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|(Bank of Tokyo-Mitsubishi UFJ scholarship) - essay scholarship for a bank
2 - Check your comma ussage. For example: "With this scholarship, I hope to receive..." Check spelling, eg: "pusue...
Scholarshiplannhi_309 - Aug 27, 2012 / ace - Sep 1, 2012
|(About Great leaders can ask...") - In Need of a Scholarship Essay Question
3 - The question definitely needs to be unique and original. Try something that has to do with the problems of...
Scholarshipashley2013 - Aug 29, 2012 / jisthesmartest - Aug 31, 2012
|Making a difference in our community working at McDonalds
4 - You need to make the essay more profound,let them get a feeling of desire to help the needy. Not...
Scholarshipilovepocky - Aug 29, 2012 / jisthesmartest - Aug 31, 2012
|'From Indonesia to USA' - How to organize good Essay for Global UGRAD 2013
3 - thank you Liebe for the response ... I will try to revise it... honestly, I revised it once :)...
ScholarshipIra Arai - Aug 20, 2012 / Ira Arai - Aug 28, 2012
|Scholarship paper demanding acad acheivements and Extracurriculars -SPJCM
NEW - Hello, This is my first scholarship application and the committee demands that the applicant should be highly competitive. They...
Scholarshippoova39 - Aug 27, 2012 / — -
|Scholarship for Master Studies in Germany for profesionals from developing countries
Scholarshiplulilein84 - Aug 22, 2012 / lulilein84 - Aug 24, 2012
|'an entrepreneurial spirit' - JumpStart Essay
2 - "iron into a shirt, and even basic marketing techniques". This does not work because you started off with "how...
Scholarshippc101 - Aug 10, 2012 / PBP - Aug 11, 2012
|'Despite my interests...' (engineering / architect scholarship)
Scholarshipmoon05 - Aug 8, 2012 / moon05 - Aug 8, 2012
|'hard work pays off' - Prompt for College JumpStart Application
Scholarshipastupart08 - Aug 7, 2012 / maryk_4263 - Aug 7, 2012
|'overcoming challenges' - How would this scholarship help your financial needs
2 - Hello, Stacey) Is there a word limit? I think you should elaborate more on your academic goals to persuade...
Scholarshipmisspink - Aug 3, 2012 / KhanhZ - Aug 5, 2012
|Registered Nurse became my new goal; SCHOLARSHIP/ Primary goal?
Scholarshipbunnybunsss - Jul 31, 2012 / bsm25 - Aug 3, 2012
|'Keng, my brother' - the most interesting person you have ever met? why?
4 - I agree with Grimes. There needs to be a definite identifier for your person of interest. I would...
Scholarshipsher090 - Jul 26, 2012 / rpark94 - Jul 27, 2012
|'engineers or doctors' - factors that shaped my world
2 - You are going very good. As a conclusion I recommend you to comment something about: 1. Your attitude: it...
Scholarshipandrewbyeun - Jul 22, 2012 / Nrivera - Jul 22, 2012
|'focus on education and extracurricular activities' - Importance of scholarship essay
Scholarshipl_borras - Jul 17, 2012 / dumi - Jul 18, 2012
|'That kid was me' - my 250-word scholarship paper
4 - It matches well with the third option. Plus, the format of this essay depicts personality, which may be...
ScholarshipKaundinya - Jul 11, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jul 12, 2012
|'Things happen to teach something' - persanal statement essay
ScholarshipZewiver - Jul 9, 2012 / Zewiver - Jul 10, 2012
|'Quality, beauty, creation' - Florida State Vires, Artes, Mores scholarship essay(s)
NEW - Select a torch and submit a short essay (250 words maximum) on the qualities that torch represents and how...
Scholarshippaynedaisy12 - Jul 7, 2012 / — -
|(Dance Performance Major) Personal Statement for 2013 AMA Scholarship
Scholarship009july - Jul 2, 2012 / 009july - Jul 3, 2012
|'A Difficult time in my life' - How I faced a hard time in life and overcame it.
Scholarshipstundt1 - Jun 30, 2012 / stundt1 - Jul 1, 2012
|'alleviating the financial burden' - How will this scholarship help you?
3 - Hello strawberry, Interesting goal you have. Reading the prompt, I felt you could strengthen your essay by being more...
