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|"Still Dancing". A life is not important except for the impact it has on other lives
ScholarshipPOME3316 - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2010
|My eassay for master in inter trade law&finance. Is it good enough to apply for scholarship?
Scholarshipmyanne - Jan 24, 2010 / sineadkachroo - Feb 12, 2010
|Working with an autistic preschool boy, is it an OK subject to write about?
3 - Yes, it's excellent! You should read about special education reform, and google this: Special education inclusion That way,...
Scholarshipwoahhitschelsea - Feb 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 11, 2010
|When life throws you Hurdles, theres nothing to do but Leap
3 - Thank you so much for the insight! :) I turned in my paper... hope I get the scholarship. And...
Scholarshipchaotic_kiddo - Feb 3, 2010 / chaotic_kiddo - Feb 6, 2010
|Curiousity helps me learn quick - Scholarship Essay (Diversity)
2 - Since first grade, every year, I either had to retake the exam or passed only with pas sing grades....
Scholarshipconheomap - Feb 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|hispanic college fund essay; arrived in the US and seeing hope
6 - Always write it again! But who knows if it will be better. Inspiration is a tricky wave to catch....
Scholarshipmcuriel - Feb 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|Need help in ideas for financial aid scholarship
Scholarshipein - Feb 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
|Positive impact in the world through your studies -How to analyse this question?
Scholarshipchat - Feb 2, 2010 / chat - Feb 3, 2010
|Weissman Scholars - A very important scholarship essay.
3 - I find your essay wonderfully refreshing! It's well structured and organized, as well as very inspiring. Good job!...
Scholarshiplimalex - Jan 28, 2010 / chaotic_kiddo - Feb 3, 2010
|An effective way to start a scholarship-knowledge, obstacles, and experiences
4 - Thank You...
ScholarshipCollege Bound - Feb 1, 2010 / College Bound - Feb 1, 2010
|Holidays: a time to celebrate or take precaution - Intellectual Topic Essay
4 - hello... I think you should change this sentence too : due to accidents on roads caused because of...
Scholarshipdilasha2010 - Jan 10, 2010 / niloo - Feb 1, 2010
|Essay about yourself and why you deserve a scholarship (PhD in Bio Science)
ScholarshipSyntrope - Jan 28, 2010 / Syntrope - Jan 30, 2010
|experiences in voluntary community service, my answers for scholarship questions
Scholarshipxoxo - Jan 25, 2010 / xoxo - Jan 30, 2010
|"to have a career that I enjoy doing" - What is your biggest personal concern?
2 - I think your first two sentences are too simple. Maybe you can cut them and make this your first...
Scholarshipryin2010 - Jan 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 29, 2010
|When I Was A Child--Personal Statement
3 - Oh shoot that's still in there! I mean to delete that because I had a few uneccessary sentences so...
ScholarshipJS2010 - Jan 27, 2010 / JS2010 - Jan 29, 2010
|a Program Aide in Regent West Adult Health Care Center - leadership experience
Scholarshipconheomap - Jan 25, 2010 / conheomap - Jan 29, 2010
|The internet is today's evolution
3 - The Internet is changing the world every day with newer, faster and better ways to do things online. ...
Scholarshiplibrasgurl - Jan 27, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 28, 2010
|Essay about leadership experience based on initiative
2 - Now I am currently serving as a coordinator at NYCSP, and this has been my role since September 2006....
Scholarshipwongtongsoup22 - Jan 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2010
|a speech on HIV/AIDS - a situation in which you have made a difference
2 - The steps towards the podium were probably the most challenging steps I had ever taken in High school, as...
Scholarshipthamusipuma - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010
|Travel to Europe - A significant opportunityand the impact it had on you
4 - I guess the only thing I can say is minimize excessive sentences, only say what need to be said....
Scholarshiplic12 - Jan 25, 2010 / jbd1992 - Jan 26, 2010
|being somebody constructive in the world - Why do I deserve this scholarship?
3 - I agree. Almacubana, you did not mention how you would make a good college student... Well, you did...
Scholarshipalmacubana - Jan 24, 2010 / happyhourman - Jan 24, 2010
|Lowe's: Converint to Ecofriendlyism
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|Scholarship essay - my main purpose/motivation for teaching English abroad
Scholarshipbrittdeno - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|The first Asian House representative in United Sates, McDonald Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipwhoau49 - Jan 19, 2010 / whoau49 - Jan 19, 2010
|To work for WHO or UNICEF - 250-400 words on my vision for the future
ScholarshipThinLizzie - Jan 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|The Internet: Today's Evolution or Tomorrow's Menace
3 - Our world today is characterized by efficiency -- from minor things, such as making coffee in the morning, to...
ScholarshipNisha170 - Jan 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|Contribute to homeland: Wesleyan University Freeman Asian Scholarship Essay!!
3 - This part is where you go wrong, I think. ow about changing this sentence to say this: Wesleyan...
Scholarshiphahahaha122 - Jan 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|The real reason behind my choice of Colorado College - CC Supplement
Scholarshipsalbazili - Jan 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|APIASF Scholarship- how you plan to help fulfill the needs of your community
NEW - In 500 words or less, please describe how you plan to help fulfill the needs of your community after...
