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|In Ghana many things will affect growing from childhood to adulthood one way or another
2 - Stephen, you have a wide net thrown for this essay in terms of topics being discussed. There are a...
ScholarshipSHUGARMERDIX - Nov 7, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 7, 2014
|My motivation and commitment to return to Africa after graduation
4 - In the first sentence of the second paragraph, I would change "said" to "says". But it's a great essay,...
ScholarshipModewap - Nov 3, 2014 / Morganh - Nov 4, 2014
|Skillset in a million over a perfect student
5 - Victor, I have some points for you to consider for addition or revision within the essay listed below :-)...
Scholarshipvepadilla - Oct 24, 2014 / vangiespen - Nov 2, 2014
|I have a desire to make a great things; UWC experience
2 - Asem, the essay is not informative at all. If you are planning to use it for a scholarship application,...
ScholarshipAsem - Oct 31, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 31, 2014
|"Don't feel anything. Don't think anything" - Meditation; Applying to Macalester, Colgate, Rice.
Scholarshipliliyaah - Oct 31, 2014 / Megan642 - Oct 31, 2014
|This is motivation letter for a scholarship in security and mobile computing.
Scholarshipbenhur_ivo - Oct 29, 2014 / benhur_ivo - Oct 30, 2014
|My personal, academic, challenges, and leadership essays
8 - Anybody to help me review my essay? I'm waiting for review and criticism since yesterday, as I will be...
ScholarshipModewap - Sep 30, 2014 / Modewap - Oct 28, 2014
|Sustainable development and management - my attempt to get scholarship from Chevening!
NEW - This is my first essey I have written! Please, give your comments and adives in both: content and grammar....
ScholarshipGulzada - Oct 26, 2014 / — -
|Essay on adversity and overcoming obstacles, connecting it to music/piano
2 - This really good, very dramatic. I know you want to condense it but I think you could emphasize more...
Scholarshipmayradio0508 - Oct 26, 2014 / 16chauc - Oct 26, 2014
|I have participated in activities that have offered me a global point of view
3 - Hi Jack, Thank you for your support and fruitful comments on my statement. I will revise it taking...
Scholarshipmajortomishere - Oct 25, 2014 / majortomishere - Oct 26, 2014
|From each organizations I joined, other members trusted me as a head of division in the organization
Scholarshipuci31 - Oct 22, 2014 / uci31 - Oct 22, 2014
|Mental health is a term that ceases to exist within the Asian household - Scholarship Essay
3 - hello,, i think you should use the parallel words from the italic sentence. allow me to rewrite...
Scholarshipsyedjafri - Oct 19, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 20, 2014
|"DESCRIBE YOUR FINANCIAL CHALLENGE" applying for scholarships
ScholarshipPsteele - Oct 19, 2014 / boo2601 - Oct 20, 2014
|Personal Statement - Applying for scholarship - Stuck in life
3 - Thanks a lot for your advice, Louisa. I think you are correct. I didn't include such plan as a...
Scholarshipmohamedtaher - Oct 17, 2014 / mohamedtaher - Oct 19, 2014
|For me to say, "I am interested in art" is not enough to express my true feelings about this subject
2 - What interests you about Art and Design? You talk a lot about wanting to learn to do certain forms...
ScholarshipCelestial123 - Oct 16, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 16, 2014
|Scholarship for undergraduate student in Korea
3 - After successful completionsuccessfully completing theof high school with honor, And I entered the Inha University don't use so many...
ScholarshipAzizbek1994 - Oct 15, 2014 / sa1na - Oct 15, 2014
|'MY CONTRIBUTION TO THE CLASS' and 'MY CAREER VISION' SOP for master degree scholarship
3 - Thanks for correct my grammar, each topic has 400 words limit. I try my best but it seems way...
Scholarshipknipod - Oct 14, 2014 / knipod - Oct 15, 2014
|"Science is simply amazing" - Scholarship Trip Essay
2 - Rachel, a heading is not necessary in a personal statement such as this. You have included some very interesting...
ScholarshipRachieP - Oct 14, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 15, 2014
|'I would do my best to improve my English and German skills' - DAAD scholarship; motivation letter
3 - Dear Louisa! Thank you so much for your feedback. Now I see weakpoints of my motivation letter and I...
Scholarshipsmile77 - Oct 11, 2014 / smile77 - Oct 11, 2014
|Kyrgyzstan is a country with rich natural resources, it needs highly qualified experts to run it all
2 - Aitmatov, we would love to help you correct your essay but we need to know what the requirements are....
