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|I have a petite body type & I'm pretty attractive; Questbridge SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipharmonyrulez101 - Mar 9, 2013 / dumi - Mar 15, 2013
|I require cutting-edge knowledge in Computer Science; Financial need for SCHOLASHIP
4 - However, the financial constraints stand my way as a major obstacle; My parents are under severe stress with...
Scholarshipillumination - Mar 8, 2013 / dumi - Mar 15, 2013
|University of Texas Scholarship Essay (Radio/TV/Film)- My first moment with film
2 - Awesome! I really like the way you present how this experience stimulated your apetite for filmmkaing industry. It's beautifully...
ScholarshipRandomJPG - Mar 14, 2013 / dumi - Mar 15, 2013
|"work hard" and "don't give up" ; Personal Statement /Forge Scholarship
9 - You repeat the same ideas here... You have already expressed why you want to become a nurse. So avoid...
ScholarshipBlastofftomars1 - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 13, 2013
|I can face all the challenges in life ; NTU Scholarship- My values and beliefs
ScholarshipHuiyoke - Mar 12, 2013 / lookingout - Mar 13, 2013
|I put forth a lot of effort into everything that I do; "Why you deserve scholarship"
Scholarshiplisadewi - Mar 12, 2013 / dumi - Mar 12, 2013
|High opinion of Singapore's education; Me & my interest in this SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipprettyboy_bn123 - Mar 9, 2013 / prettyboy_bn123 - Mar 11, 2013
|Piano lessons, paint, dance, and sports; SCHOLARSHIP/Supply Management Master's
2 - I think you can combine these two lines; Growing up, I got interested in learning about value...
Scholarshipdianallc - Mar 10, 2013 / dumi - Mar 11, 2013
|When Life Gets Tough - Don't Quit "DANCE"
Scholarshipc_mrs - Mar 10, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 10, 2013
|Independant and Driven!;Why am I a good candidate for this scholarship?
ScholarshipKaJa4 - Mar 5, 2013 / dumi - Mar 10, 2013
|Profound interest in Language&Culture; Benjamin Gilman Scholarship -SOP
2 - Didgeridoo has done great editing for you :) .... You talk about the influence of your culture...
Scholarshipfbnicholson - Mar 2, 2013 / dumi - Mar 9, 2013
|Help Children; QUESTBRIDGE C Prep SCHOLARSHIP/ Why Medicine?
3 - Grammar-wise, I have very few complaints, as you can see. But shack555 is right about your apparent lack of...
Scholarshipegernier - Mar 8, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 8, 2013
|excellent academic history; PhD scholarship/Why deserve?
Scholarshipajith123 - Feb 25, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|I have the desire, the passion, the motivation, and the intellect;Nursing Scholarship
Scholarshipbwreeves - Mar 7, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 7, 2013
|3 Associates Degrees from Pueblo CommunityC; SCHOLARSHIP- CU Boulder/ ACCOMPLISHMENT
3 - There is nothing wrong with this sentence. However, you can present it more creatively; I mean you can...
Scholarshipdarchu7 - Feb 26, 2013 / dumi - Mar 5, 2013
|Telling my own stories- SCHOLARSHIP - Project/Impact/Integrating experience/Groups
3 - Thank you!!...
ScholarshipBxiong028 - Mar 3, 2013 / Bxiong028 - Mar 3, 2013
|Our childhoods shape our hopes and dreams; Gilman Scholarship
2 - the only problem was length.... but you made a great writing... i am rather sure you will be able...
ScholarshipKUWTW - Mar 3, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 3, 2013
|Cleaning Parks & Volunteering @ Day Care ; Lowes Scholarship/ Build Community
4 - Thank you both for your adjustments! I have fixed my essay and just finished submitting it :)...
Scholarshipxphyllisx - Feb 27, 2013 / xphyllisx - Feb 28, 2013
|"MALNUTRITION" ; SCHOLARSHIP IN MASTER IN PUBLIC HEALTH NUTRITION
4 - Yeah, I also agree. It's a little to short or not descriptive and they may think that you don't...
