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|Goals Influenced by Hispanic Hertiage
2 - It's a great essay but it will be even better if you add more personality. That is: instead of...
Scholarshipkmarie21 - Dec 13, 2011 / astua1 - Dec 13, 2011
|mathematics - for NTU Scholarships
3 - Wow thank you for your comment! Well, actually this is my first time making a formal essay so I...
Scholarshiptiwskii - Dec 11, 2011 / tiwskii - Dec 12, 2011
|Summary of Education and Proffessional Goals- For SMART Scholarship
2 - This is very simple ...just express your intention of you doing this course, how do you contribute to community...
Scholarshipghoff360 - Dec 3, 2011 / isai - Dec 7, 2011
|'My Hispanic heritage helped me' - academic/career short-term and long-term goals
NEW - If you could please take the time to read my essay, and help me correct any grammatical errors, change...
ScholarshipSolis07 - Dec 3, 2011 / — -
|'a science dealing with increasing income or production' - scholarship economics
ScholarshipRiddi - Dec 1, 2011 / Riddi - Dec 2, 2011
|"Hispanic heritage" + 'volunteered at the hospital' Hispanic Scholarship
ScholarshipSea Squared6504 - Dec 1, 2011 / — -
|Playing for my school's volleyball team - Elkin Scholarship
2 - Just a error- Instead of writing "The other trainers never judged me only accepted me." Make it like -...
ScholarshipTreysongz12 - Nov 29, 2011 / Mjkaur - Nov 29, 2011
|'Uncle Hub's advice to Walter' - Johnson Scholarship at Washington and Lee
Scholarshipkatmandu0071 - Nov 25, 2011 / Chidinmap - Nov 29, 2011
|Swiss Government Scholarship-Motivation Letter from a passionate mathematician
7 - canis89, I like the revision. There is a lot more clarity. I have further constructive feedback. Applicants are asked...
Scholarshipcanis89 - Nov 22, 2011 / crystal70k - Nov 29, 2011
|'continuously standing up' - Compose "Page 87" autobiography
9 - Hi Lavender_Pham, I apply using the online app "Fall 2012 Undergraduate Program" for int'l student from here global.vcu.edu/students/admissions/forms.html ...
Scholarshiplavender_pham - Nov 15, 2011 / iruchan - Nov 27, 2011
|'To grow in my spiritual strength' - BYU SHORT essay: Describe a setback
2 - I think overall it is a pretty good essay. You could add more to the second paragraph though, I...
Scholarshipmarengunnell - Nov 26, 2011 / cjwsk12 - Nov 27, 2011
|'I can obtain adequate professional resources and personal powers' -why Ohio State
Scholarshipantipower - Nov 24, 2011 / kathyxtrieu - Nov 27, 2011
|'conscientious, articulate, motivated' -educational aspirations + future career goals
3 - I think it sounds good but maybe instead of having two short-term goals, you should keep 1 short-term goal...
ScholarshipJennifer12 - Nov 26, 2011 / shanicem13 - Nov 26, 2011
|"The price of success is hard work" - Radilogy Technology Scholarship
Scholarshiplitlloper - Nov 25, 2011 / Jennifer12 - Nov 25, 2011
|Hispanic Scholarship Fund- Recent Academic Challenge: "Success"
2 - As I analyzed the possible motives for my low grade, one motive began to blatantly stand out. Academics...
ScholarshipAU0594 - Nov 23, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 24, 2011
|'Criminal Justice and F.B.I.' - Page 87 of my autobiography
ScholarshipLeonjohnson18 - Nov 23, 2011 / angelahwangg - Nov 23, 2011
|'Hispanic heritage' - Hispanic Scholarship Fund Essay
2 - AWESOME! you are no doubt going ton get the scholarships, this was a really great essay. I and most...
ScholarshipAU0594 - Nov 21, 2011 / dmatano360 - Nov 21, 2011
|How I demonstrated team-oriented leadership through my involvement with campus based
NEW - My Leadership Roles and Community Involvements In honing my skills and giving back to the community, I have played...
ScholarshipChigozie - Nov 21, 2011 / — -
|'I am a member of a non-profit organisation' - Extracurricular activities
2 - I don't really understand the purpose of the first paragraph - the descriptions are very vague, and overall it...
Scholarshipicekiss90 - Nov 20, 2011 / denofthieves - Nov 20, 2011
|Student Leaders Must Build Sense of Community
2 - i think is important to understand what characterize a leader. You can easily take examples from the story. The...