ScholarshipAzizbek1001 - Oct 9, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2014
|Paucity Turned to Strength - Quest Bridge, Application Essay.
5 - Actually I have a close relationship with my father so I wouldn't be able to use that point. Also,...
ScholarshipJesusLM2 - Oct 7, 2014 / JesusLM2 - Oct 8, 2014
|Assisting others and working in the school environment is a passion of mine. Harvard app.
5 - Violetar, while I agree that your essay is generic in feel and content, I believe that it can be...
ScholarshipVioletar206 - Oct 6, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 6, 2014
|"Perseverance is key" - Questbridge Bio Essay
ScholarshipMoodykhedr - Oct 6, 2014 / Moodykhedr - Oct 6, 2014
|Marine NROTC Scholarship- Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Marine Officer.
ScholarshipIHaile - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 6, 2014
|I hope to bring a new perspective to the men and women that I meet through the Marines.
5 - I think I might stick with the current essay, mainly because identifying people by their gender isn't something that...
ScholarshipIHaile - Oct 5, 2014 / IHaile - Oct 5, 2014
|''The greatest barrier to someone achieving their goal is their denial of it" - my goals essay
6 - From tender age, I have wanted to hone my intellectual side After I graduated from high school, have wanted...
ScholarshipModewap - Oct 1, 2014 / Modewap - Oct 3, 2014
|"Introspection"; in that one day I learned a lot about myself - National Merit Scholarship Essay
2 - River, while you present a good story about self discovery, there are certain elements lacking that, if present, could...
Scholarshipriverseden - Sep 28, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 29, 2014
|"Gas injections" - study subjectives (petroleum engineering); Fulbright essay
Scholarshipsamarina - Sep 28, 2014 / samarina - Sep 28, 2014
|Precious (What would you say to the entire world?)
4 - Firstly, thank you for comments on my essay. They were really encouraging, and helpful (+ dese was supposed to...
ScholarshipLittleRed2016 - Sep 28, 2014 / sa1na - Sep 28, 2014
|'Challenges are always there to attack your weakest spots' - questbridge Biographical Essay
3 - Praise: I really like your introductory paragraph. It demands the attention of the reader with tragic drama. I liked...
Scholarshiplannn - Sep 25, 2014 / LittleRed2016 - Sep 28, 2014
|"No-No Boy"; I've always felt comfortable with my culture and happy to be apart of a Peruvian family
4 - Praise: I like how focused on the benefits of your family structure, and how thankful you are to have...
Scholarshipstephsjn - Sep 27, 2014 / LittleRed2016 - Sep 28, 2014
|Immigration has a cost----Questbridge Essay
5 - you might want to write a brief intro about what made you take such big decision, choosing American over...
Scholarshippaku312 - Sep 25, 2014 / vinnymj - Sep 27, 2014
|Change the perception that students with family troubles are weak, pitiful, and unlikely successful
2 - "But that's just using your parents for college! It's not fair." That was my friend's response to my college...
Scholarshipthexxime - Sep 26, 2014 / vinnymj - Sep 26, 2014
|Essay on most important engineering (Infrastructure or Environmental) for Scholarship
2 - How about this? In my point of view, the most critical infrastructure-related Engineering issue that needs to be...
ScholarshipSalmanmalik - Sep 26, 2014 / jojo159 - Sep 26, 2014
|"The Value of Time" - Questbridge Significant Experience Essay
4 - Jin, essays often pass through a minimum of 3 revisions before you even begin to hit upon the...
Scholarshipjinsungjun - Sep 24, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 25, 2014
|"Revolution and Determination" - Questbridge Biographical Essay
Scholarshipmrmdeir - Sep 25, 2014 / mrmdeir - Sep 25, 2014
|"Intellectual excitement" and "Meaningful commitment" short answers
ScholarshipBlueRose99 - Sep 24, 2014 / BlueRose99 - Sep 25, 2014
|Educational Achievements: review for a masters scholarship
ScholarshipKabenclaude - Sep 25, 2014 / Kabenclaude - Sep 25, 2014
|'The days after that were bleak and insignificant' - ethical dilemma essay
3 - Sorry, I made a mistake. This is actually the ethical dilemma essay. Thank you so much for your help....
Scholarshipgold42 - Sep 25, 2014 / gold42 - Sep 25, 2014
|'I wasn't born with a silver spoon in my mouth' - SEMESTER AT SEA PRESIDENTIAL SCHOLARSHIP
5 - Your uncle's version is much more direct to the point and in line with the prompt. He answered the...
