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|Telling my own stories- SCHOLARSHIP - Project/Impact/Integrating experience/Groups
3 - Thank you!!...
ScholarshipBxiong028 - Mar 3, 2013 / Bxiong028 - Mar 3, 2013
|Our childhoods shape our hopes and dreams; Gilman Scholarship
2 - the only problem was length.... but you made a great writing... i am rather sure you will be able...
ScholarshipKUWTW - Mar 3, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 3, 2013
|Cleaning Parks & Volunteering @ Day Care ; Lowes Scholarship/ Build Community
4 - Thank you both for your adjustments! I have fixed my essay and just finished submitting it :)...
Scholarshipxphyllisx - Feb 27, 2013 / xphyllisx - Feb 28, 2013
|"MALNUTRITION" ; SCHOLARSHIP IN MASTER IN PUBLIC HEALTH NUTRITION
4 - Yeah, I also agree. It's a little to short or not descriptive and they may think that you don't...
ScholarshipGalsekuz - Feb 14, 2013 / jennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013
|Growing up I've made a lot of mistakes; Why I deserve this Scholarship
3 - I can see your point in this essay, however, you should change it by adding more details in it....
Scholarshipdonjanek - Feb 28, 2013 / lynnet - Feb 28, 2013
|I never wanted to settle for "better"; STUDY PLAN FOR SCHOLARSHIP (CHINA)
4 - This is certainly different than essays for American Universities. However, you sell yourself very well with all of the...
Scholarshipajuodz - Feb 24, 2013 / koiboi76 - Feb 27, 2013
|I want to be part of the Islamic Finance; Why you should be awarded the scholarship?
ScholarshipBudak88kampung - Feb 27, 2013 / Budak88kampung - Feb 27, 2013
|"Fly Like a Butterfly, Sting Like a Bee" Scholarship Essay about Muhammad Ali
2 - that was a beautiful narration... i liked the expression of emotions and felt them familiar to my inner-self... i...
Scholarshipnnggii3 - Feb 25, 2013 / temptprovidence - Feb 27, 2013
|"International relations", my dream career; UWCs Scholarship- Why interested?
Scholarshipngngocanh96 - Feb 24, 2013 / lauman112233 - Feb 26, 2013
|"You can do it"-Adversity ; Why should I deserve this scholarship?
2 - This victory over boys made me very confident and believe in my capabilities as well as taking...
Scholarshiplynnet - Feb 24, 2013 / dumi - Feb 24, 2013
|"Questioning my desire"; Scholarship for a PhD/ Why I deserve it?
4 - Thanks very much indeed guys for replying. I will make some modifications and post it back. Warmly welcome your...
Scholarshipjeffdcruzj - Feb 23, 2013 / jeffdcruzj - Feb 23, 2013
|"Knowledge is power", said Sir Francis Bacon; Personal Stament -SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipKYOAAA - Feb 21, 2013 / KYOAAA - Feb 23, 2013
|Overcoming Silence: How I dealt with the greatest challenge of my high school career
Scholarshipcesaror123 - Feb 23, 2013 / dumi - Feb 23, 2013
|"What do you want to be when you grow up?"; Summer Research Internship Essay.
4 - Thank you very much! The feedback was very informative and helpful! I hope to return the favor....
Scholarshipkyledv64 - Feb 21, 2013 / kyledv64 - Feb 22, 2013
|Central Highlands is a remote and disadvantaged area ; australia scholarship
3 - Thank you very much, Cody. How do you think about my answer? is it enough persuasion? plz give me...
Scholarshiphoatuyet - Feb 20, 2013 / hoatuyet - Feb 20, 2013
|"Life is calling. How far will you go?"; NHSC Scholarship-Underserved population
ScholarshipPA Applicant - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 20, 2013
|NTU Scholarship Essay - "My father, the one whom I look up to."
