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|It is not by luck or fate, credentials or experience that made me excel in everything I do
3 - thank you so much while am sorting ou the leadership essay can i send to you the other essays?...
ScholarshipASPIRINGCHEVENER - Oct 18, 2018 / ASPIRINGCHEVENER - Oct 18, 2018
|Career Plan for Development Issues - Chevening Essay
2 - The grammar of your essay is often imperfect but does not impede the understanding of the presentation. However, there...
ScholarshipAnanta - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 18, 2018
|My chosen courses - their degree programs work in any industry and are internationally diverse.
2 - Charles you have not written this essay properly. The first 2 paragraphs of this essay must reflect your academic...
Scholarshipcharlie12 - Oct 17, 2018 / Holt - Oct 18, 2018
|An impact (college application); Cite any cases in which you thought and/or made attempts in ways...
3 - Thank you very much for the helpful feedback Holt! I will try to improve my essay with the your...
ScholarshipMoody - Oct 16, 2018 / Moody - Oct 17, 2018
|A scenario in which you have needed to show leadership, how you approach this and the outcomes of it
5 - Henry, regardless of whether it is for Chevening or Mastercard, you cannot use such academic based references as the...
Scholarshiphenry15 - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|I'm a Russian journalist who is applying for Chevening Scholarship this year
Scholarshiplerour - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|Recruiter for overseas agencies - Chevening Network
3 - Radwa, the whole essay is soo superficial in representation to make any sort of impression on the Chevening reviewer....
Scholarshiprou - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|My commitment to Academics - Chevening Networking
3 - Tosin, this essay does not signify a currently working network on your part. While I understand that you could...
ScholarshipSolace - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|The desire to surround myself with wise people made had impact on my leadership and influence skills
3 - Awab, all of these information can be summed up into your character as a leader within one paragraph. The...
ScholarshipAwab - Oct 16, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
2 - Minh, your motivation letter is too long and is not really qualified as a motivational letter because you wrote...
Scholarshipminhkstn - Oct 15, 2018 / Holt - Oct 17, 2018
|God help Zimbabwe - help with my chevening leadershing and influence essay
7 - @Holt below is a revised version of my story Having kicked off my early childhood in the rural...
Scholarshipmillion talent - Oct 10, 2018 / million talent - Oct 17, 2018
|Why I want to study my courses in the UK?
2 - So.......what are the three courses and three universities that you have selected for your studies in the UK?...
ScholarshipRickyT - Oct 16, 2018 / terminal28 - Oct 16, 2018
|Leadership means that you keep learning all your life, gain experience and pass it to others
3 - Mahmoud these are not the kind of leadership roles that you should be presenting for assessment as a Chevening...
Scholarshipzaidon - Oct 15, 2018 / Holt - Oct 16, 2018
|Meeting new African people - What excites you. Mastercard Scholarship
2 - NWACHUKWU , simply being involved in social media campaigns for various causes and organizations does not prove a passion...
Scholarshiphenry15 - Oct 15, 2018 / Holt - Oct 16, 2018
|Leadership & Influence Question - Leadership is a life time journey
Scholarshipjojomel - Sep 18, 2018 / jojomel - Oct 16, 2018
|Applying my knowledge to provoke a socio-economic development for my country - career plan essay
Scholarshiplany83 - Oct 8, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 15, 2018
|Essay on my Leadership and influencing skills as part of requirements to win Chevening Scholarship
5 - First, you do not need to define the concept of leadership, they already know and make your writing tiring,...
ScholarshipAbumahfuz - Oct 14, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 15, 2018
|Building an anticorruption environment - Chevening Network Essay
ScholarshipFranGrosso - Oct 11, 2018 / FranGrosso - Oct 15, 2018
|The necessary platform to acquire the required knowledge and experience; Chosen courses essay
3 - Babatunde, you are not properly addressing the prompt requirements. The first paragraph of this essay should be based on...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Oct 14, 2018 / Holt - Oct 15, 2018
|Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay - Lead the older generation
Scholarshipmilomontang - Oct 10, 2018 / milomontang - Oct 14, 2018
|My plan: a faculty member at some well known University or a Research Scientist of an organization
5 - Thanks legacy I will look into your suggestions. I really appreciate your efforts Holt, I will rewrite another essay...
ScholarshipDuzaho - Oct 13, 2018 / Duzaho - Oct 14, 2018
|Sponsors and campaigns - Leadership essay for my Chevening application-Maedeh
3 - Maedeh, you have to delete this essay and write a totally new one. The target of your new essay...
Scholarshipmaedeh93 - Oct 13, 2018 / Holt - Oct 14, 2018
|Leadership essay - I want to climb up the ladder to lead toward the economic development
6 - Hello, the essay does not explain about leadership. Take the example of Call Mobility Pvt.Ltd, and explain what...
