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|A leader is one who can encourage his team to move forward, solve the existing challenge. Chevening
3 - Idrees, you definitely have a strong leadership role here. In fact, you slipped into your leadership role when the...
Scholarshipidrees278 - Oct 8, 2018 / Holt - Oct 9, 2018
|STUDY PLAN to apply for scholarship - my desire to attend the Master's Degree Program in Management
4 - Thank for your comment, Holt. Actually, when I posted this essay, I had not finished it. But it was...
Scholarshipforsand007 - Sep 27, 2018 / forsand007 - Oct 8, 2018
|Essay about Leadership and influence for Chevening - Brasilian student
4 - @H@danacschubert Thanks for the help, I will review the structure. @Holt Thank you very much for the feedback....
Scholarshiplany83 - Oct 5, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 8, 2018
|Chevening major role in facilitating me to get adequate skills to use ICT innovation for development
3 - Ktabarwa, this is a good career plan but it doesn't really reflect how the DFID in your country can...
ScholarshipKROBERT - Oct 7, 2018 / Holt - Oct 8, 2018
|A good leader inspires people to have confidence in him/her, while a great leader... Chevening essay
4 - Duzaho, of the three presentations that you gave in this essay, the only one that clearly indicates your roles...
ScholarshipDuzaho - Oct 7, 2018 / Holt - Oct 8, 2018
|What means leadership & influence skills for me; my role as research and product development head
3 - thanks you so much for replying and highlighting what's wrong about this essay . i'm still working on this...
ScholarshipSUSANALI - Oct 5, 2018 / SUSANALI - Oct 7, 2018
|The Chevening programme - Leadership and influence essay
2 - Aram, this 250 word essay is not useful. It cannot help your application because your method if discussion is...
ScholarshipAramOmar - Oct 5, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|KGSP 2019 UG Application- "Why Korea?" (Embassy Track)
2 - Yong, please remove all instances or sentences where you plead for admission to the KGSP program. Groveling won't get...
Scholarshipyst2 - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|My goal is to be a serial entrepreneur, my interests lie in information technology and agriculture
2 - Babatunde, while you did justify the existing programs of the UK in Nigeria, you did not explain how your...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|Personal Statement for KGSP- Undergraduate - Media Communication major
2 - Hoang, you need to build up the first few paragraphs of this essay. The first paragraph deals with how...
Scholarshiphoanglinh - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|I am sincere and an ardent to excel my networking - Chevening Scholarship essay
3 - Janaki, this is a useless networking essay. It does not contain any reference to an actual working network and...
ScholarshipGautamj - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|I would like to be a connection between Korean and western world market
7 - The KGSP scholarship reviewer has a specific set of information that he requires to learn from you and about...
Scholarshipakmir - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|A description of professional background & current work, professional accomplishment, Why this work?
4 - Mar, you need to write about recent professional accomplishments. What you have written enumerates your academic accomplishments, which is...
ScholarshipKbMt - Oct 3, 2018 / Holt - Oct 4, 2018
|Personal Statement for KGSP2019 - Archaeology
NEW - I would like to apply Korean Government Scholarship Program 2019. Could you please comment and suggest about my personal...
Scholarshipssonnyson - Oct 4, 2018 / — -
|Leaders are made by hard effort, which is the price which all of us must pay to achieve any goal
3 - Olesea, you are over informing the reviewer in a negative manner. While you may think that offering a description...
ScholarshipOlesea_Bucos - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 3, 2018
|Leadership as an avenue to inspire and mentor others
3 - Doreen, you are not writing a job application cover letter. You are writing a leadership and influencing essay. Sadly,...
Scholarshipdfwm - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 3, 2018
|The size of your network is a pointer to your net worth. Networking Essay
2 - Babatunde, you have made very, very little, almost negligible changes to this essay from the original that you used...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Sep 30, 2018 / Holt - Oct 1, 2018
|Leadership is crucial to success, and it's not about position. Chevening "leadership" essay
3 - Babatunde, one way of improving your essay presentation is by presenting the quote from John Quincy Adams as a...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Sep 30, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|"Cutting My Own Hair" - National Merit Essay: Meaningful Experience
2 - You may want to lose the information in the parenthesis such as (No offense Dad) and (I wasn't). It...