Scholarshipmarionlyq - Feb 16, 2013 / marionlyq - Feb 20, 2013
|My friends call me Android;UWC Scholarship(Pakistan);PS-Goals, motivations, ambitions
ScholarshipAsad876 - Feb 19, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|Great challenges & Many experiences; Study plan in china (SCHOLARSHIP FOR MASTERS)
Scholarshipwiratamadc - Feb 19, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|MS in Energy Operational Management +engergy business related curriculum
Scholarshipnisarqau - Feb 15, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|Confidence, Faith & Determination; COURAGE TO GROW SCHOLARSHIP- Why me?
3 - Well.... I think you must first pay attention to the flow of ideas in your essay. They seem to...
Scholarshiprcamp92 - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|We are scared of something; Hispanic Scholarship - Academic challenge
ScholarshipMIA2013 - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|We are Cubans wanting to keep our heritage alive;Scholarship-Goals/Hispanic Heritage
ScholarshipMIA2013 - Feb 17, 2013 / MIA2013 - Feb 18, 2013
|Guatemala Experience as a Health Specialist; NHSC Scholarship-Why Primary HealthCare?
ScholarshipPA Applicant - Feb 17, 2013 / KYOAAA - Feb 17, 2013
|MY DREAM ; Pace U- Business Administration/ Photography/ Travel
3 - I agree with Aniece about using "would", I feel like it doesn't give enough to convince that you want...
ScholarshipJulieRose - Jan 30, 2013 / littleone - Feb 17, 2013
|Own a Software and entrepreneurship consultancy company; Professional goals
NEW - 1- My long-term professional goal is to own a Software and entrepreneurship consultancy company which will be specialized in...
Scholarshipshalbamby - Feb 16, 2013 / — -
|'City of Refuge' - for full ride: Antioch College- Inquiry, Work, Community
3 - Thank you Dumi! Here's the prompt: Submit an essay of at least 500 words that answers the following...
Scholarshiphannahsarch - Feb 12, 2013 / hannahsarch - Feb 15, 2013
|Children with special needs; Health Care Scholarship - Why counseling or health care?
ScholarshipGranolabargurl - Feb 12, 2013 / Granolabargurl - Feb 13, 2013
|NHS - Values of Scholarship, Character, Leadership & Community Service
2 - your anecdote in the beginning was well constructed. good job. (don not use contractions in a...
Scholarshipmasterckp - Feb 12, 2013 / android21 - Feb 12, 2013
|Chinese songs/ Chinese movies and cartoons;STUDY PLAN- CHINESE GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP
2 - It helped me capture a glimplse of Chinese culture, art and its people that gradually nurtured a love...
ScholarshipLera - Feb 12, 2013 / dumi - Feb 12, 2013
|Putting the world in my art, and showing my art to the world.
ScholarshipNiam - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|Hello and Zaijian! (multicultural scholarship essay for SCAD)
ScholarshipNiam - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|Love Finance ; Financial need statement; SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
Scholarshiphn_et - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|i want to be an economic expert--> for my Korean Scholarship (KGSP)
ScholarshipDHIETA - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|JOURNALISM/ PEREPARATORY/ PATIENT&HONEST; Scholarship- Why teach?/ Personal Qualities
4 - Well.... good common apps help them get admission to the uni and thereby achieve their academic goals. However,...
Scholarshipkorib - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|A passion for Computer Science - scholarship - Why choose Computer Science?
2 - It keeps advancing everyday that demands people to keep on learning and updating their knowledge with the new...
Scholarshiplynnet - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Exploration is key; U Michigan - Bell Scholarship
3 - I agree with Chelchelch. The way you presented your dual interest in engineering and medicine makes me uncertain about...
Scholarshipdealaus - Feb 1, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|Media Culture - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP, MASTERS IN HOLLAND
NEW - Hello, I'm writing my motivation letters to apply for master's degree in the Netherlands. Also I need another motivation...
ScholarshipChelchelch - Feb 1, 2013 / — -
|Overcome challenges in pursuit of professional development (Ford scholarship)
5 - Maybe you can have a couple of your past high school experiences that was challenging or " fun." as...
Scholarshipariscotte - Mar 28, 2010 / jasmine4ever - Feb 1, 2013
|Georgia Southern U; How Engineering degree helps me accomplish my academic goals
Scholarshipdaivinhtran1993 - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 31, 2013
|MARKETING DIRECTOR; Scholarship - academic and career goals
NEW - The requirement is a one page summary of my academic and career goals and what I'm doing to achieve...
