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|Need help with a scholarship essay 400 words only. Starting points?
3 - Yes, and in dire need of help. If you have any suitable suggestions then please do give them to...
Scholarshipeternal sabbath - May 15, 2012 / eternal sabbath - May 18, 2012
|SOP for Applying International Merits Scholarship at University of XXXX - Feedback
Scholarshiphadilp90 - May 11, 2012 / hadilp90 - May 18, 2012
|'To empower others' - Nursing scholarship - diabetes education
NEW - I am particularly concerned about the grammar of the last sentence in paragraph 2. Suggestions and corrections welcome. ...
ScholarshipBJWeeds - May 16, 2012 / — -
|'to become a prestigious accountant' - What are your educational/career goals?
3 - dear all i am trying for endeavor scholarship in advance diploma in accounting. i have almost completed my esay...
Scholarshipnr3384 - May 8, 2012 / karma N - May 15, 2012
|'Where / to whom you were born vs. quality of life' - Peace Corps Essay #1
NEW - Hi all, I would really appreciate some feedback on my Peace Corps essay. I don't know if it stands...
Scholarshipajsmith02 - May 15, 2012 / — -
|Nursing Scholarship of A Lifetime - Service and Need Based
2 - First, the positives. You structured your essay around the central theme of enthusiasm. Your experiences have brought you a...
ScholarshipHaikugram - May 8, 2012 / Phineas - May 10, 2012
|'my preachers, Charlie & Kathleen' - Op Left Scholarship Questions essay
3 - The prompt indirectly asks you what sort of personality traits of this person made you like him. I...
Scholarshipkawsneffect - May 7, 2012 / dumi - May 9, 2012
|Your ambitions and career plan- Sports Management Scholarship essay.
11 - You are welcome Imran!!!!! .... glad to have been able to help u. I collect good pieces of writing...
Scholarshipspeedster - Apr 28, 2012 / dumi - May 8, 2012
|Scholarship advice (Outstanding Performance in Sciences)
6 - Since childhood I have had a great interest towards Science. I asked about 'why' and my father could...
Scholarshipwide - Apr 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 3, 2012
|(family love, Lord, determination) - Why should I be given a scholarship?
3 - wow thank you, I'm glad you appreciated it . That helps, ill consider that :) But if u please...
Scholarshipquila - May 3, 2012 / quila - May 3, 2012
|An Essay on Quotations (scholarship)
Scholarshipgiorgio186 - Apr 29, 2012 / giorgio186 - May 3, 2012
|Int'l Economics, Finance and Development - SOP for XXX Scholarships (500words essay)
ScholarshipFLEXOO - Apr 30, 2012 / FLEXOO - May 3, 2012
|'Manager Site Merchandiser' Scholarships for working parents, long-term career goal?
3 - I too agree with Lima.... you need to have an emotional touch to convince them that you are a...
ScholarshipLearninOver - May 2, 2012 / dumi - May 2, 2012
|Accounting: Scholarship short: Career goal & importance of a college education.
4 - Question on a narrative outling essay (how a college can assist my career goals) I have to write...
Scholarshiplcgrad_2011 - Oct 25, 2010 / hpalad - May 2, 2012
|'Training in the USA is essential for my future' - Study Objective
Scholarshipmaria88 - May 2, 2012 / sushiking - May 2, 2012
|High school sports effect - Start HELP IN ESSAY QUESTION FOR SCHOLARSHIP
2 - I think there's plenty of things to write for this topic as long as you've been active in sports...
ScholarshipDamdam - May 1, 2012 / asid12345678 - May 2, 2012
|'basis for my future career in Russia' - Personal Statement
2 - Your opening statement is great!... I finished school in 2006 and became a student of Magnitogorsk State University where...
Scholarshipmaria88 - May 1, 2012 / EF_Susan - May 1, 2012
|'put to the best academic utility' - scholarship
3 - thank you susan for a useful feedback. I will surely incorporate it in my essay. Thank you so much...
Scholarshipkandy_jalva - Apr 29, 2012 / kandy_jalva - May 1, 2012
|'to pay for my tuition and books' how will a $3000 scholarship help you?
Scholarshipelenaaj - Apr 29, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 30, 2012
|'Langston the best road to take for my future' - scholarship
Scholarshipkendalyoung - Apr 29, 2012 / kendalyoung - Apr 29, 2012
|Presidential Scholarship Application: Semester at Sea
3 - Thank you so much for the help, but I really should have included the prompt, because all of those...
