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|'Being the best' ; My Values and Beliefs - NTU Scholarship Essay
2 - Hi :) You have a very good start. Grammatical structures and sentence forms are used accurately and effectively :)....
Scholarshipjessiahjkl - Dec 15, 2012 / Edna - Dec 17, 2012
|MOTIVATION FOR MASTERS SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION
3 - dumi thank u very much for your corrections i have corrected the line u did not understand it now...
Scholarshiptino - Dec 16, 2012 / tino - Dec 16, 2012
|HSF:Describe a recent academic challenge you have faced. Explain how you overcame it.
6 - I think you are a great writer and that your essay effectively describes your passion for academic success. I'm...
Scholarshipamandaco - Dec 5, 2012 / Elizabeth934 - Dec 14, 2012
|Motivation letter for MERIT programme( Erasmus Mundus scholarship)
NEW - Please review the motivation letter that I have prepared to submit for MERIT programme. As I am applying for...
Scholarshipolosh_ami - Dec 14, 2012 / — -
|DESCRIBE YOURSELF. B CREATIVE - Trustee's Scholarship Personal Statement
9 - I think this is a really strong essay but you should describe yourself more by elaborating on your dream...
Scholarshipqasderwdw - Dec 9, 2012 / Believefm - Dec 13, 2012
|SHORT/LONG TERM GOALS INFLUENCED BY HISPANIC HERITAGE.
NEW - 4. Goals Influenced by Hispanic Heritage: * Tell us about your academic/career short-term and long-term goals. How has your...
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|Motivation Letter for the EPIC program; Scholarship Essay
3 - I agree. I didn't quite understand it either. I think it would be best if you rephrase it. :)...
ScholarshipMerle - Dec 10, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|I remember that my mom has worked so hard: Personal Statement
8 - thankyou so much... really... this is my second para: This condition has made me pushed myself to...
Scholarshipfalishaa - Dec 9, 2012 / falishaa - Dec 10, 2012
|Short essay asking why i deserve this essay and how will i make an impact
Scholarshipjessicacarranza - Nov 28, 2012 / jaxball - Dec 10, 2012
|Working with MSF; Unique Perspectives - Scholarship Essay for IIE
2 - When I was fourteen, I became a member in a teenage team that took part in community development...
Scholarshiplucasd - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I come from a family of strong, motivated, dedicated individuals; Peace Corps
2 - "share these qualities to benefit others" sounds a bit awkward. Maybe drop "to benefit others". nice use of "disparities"...
Scholarshiphnunan - Nov 20, 2012 / amandaco - Dec 5, 2012
|Talk about your Korean American Experience. [Bio]
Scholarshipjooanchoi - Dec 3, 2012 / Salikron - Dec 3, 2012
|Be Considerate to be Selfish
ScholarshipNamgyal123 - Nov 14, 2012 / Namgyal123 - Dec 3, 2012
|'transformed into a great actress' - your talents and what you learned about yourself
Scholarshipiswearsnape - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 2, 2012
|Curious and Determined - Scholarship essay for NUS
ScholarshipArchidrumedic - Dec 1, 2012 / dumi - Dec 1, 2012
|TCU Admission/Scholarship Essay; Agustin my father, the most significant person in my life
2 - Have punctuation! Though your word count further goes up by two, I think those two words, "with me"...
Scholarshipbombela - Nov 28, 2012 / dumi - Nov 28, 2012
|My passion for learning English and other cultures!
3 - What is the connection between you attending the English Teacher Training Programme at Universidad CatĂłlica Silva HenrĂquez and teaching...
ScholarshipAnimor Stark - Nov 25, 2012 / havu - Nov 26, 2012
|can someone review this it would be most appreciated! Topic - B
2 - Is there a certain amount of words required? If there isn't you should expand your idea. Also, work on...
Scholarshipbdl6255 - Nov 22, 2012 / egarza102 - Nov 26, 2012
|Summary of Undergraduate Study - Architecture
3 - you could tell more about how those things could help blind or visually impaired peoples, and give more explanations...
ScholarshipAndry - Nov 15, 2012 / sebastiann436 - Nov 26, 2012
|'My parents and Pre-AP English teachar' -academic subject in which you excelled
4 - Attempted to fix it. I became engrossed with English at a very young age. Once my parents began...