ScholarshipGalsekuz - Feb 14, 2013 / jennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013
|Growing up I've made a lot of mistakes; Why I deserve this Scholarship
3 - I can see your point in this essay, however, you should change it by adding more details in it....
Scholarshipdonjanek - Feb 28, 2013 / lynnet - Feb 28, 2013
|I never wanted to settle for "better"; STUDY PLAN FOR SCHOLARSHIP (CHINA)
4 - This is certainly different than essays for American Universities. However, you sell yourself very well with all of the...
Scholarshipajuodz - Feb 24, 2013 / koiboi76 - Feb 27, 2013
|I want to be part of the Islamic Finance; Why you should be awarded the scholarship?
ScholarshipBudak88kampung - Feb 27, 2013 / Budak88kampung - Feb 27, 2013
|"Fly Like a Butterfly, Sting Like a Bee" Scholarship Essay about Muhammad Ali
2 - that was a beautiful narration... i liked the expression of emotions and felt them familiar to my inner-self... i...
Scholarshipnnggii3 - Feb 25, 2013 / temptprovidence - Feb 27, 2013
|"International relations", my dream career; UWCs Scholarship- Why interested?
Scholarshipngngocanh96 - Feb 24, 2013 / lauman112233 - Feb 26, 2013
|"You can do it"-Adversity ; Why should I deserve this scholarship?
2 - This victory over boys made me very confident and believe in my capabilities as well as taking...
Scholarshiplynnet - Feb 24, 2013 / dumi - Feb 24, 2013
|"Questioning my desire"; Scholarship for a PhD/ Why I deserve it?
4 - Thanks very much indeed guys for replying. I will make some modifications and post it back. Warmly welcome your...
Scholarshipjeffdcruzj - Feb 23, 2013 / jeffdcruzj - Feb 23, 2013
|"Knowledge is power", said Sir Francis Bacon; Personal Stament -SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipKYOAAA - Feb 21, 2013 / KYOAAA - Feb 23, 2013
|Overcoming Silence: How I dealt with the greatest challenge of my high school career
Scholarshipcesaror123 - Feb 23, 2013 / dumi - Feb 23, 2013
|"What do you want to be when you grow up?"; Summer Research Internship Essay.
4 - Thank you very much! The feedback was very informative and helpful! I hope to return the favor....
Scholarshipkyledv64 - Feb 21, 2013 / kyledv64 - Feb 22, 2013
|Central Highlands is a remote and disadvantaged area ; australia scholarship
3 - Thank you very much, Cody. How do you think about my answer? is it enough persuasion? plz give me...
Scholarshiphoatuyet - Feb 20, 2013 / hoatuyet - Feb 20, 2013
|"Life is calling. How far will you go?"; NHSC Scholarship-Underserved population
ScholarshipPA Applicant - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 20, 2013
|NTU Scholarship Essay - "My father, the one whom I look up to."
Scholarshipmarionlyq - Feb 16, 2013 / marionlyq - Feb 20, 2013
|My friends call me Android;UWC Scholarship(Pakistan);PS-Goals, motivations, ambitions
ScholarshipAsad876 - Feb 19, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|Great challenges & Many experiences; Study plan in china (SCHOLARSHIP FOR MASTERS)
Scholarshipwiratamadc - Feb 19, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|MS in Energy Operational Management +engergy business related curriculum
Scholarshipnisarqau - Feb 15, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|Confidence, Faith & Determination; COURAGE TO GROW SCHOLARSHIP- Why me?
3 - Well.... I think you must first pay attention to the flow of ideas in your essay. They seem to...
Scholarshiprcamp92 - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|We are scared of something; Hispanic Scholarship - Academic challenge
ScholarshipMIA2013 - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|We are Cubans wanting to keep our heritage alive;Scholarship-Goals/Hispanic Heritage
ScholarshipMIA2013 - Feb 17, 2013 / MIA2013 - Feb 18, 2013
|Guatemala Experience as a Health Specialist; NHSC Scholarship-Why Primary HealthCare?