Scholarshipkakashi1992 - Jan 18, 2010 / — -
|"the great gift of talent in English" - Gates Millenium Scholarship Essays
Scholarshipvfudo1 - Jan 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|"People helping people" Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipreina92 - Jan 12, 2010 / reina92 - Jan 18, 2010
|Ikea beds = hell (a time when you did something good alone)
Scholarshippalmtrees123 - Jan 17, 2010 / NTabachnik - Jan 17, 2010
|Racism, Injustice (others were treated unfairly)
4 - ...my grandmother asking me to stop at a store on my way down to purchase a package of instant...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2010
|My Challenge of being a Team Player (all kinds of sports) - scholarship essay
Scholarshipdanlee92 - Oct 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Jan 16, 2010
|Math, science - Subjects excelled.
4 - I like the thought you express in the first paragraph, but you use too many words to express it....
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|SOP for Scholarship (CS field)
4 - The essay seems to be lacking a personality. If you could include one story instead of the entire scope...
Scholarshipleonardo092 - Dec 26, 2009 / danlee92 - Jan 16, 2010
|Math: Essay about the subjects in which you excel or have excelled.
3 - There seems to be a little lack in voice in the essay. A more descriptive detailed story of how...
ScholarshipKenny Z - Jan 9, 2010 / danlee92 - Jan 16, 2010
|Medea from Jason and the Argonauts, Essay on One of the Mythological Characters
10 - Oh, ha ha... yeah, contributing is not really so much about being a skilled writer or knowledgeable grammarian......
ScholarshipEnvie - Jan 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|"the weights" - Bard College DSS Scholarship
NEW - Prompt: Write about a stimulating and enjoyable experience you have had in science, mathematics, or computing. This might be...
Scholarshipyf8651 - Jan 15, 2010 / — -
|3 adjectives to describe myself & how i will contribute it --brief essays
2 - I want to give back to others just as people have done for me, I am really enthusiastic about...
Scholarshipu1004h - Jan 15, 2010 / yf8651 - Jan 15, 2010
|Out of the Crowd
4 - He held his stare for what seemed like two minutes but felt more like two hours, though it probably...
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|Cancer - JAMES "RHIO" O'CONNOR MEMORIAL SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
NEW - Diagnosed with Cancer If I were faced with the same challenges that Rhio went through, having been told...
Scholarshipjcicchini - Jan 14, 2010 / — -
|Obstacles in my life (no father, sick mother, and diseases consuming my family)
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010 / tom8820 - Jan 13, 2010
|"The Cuban Refugee Musician" -- 250 word essay.
4 - Our differences helped me understand the commodities in which I indulge. in . Within me grew a second-hand...
ScholarshipFrydafly - Jan 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 12, 2010
|Leaders are made, not born - leadership experience essay
2 - It would strengthen your essay if you included examples of your interaction with others that helped your brother. You...
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 10, 2010 / linmark - Jan 11, 2010
|Commonapp essay - Encounter a beggar
Scholarshiphbrad8002 - Jan 4, 2010 / hbrad8002 - Jan 11, 2010
|Dual Enrollment Program - Courses that are difficult for me
2 - The sudden passion for history,(delete comma) kindled the research of my origins. DiscoveringI discovered that I came from...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 10, 2010 / ScatterBrain - Jan 10, 2010
|Long and short term goals (to be a pharmacist)
NEW - PROMPT: Discuss your short and long-term goals. Are some of them related? Which are priorities? Be specific in describing...
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 10, 2010 / — -
|Volunteering + Against Tabacco: Why my community is important to me?
2 - Although this rule is often broken, it is better not to start a sentence with a conjunction: And ...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 10, 2010
|Gates-unfair situation- I had a voice and I wanted it to be heard.
3 - Thank you for the suggestion. I can see where the teen rebellion comes into play, but the rest of...
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 8, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 9, 2010
|Leadership.Football, School, Family
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010 / chuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010
|Math and science - discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 6, 2010 / shaistak143 - Jan 8, 2010
|Long and short term goals (to become a world renowned doctor)
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010 / chuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010
|Essay in subjects in which you have excelled.To what factors do you attribute it
Scholarshiplic12 - Jan 7, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 8, 2010
|Subjects you've had difficulty with.
3 - Overall the essay didn't answer the prompt's underlying question. It started off very blantantly obnoxious for the reading to...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 7, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 8, 2010
|Gates Scholarship-An Unfair Experience
7 - You should conclude by emphasizing what the experience says about you, as in you believe in being fair and...
Scholarshipakil71192 - Dec 29, 2009 / badromance - Jan 7, 2010
|The Human Body: My Passion -- short essay.
2 - Captivating introduction! Love the details :) I think you need to clarify how your neighbor's small business/home opened your...
ScholarshipFrydafly - Jan 7, 2010 / CalLover - Jan 7, 2010
|Discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled. Your success?
Scholarshipmelisa814 - Jan 5, 2010 / limpbizkit - Jan 7, 2010
|SMU Hunt Scholarship Essay-- How should I start????
7 - Thanks Janson I appreciate the feedback. So I should start my essay with an ancedote about my leadership abililtes...
Scholarshipericao2010 - Jan 2, 2010 / ericao2010 - Jan 7, 2010
|scholarship: saving poverty housing
Scholarshippcvrz34g - Dec 29, 2009 / smallick13 - Jan 5, 2010
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