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|Relief camp for the earthquake victims
ScholarshipSaudSuhail - Jan 27, 2014 / SaudSuhail - Jan 27, 2014
|Internship Application Essay for Smithsonian Museum
2 - I think it is better if you talked through some evidence rather than comparing yourself with your classmates....
Scholarshipgello - Jan 27, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 27, 2014
|The public figure I admire most: Masao Yoshida. Short essay for CSP.
3 - Thank you!...
Scholarshiplearner3051 - Jan 27, 2014 / learner3051 - Jan 27, 2014
|I will have to get straight A's; Long and short term goals!
6 - I think that you have some problems with structure in sentences. You should be a bit formal. But I...
Scholarshipmaria1995 - Jan 13, 2014 / Gul Dana - Jan 26, 2014
|" The Grassroot Project"; Global Health Corps Fellowship essays
6 - Hello everyone. I have this final revision to all the prompts. Urgently, require feedback if its good enough, as...
Scholarshipspeedster - Jan 19, 2014 / speedster - Jan 22, 2014
|What could my school do to better promote diversity?
4 - When it comes to promoting diversity in schools, teachers have to play a big role in those efforts....
ScholarshipAysh123 - Jan 21, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 22, 2014
|Europe is the most popular place among the students!
ScholarshipSrey Mey - Jan 12, 2014 / Srey Mey - Jan 21, 2014
|Sky is the limit; Motivation letter
3 - This writing is very confident to describe yourself. I suggest you to attach what kind of changes for you...
Scholarshipatinas84 - Jan 19, 2014 / SHanafi - Jan 20, 2014
|My interest in Management; Motivation letter/Scholarship
ScholarshipAbuhamza - Jan 6, 2014 / dumi - Jan 20, 2014
|"Be consistent in doing what you believe is true despite critics" - NTU essay
6 - thanks=]...
Scholarshipchloe224 - Jan 8, 2014 / chloe224 - Jan 19, 2014
|I have a full and happy life; Marine Corps Scholarship
Scholarshipemilyxorange2 - Jan 16, 2014 / tiaDS - Jan 18, 2014
|Essay for Skidmore's Porter Scholarship - Interest in SCIENCE
3 - Thank you for the suggestions. They are sure to help improve the essay! If you have time, would...
Scholarshipthenewdude - Jan 17, 2014 / thenewdude - Jan 17, 2014
|UNEXPECTED PREGNANCY; Scholarship essay
Scholarshipperezfab5 - Jan 13, 2014 / perezfab5 - Jan 16, 2014
|International Baccalaureate (IB) Diploma recipient; HSF/ academic challenge
3 - Hi. I think you're essay reads okay but I think omitting the following could help in your word count...
Scholarshipvaldav - Jan 13, 2014 / perezfab5 - Jan 16, 2014
|The world is in our hands now and the future will depend on our action
ScholarshipSenildang - Jan 11, 2014 / ravenleighann - Jan 14, 2014
|As a young mother with a newborn ; Scholarship essay
Scholarshipravenleighann - Jan 10, 2014 / ravenleighann - Jan 14, 2014
|Nursing Scholarship Essay for University of Texas at Austin Nursing very important to me!
Scholarshipnimroz93 - Jan 9, 2014 / maria1995 - Jan 13, 2014
|CENTRAL TO IDENTITY: Why I Love My City
3 - Well.... I think your essay needs more alignment with what your prompt expects. It should describe your identity well....
ScholarshipAsiak - Jan 5, 2014 / dumi - Jan 13, 2014
|Suggestions and grammar check for the APIASF Scholarship Essays
2 - Well....what is the contribution of this sentence to describe your short or long term goals? I feel this...
ScholarshipHayRi - Jan 9, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 13, 2014
|MOTIVATION LETTER - I realized my passion for marketing
ScholarshipJanPham - Jan 8, 2014 / JanPham - Jan 12, 2014
|Learning SPANISH; Subjects in which you excel
Scholarshipjroseg - Jan 8, 2014 / dumi - Jan 12, 2014
|'Work hard, keep your head up' Describe participation in extracurricular activities essay
2 - Good job! I really liked it. One minor suggestion: I get that working hard at an early age helped...