Scholarshiptheloveaffair - Nov 21, 2012 / theloveaffair - Nov 26, 2012
|'Do your best' - scholarship essay
2 - Hello, I like how you started, nice quote. However as you move I think you should give stronger...
Scholarshipsebastiann436 - Nov 26, 2012 / scosc - Nov 26, 2012
|ESSAY FOR NTU, A EXPERIENCE OF PROMOTION SPECIALIST 'FRESTECH refrigerator'
ScholarshipNeal - Nov 25, 2012 / programmer - Nov 25, 2012
|'My business family' - Need based scholarship essay
Scholarshipngupta1137 - Nov 25, 2012 / ngupta1137 - Nov 25, 2012
|'Studying about everything' - phd scholarship
2 - Hi, well.... I think you should not consume three sentences for telling this idea... I don't mean...
Scholarshipmoony - Nov 14, 2012 / dumi - Nov 24, 2012
|"age of exploration" - Private space exploration activities
2 - Don't throw this away. Just condense your details. I don't think you need to remove anything specifically...
ScholarshipStaniel - Nov 21, 2012 / Yoh - Nov 24, 2012
|'Public Health, UNICEF and other NGOs' - my experience scholarship essay
Scholarshipdoctor_noorulla - Nov 24, 2012 / programmer - Nov 24, 2012
|Discuss your short and long-term goals. Are some of them related? Which are prioritie
4 - hmm.. heart touching story... there are few errors though... 1. ... know the road I'm going to walk in...
Scholarshipmimiho - Nov 19, 2012 / sanchit - Nov 20, 2012
|An honest story that stopped my heart from beating for a second
2 - haya2596 For the first one, I wouldn't ask the question "What was the turning point in my life?" in...
Scholarshiphaya2596 - Nov 15, 2012 / britttt4 - Nov 15, 2012
|formal letter for applying phd position - show me the mistakes
2 - Once I completed my M.Sc. degree, I joined Prof. XXX's Membrane research centre at XXX University. The main...
Scholarshiphamid live - Oct 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|'Pediatric neurosurgeon' - Scholarship ~ Describe your academic or career goals
3 - Wow, those are incredible dreams! But I think the prompt is asking you to describe them? I feel that...
Scholarshipomo5031 - Nov 6, 2012 / MrMaro - Nov 7, 2012
|'from Dominican Republic / Positive way' - SCHOLARSHIP SHORT
2 - Hello Jenny, Please help me understand how the caretaker who mentally and physically abused you is mentioned int he...
Scholarshipjenny_vargas - Oct 23, 2012 / linmark - Nov 5, 2012
|(educational systems and excellent facilities) letter for Master's Degree scholarship
2 - Solid letter. I have nothing to correct or any negative comment. Would help to list specifics on the professors...
ScholarshipTommy hays - Oct 9, 2012 / linmark - Nov 4, 2012
|I opted my career as an electrical engineer. Personal Statement for Review
3 - Thank you very much actually it is about the Global Undergraduate Exchange Program in which candidates would stay for...
Scholarshipishtiaqueahmed - Oct 28, 2012 / ishtiaqueahmed - Oct 29, 2012
|human beings are judged by their deeds
NEW - Subject : briefly describe any outstanding achievements you made at the level of your school, city or country ------------------------------------------------------...
Scholarshipsoufian044 - Oct 27, 2012 / — -
|'Seeking the Truth' - Ball State- Why I want to go into Journalism
3 - Thanks!...
Scholarshiptommyboy614 - Oct 16, 2012 / tommyboy614 - Oct 27, 2012
|Questbridge Essay; 'I've learned to care for others, to think first'
Scholarshipmcdonald101 - Sep 28, 2012 / chiragjain - Oct 21, 2012
|Management Sciences, International level (Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Masters program)
NEW - please check it and give suggestions. English is not my native language so there may be many mistakes. hope...
ScholarshipStrugler - Oct 21, 2012 / — -
|Critique my National Merit essay (a meaningful experience)
2 - wow, really nice job! maybe condense the part where you're describing you lying and bed and beginning to think,...
