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|'my higher studies in Pakistan' - Need-based Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipphysicsme - Jan 26, 2012 / physicsme - Jan 27, 2012
|'specialization on child and families and social work' - Scholarship Essay
3 - How about like this: I have developed my practical skills and broadened my understanding of disadvantaged child and...
Scholarshipapidjakfar - Jan 23, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 25, 2012
|'work as an optical network engineer' - Motivation letter for scholarship
NEW - Hi everybody, Its the first time for me to post something here. really I'd like to apply for erasmus...
Scholarshiplood4ever - Jan 25, 2012 / — -
|RMHC Scholars/Award - Personal Statement as Exemplary Role Model
3 - Thank you for the feedback, it is very much appreciated. I will work on it some more and repost....
ScholarshipSirDM94 - Jan 24, 2012 / SirDM94 - Jan 24, 2012
|Financial Assistance letter for Anthropology mature student
ScholarshipMichelluu - Jan 23, 2012 / — -
|(refugee camp, Afganistan) - Statement for the Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipSdanish - Jan 22, 2012 / Sdanish - Jan 23, 2012
|'the most disadvantaged to the human race' - freewrite essay scholarship
ScholarshipSierra_lee1 - Jan 22, 2012 / Sierra_lee1 - Jan 22, 2012
|I come from a low income family; (Public Relations- major) scholarship
3 - As a junior in college I am currently focused on studying hard and acquiring a 4.0. I come from...
Scholarshiphubaig - Jan 22, 2012 / hubaig - Jan 22, 2012
|University of Tulsa Presidential Scholarship essay
3 - You must have BOTH been reincarnated from an ancient dinosaurs, because your descriptions are told as if you have...
Scholarshipkatmandu0071 - Jan 17, 2012 / Thors Hammer - Jan 21, 2012
|'I am a recovering alcoholic' - Scholarship
3 - At Comprehensive, I graduated Intensive Outpatient Treatment and am now receiving one-on-one counseling in hopes of moving forward from...
ScholarshipAbbieDietz - Jan 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 21, 2012
|How working with a member of parliament influence your career? Fellowship Essay!
2 - This requires that for a successful career in the field of public policy, which is both challenging and exhaustive,...
ScholarshipRiddi - Jan 19, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 19, 2012
|Lesson from Nature - scholarship
2 - "Brian said his final goodbye to his mom with infiite amount of tears" "Humans always want to..." ...
Scholarshipemily9587 - Jan 16, 2012 / kenben12 - Jan 17, 2012
|(graduated from the Department for International) motivation letter for a scholarship
5 - َ There are some grammatical errors you have to be careful about them. It will be better to help...
Scholarshiphybrid1 - Jan 13, 2012 / samba - Jan 17, 2012
|'make the world a happier place' - WPI What great world problem would you solve?
3 - Back then, my uncle was the one that greeted us. Sounds awkward . change it to something fitting....
Scholarshipnick_vt - Jan 17, 2012 / awsmness - Jan 17, 2012
|'constant drive for new and better technology' -how the scholarship will affect goals
2 - It's a pretty well written response. You hit every topic they asked you to highlight in your response. Watch...
ScholarshipAmbros - Jan 15, 2012 / ses11793 - Jan 16, 2012
|'Orville and Wilbur were brothers' - Scholarship essay.
2 - The b rothers often came with exotic ideas that were considered as frivolity from other penguins. Once, after...
Scholarshipobivan - Jan 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 16, 2012
|"Who wants to pray?" - Case Western Schoarship Essay
NEW - Topic: Describe your potential to be a leader. How do you envision yourself making a difference in the world....
Scholarshipemily9587 - Jan 16, 2012 / — -
|'I lived in New Jersey' - important life event
Scholarshipsingh955 - Jan 14, 2012 / gurecka - Jan 14, 2012
|'Music' - Your career path & how its education will improve life in the community
Scholarshipviolingrace - Jan 4, 2012 / gurecka - Jan 13, 2012
|'Studying in the UK offers the chance' - Personal - MSc of Clinical Pharmacology
3 - Thanks a bunch for your feedback jennifer.. I really appreaciate your time to read and fix my grammar issue,...