Scholarshipjsorrentino4 - Nov 19, 2011 / hyperione - Nov 19, 2011
|'The world is made up of people of all cultures' - OHIO STATE MSP Scholarship
Scholarshipruckaisawesome - Nov 16, 2011 / ruckaisawesome - Nov 19, 2011
|'Not always an honor roll student' - I had to explain why i deserve this scholarship
2 - your telling them that you need the money mostly for your own enjoyment rather then helping you with college....
Scholarshipkorange - Nov 15, 2011 / lambo1013 - Nov 18, 2011
|'Marketing management intrigues me' - Study Objectives Essay - Scholarship
NEW - ESSAY #1: STUDY OBJECTIVES (MAXIMUM 500 WORDS) *REQUIREDWrite a clear and detailed description of your study objectives, and give...
Scholarshipicekiss90 - Nov 18, 2011 / — -
|'Science, the nature and its essence' - cancer studies research interests
3 - thanks for your reply... actually my first draft was such as mess ... i can see so many mistakes...
Scholarshipsarakarim - Nov 14, 2011 / sarakarim - Nov 17, 2011
|Significant financial need and a history of overcoming adversity
3 - Thank you...
Scholarshipisabelafellas - Nov 13, 2011 / isabelafellas - Nov 17, 2011
|'dreamed of making a difference in this world' - Scholarship Application
4 - Yes that is a bit tricky, you just have to relate your love for English to Political Science, maybe...
Scholarshiptheblues - Nov 14, 2011 / Nnennej - Nov 16, 2011
|How to put this idea in better words (about why is like this subject)
Scholarshipppoonamk - Nov 16, 2011 / ppoonamk - Nov 16, 2011
|"Bless you child" - Vanderbilt Merit Scholarship essay
ScholarshipMellyLove - Nov 16, 2011 / MellyLove - Nov 16, 2011
|Human rights (Freedom Riders: Then & Now) scholarship
NEW - This is a rough draft so please be harsh: 2011 Human Rights Theme - Freedom Riders: Then & Now...
ScholarshipAU0594 - Nov 14, 2011 / — -
|The government determines the financial needs - grant essay
2 - You could add to that that grants are different than loans, as they are given to the student without...
ScholarshipSriraam - Nov 5, 2011 / karamsoft - Nov 10, 2011
|'to obtain a job in the field of Nurse Anesthesia' - my goals would be reached
2 - If you were to look up the definition of scholarship, it would be something along the lines of "a...
Scholarshiphamboudreaux - Nov 6, 2011 / kaunosielu - Nov 8, 2011
|Benefits and Responsibilities of Controlling Noxious Weeds on Private Property
NEW - Here is my Essay for a Noxious Weeds scholarship. The Prompt is Benefits and Responsibilities of Controlling Noxious Weeds...
ScholarshipHymas283 - Nov 8, 2011 / — -
|'goal for my family and My Retirement goal' - academic goal and interests
NEW - My personal goal I would like to divide into different categories First professional goals, goal for my family and...
Scholarshipseedeth - Nov 7, 2011 / — -
|'Small town and my English teacher' - Biographical Essay
NEW - ESSAY #2: BIOGRAPHICAL ESSAY (MAXIMUM 500 WORDS) Please describe a major event or an important person that you believe...
Scholarshipicekiss90 - Nov 7, 2011 / — -
|Essay on how my Hispanic heritage has influenced my goals- feedback
2 - Your essay is well written, but you don't include anything about how your Hispanic heritage influenced your goals....
Scholarshipnatsheriff - Nov 3, 2011 / Prettywings - Nov 4, 2011
|'a great honor for me' - Why you should be chosen for this scholarship
3 - Thank you Amanda, I really appreciate your reply. If those are the two only mistakes then I must...
ScholarshipLemar - Nov 3, 2011 / Lemar - Nov 4, 2011
|Help with finishing up a Scholarship Essay for the Cybersecurity Program
2 - During my senior year in high school, I made a promise to my dying grandfather, that I would forever...
Scholarshipjperez2011 - Oct 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 3, 2011
|Fellowship essay (Mechanical engineering) - KAUST
2 - These, among other things, stimulated my desire to pursue mechanical engineering for my undergraduate studies. Aside from the...
Scholarshipoladapo - Oct 30, 2011 / EF_Susan - Nov 1, 2011
|How scholarships help me to achieve my future goal? In field Social Science.
ScholarshipLkphonestar - Oct 30, 2011 / sonia yousaf - Oct 30, 2011
|'Science has proven to the world' - scholarship essay for "Chemistry"
NEW - I want to prepare my statement of purpose for chemistry (undergraduate) and for scholarship too, but i don't know...
