay will be better served if you combine the first sentence with the second paragraph references instead. The...
ScholarshipMessiah - Oct 15, 2020 / Holt - Oct 16, 2020
|Chevening leadership essay - being a natural leader
Scholarshipdaigonzur - Oct 14, 2020 / daigonzur - Oct 16, 2020
|Sustainable development. - Chevening Scholarship Leadership and Influence essay
3 - I think you might like to change the word authoritative and replace it with more suitable word. I usually...
Scholarshipkte3005 - Oct 12, 2020 / Messiah - Oct 15, 2020
|Got several awards at school - Personal Statement (KGSP Undergraduate application)
2 - In the motivation portion, tie in the advances Korea has had in IT that you admire the most. Find...
ScholarshipRarapta - Oct 15, 2020 / Holt - Oct 15, 2020
|Chevening Scholarship - Leadership Must Be Nurtured Since Childhood
4 - Hi, this is generally a good essay, but your make the eassay focus more on the activities which you...
Scholarshipabvsuward - Oct 13, 2020 / Ada1998 - Oct 14, 2020
|Leaders of Change - Leadership skills for Chevening scholarship
4 - Hi, Your Essay is great and you have good leadership ability. My comment would be that you should separate...
ScholarshipZainab Eid - Oct 3, 2020 / Ada1998 - Oct 14, 2020
|Teaching students for life, not just for a Test: A Leadership Essay for the Chevening Scholarship
3 - Thank you very much for your comment! I wrote about it thinking that not every teacher is a leader,...
Scholarshipenjoplin - Oct 13, 2020 / enjoplin - Oct 14, 2020
|Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master : Tourism and Culture Development - TourDC
2 - Under Covid-19, the tourism industry and the business industry have changed. While the courses offered may still be the...
Scholarshipmaferc19 - Oct 12, 2020 / Holt - Oct 13, 2020
|Extensive Networking Open many doors for personal and professional growth
2 - Your network should support your career progression. The networks need to be developed via seminars, conferences attended, training participated...
Scholarshipgatluakdthon - Oct 12, 2020 / Holt - Oct 13, 2020
|Formed not born - Leadership Experience - Chevening Essay
5 - Hi! I would start with the second paragraph and then explain what Leadership means to you, that could be...
Scholarshipdsari1602 - Oct 12, 2020 / enjoplin - Oct 13, 2020
|Focus, responsibility, attitude - leadership and influence (Chevening)
5 - Hi, Should definitely put less focus on teamwork and focus on what you were able to accomplish. Probably...
Scholarshipdhienie - Sep 23, 2020 / kte3005 - Oct 12, 2020
|Motivation to Create Sustainable Environment - Chevening Studying in the UK Essay
3 - You have not explained how your undergraduate studies have prepared you to take on more challenging classes as an...
Scholarshipimhana - Oct 10, 2020 / Holt - Oct 12, 2020
|Inspiring people to search for the common good and making a positive effect in our personal growth
4 - @imhana Hi! Thank you for your feedback, I will try to be more specific with my skills. Also,...
ScholarshipJuan_J_JC - Oct 9, 2020 / Juan_J_JC - Oct 11, 2020
|Team Work is the best relationship - Networking skills for Chevening scholarship
3 - The grammer and the style of the essay is close to be professional, One the other hand the references...
ScholarshipZainab Eid - Oct 3, 2020 / Ali Elias - Oct 11, 2020
|Essay for MasterCard Foundation Scholarship at University of Edinburgh in leadership skills
4 - @Holt please Holt, can I ignore the introduction paragraph in leadership essay? or it is necessary needed .. thanks...
ScholarshipMessiah - Oct 10, 2020 / newchevening - Oct 11, 2020
|Leadership as an IT Specialist - Leadership skills for Chevening scholarship
Scholarshipdanigouken - Oct 10, 2020 / Holt - Oct 11, 2020
|Scholarship Help--------Erasmus + Smart Cities and Communities Motivation letter
3 - thank you very much @Holt I really appreciate your response and input, it's very constructive, follow-up questions if you...