ScholarshipParceledTongue - Oct 4, 2012 / allms - Oct 19, 2012
|Scholarship Essay for Master's; I'm Electrical Engineering graduate from India
Scholarshipalfaromeo - Oct 9, 2012 / brittnid - Oct 16, 2012
|"My greatest achievement was my greatest loss" (AcaDeca) - Common App prompt
Scholarshipmintsnapple - Sep 28, 2012 / brittnid - Oct 16, 2012
|'daughter of two immigrant parents' - why i want to go to college
3 - College essay on immigration is often used topic, so your essay must standout from others writing about immigration. "In...
Scholarshipndidi - Oct 2, 2012 / dd9679 - Oct 10, 2012
|'weak financial situation' Essay for Scholarship for Masters Degree
2 - I have a comment that your sentences are really long. Therefore, sometimes, it is hard to understand what do...
Scholarshipakriti2021 - Sep 28, 2012 / Tran Tong - Oct 6, 2012
|My significant event: learning English experience
2 - First, always capitalize English...or any other language. The soft squeak of nurse's shoes filled the lobby as pink...
Scholarshipessaynayforte - Sep 27, 2012 / EF_Susan - Oct 4, 2012
|'Art is not just about self-expression' - Questbridge Bio Essay
2 - You know Art is your passion, your niche, your abstract mind coming into play, so you take the...
Scholarshippdelvalle7 - Sep 27, 2012 / EF_Susan - Oct 4, 2012
|'America is home to people from many unique cultures' - Diversity Essay
ScholarshipConfusedwriter - Sep 15, 2012 / Confusedwriter - Sep 29, 2012
|'Describe your participation in extracurricular activities' SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
NEW - This is an essay for a scholarship, critiques, comments and corrections are greatly welcomed. Thanks for your help ...
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|Power and electronics and oil - SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY HELP
Scholarshipblaze321 - Sep 26, 2012 / blaze321 - Sep 26, 2012
|Puget Sounds Skills Center (PSSC); QuestBridge Scholarship/ EXPERIENCE
NEW - ïTell us about an experience you have had or a concept you have learned about that intellectually excites you....
Scholarshipmickey737 - Sep 25, 2012 / — -
|'getting that award' - Quest Bridge National College Match: Essay #2
ScholarshipPirateking - Sep 16, 2012 / uscuscusc - Sep 23, 2012
|"Struggle and perseverance" - Questridge Biographical Essay
ScholarshipCAstudent11 - Sep 22, 2012 / uscuscusc - Sep 23, 2012
|Life is a cup of mysterious coffee; Significant experience
Scholarshiphothanhphuong17 - Sep 19, 2012 / kbambisa - Sep 19, 2012
|Career goals must be taken carefully in our life
2 - Career goals must be taken carefullyseriously in our life,especially w hile majoring in business management . I plan to...
ScholarshipAdam 12121 - Sep 15, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 18, 2012
|scholarship - American Petroleum institute
2 - I think that I have the qualification to earn this scholarship, because I'm ambitious, hard working student and my...
Scholarshipsikiranbonbon - Sep 9, 2012 / Bromance - Sep 18, 2012
|I have learnt to deal with challenging problems ; Why I deserve a scholarship ?
NEW - Renowned roboticist Rodney Brookes once claimed that he could imagine a world being populated with robots in the near-future....
Scholarshipverdikt - Sep 14, 2012 / — -
|UW Leadership/Volunteerism Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipuwmarc - Sep 11, 2012 / hungvud - Sep 13, 2012
|Leadership (Gates Millenium)
4 - :) Okkkkkkk... These are a few of my observations; 1. Your first para is too long; 2. Take the...
ScholarshipJTLresces - Sep 7, 2012 / dumi - Sep 8, 2012
|Family's attention and children behavior - scholarship essay
ScholarshipPipit - Sep 5, 2012 / Pipit - Sep 7, 2012
|How will this scholarship assist you with your career goals in your chosen field?
NEW - I will welcome any forms of crticisms. Thanks in advance for your assistance. Career Goals: How will this...
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|VCU Page 87 essay - "Fashion Show"
Scholarshipxlinduh - Aug 28, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 4, 2012
|(music, books, favorite course, inspiration, weekday) short answer for scholarship
2 - Very interesting answers. Hard to find anything to improve, you should get your scholarship : )...
Scholarshipforeverizel - Aug 31, 2012 / ace - Sep 1, 2012
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