Scholarshipehernandez - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|Mass Communications and Psychology; SCHOLARSHIP - Educational and career goals.
2 - I wish you rephrased this... This does not flow smooth and this is something you can tell them...
ScholarshipDgarp13 - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 30, 2013
|Inquisitive/Multicultural ; unique, and why is international travel?
4 - I've always been inquisitive about this world ... it's better you describe about your multicultural background...
ScholarshipDrakeRose - Jan 28, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|"GIVING THEM A FIGHTING CHANCE", CHCI LATINO SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipiamnicholas1 - Jan 27, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 27, 2013
|Environmentalism Scholarship Essay
2 - The implications of this go far beyond the immeasurable beauty that has been lost. Our planet is in a...
ScholarshipEnabledowner - Jan 27, 2013 / iamnicholas1 - Jan 27, 2013
|Essay for Freshman Scholarships
4 - Prompt: Describe your family and your family's contribution to your education. Take Two - Is this any better?...
ScholarshipWolves23f - Jan 26, 2013 / Wolves23f - Jan 27, 2013
|"Jasmine Reveolution"; issue of personal, local, or national concern
ScholarshipLoguisvitch - Jan 26, 2013 / Loguisvitch - Jan 27, 2013
|Architecture/ Potential to succeed - SCHOLARSHIP MY GOALS/ Why INVEST in my education
4 - You come across as very arrogant and shallow. Reading this, I didn't feel that you really wanted to study...
Scholarshipalejandroaex - Jan 25, 2013 / megciso - Jan 26, 2013
|Courage is not born, it is developed; Scholarship 2013
11 - Courage is an intense belief or countering action admist and against the presence of great fear, risk, or peril....
Scholarshiprcamp92 - Jan 16, 2013 / rcamp92 - Jan 26, 2013
|'It is not a tool' - What Does Leadership Means? Scholarship
3 - "cunning" is a term generally used for a negative feeling. Even the term "shrewd " has a lighter...
ScholarshipJai911 - Jan 25, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|"I wanted to be an explorer"- Optics&Photonics Scholarship
4 - Thank you so much, guys! I'll use your suggestions! Just to make sure: The incipit isn't too strange or...
ScholarshipTess962 - Jan 23, 2013 / Tess962 - Jan 24, 2013
|Women in Science and Engineering/ Educational and Career Goals
ScholarshipBloodyKiss01 - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 24, 2013
|Diverse Academic Intersts, Responsibility, my Culture; HMC President's Scholar-SOP
3 - Being rich and successful, making my friends and family proud and changing the world into a more meaningful...
Scholarshipcesaror123 - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 23, 2013
|Diverse values and morals, blue collar houehold/U.S. Naval(NROTC)
Scholarshipalexishemeon - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 23, 2013
|Vice President of HOSA; Leadership experience
5 - Definitely think that you should talk more about how you have affected your school's HOSA club rather than discuss...
ScholarshipNicoleO - Jan 14, 2013 / cesaror123 - Jan 22, 2013
|Culture,and Change among the Sherpa of Nepal ;Scholarship essay
6 - Mr Jiwan recommended me to review your essay regarding the following topic. Where I can see your powerful essay...
ScholarshipShanchuan Yin - Jan 18, 2013 / maneek - Jan 22, 2013
|Passion, USNS in Haiti, Hospital ship; REASONS- Naval Nurse Officer(NROTC)
2 - This is awesome... It's simple, straight and well presented. I like your style of writing :) .......
Scholarshipalexishemeon - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|English CAHSEE ; Why do you want to become a City Year Corps member?
Scholarshipcsdavies - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|Teaching passion/Change Route/Comeback;Motivational Essay- CBS Master's Scholarship
2 - ---------- You actually need not to be so descriptive :) ...,exclaimed my fellow students in the economic and...
ScholarshipMoh Mansour - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 21, 2013
|I want to make a difference; U Ottawa Scholarship - Why Engineering?
Scholarshipjbrasz - Jan 8, 2013 / dumi - Jan 20, 2013
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