Scholarshipericy135 - Sep 29, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|CHEVENING APPLICATION ESSAY- NETWORKING TOGETHER IS BETTER
2 - Ahmad, this is not a clear nor effective essay presentation. Your networking skills, development process, and usability does not...
Scholarshipahmdard - Sep 29, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|KGSP University Track - Tourism Business
3 - Hello, thank you for your advice. I am very appreciated. However, I got a review from a professional writer...
Scholarshiprafikatr - Sep 26, 2018 / rafikatr - Sep 29, 2018
|Starting my own clothing business - Leadership and Influence essay
5 - Thank you very much for your input. I will be taking your consideration and focus on showcasing my leadership...
Scholarshipruthmargaretha21 - Sep 27, 2018 / ruthmargaretha21 - Sep 28, 2018
|Chevening Scholarship Leadership Response - the potential to be a leader
3 - Clay, you are not really responding to the task requirement as indicated by the Chevening prompt. There is no...
Scholarshipdalmr885 - Sep 26, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|KGSP personal statement .. applying for second time after a rejection
6 - Nguyen, you only have one side of the A4 sized paper to write on. In order to properly present...
ScholarshipzaraSmart - Sep 9, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|I possess qualities of a good leader and I can prove it. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP QUESTION
3 - Abubakar, please remove the opening paragraph that relates to your definition of leadership. That is irrelevant to the essay...
Scholarshipsadiqadama - Sep 26, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|Competitive educational system - MY PERSONAL STATEMENT #2 FOR KGSP
5 - Hi. i have just read your essay and i have some opinion First, i agree with both comments above...
Scholarshiproykim - Sep 7, 2018 / Tranduyen - Sep 26, 2018
|Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5
Scholarshipjimjimnie - Sep 24, 2018 / jimjimnie - Sep 26, 2018
|Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?
3 - Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it doesn't...
ScholarshipYuchime - Sep 24, 2018 / Yuchime - Sep 25, 2018
|My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship
3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018 / Holt - Sep 24, 2018
|Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening
5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018 / Holt - Sep 23, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship by DAAD Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design
2 - hi ariel.. i just read your letter of motivation and compared it to the daad guidelines. they require you...
Scholarshiparielpvasconcelo - Sep 20, 2018 / ahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018
|I do my best to develop my network and communication skills for my professional career
6 - I can definitely relate to your feelings about writing these essays. Initially I had moments of "ups and downs"...
ScholarshipKing Ahmos - Sep 21, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 23, 2018
|Department of Energy Resources Engineering - KGSP/scholarship. Personal Statement
Scholarshipiamrmk - Sep 20, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
|Economics and Policy Development - Chevening Studying in UK Essay
3 - Well, your essay is ok and focused just avoid repetition such as ''I choose this course'' in all paragraphs,...
ScholarshipSutan Rajo Lelo - Sep 22, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
|Post-Career plan to strengthen ties between my country and the UK
2 - Nicole, try to find another angle to discuss in this essay aside from the natural calamity that devastated your...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 21, 2018 / Holt - Sep 22, 2018
|There are so many points that have made me influenced for applying in Korean government scholarship
NEW - Personal statement for KGSP What to include: - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Personal...
ScholarshipKylee - Sep 21, 2018 / — -
|CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders
2 - Ahmad, this is not really a leadership essay in the sense that Chevening is looking for. This does not...
Scholarshipahmdard - Sep 17, 2018 / Holt - Sep 21, 2018
|My life in a few words - KGSP - UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT .... HELP
3 - Alejandra, this essay is definitely too long for the size of paper that you are being asked to complete...
Scholarshipaleja2624 - Sep 20, 2018 / Holt - Sep 21, 2018
|Networking Skill as Powerful Weapon at Work_ Chevening Scholarship
2 - Sherly, this is an example of a competitive networking essay. It really showcases your national networking skills to a...
ScholarshipAnanta - Sep 19, 2018 / Holt - Sep 20, 2018
|Chevening Leadership and Influence essay - Establishing a cost-free learning center
4 - Go with the learning center since that is where your biggest accomplishments in terms of leadership and influencing. Bring...