ScholarshipMlyk - Sep 23, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 23, 2014
|"From Gujarat to Georgia" - Biographical Essay for Questbridge
9 - I understand your intentions, and I do genuinely appreciate them. I also appreciate the numerous ways in which you...
Scholarshippaku312 - Sep 18, 2014 / paku312 - Sep 23, 2014
|The pain and struggles in life is what develops a true experienced successful person!- Questbridge
Scholarshipandy15 - Sep 19, 2014 / paku312 - Sep 21, 2014
|Your favorite../How do you spend a typical../rejuvenate yourself? Short questions for scholarship
2 - For the favorite books and music- usually many people don't write it out in sentence because there is so...
Scholarshipaquilla - Sep 21, 2014 / godlover - Sep 21, 2014
|Scholarship Appeal Letter for droping below credit limit
3 - Neveritt, I noticed that you mentioned that you dropped below the 15 unit credit limit and not the 12...
Scholarshipneveritt - Sep 20, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 20, 2014
|describe why you think you deserve XXX Scholarship in minimum 500 words
2 - I think this is the most important idea. I suggest doing some research today to find out more...
ScholarshipWoohoo - Sep 19, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Sep 19, 2014
|Library in Bronx - "A Change To The Intellectual Community" - Essay for Questbridge
7 - That does not sound like a conclusion to me.However, I think you can add it to the ideas that...
Scholarshipandy15 - Sep 17, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 19, 2014
|'I always used to be a curious person' - scholarship in manufacturing engineering; motivation letter
14 - Your motivation can be the idea to make the existing devices better or to increase their usefulness. If your...
ScholarshipAyman Hussien - Aug 12, 2014 / Ewrach - Sep 17, 2014
|Weight of a full ride! Questbridge National College Match Biographical Essay
2 - You have a very engaging hook in your introduction. I definitely found myself wanting to read more. The overall...
Scholarshipskat08 - Sep 16, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 16, 2014
|'Our dependence on fossil fuel..' - POS for M.sc international scholarship in sustainable energy
4 - Kindly provide us with a copy of all of thew requirements for the essay. That inckudes the essay prompt,...
ScholarshipJOCA - Sep 14, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 16, 2014
|SOP; What is the evidence supporting the nebula theory of Solar System formation?
7 - well, This scholarship covers fields of Natural Sciences, Engineering and Technological Sciences, Medical Sciences, Agricultural Sciences, Social Sciences...
Scholarshipaliaa - Sep 13, 2014 / aliaa - Sep 14, 2014
|'how to apply and what to write?' - Self introduction essay for KGSP scholarship
8 - Leigh, unfortunately the rules of the forum do not allow us to share our email accounts with you. This...
ScholarshipLeigh - Aug 22, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 10, 2014
|"Journey to Become a Salad Lover" - QuestBridge Essay
Scholarshiplannn - Sep 8, 2014 / gela07 - Sep 9, 2014
|Reference letter for scholarship; to whom want to study about international public health
5 - The paper is getting better. I have pointed out further changes that are going to help in finalizing the...
Scholarshipmoonflower888 - Sep 7, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 8, 2014
|My motivation came from the strong desire to help Vietnam's economy stronger and wealthier
3 - Hi Linh, I totally agree with Vangiespen about the content of your essay. I feel it lacks the...
ScholarshipLinhDieu - Sep 1, 2014 / dunguyen - Sep 5, 2014
|What's your opinion of the claim that sometimes censorship is justified?
3 - In my opinion i think your essay is well written, you did understand what they were asking you. Besides...
ScholarshipAnouar - Sep 1, 2014 / xoxo07 - Sep 1, 2014
|"Korean language" - why I want to take a part in KGSP program?
ScholarshipAzizbek94 - Aug 14, 2014 / Azizbek94 - Aug 16, 2014
|Hypocrisy Essay / Civil Disobedience
Scholarshipgiorgio186 - Apr 23, 2012 / vc859 - Aug 1, 2014
|Contribution in solving a challenge, implementing change or reform
3 - Hey kikiliyik, you come from Indonesia? Let me try to help you Perhaps this quite reflects what you...
Scholarshipkikiliyik - Jun 30, 2014 / SHanafi - Jul 19, 2014
|Journalism: facts, events, truths - why I should be considered for scholarship
Scholarshipdesigirl1 - May 31, 2014 / dumi - Jul 18, 2014
|Should parents be made by law to immunize their children ?-- My IELTS writing
Scholarshipjhorifandi - Sep 4, 2012 / eirehc - Jul 15, 2014
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