Scholarshipbarkha gupta - Oct 11, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 13, 2018
|Chevening Networking - Networking in solving a case
4 - Hi, you have a very strong essay. Review the contribution you will make to promote chevening in your country,...
Scholarshipruthmargaretha21 - Oct 11, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 12, 2018
|English language course application essay BS Computer Science
3 - What about this?? After the completion of my O-Level, I was unable to study further because of the...
Scholarshipsaniasttr - Oct 12, 2018 / saniasttr - Oct 12, 2018
|I aspire to inspire, motivate, connect and make an impactful change in my local community
3 - Saoussen, this is only a college level "Let me introduce myself" essay. It is not a competitive Chevening leadership...
ScholarshipsuzyG - Oct 11, 2018 / Holt - Oct 12, 2018
|My Post Career Plan when I come back to my Country - Kenya
4 - Your essay is way much more organised with a clear perspective than mine. I would say it is an...
Scholarshipdfwm - Oct 11, 2018 / barkha gupta - Oct 12, 2018
|The network I have built supports my career in the education sector
2 - Duzaho, your essay will be better served if you revise the content to focus solely on the depiction of...
ScholarshipDuzaho - Oct 11, 2018 / Holt - Oct 12, 2018
|MBA course in the UK - 'Networking' essay for Chevening
3 - Thi thi, this is a terribly personalized contact presentation (Which is different from a network) that does not show...
Scholarshipthithinwe - Oct 11, 2018 / Holt - Oct 12, 2018
|ONE OF THE REASON TO STUDY IN UK IS BECAUSE OF HARRY POTTER - CHEVENING
9 - Hello,widyawkl.Nice to meet you.Firstly,you should follow the outlines provided by Holt.Secondly,you can not express very clearly and impressively the...
Scholarshipwidyawkl - Oct 5, 2018 / thithinwe - Oct 11, 2018
|Chevening: "Helping Others" - Leadership and Influence Capabilities
ScholarshipKROBERT - Oct 10, 2018 / Holt - Oct 11, 2018
|Essay about my leadership skills. Leadership and Influence for Chevening Scholorship
2 - Khan, this is not a leadership essay. A call center agent or team leader pretty much does not have...
ScholarshipM Khan123 - Oct 10, 2018 / Holt - Oct 11, 2018
|Chevening - Three British Universities Course choice
6 - Hi @RU_IS i think you should carry some explanation from your background why you choose three different courses before...
ScholarshipRU_IS - Oct 8, 2018 / annisa2695 - Oct 10, 2018
|"young entrepreneurs" - for 'Career plan' essay for Chevening Scholarship
5 - Thank you so much Holt.I will revise soon.When I finish all rudimentary essays,I will revise all essays and I...
Scholarshipthithinwe - Oct 10, 2018 / thithinwe - Oct 10, 2018
|Leadership is about impact, influence and inspiration. Future leader with leadership skills.
2 - Ekene, what you related is a perfect topic for the networking essay as the situation presented a procurement problem...
ScholarshipItzKenny - Oct 10, 2018 / Holt - Oct 10, 2018
|Pursuing Master's degree to change from an epidemiologist into a Health Policy Analyst and Advocate
ScholarshipRU_IS - Sep 21, 2018 / RU_IS - Oct 10, 2018
|Nutrition education to prevent onset of chronic diseases- Chevening Essay (Leadership and Influence)
4 - @ lany83 noted! Will revamp my essay and include your suggestions :) @Holt I had a dilemma earlier...
Scholarshiptsuhandani - Oct 9, 2018 / tsuhandani - Oct 10, 2018
|Communication is an opportunity to understand and know better about an issue or community. Chevening
3 - From your introduction, you had already talked about DACAAR and what you do. You came up with the issue...
Scholarshipidrees278 - Oct 10, 2018 / Duzaho - Oct 10, 2018
|Coworkers and supervisors - Networking Skills Essay - Chevening Scholarship
3 - Omar, this is not a competitive essay. Your essay is lukewarm and simply, average. It does not stand out...
ScholarshipEngOmar09 - Oct 9, 2018 / Holt - Oct 10, 2018
|A genuine leader can be able to initiate a change and open the doors to better worlds. Scholarship
4 - Hello Holt,I really appreciate and am grateful to your very comprehensive suggestions and explaination.Now I have improved my essay...
Scholarshipthithinwe - Oct 8, 2018 / thithinwe - Oct 9, 2018
|My leadership was shaped since I was in school. Chevening
3 - Hai Holt, Thank you for the Comprehensive Explanation. So, I dont need to explain my organazational experiences during...
