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|"a maturing point" (experience/achievement/risk) - Scholarship Program essay
ScholarshipGio93 - Mar 29, 2010 / Gio93 - Apr 2, 2010
|Scholarship interview essay to introduce myself
ScholarshipdemonLEMON - Apr 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
|Accounting Scholarship Professional Goals Essay
Scholarshipliangiee - Apr 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
|Natural Hazards conference attendance scholarship - looking for clarity
Scholarshiporchid227 - Mar 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
|The Big Picture: Community Service essay
5 - Thanks Kevin! These are good tips, I've spruced the essay up a little and turned it in. Thanks again!...
ScholarshipTimMill - Mar 28, 2010 / TimMill - Apr 1, 2010
|"finding advanced technologies that work on safe energy"-Statement of Objectives
ScholarshipDana123 - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
|describe my career aspiration and personal attributes
2 - Hi Sunisa, I think your topic should depend on your strategy. If you were the reader, how would...
ScholarshipcH0co - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2010
|The Mandalay Bay Shark Reef trip, scholarship prep essay
Scholarshipaustintaceous - Mar 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 29, 2010
|Community Influence Scholarship Essay; 'Coaching has greatly affected my life'
4 - This is fantastic! I think this essay clearly portrays not only your literary intelligence but also your warm-hearted compassion....
Scholarshipmariah - Feb 24, 2010 / hfox - Mar 25, 2010
|"my degree in actuarial science" - scholarship essay
3 - Hello Sakinah, Your essay inspiring me, and I thinks it's perfect. Maybe just a suggestion, be consistent in...
Scholarshipsakinah - Mar 20, 2010 / firmanq - Mar 24, 2010
|An exceptional achievement, essay for NUS undergrad scholarships
3 - ...on look out for opportunities. --- I really like your use of this phrase. It could be like a...
Scholarshipzendra - Mar 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 24, 2010
|Sports Scholarship Essay (What does basketball mean for me?)
4 - A mere kid' s game, or something more? ...racing through basketball courts , donning jerseys and feeling the euphoric...
Scholarshipthisismynewuser - Mar 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2010
|Research objective for PhD Scholarship in Material Chemistry
NEW - I am trying to write my Essay, but I am not really sure with the grammar. Please anybody help...
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|A brief autobiography (strengths and challenges, work experience, volunteering)
6 - his conveys a creative, confident personality... impressive stuff. A few years ago, I discovered that marketing is another...
Scholarshipkate86 - Mar 18, 2010 / yahyabluecat - Mar 20, 2010
|Multicultural Scholarship and how I helped the community.
4 - This paragraph needs more sentences. It needs a few examples, too. Right now it is incomplete. Write about...
Scholarshiptheonejosue - Mar 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|A career in Urban Redevelopment Authority (URA)
3 - have always been enjoying building things.--- This is a little awkward. How about this: have always enjoyed building things....
Scholarshipbilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|A scholarship to study Regional Planning, help in an essay to Master Program
Scholarshipborisfunes - Mar 16, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|My character and life event - scholarship character essay
Scholarshipqueensuri - Mar 16, 2010 / queensuri - Mar 18, 2010
|I'm interested in computer field. Scholarship essay.
5 - Hi friend, The content seems find. From your essay, I can feel your passion for Comp Science. Here...
Scholarshipconheomap - Feb 25, 2010 / bilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010
|"Once I have a dream" - An autobiography for exchange students scholarship
Scholarshipsmilely - Mar 13, 2010 / bilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010
|Mom, Guitar, Heritage -3 factors that have shaped me and changes to my community
2 - The one about your mom needs some concrete examples. Many people could write the same essay about their moms....
ScholarshipAllTimeLowYo - Mar 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2010
|My Biographical Statement and Proposed Program Plan in Game Development field
NEW - Hi, everyone. I, like others who post the threads in this forum, intend to apply for a grant of...
ScholarshipionSB - Mar 17, 2010 / — -
|"I excelled in my STPM exam" - NTU scholarship application
4 - Your essay is interesting and well written! I just found a few things; For fifteen years, I had...
ScholarshipGully - Mar 15, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 16, 2010
|indicate my educational & professional goals, describe my current & future plans
5 - FIRST ESSAY: I found another problem with the first one: I plan to first earn a BA in Biology...
Scholarshipqueensuri - Mar 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
|SOP for exchange students scholarship (COGNITIVE NEUROSCIENCE)
2 - I don't think this is right: are surrounded by a more elaborated environment. I think it has to be:...
Scholarshipsmilely - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 14, 2010
|role of women changing in lifetime, Why should i be awarded this scholarship?
ScholarshipWilmarie - Mar 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|OAS academic scholarship essay - 5-year plan to bring about change in your field
2 - The idea behind this project is to renew and modernize Arg entine sociology, dismantled in past decades by authoritarian...
ScholarshipGorila09 - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 9, 2010
|Intro for scholarship essay :My chosen field of study is English...because
2 - It eventually became my best friend, in which I shared all my secrets, opinions and thoughts, that just couldn't...
Scholarshipt1292 - Mar 7, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 8, 2010
|Why do you deserve this scholarship? serious attitude towards study
6 - Thank you very much, Kevin. At first, I thought showing my strong affection for the school a good thing...
ScholarshipAriel - Mar 2, 2010 / Ariel - Mar 4, 2010
|"Role in America" (advice,opinions, suggestions needed)
ScholarshipLuvdance16 - Mar 2, 2010 / Luvdance16 - Mar 3, 2010
|Help--Dyslexic, struggled with learning disabilities
3 - Kevin, Thank you so much for taking time to help me! I REALLY REALLY REALLY appreciate it. Yes,...