Scholarshiphgrierson - Apr 24, 2012 / hgrierson - Apr 26, 2012
|A camp counselor at Camp Cispus (extracurricular activities)
2 - I have also volunteered for Christmas in the Park (where?) since 2004, which was one of my favorite...
Scholarshipamanda98387 - Apr 23, 2012 / Yunfeng - Apr 26, 2012
|'Dental hygiene is the ideal career for me' - my goals
3 - Thank you for your help. I was thinking the same thing about "enjoying" but I just couldn't think of...
Scholarshipamanda98387 - Apr 25, 2012 / amanda98387 - Apr 25, 2012
|'easier to go down a hill than up' - academic, career, and personal goals.
4 - Paige: Thank you for your advice! It's been a while since I've written a paper! Marie: Thank you for...
Scholarshipsgrubes315 - Apr 25, 2012 / sgrubes315 - Apr 25, 2012
|'a well-educated person can survive' - Scholarship Essay-Transfer Plans
Scholarshipamanda98387 - Apr 23, 2012 / amanda98387 - Apr 24, 2012
|Career in investment banking - my MBA Fellowship short essays
2 - I am not certain that one can ever fully prepare themselves for a career in investment banking. While this...
Scholarshipmp1174 - Apr 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 24, 2012
|James Rhio O'Connor Memorial Scholarship Essay Contest- "A Martyr for Alternatives"
Scholarshipvseawright - Apr 21, 2012 / wide - Apr 21, 2012
|Essay for the James Rhio O'Connor Scholarship "Hope Diguised as an Angel"
NEW - The following is an essay I am supposed to write for the James Rhio O'Connor scholarship. Please give feedback....
Scholarshipadelahj - Apr 19, 2012 / — -
|'my construction background' - Sop to apply scholarship
2 - try to write in a professional way! do not write ur name. they know ur name from ur application...
Scholarshipbach123 - Apr 18, 2012 / sherxon - Apr 18, 2012
|'The Honor of Lane' - Lane Tech Alumni Scholarship
2 - The Honor of Lane is a phrase that strikes me as havehaving numerous meanings. The Honor of Lane first...
Scholarshiprockii3 - Apr 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 18, 2012
|'I can gain a career that I love' - Why I deserve this scholarship
3 - I like it. No false modesty. You know your qualities; you have described them well; your argumentation seems to...
Scholarshipbanker281 - Apr 13, 2012 / giorgio186 - Apr 17, 2012
|'the Hispanic population and education' - CHCI Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipgeebs5 - Apr 16, 2012 / stn0795 - Apr 17, 2012
|'Not just a financially disadvantaged girl from a middle class family' - scholarship
16 - The beginning just needs a little touch such as disregarding the negatives and try to word it in a...
Scholarshipmenukagrg - Apr 1, 2012 / anita123 - Apr 15, 2012
|Scholarship for Athletic Training Students
Scholarshipmjeffris3 - Apr 12, 2012 / anita123 - Apr 15, 2012
|'hours of service' - Volunteer/Community Involvement Essay ($2000 Scholarship)
NEW - Please describe your volunteer/community involvement and/or extracurricular activities over the past five years. (max. 250 words) At first...
Scholarshipanita123 - Apr 15, 2012 / — -
|'artistic atmosphere' based on cultural background, and basic effects of your country
3 - WoW! thank you for suggesting those words. I didn't know the meaning and usage of plethora . I'll try...
Scholarshipozmaozra - Apr 12, 2012 / ozmaozra - Apr 13, 2012
|My financial need makes my academic aspirations a lofty one- scholarship essay
3 - Thank you so much Susan for your review! Do you have any specific words/examples on how I can elaborate...
Scholarshipademola009 - Apr 11, 2012 / ademola009 - Apr 12, 2012
|'How My Mother's Epilepsy Has Impacted Me' - another scholarship
2 - My passion to become a neurologist after the completion of my bachelor's degree was due to my mom's disability....
Scholarshipallierein - Apr 11, 2012 / lin1993 - Apr 11, 2012
|'a life changing experience' - Application letter for a semestre abroad scholarship
2 - It will enable the aquicitionacqusition of a higher quality education in the field, andthat would surely givebe ...