Scholarshipkakikunadh - Oct 9, 2020 / kakikunadh - Oct 9, 2020
|Career plan in consulting and digital business in the long run - my chevening essay
2 - Stop referring to research links in the essay that is irrelevant to the reviewer. Since this is a Chevening...
Scholarshipvuyunzokta - Oct 8, 2020 / Holt - Oct 8, 2020
|Leaders deploy people - Leadership skills for Chevening scholarship
2 - This is not an impressive leadership essay. You mostly told the reviewer about your leadership skills and how you...
ScholarshipButoto - Oct 8, 2020 / Holt - Oct 8, 2020
|My rather messy personal statement (gks-g 2021, undergraduate, embassy track)
3 - @Holt thank you for your frankness and the advice :) i knew it was really lacking as an essay,...
Scholarshiphanirrr - Oct 6, 2020 / hanirrr - Oct 6, 2020
|Msc Business analytics study in the UK and Universities - My Chevening Essay
2 - The most complete university discussion pertains only to the first university choice. The last 2 choices do not contain...
ScholarshipMikasoba - Oct 5, 2020 / Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Community Empowerment Through Networking - Chevening networking essay.
2 - This is a useless enumeration of "supposed" and "assumed" networks. These are not so much networks, in the sense...
Scholarshipimhana - Oct 5, 2020 / Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Networking is all about connecting people with meaningful ideas for growth--Chevening scholarship.
ScholarshipObi1 - Oct 2, 2020 / Obi1 - Oct 5, 2020
|Pursuing a new challenge passionately -- GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE
ScholarshipAnaPatricia - Oct 3, 2020 / imhana - Oct 5, 2020
|Leadership as an Environmentalist - Chevening Scholarship
4 - Dear @Holt I highly appreciated your constructive feedback. I thought at first it is not necessary to mention the...
Scholarshipimhana - Sep 15, 2020 / imhana - Oct 5, 2020
|Studying media and communications - KGSP Undergraduate 2021 Personal Statement help
2 - As an undergraduate essay, you have not been able to satisfy the personal statement requirements for this written interview....
ScholarshipLanamaylie - Oct 1, 2020 / Holt - Oct 3, 2020
|How the media honed my interest in languages- Study Plan GKS 2021 undergradute scholarships
3 - The language study plan asks you to focus on several language skills development areas, Hangul, English, and a third...
ScholarshipJadella - Oct 1, 2020 / Holt - Oct 3, 2020
|Returning home - Influential Leadership Chevening Scholarship Essay
NEW - Hi, I am a new member. Kindly need your assistance on this essay (Grammar and Content (Chronological Order, concise,...
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|The combination of target and skill for networking - my Chevening essay
2 - You hve shown how you develop your network, but you have not explained how these networks have helped you...
ScholarshipSri60 - Sep 30, 2020 / Holt - Oct 1, 2020
|The head of lab - My leadership Chevening essay writing
4 - Please do not access links outside of this forum. The owners of this forum will not be responsible for...
ScholarshipSamilonaire - Sep 30, 2020 / Holt - Oct 1, 2020
|"How I quit avoiding my family's issue" - Questbridge Biographical essay
Scholarshipkuro - Sep 28, 2020 / kuro - Sep 30, 2020
|A relationship between Mexican and Korean culture - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement
2 - Your essay is weak in the sense that you do not have a representation of the following information: ...
Scholarshipestrella298 - Sep 29, 2020 / Holt - Sep 30, 2020
|High school science fair - Questbridge Proudest Achievement Short Answer
3 - While I can see why you would want to present both achievements in this short response statement, there is...
Scholarshipsammycool3rd - Sep 29, 2020 / Holt - Sep 30, 2020
|The opportunity to go to the United Kingdom to study - for Chevening
4 - @Jagar Baso Hi, I think you might want to recheck your grammar before you submit the essay. As...