Scholarshipdinzein - Oct 5, 2018 / dinzein - Oct 9, 2018
|Why I've chosen these universities as my preferred universities? Study plan for scholarship
2 - Paul, this is a well written essay. However, you have included a social aspect to the presentation which is...
ScholarshipPaulscs - Oct 8, 2018 / Holt - Oct 9, 2018
|I realize that building and maintaining a network of contacts is fundamental to fulfill our dream
2 - Elaine, right now, your essay sounds more like you are just showing off your networking credentials. There is a...
Scholarshiplany83 - Oct 8, 2018 / Holt - Oct 9, 2018
|We can grow positively from the interaction or communication we engage with others - Chevening
3 - Duzaho, your networking experience is too localized. It is internal to your place of internship or work and your...
ScholarshipDuzaho - Oct 8, 2018 / Holt - Oct 9, 2018
|A leader is one who can encourage his team to move forward, solve the existing challenge. Chevening
3 - Idrees, you definitely have a strong leadership role here. In fact, you slipped into your leadership role when the...
Scholarshipidrees278 - Oct 8, 2018 / Holt - Oct 9, 2018
|STUDY PLAN to apply for scholarship - my desire to attend the Master's Degree Program in Management
4 - Thank for your comment, Holt. Actually, when I posted this essay, I had not finished it. But it was...
Scholarshipforsand007 - Sep 27, 2018 / forsand007 - Oct 8, 2018
|Essay about Leadership and influence for Chevening - Brasilian student
4 - @H@danacschubert Thanks for the help, I will review the structure. @Holt Thank you very much for the feedback....
Scholarshiplany83 - Oct 5, 2018 / lany83 - Oct 8, 2018
|Chevening major role in facilitating me to get adequate skills to use ICT innovation for development
3 - Ktabarwa, this is a good career plan but it doesn't really reflect how the DFID in your country can...
ScholarshipKROBERT - Oct 7, 2018 / Holt - Oct 8, 2018
|A good leader inspires people to have confidence in him/her, while a great leader... Chevening essay
4 - Duzaho, of the three presentations that you gave in this essay, the only one that clearly indicates your roles...
ScholarshipDuzaho - Oct 7, 2018 / Holt - Oct 8, 2018
|What means leadership & influence skills for me; my role as research and product development head
3 - thanks you so much for replying and highlighting what's wrong about this essay . i'm still working on this...
ScholarshipSUSANALI - Oct 5, 2018 / SUSANALI - Oct 7, 2018
|The Chevening programme - Leadership and influence essay
2 - Aram, this 250 word essay is not useful. It cannot help your application because your method if discussion is...
ScholarshipAramOmar - Oct 5, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|KGSP 2019 UG Application- "Why Korea?" (Embassy Track)
2 - Yong, please remove all instances or sentences where you plead for admission to the KGSP program. Groveling won't get...
Scholarshipyst2 - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|My goal is to be a serial entrepreneur, my interests lie in information technology and agriculture
2 - Babatunde, while you did justify the existing programs of the UK in Nigeria, you did not explain how your...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|Personal Statement for KGSP- Undergraduate - Media Communication major
2 - Hoang, you need to build up the first few paragraphs of this essay. The first paragraph deals with how...
Scholarshiphoanglinh - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|I am sincere and an ardent to excel my networking - Chevening Scholarship essay
3 - Janaki, this is a useless networking essay. It does not contain any reference to an actual working network and...
ScholarshipGautamj - Oct 4, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|I would like to be a connection between Korean and western world market
7 - The KGSP scholarship reviewer has a specific set of information that he requires to learn from you and about...
Scholarshipakmir - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 5, 2018
|A description of professional background & current work, professional accomplishment, Why this work?
4 - Mar, you need to write about recent professional accomplishments. What you have written enumerates your academic accomplishments, which is...
ScholarshipKbMt - Oct 3, 2018 / Holt - Oct 4, 2018
|Personal Statement for KGSP2019 - Archaeology
NEW - I would like to apply Korean Government Scholarship Program 2019. Could you please comment and suggest about my personal...
Scholarshipssonnyson - Oct 4, 2018 / — -
|Leaders are made by hard effort, which is the price which all of us must pay to achieve any goal
3 - Olesea, you are over informing the reviewer in a negative manner. While you may think that offering a description...
ScholarshipOlesea_Bucos - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 3, 2018
|Leadership as an avenue to inspire and mentor others
3 - Doreen, you are not writing a job application cover letter. You are writing a leadership and influencing essay. Sadly,...
Scholarshipdfwm - Oct 2, 2018 / Holt - Oct 3, 2018
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