ScholarshipStrawberry78 - Jun 25, 2012 / linmark - Jun 29, 2012
|"Contribute my passion in IT for the community" - personal statement for application
3 - Hi thanks for the inputs :) I have corrected it. and add/change few things. As suggested, I have also...
Scholarshipjyym27 - Jun 27, 2012 / jyym27 - Jun 28, 2012
|Scholarship Appeal Letter; '2.7 GPA was far below where it needed to be'
NEW - Lost my scholarship because I failed to meet the GPA requirement, I was encouraged to appeal the scholarship committees...
ScholarshipYomarie - Jun 27, 2012 / — -
|Pediatric Scholarship-Personal Achievements essay
Scholarshipdanielledimac - Jun 26, 2012 / danielledimac - Jun 26, 2012
|'pursing a medical vocation' stating career plans,aspirations and use of funds
ScholarshipMonkey2012 - Jun 23, 2012 / Monkey2012 - Jun 24, 2012
|'touching the lives of thousands' - Excellence Scholarship application
2 - I believe my more than fifteen years of IT experience and training, a continued desire for self-development, combined with...
Scholarshipadaiah - Jun 20, 2012 / chwong - Jun 23, 2012
|Scholarship for MSc Finance and Investment programme
NEW - I intend to apply for a scholarship for my MSc in finance and investment. The requirements are to...
Scholarshiplois0117 - Jun 20, 2012 / — -
|'Nowadays in Berlin' - cutting 60 words and final corrections: Community service
ScholarshipAlma83E - Jun 18, 2012 / Alma83E - Jun 18, 2012
|why you deserve, how the program improves your career, edu, personal goals
15 - I read trough what you have written and skimmed the essence of it. So, this covers all the points...
Scholarshipkhanhle - Jun 16, 2012 / dumi - Jun 18, 2012
|'proven myself in the past' - 300 Word Scholarship Demonstrating Financial Need
3 - You can this even stronger.... It is your opening statement and you are going to convince them that...
Scholarshipankit_gyawali - Jun 15, 2012 / dumi - Jun 15, 2012
|Statistics & Operations Research-What is your proposed study is intended to achieve
4 - Dear, Ahmad Zafari, Duminda and Michael F. Thanks a lot for your insightful advise. Will definitely look into...
ScholarshipOld Baby - Jun 4, 2012 / Old Baby - Jun 13, 2012
|I am keen on economics, philosophy and politics ;SCHOLARSHIP
NEW - Hello, I need someone to revise my scholarship application, but I cannot publish it on public forum, because if...
Scholarshipgiorgio186 - Jun 9, 2012 / — -
|'to serve Maldivian government' personal statement for application to masters program
Scholarshipai5h00 - May 30, 2012 / ai5h00 - Jun 9, 2012
|'my choice to leave my family' - Florida State University- Vires, Artes, and Mores
NEW - Hello everybody, I just want some help with these three scholarship essays below for FSU. I just want to...
ScholarshipMadman59770 - Jun 6, 2012 / — -
|'I have worked too hard' - 250 Word Essay of why I deserve a Scholarship
4 - Great Essay! But talk about HOW YOU WORKED HARD! you wrote that you said that I deserve this scholarship...
Scholarshipkmurray1 - May 31, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 4, 2012
|Scholarship essay (Computational Bio-science) - At KAUST University.
3 - Hi I did modify the introduction but I did not add the part 'how these fields help meet today's...
Scholarshipsadsad - Jun 2, 2012 / sadsad - Jun 3, 2012
|"Why is a healthy lifestyle important in school?" Essay Scholarship
2 - On average, throughout one's day the goal is to feel satisfaction even if we do not realize it. ...
ScholarshipMalJack93 - May 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|How to write an essay for getting Turkey scholarship in the field political science
2 - Welcome! Well I do have some advice for you. Your opening statement must be one that grabs the reader...
Scholarshipmshqureshi - May 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 31, 2012
|Description of the proposed study which is Banking and Finance?
4 - Yes, you can start with your introduction and you should start with that only. Above given points are some...
ScholarshipLina2 - May 25, 2012 / ana_p - May 30, 2012
|mechanical and electrical engineering in Turkey- scholarship
3 - thank you very much. i really appreciate. so i decided to change a little bit The faculty that...
Scholarshipalaboy4ik - May 29, 2012 / alaboy4ik - May 30, 2012
|Describing myself as a student, family member, and as a person or individual.
4 - As soon as I started reading this I thought you should use some kind of metaphor to describe who...