Scholarshipiepach - Jan 11, 2012 / iepach - Jan 13, 2012
|'Motivating my team to work toward the objective' - Gates Millenium Scholarship
Scholarshipbubbah14 - Jan 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'to be mentally healthy' - my personal characteristics and accomplishments
6 - You must show more and be more creative. Hope this will help you. You can imagine that you're...
Scholarshipvalsaviera - Jan 7, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 12, 2012
|'when I listen to the Vietnamese-Americans in my city' APIASF Community's Needs
2 - All of my Vietnamese friends speak Vietnamese with an American accent, and joke about the bad quality of Vietnamese...
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Jan 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 11, 2012
|'I rarely take notes in class' - GMS Essay - Subject I excel in
Scholarshipgotpho - Jan 11, 2012 / maianh94 - Jan 11, 2012
|'far from traditional road to college' - SOP for Communication Studies Grad Program
2 - I liked how you turned your life around, and I don't seem to find any grammatical errors with this...
Scholarshipcoyote2012 - Jan 11, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 11, 2012
|(Life in Japan / New people / Indonesia / Company / Grades up / Self) for scholarship
Scholarshiphappygirl - Jan 11, 2012 / akari - Jan 11, 2012
|'my visionary mindset' - Cloisters Art Museum Internship
NEW - The summer internship I'm applying for at The Cloisters Museum in NYC (a branch of The Met Museum) involves...
Scholarshipekim226 - Jan 11, 2012 / — -
|'mathematics and science' - GMS Scholarship subjects which one has excelled
7 - You would have been fine! but its okay,there's many other fish for you in the sea. Thanks for your...
Scholarshipmisskkf - Jan 10, 2012 / misskkf - Jan 11, 2012
|'Peer pressure connotation' - ASPIAF Scholarship Personal and Educational Goals
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Jan 10, 2012 / misskkf - Jan 11, 2012
|(Liberal art / China life / a Puzzle cube) - Skidmore essays
3 - Your second essay is a great topic, because diversity certainly influences outlook. But it can be better improved through...
Scholarshipanpan - Jan 10, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|'a middle class Indian family' - Story about my life
Scholarshipaakashneeraj - Jan 10, 2012 / — -
|'Ecuadorian culture' How has your Hispanic heritage influenced your academic goals?
3 - really? I thought writing about the environmental issue in ecuador would demonstrate how my goal to study environmental law...
Scholarshipemptythoughts - Jan 9, 2012 / emptythoughts - Jan 9, 2012
|'sociology degree' - personal statement for US Scholarship
2 - I have faced problems in attaining education that are probably not typical to students pursuing a linear academic path....
ScholarshipUsman Ahamd - Jan 9, 2012 / Essay_Writer - Jan 9, 2012
|"I can do" mindset - I deserve this scholarship ! [Scholaships for Japan intl uni]
5 - "...It's like if I used to eat with an ordinary spoon then someone offered me a silver spoon. Thus,...
Scholarshipciiins - Jan 3, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 9, 2012
|'my enthusiasm for medicine and science' - Application for NIH internship.
ScholarshipPots - Jan 8, 2012 / ericao2010 - Jan 8, 2012
|'interactive clubs at my school' - subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipessay1234 - Jan 3, 2012 / essay1234 - Jan 8, 2012
|'money management skills' - on gap in formal education
Scholarshipmorrm23 - Jan 8, 2012 / Essay_Writer - Jan 8, 2012
|'the ending of the month Ramadan' - a leadership experience, how and why? Gates.
3 - Intention of the leader should be sincere, serve the community righteously despite of all hardship . I volunteered...
ScholarshipDesirePerfectio - Jan 8, 2012 / zanzy - Jan 8, 2012
|'new places and new people' - About Self Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipdustygalaxy - Jan 7, 2012 / dustygalaxy - Jan 8, 2012
|'volunteer at Doctors Hospital Nursery Department' - Ron Brown Scholarship
4 - I think you could be more descriptive of the activities you did over the summer. The Baby Department job...
ScholarshipCollegeconfused - Jan 7, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 7, 2012
|'my goal of becoming a doctor' - short and long-term goals. Are some of them related?
3 - Thank you so much! Do you do grammatical editing? If you do I would really appreciate it (:. This...