ScholarshipJomfah - Oct 29, 2011 / — -
|'Rome wasn't built in a day' - Essay on Career goal
3 - I took education as my main priority neglecting all short cuts to success - this is too general, be...
ScholarshipChigozie - Oct 10, 2011 / Rashad - Oct 29, 2011
|'becoming a professional petroleum engineer' essay for a Halliburton Scholarship
2 - Wow, you have a great essay! good intro, good ending, and it also brags about yourself in a good...
ScholarshipDan90 - Oct 23, 2011 / yihrenliu - Oct 23, 2011
|My future career plans in biochemistry- scholarship prompt
Scholarshipjessjess8877 - Oct 23, 2011 / manishchandra - Oct 23, 2011
|Research/study objectives for geologist scholarship
4 - geolmine Oh all right my bad, sorry. But I think you still write about what inspired you and and...
Scholarshipgeolmine - Oct 14, 2011 / ali_alqaisy93 - Oct 23, 2011
|'my life and the transition' - A&M Personal Essay - Scholarship Application
2 - Each year outlines a memory I can remember very clearly.andnow that I reflect back, each year hasWhen I analyse...
ScholarshipPauly Wally - Oct 21, 2011 / dumi - Oct 22, 2011
|Doctors: how furthering your education beyond high school will help your dreams.
2 - That's why my biggest dream has always been to become an OB/GYN. My choice in particular, is that...
ScholarshipZandraW - Oct 18, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 19, 2011
|"to more accurately reflect the diversity of America" - Too Professional? Peace Corp
5 - Kevin, I appreciate your insight. Your comments and criticism are well warranted and I do see your point...
Scholarshipjangelique - Aug 25, 2011 / jangelique - Oct 18, 2011
|'my medical residency period' - to apply for a scholarship in MSc of Public Heath
7 - Thank you , I really appreciate your comments, this is the first time for me in writing a personal...
Scholarshipammarissam - Oct 16, 2011 / ammarissam - Oct 16, 2011
|'to become a teacher' what inspires you to pursue a post-high school education & why?
3 - I was inspired to become a teacher when i was in elementary school. My teacher mrs. Nai Nai Aye...
Scholarshipvung - Oct 16, 2011 / vung - Oct 16, 2011
|refugee resettlement - how to start my scholarship essay?
Scholarshipvung - Oct 8, 2011 / vung - Oct 16, 2011
|(learning english) - write about a time when "hard work" paid off
Scholarshipmadilla - Sep 25, 2011 / AnnaBanan - Oct 15, 2011
|'Leadership skills and volunteering at Civil Air Patrol' personal
ScholarshipJennygracia - Oct 12, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 13, 2011
|Quest For Excellence Awards Scholarship- Young Physician's Award
2 - So, how can I recall joyous moments from my childhood, if the cells retaining these memories have died and...
ScholarshipAU0594 - Oct 10, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 13, 2011
|'I've been fairly good at Math' - the subjects in wich you have excelled
Scholarshiplupita - Oct 9, 2011 / Leah_Writer - Oct 12, 2011
|I excelled in AP Bio and AP Chem' - Gates millenium scholarship
NEW - Discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled. To what factors do you attribute your success? ...
Scholarshipnico246810 - Oct 12, 2011 / — -
|'offspring of working professionals' - First Generation Award Essay for Questbridge
2 - Your essay properly answers the prompt. Moms are great sources of inspiration, aren't they? While I was reading your...
ScholarshipAU0594 - Oct 10, 2011 / Rechy - Oct 11, 2011
|A short bio to help fundraise for students to go abroad...
3 - Don't say hello. As the first in my family determined to enroll in college and graduate with a...
ScholarshipBelle15 - Sep 30, 2011 / missmex - Oct 9, 2011
|'called weird many, many times' - Questbridge scholarship
2 - Author Jeanette Walls once stated that every successful person has undergone some tremendous hardship that they adapted to and...
Scholarshipmarina_can - Oct 7, 2011 / EF_Susan - Oct 8, 2011
|Need a short essay in micro, macro economics, or econometrics for scholarship
2 - Hi there. essay forum is indeed a very advantageous platform ,but first of all,you need to jot down some...
Scholarshipnukekeba - Oct 4, 2011 / Ankita - Oct 4, 2011
|'My secret: Success does not come easy' - why interest in this scholarship
4 - Hmm I think its pretty good.. I am working on the edit, meanwhile why don't you post the corrected...
Scholarshipmiobox89 - Sep 29, 2011 / arsene_g2000 - Oct 1, 2011
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