ScholarshipMeitanteiConan - May 17, 2012 / MalJack93 - May 28, 2012
|Application for a Fellowship, India
NEW - Purpose : Application for a Fellowship program at India's Leading corporate house Objective of Fellowship program : Fellows...
ScholarshipDeeya - May 27, 2012 / — -
|'Electrical & Computer Engineering - robot' - scholarship personal statement.
ScholarshipJeremyW - May 25, 2012 / JeremyW - May 27, 2012
|(Auburn University) Letter of Appeal for Cancelled Scholarship
2 - I like your letter, just one little thing: I'd tell them that I started working during Christmas break...
ScholarshipCodyArant84 - May 23, 2012 / Collegegirl22 - May 25, 2012
|Peace Corps Essay #2 - A Muslim-Catholic child in a Jewish pre-school
2 - Let me start by saying that your opening paragraph is absolutely beautiful :) ...I became aware of the fact...
Scholarshipajsmith02 - May 18, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 22, 2012
|(Australia Advanced Diploma in Accounting) - scholarship request
3 - please provide details of your proposed study, research or professional development, including the personal and professional benefits you expect...
Scholarshipkarma N - May 15, 2012 / karma N - May 20, 2012
|Need help with a scholarship essay 400 words only. Starting points?
3 - Yes, and in dire need of help. If you have any suitable suggestions then please do give them to...
Scholarshipeternal sabbath - May 15, 2012 / eternal sabbath - May 18, 2012
|SOP for Applying International Merits Scholarship at University of XXXX - Feedback
Scholarshiphadilp90 - May 11, 2012 / hadilp90 - May 18, 2012
|'To empower others' - Nursing scholarship - diabetes education
NEW - I am particularly concerned about the grammar of the last sentence in paragraph 2. Suggestions and corrections welcome. ...
ScholarshipBJWeeds - May 16, 2012 / — -
|'to become a prestigious accountant' - What are your educational/career goals?
3 - dear all i am trying for endeavor scholarship in advance diploma in accounting. i have almost completed my esay...
Scholarshipnr3384 - May 8, 2012 / karma N - May 15, 2012
|'Where / to whom you were born vs. quality of life' - Peace Corps Essay #1
NEW - Hi all, I would really appreciate some feedback on my Peace Corps essay. I don't know if it stands...
Scholarshipajsmith02 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|Nursing Scholarship of A Lifetime - Service and Need Based
2 - First, the positives. You structured your essay around the central theme of enthusiasm. Your experiences have brought you a...
ScholarshipHaikugram - May 8, 2012 / Phineas - May 10, 2012
|'my preachers, Charlie & Kathleen' - Op Left Scholarship Questions essay
3 - The prompt indirectly asks you what sort of personality traits of this person made you like him. I...
Scholarshipkawsneffect - May 7, 2012 / dumi - May 9, 2012
|Your ambitions and career plan- Sports Management Scholarship essay.
11 - You are welcome Imran!!!!! .... glad to have been able to help u. I collect good pieces of writing...
Scholarshipspeedster - Apr 28, 2012 / dumi - May 8, 2012
|Scholarship advice (Outstanding Performance in Sciences)
6 - Since childhood I have had a great interest towards Science. I asked about 'why' and my father could...
Scholarshipwide - Apr 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 3, 2012
|(family love, Lord, determination) - Why should I be given a scholarship?
3 - wow thank you, I'm glad you appreciated it . That helps, ill consider that :) But if u please...
Scholarshipquila - May 3, 2012 / quila - May 3, 2012
|An Essay on Quotations (scholarship)
Scholarshipgiorgio186 - Apr 29, 2012 / giorgio186 - May 3, 2012
|Int'l Economics, Finance and Development - SOP for XXX Scholarships (500words essay)
ScholarshipFLEXOO - Apr 30, 2012 / FLEXOO - May 3, 2012
|'Manager Site Merchandiser' Scholarships for working parents, long-term career goal?
3 - I too agree with Lima.... you need to have an emotional touch to convince them that you are a...
ScholarshipLearninOver - May 2, 2012 / dumi - May 2, 2012
|Accounting: Scholarship short: Career goal & importance of a college education.
4 - Question on a narrative outling essay (how a college can assist my career goals) I have to write...
Scholarshiplcgrad_2011 - Oct 25, 2010 / hpalad - May 2, 2012
|'Training in the USA is essential for my future' - Study Objective
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