Scholarshipelterrible - Jan 9, 2014 / Shpresa - Jan 11, 2014
|I wanted to devote my life helping others; Self-introduction - KGSP Scholarship
6 - So you're saying I should shorten my sentences in order to not confuse the reader, aren't you? I tend...
Scholarshipimats - Dec 11, 2013 / imats - Jan 11, 2014
|My MOTHER; How goals have been influenced by my Hispanic heritage? Scholarship
2 - Life was grim, for she left everything she ever had like her family... My mother maymight have...
Scholarshipls682 - Jan 8, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 10, 2014
|Is this a good motivation letter?
Scholarshipnatali_ay - Jan 8, 2014 / Cavinstrivehard - Jan 9, 2014
|I felt special knowing sign languge; Why this university, major &how scholarship will help
Scholarshipstufify - Jan 6, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 9, 2014
|Academic/career short & long term goals and how hispanic heritage influence them essay
Scholarshipldiazve - Jan 5, 2014 / ldiazve - Jan 8, 2014
|I can understand English; Discuss the subjects in which you have had difficulty
NEW - Discuss the subjects in which you have had difficulty. What factors do you believe contributed to your difficulties? How...
ScholarshipHugo_Maximus - Jan 7, 2014 / — -
|Discuss a leadership experience you have had in any area of your life
3 - Really, i believe that leadership is the god-gifted power....i always maintenance my whole family and friend circle...like as a...
Scholarshipmaria1995 - Jan 5, 2014 / ahqaf - Jan 7, 2014
|Advice for Motivational Letter Scolarship
2 - With this letter I would like to express my strong interest in participating at the abc programme in...
ScholarshipDaniel333 - Jan 6, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 6, 2014
|Moving from Mexico to the United States; Academic Challenge Description.
Scholarshipgguzman - Dec 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 6, 2014
|I have accumulated all of my hopes and dreams; A personal obstacle
2 - I understand that your mother's cancer and fracturing your tibia made you want to pursue your biomedical engineering career...
Scholarship340livinglife - Jan 4, 2014 / maria1995 - Jan 5, 2014
|My dream is to study performing arts; INTERNATIONAL SCHOLARSHIP UWC ESSAY HELP
NEW - Hello, thats my essay for uwc scholarship... it isnt finished , actually its only a draft... Please help me...
Scholarshipcoppelia - Jan 5, 2014 / — -
|I was inspired by the "Summerhill School"; Motivational statement for Erasmus Mundus
NEW - Hello everybody! I am applying for Erasmus Mundus scholarship Masters course in Education Technologies. For this I need to...
ScholarshipNastasi - Jan 5, 2014 / — -
|SPEAK YOUR LIFE- a rich kid brought up by poor parents
Scholarshipfatimasirajfs - Jan 4, 2014 / fatimasirajfs - Jan 5, 2014
|In what areas (non-academic or academic) have you acquired knowledge or skills? How?
Scholarshipgracefraustoo - Jan 3, 2014 / Asiak - Jan 4, 2014
|A narrative on what I learned or Something I encountered
3 - I find this writing is too abstract at the beginning. You signed up what? Then again you talk about...
ScholarshipJulieRose - Dec 5, 2013 / dumi - Jan 4, 2014
|'I am the first of my family...' Academic/career goals. Scholarship essay 400-600 words
3 - Good essay overall! I do agree with the person above, however -- transitions (such as connection sentences with "and"...
Scholarshipjmr213 - Jan 3, 2014 / 500daysoftrisha - Jan 4, 2014
|I enjoy Math; GMS essay 1- Best Subject
2 - There are some grammatical and spelling errors, as well as 2 or 3 run-on sentences. Be careful with those....
Scholarshipbruckw1 - Jan 2, 2014 / jmr213 - Jan 4, 2014
|Strategy of cultural contents planning - Self Introduction Essay for KGSP scholarship
NEW - Help please!! -Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc -Your...