ScholarshipJagar Baso - Sep 13, 2020 / adrnknnths - Sep 30, 2020
|MSc E-Business and Innovation / Security - My STUDYING Essay 4 Chevening Award
4 - Hi I think you gave a very comprehensive essay on the courses you choose. However, adding to Holt's comments,...
Scholarshipnewchevening - Sep 24, 2020 / marlynoktavia - Sep 29, 2020
|Struggled to find the purpose of life - Essay for KGSP Undergraduate 2021
3 - @Holt, Hi thank you for you feedback. I also think that I lacked motivation in my Business field too....
ScholarshipKethya - Sep 28, 2020 / Kethya - Sep 28, 2020
|Future of dreams - Personal statment for GKS 2020
2 - This would have been a truly useful personal statement or motivational essay had you been applying for a different...
Scholarshipibrahimtamer - Sep 27, 2020 / Holt - Sep 28, 2020
|"My family's influence on my outlook on life" - Questbridge Prompt
3 - Do not focus on the individual life stories in your presentation. The reviewer doesn't care for that. However, he...
Scholarshiphappyboy123 - Sep 27, 2020 / Holt - Sep 27, 2020
|Scholarship essay to highlight socio-economic development of Nigeria, leadership initiatives and com
2 - Rather than simply saying this is URGENT, you should have taken steps to mark this as URGENT in our...
ScholarshipDictbennie - Sep 26, 2020 / Holt - Sep 27, 2020
|What inspires me / education - QuestBridge Scholarship Essay
2 - I think you should not focus so much on the backstory. Setting up the scene at home after you...
Scholarshiparia281 - Sep 26, 2020 / Holt - Sep 27, 2020
|"Nothing can beat Experience" Intl. Relations/Media & Com. Personal Statement for GKS-U Scholarship
Scholarshipapollo_nia - Sep 26, 2020 / Holt - Sep 27, 2020
|I am going to beat fantasy with science in GKS 2020 Chemistry
2 - Are you writing a study plan for the GKS scholarship? If you are, then you have not written a...
ScholarshipFidleisAldo - Sep 26, 2020 / Holt - Sep 27, 2020
|I told them I wanted to be a doctor - my 800 word biographical essay
Scholarshipeldomady - Sep 25, 2020 / Holt - Sep 26, 2020
|Medical Technology and Pharmacy - study of purpose for schoolarship
2 - Does the scholarship statement of purpose come with a specific prompt instruction? This version does not really feel like...
ScholarshipLinh96 - Sep 25, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|I am prepared for this scholarship - ECONOMICS
3 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. My mind is clearer now. I focused only in writing "more and better"...
Scholarshipandtrev - Sep 24, 2020 / andtrev - Sep 25, 2020
|My ACT Test - Questbridge 200 word essay
Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|Questbridge Topical Essay - "My Missing Mother & Third-Grade Teacher"
3 - The prompt is asking you to provide information regarding an experience that cause you to change your mind or...
Scholarshiprosemarymelon - Sep 24, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|The Dutch and Mexican culture - Personal Statement for GKS Undergraduate scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, it was very helpful. I did not think about why participation...
ScholarshipNaomiAcosta2121 - Sep 21, 2020 / NaomiAcosta2121 - Sep 24, 2020
|The elections of Key Club Statistical Secretary - Questbridge 200 Word Essay
Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020 / tran165954 - Sep 24, 2020
|The possibilities for the brain - Questbridge Topical Essay - curiosity
Scholarshipthaonhi97 - Sep 22, 2020 / thaonhi97 - Sep 23, 2020
|QuestBridge National College Match Essay: Biography - more about myself
2 - Your essay is very touching on a personal level. I learned a tremendous amount of information about your parents...
Scholarshipthatoneguy - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|My three university choice on Public Relations Major (Study Plan Essay Chevening)
2 - The main problem with your presentation is that you are presenting an unwarranted backstory in the opening presentation. This...
Scholarshipmosyi20 - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
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