Scholarshipambajean - Jan 28, 2010 / ambajean - Feb 28, 2010
|"criminal justice field" - educational and career goals-7500 character limit
2 - You need raw material that you can turn into original ideas about law enforcement; do some web research. ...
Scholarshipjuancuevas92 - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 27, 2010
|Essay about Italian pride -scholarship
2 - Your essay is awesome, and definitely the best I've read of any essays containing the word 'pride'! I did...
Scholarshipshortyi3 - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 27, 2010
|"The customers" : Subway Part-Time Job/ Topic of Your Choice
4 - Thanks Kevin! I'm sending my application in on Monday, and hoping for the best. Hopefully I can make...
Scholarshipnotylerhere - Jan 10, 2010 / notylerhere - Feb 27, 2010
|I would try to take a similar route as James Rhio; Scholarship Essay
NEW - Modern Medicine and Cancer Healing I remember clearly the breakfast we had on the morning that my father...
Scholarshipmichaeldruiz - Feb 26, 2010 / — -
|Olshansky Award for Originality - Original Poem
2 - The poem is beautiful and profound; I'll comment on the essay! On the first day... Instantly I...
Scholarshipmariah - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|James Rhio O'Connor ("diagnosed with leukemia")
NEW - My Leukemia Illness Challenge I was diagnosed with leukemia when I was eleven years old. My parents decided...
ScholarshipAlma Rodriguez - Feb 26, 2010 / — -
|Linda Lorelle Scholarship Fund.
3 - Good, well you do seem to know what to write next, because this small hurdle REPRESENTS something. It...
Scholarshiplilangel1626 - Feb 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|Scholarship Question: Why Did you leave school, why are you coming back?
3 - ...expectations of my contemporaries.---- contemporaries is not the right word here. I think you could use "teachers" or "the...
Scholarshipafurgeson - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2010
|Scholarship letter for my high school's college scholarships- engineering
4 - To advocate for something is to speak on its behalf. You should write: I advocated opted for the...
ScholarshipAyshaya - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|Studying mathematics - trying to get a intership and need revise
3 - This would be more impressive if you specified which degree you want: ...to approach a degree with both the...
Scholarshipmahoganye07 - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|Info about activities - how to answer without making it into an activity list?
3 - Definitely not. They are asking for your "whole person" here. They want to know everything you have done....
Scholarshipchat - Feb 4, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|career as a Pharmacist, scholarship Essay
8 - In times where sickness fills the earth -perhaps a little overdramatic. :) Why do you feel you should...
Scholarshipyung - Feb 12, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|Coming up with ideas for diversity essay prompts (personal interest, diversity)
4 - yah, many people might write about that, but if you make your genuine-ness and passion come through, it will...
Scholarshipggc340 - Feb 15, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|Speech in Stockholm during Nobel Prize Oxford Scholarship:Course/Scholarship's impact
2 - Eighth grader for clarity, put these 2 together: My friends dreamed of becoming James Bond, but I envisioned...
Scholarshipdinhhoang0802 - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|"Still Dancing". A life is not important except for the impact it has on other lives
ScholarshipPOME3316 - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2010
|My eassay for master in inter trade law&finance. Is it good enough to apply for scholarship?
Scholarshipmyanne - Jan 24, 2010 / sineadkachroo - Feb 12, 2010
|Working with an autistic preschool boy, is it an OK subject to write about?
3 - Yes, it's excellent! You should read about special education reform, and google this: Special education inclusion That way,...
Scholarshipwoahhitschelsea - Feb 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 11, 2010
|When life throws you Hurdles, theres nothing to do but Leap
3 - Thank you so much for the insight! :) I turned in my paper... hope I get the scholarship. And...
Scholarshipchaotic_kiddo - Feb 3, 2010 / chaotic_kiddo - Feb 6, 2010
|Curiousity helps me learn quick - Scholarship Essay (Diversity)
2 - Since first grade, every year, I either had to retake the exam or passed only with pas sing grades....
Scholarshipconheomap - Feb 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|hispanic college fund essay; arrived in the US and seeing hope
6 - Always write it again! But who knows if it will be better. Inspiration is a tricky wave to catch....
Scholarshipmcuriel - Feb 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|Need help in ideas for financial aid scholarship
Scholarshipein - Feb 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|Positive impact in the world through your studies -How to analyse this question?
Scholarshipchat - Feb 2, 2010 / chat - Feb 3, 2010
|Weissman Scholars - A very important scholarship essay.
3 - I find your essay wonderfully refreshing! It's well structured and organized, as well as very inspiring. Good job!...
Scholarshiplimalex - Jan 28, 2010 / chaotic_kiddo - Feb 3, 2010
|An effective way to start a scholarship-knowledge, obstacles, and experiences
4 - Thank You...
ScholarshipCollege Bound - Feb 1, 2010 / College Bound - Feb 1, 2010
|Holidays: a time to celebrate or take precaution - Intellectual Topic Essay
4 - hello... I think you should change this sentence too : due to accidents on roads caused because of...
Scholarshipdilasha2010 - Jan 10, 2010 / niloo - Feb 1, 2010
|Essay about yourself and why you deserve a scholarship (PhD in Bio Science)
ScholarshipSyntrope - Jan 28, 2010 / Syntrope - Jan 30, 2010
|experiences in voluntary community service, my answers for scholarship questions
Scholarshipxoxo - Jan 25, 2010 / xoxo - Jan 30, 2010
|"to have a career that I enjoy doing" - What is your biggest personal concern?
2 - I think your first two sentences are too simple. Maybe you can cut them and make this your first...
Scholarshipryin2010 - Jan 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 29, 2010
|When I Was A Child--Personal Statement
3 - Oh shoot that's still in there! I mean to delete that because I had a few uneccessary sentences so...
ScholarshipJS2010 - Jan 27, 2010 / JS2010 - Jan 29, 2010
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