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|Being a proactive Nigerian - Gates Millennium
6 - In the first paragraph, there was no consistency between the object " a person's" and the pronoun "they", and...
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 27, 2013 / Ekeson - Jan 2, 2014
|Motivation letters for Erasmus Mundus scholarship
NEW - Hi all, the following is my letter of motivation to apply for Erasmus Mundus scholarship. Please help me revise...
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|"Did you just roll your eyes at me young lady?"; Humorous story
Scholarshiplilycook_73 - Dec 15, 2013 / Lillie - Jan 1, 2014
|Learning is like sailing against water current ; MSP SCHOLARSHIP
3 - What do you hope to achieve for your organisation by doing this course? Max. 200 words According to...
Scholarshipbillelsob - Dec 29, 2013 / billelsob - Jan 1, 2014
|Football and Leadership go hand in hand-Gates Millennium Essay
2 - "I obviously wasn't just picked at random at to be a captain, I was selected by the coaching staff...
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 30, 2013 / boston1002 - Dec 30, 2013
|perusing a Biomedical Science.. Scholarship essay for UCF's faculty and staff association
5 - Thank you!...
Scholarshipenique94 - Dec 29, 2013 / enique94 - Dec 29, 2013
|Our family was menaced by a group named Guerillas
Scholarshipmaria1995 - Dec 26, 2013 / maria1995 - Dec 29, 2013
|Olin College provides a tuition scholarship!
5 - I don't think you should mention tuition and scholarship at all. It comes off as if the biggest reason...
Scholarshipwnsgud4030 - Dec 21, 2013 / MBLTheNumbaOne - Dec 27, 2013
|HISTORY; Gates Millennium- subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 14, 2013 / an_nie - Dec 27, 2013
|I STRUGGLED WITH MATH ; Gates Millennium - difficult subject
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 14, 2013 / meatheadmanny - Dec 27, 2013
|Math and valuable teachers - subjects in which you excel or have excelled
3 - There are three parts of writing essay. -first paragraph is about introduction. -Second is about details of subjects you...
ScholarshipJimenezS - Dec 26, 2013 / something - Dec 27, 2013
|My First essay - How to concentrate while studying .
2 - I think you should structure your essay. This looks like a bunch of bullet points. Also, a little unfocussed....
Scholarshiphesoyama - Dec 26, 2013 / reluctantmuggle - Dec 26, 2013
|Commitment to delivering outstanding results; Intertek's mission & business; Scholarship
3 - Dear Tia, I've already received too many feedbacks that one of the worst openings could be your childhood dream,...
Scholarshiptiacbolden - Dec 22, 2013 / mhdsaboori - Dec 24, 2013
|I feel sympathetic when I see the cancer patients; Career goal
ScholarshipIonKim - Dec 8, 2013 / niesaysi - Dec 23, 2013
|The clear glass award ; LEADERSHIP
3 - Your prompt is "What have you learned from your various leadership experiences?". In your intro, the gist of...
Scholarshiptarrance17 - Dec 8, 2013 / niesaysi - Dec 23, 2013
|Professor Hoax - Nursing Student Scholarship - Why you are a qualified candidate?
ScholarshipPrinz18 - Dec 22, 2013 / admission2012 - Dec 23, 2013
|NTU ESSAY SCHOLARSHIP, -BREAKAWAY MY COCOON
NEW - One of the big choices I made was choosing my senior high school; A brand-new school that located far...
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|He's gonna lead me to it; NTU / Person who had a significant influence
Scholarshipvalyanurfadila - Dec 21, 2013 / alstera - Dec 21, 2013
|How my Hispanic Heritage has influenced my goals; SCHOLARSHIP
4 - Brilliant essay! However, in the last paragraph I think you should expatiate on the Hispanic traditions stating exactly how...
Scholarshipmj2794 - Dec 7, 2013 / Marsbar - Dec 21, 2013
|Additional Essay: Being a Military Brat and still succeeding
Scholarshipgabriellemuniz - Dec 17, 2013 / marijkelandon - Dec 21, 2013
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