ScholarshipPA Applicant - Feb 17, 2013 / KYOAAA - Feb 17, 2013
|MY DREAM ; Pace U- Business Administration/ Photography/ Travel
3 - I agree with Aniece about using "would", I feel like it doesn't give enough to convince that you want...
ScholarshipJulieRose - Jan 30, 2013 / littleone - Feb 17, 2013
|Own a Software and entrepreneurship consultancy company; Professional goals
NEW - 1- My long-term professional goal is to own a Software and entrepreneurship consultancy company which will be specialized in...
Scholarshipshalbamby - Feb 16, 2013 / — -
|'City of Refuge' - for full ride: Antioch College- Inquiry, Work, Community
3 - Thank you Dumi! Here's the prompt: Submit an essay of at least 500 words that answers the following...
Scholarshiphannahsarch - Feb 12, 2013 / hannahsarch - Feb 15, 2013
|Children with special needs; Health Care Scholarship - Why counseling or health care?
ScholarshipGranolabargurl - Feb 12, 2013 / Granolabargurl - Feb 13, 2013
|NHS - Values of Scholarship, Character, Leadership & Community Service
2 - your anecdote in the beginning was well constructed. good job. (don not use contractions in a...
Scholarshipmasterckp - Feb 12, 2013 / android21 - Feb 12, 2013
|Chinese songs/ Chinese movies and cartoons;STUDY PLAN- CHINESE GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP
2 - It helped me capture a glimplse of Chinese culture, art and its people that gradually nurtured a love...
ScholarshipLera - Feb 12, 2013 / dumi - Feb 12, 2013
|Putting the world in my art, and showing my art to the world.
ScholarshipNiam - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|Hello and Zaijian! (multicultural scholarship essay for SCAD)
ScholarshipNiam - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|Love Finance ; Financial need statement; SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
Scholarshiphn_et - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|i want to be an economic expert--> for my Korean Scholarship (KGSP)
ScholarshipDHIETA - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|JOURNALISM/ PEREPARATORY/ PATIENT&HONEST; Scholarship- Why teach?/ Personal Qualities
4 - Well.... good common apps help them get admission to the uni and thereby achieve their academic goals. However,...
Scholarshipkorib - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|A passion for Computer Science - scholarship - Why choose Computer Science?
2 - It keeps advancing everyday that demands people to keep on learning and updating their knowledge with the new...
Scholarshiplynnet - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Exploration is key; U Michigan - Bell Scholarship
3 - I agree with Chelchelch. The way you presented your dual interest in engineering and medicine makes me uncertain about...
Scholarshipdealaus - Feb 1, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|Media Culture - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP, MASTERS IN HOLLAND
NEW - Hello, I'm writing my motivation letters to apply for master's degree in the Netherlands. Also I need another motivation...
ScholarshipChelchelch - Feb 1, 2013 / — -
|Overcome challenges in pursuit of professional development (Ford scholarship)
5 - Maybe you can have a couple of your past high school experiences that was challenging or " fun." as...
Scholarshipariscotte - Mar 28, 2010 / jasmine4ever - Feb 1, 2013
|Georgia Southern U; How Engineering degree helps me accomplish my academic goals
Scholarshipdaivinhtran1993 - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 31, 2013
|MARKETING DIRECTOR; Scholarship - academic and career goals
NEW - The requirement is a one page summary of my academic and career goals and what I'm doing to achieve...
Scholarshipehernandez - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|Mass Communications and Psychology; SCHOLARSHIP - Educational and career goals.
2 - I wish you rephrased this... This does not flow smooth and this is something you can tell them...
ScholarshipDgarp13 - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 30, 2013
|Inquisitive/Multicultural ; unique, and why is international travel?
4 - I've always been inquisitive about this world ... it's better you describe about your multicultural background...
ScholarshipDrakeRose - Jan 28, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|"GIVING THEM A FIGHTING CHANCE", CHCI LATINO SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipiamnicholas1 - Jan 27, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 27, 2013
|Environmentalism Scholarship Essay
2 - The implications of this go far beyond the immeasurable beauty that has been lost. Our planet is in a...
ScholarshipEnabledowner - Jan 27, 2013 / iamnicholas1 - Jan 27, 2013
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