ScholarshipLegecy - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
|University environment is a representation of our world.
2 - Nicole, you have written more than the 500 word maximum for this essay even without the mention of the...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
|Leadership and Influence - the special touch which leaves an impression inside of human soul
3 - @Holt ... Thanks so much for the review and your observations are duly noted and will be effected. Thanks...
Scholarshipattahdavid - Sep 13, 2018 / attahdavid - Sep 18, 2018
|An intriguing concept, theory, or topic you have explored; fascinated by geography
2 - Anthony, your essay is good, but lacking in terms of response to "How do you want to further explore...
Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|For me, the leadership isn't just a tittle but it is an ability to lead people to reach their goals
2 - Aju, this is definitely not going to be able to compete for a Chevening scholarship. The writing is weak....
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|Study in UK academic or professional experience and your plans for the future
2 - Aju, this is a Chevening study plan essay. This essay in its totality is not applicable because you are...
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|Embassy track - SCHOLARSHIP Personal Statement
4 - Shahriar, since you have a friend who is a KGSP passer, I thought you did not require my professional...
Scholarshipshahriar10 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|The context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations, and accomplished your successes
3 - Anthony, the essay is strong, but with a lot of grammatical errors that requires professional editing in order for...
Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
|"Senior Developer" - Chevening Leadership essay question draft answer
3 - Wafaa, this is not a leadership and influencing essay. This only a paragraph form of your resume. This is...
ScholarshipwAly - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
|Strong professional relationship building skills; respect to others and managing personal emotions
2 - Miguel, it appears to me that you accidentally titled this post "networking" when it is clearly a leadership and...
ScholarshipMiguel Pugliesi - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Trying to apply for the KGSP program - writing essay based on the guidelines below
4 - Nrayani, do not insult the intelligence of the Korean reviewer by downscaling your language. If you wish to be...
ScholarshipPhoenix91 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Networking is crucial to succesfully fulfilling my job duties. Chevening
2 - You need to rethink this essay. You are trying to overwhelm the reviewer with so much information that he...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|I was presented with the Achievement and Leadership award at graduation ceremony. Chevening essay
3 - Nicole, while I understand why you should be proud of every leadership and influencing experience that you have had...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 13, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Personal statement for Scholarship; Motivation, Family background, Experience, Activities, and Skill
NEW - Hi, I'm Nat Could you check my personal statement? study in the developed country - South Korea ...
Scholarshipmilenatnat - Sep 15, 2018 / — -
|As Chevening awardee, I will further enhance my networking skills and widen my circle
ScholarshipMHD - Sep 11, 2018 / MHD - Sep 14, 2018
|Mom's Motorola Razr and My Identity- Questbridge Scholarship Biographical Essay
3 - Aman, your aunt and uncle are not the one's applying for this scholarship. So why are they the focal...
ScholarshipMrBean1978 - Sep 13, 2018 / Holt - Sep 14, 2018
|One of my cardinal principles is influencing my immediate environment and my country at large
ScholarshipMayor1981 - Aug 30, 2018 / Mayor1981 - Sep 13, 2018
|Professional networking has become an integral to modern life-Chevening
3 - @Holt Oh thank you so much. this is the best thing for me this morning. I appreciate your time...
ScholarshipSsekyanzi - Sep 12, 2018 / Ssekyanzi - Sep 13, 2018
|Chevening Essay - Empathy and Vision as the core abilities for future leaders or influencers
3 - Hi Mary Rose @holt Thank you so much for your kind words and valuable feedback - all of which are very...
Scholarshipadrnknnths - Sep 11, 2018 / adrnknnths - Sep 12, 2018
|Leadership is totally mandatory if you want to be a great architect. CHEVENING
3 - Ana, as I keep telling the current crop of Chevening applicants, you are wasting the time of the reviewer...
ScholarshipMPAULINO55 - Sep 11, 2018 / Holt - Sep 12, 2018
|Looking forward to a promising career in development sector - Chevening Career Plan Question
2 - Shreya, you are missing the point. Your post study plan needs to show how your career plans will coincide...
ScholarshipShreya19 - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
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