Scholarshipmanebellamy - Apr 11, 2012 / dumi - Apr 11, 2012
|"Hardest Worker" award at Texas Tech tennis camp;Texas Tennis Association Scholarship
Scholarshipmorrm23 - Apr 10, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Apr 10, 2012
|Essay to Teach Abroad for 1 year
2 - Let me start by saying that your opening paragraph is beautiful :) But as I wrestle more with its...
Scholarshipdevinedj - Apr 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 10, 2012
|Why do you consider yourself a suitable candidate (career in the field of science)
2 - When I was notified that I had gone through the examination and more than that I was the topper...
ScholarshipNitish - Apr 10, 2012 / dumi - Apr 10, 2012
|(Biotechnology education) Apply for Research Studentship
2 - Dear Sir/Madam/ Members of Research Committee, (you could also skip "Dear ___ " all together since you are...
Scholarshipsdsrathore2511 - Apr 8, 2012 / EF_Susan - Apr 9, 2012
|"Holocaust Remembrance - remember and understand" Scholarship Essay
2 - I don't know where the scholarship comes from, but given the prompt, I suspect it's motivated partly by a...
Scholarshipkatmac95 - Apr 7, 2012 / Thaliak - Apr 8, 2012
|'the interest in me to be a doctor one day' - Application for scholarship - Medicine
2 - Hi :) I have some suggestions that may help. The most important thing is your grammar, it must be...
Scholarshipraj74 - Apr 1, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Apr 2, 2012
|'My own Pharmacy' importance of education to me and how it will help me in the future
Scholarshipkilah1994 - Apr 2, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Apr 2, 2012
|Physics - reasons for majoring in the field of study as described
NEW - Hi friends,I am applying for few scholarships, and as usual each scholarships need to be submit together with the...
ScholarshipBonoStory - Mar 31, 2012 / — -
|"My Hacking Dream" NTU Scholarship ESSAY
4 - Bitter experience leading to Passion I am a hard worker and work with perseverance. I have demonstrated that in...
ScholarshipBoss123 - Mar 31, 2012 / Boss123 - Mar 31, 2012
|'my brother severely broke his leg' - Nursing Scholarship Essay
ScholarshipBUroyal7 - Mar 29, 2012 / jenk - Mar 31, 2012
|'Biology and I will help people around me' - APCF Area of Study Prompt
2 - Hey =) I find that the approach towards the topic is pretty good! However, instead of Barbiesdolls...
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Mar 29, 2012 / Athena - Mar 30, 2012
|How the Internet or Internet technology has, is, and will help my studies?
2 - You answered the first part of the question beautifully, but there isn't much about how the Internet will help...
ScholarshipSandovalk16 - Mar 28, 2012 / maianh94 - Mar 29, 2012
|'to be morally right' - the most difficult decisions you ever made
2 - News of women facing sexual advances at the workplace were not alien to me Succeeding at my responsibilities was...
Scholarshipmabankas - Mar 29, 2012 / maianh94 - Mar 29, 2012
|'What does being Asian mean to you' - APCF Asian Prompt
3 - Thanks for the feedback, all of them were very insightful and would greatly improve my essay :) I'm right...
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Mar 28, 2012 / maianh94 - Mar 29, 2012
|'whatever the setbacks are..' - short scholarship
Scholarshiplin1993 - Mar 28, 2012 / lin1993 - Mar 29, 2012
|self uniqueness, preserving culture, achieving big dream essay - feedback
Scholarshipadit_m461c - Mar 24, 2012 / sharadarige - Mar 29, 2012
|'My high standardized test scores' - Small School Scholarship's Importance
2 - I read that the scholarship is for study abroad students. That means you have to tie in studying abroad...
ScholarshipPrimeTime309 - Mar 23, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 28, 2012
|"How did art affect your life?" essay. "Hope"
5 - Dear Luan, What does rhyming achieve in this essay, aside from making it a poem? I think the purpose...
Scholarshipkthanhpn - Mar 27, 2012 / kthanhpn - Mar 28, 2012
|Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum
2 - kthanhpn Your middle para is the best out of the three. The first para usually should touch the main...
Scholarshipsharadarige - Mar 28, 2012 / alirulez - Mar 28, 2012
|'my family cannot financially support my education abroad' - Scholarship Essay
4 - Here's the best I can do for you. One last question: How will you write your papers in English...
Scholarshiprohit3108 - Mar 23, 2012 / chalumeau - Mar 27, 2012
|(Abode / No Talent / Christianity / My Brother) - Scholarship and Statement
Scholarshipviviann16 - Mar 24, 2012 / viviann16 - Mar 27, 2012
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