ScholarshipNana12 - Jan 7, 2012 / Nana12 - Jan 7, 2012
|'Mozart, Schumann, Bach, Chopin' - Gates Scholars Essay
NEW - Discuss the subjects with which you had difficulty. What factors do you believe contributed to your difficulties? How have...
Scholarshipfrazzledbrain - Jan 6, 2012 / — -
|(work=travel / animals / life options) Why is a college education important to you?
2 - I liked intro #1 ... just change up the wording a little bit on the first 3 sentences... combine...
Scholarshipearynnm - Jan 5, 2012 / castro17 - Jan 6, 2012
|'English' - Gates Millennium Scholars Prompt: Subjects You Excel in.
3 - The essay is very well thought out. You shouldn't talk about how you don't like a subject because you...
Scholarshipmayeoli21 - Jan 4, 2012 / earynnm - Jan 5, 2012
|'I asked my mother about my father' - experience that affected you -SCSU scholarship
ScholarshipRAN13 - Jan 5, 2012 / RAN13 - Jan 5, 2012
|Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship
6 - They also asked to describe my personal characteristics and achievements, here is a test and look forward to your...
Scholarshipvalsaviera - Jan 4, 2012 / valsaviera - Jan 5, 2012
|'Chemistry' - Essay on achievement of which you are proud (ISU)
3 - I thought you talked about the experience too much instead of about yourself. For example, you talked about what...
ScholarshipSydney23 - Jan 2, 2012 / chowkiepowder - Jan 4, 2012
|'human right law' - Open Society Foundation Scholarship
Scholarshipapidjakfar - Dec 22, 2011 / apidjakfar - Jan 3, 2012
|USEFP essays - how to start? (interest / objectives / goals / reasons)
2 - First you want to pick a topic that you feel strongly about. That always makes your writing better. Make...
Scholarshiptaimoor47 - Jan 2, 2012 / Pottergirl19 - Jan 2, 2012
|More Pain Mightier Gain .. ! (NTU Scholarship Essay)
Scholarshipabhi12ravi - Jan 2, 2012 / avantika joshi - Jan 2, 2012
|'geometric settings' - fulbright resarch essay
2 - This is an extremely long sentence. You should work on its structure a bit. And you don't "confront with"...
Scholarshipsrks - Dec 30, 2011 / AbsoluteBliss - Dec 30, 2011
|Hispanic Scholarship Fund extracurricular activity essay: Giving back to the HYI
7 - Also do not use contractions, those really hurt your essay. Furthermore, like the previous have already stated, talk a...
ScholarshipTheN3094 - Dec 29, 2011 / Chopeful - Dec 29, 2011
|Goal in life/medicine scholarship essay
ScholarshipRyanVi16 - Dec 28, 2011 / desertautumn - Dec 29, 2011
|(involvment and contributions to your community) BILL GATES MILLENIUM SCHOLARSHIP
5 - very good and unique, I haven't read any quite like it. Despite some comma errors, the topic was very...
Scholarshipsoufianelaouad - Dec 28, 2011 / ashatan - Dec 28, 2011
|'raised speaking english and spanish' Discuss the subjects in which you have excelled
Scholarshipcbrizuel - Dec 28, 2011 / Prettywings - Dec 28, 2011
|"Live" - An Essay for a Scholarship demonstrating financial need and leadership.
2 - Overall I think it is a good essay but maybe include how your fathers wrath made you feel. The...
ScholarshipWhatsthatjacket - Dec 27, 2011 / Rene00 - Dec 27, 2011
|'Before I came to America..' - the need and how to contribute to living environment
5 - You really need to go over your grammar because you still need to express your story while also proving...
Scholarshipsantoryuu - Dec 25, 2011 / blynnleon - Dec 27, 2011
|Essay about the importance of completion post secondary program
Scholarshipsantoryuu - Dec 27, 2011 / SeniorMel - Dec 27, 2011
|My continuing struggles and achievements as an Artist and College student - Essay
2 - Your responses really answer the scholarship questions. Your troubles and personality comes through....
Scholarshipkmurray1 - Dec 27, 2011 / SeniorMel - Dec 27, 2011
|ESSAY on Entrepreneurial Leadership Discovery Program
ScholarshipRamy_elking - Dec 27, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 27, 2011
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