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|a Program Aide in Regent West Adult Health Care Center - leadership experience
Scholarshipconheomap - Jan 25, 2010 / conheomap - Jan 29, 2010
|The internet is today's evolution
3 - The Internet is changing the world every day with newer, faster and better ways to do things online. ...
Scholarshiplibrasgurl - Jan 27, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 28, 2010
|Essay about leadership experience based on initiative
2 - Now I am currently serving as a coordinator at NYCSP, and this has been my role since September 2006....
Scholarshipwongtongsoup22 - Jan 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 27, 2010
|a speech on HIV/AIDS - a situation in which you have made a difference
2 - The steps towards the podium were probably the most challenging steps I had ever taken in High school, as...
Scholarshipthamusipuma - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010
|Travel to Europe - A significant opportunityand the impact it had on you
4 - I guess the only thing I can say is minimize excessive sentences, only say what need to be said....
Scholarshiplic12 - Jan 25, 2010 / jbd1992 - Jan 26, 2010
|being somebody constructive in the world - Why do I deserve this scholarship?
3 - I agree. Almacubana, you did not mention how you would make a good college student... Well, you did...
Scholarshipalmacubana - Jan 24, 2010 / happyhourman - Jan 24, 2010
|Lowe's: Converint to Ecofriendlyism
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|Scholarship essay - my main purpose/motivation for teaching English abroad
Scholarshipbrittdeno - Jan 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 21, 2010
|The first Asian House representative in United Sates, McDonald Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipwhoau49 - Jan 19, 2010 / whoau49 - Jan 19, 2010
|To work for WHO or UNICEF - 250-400 words on my vision for the future
ScholarshipThinLizzie - Jan 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|The Internet: Today's Evolution or Tomorrow's Menace
3 - Our world today is characterized by efficiency -- from minor things, such as making coffee in the morning, to...
ScholarshipNisha170 - Jan 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 19, 2010
|Contribute to homeland: Wesleyan University Freeman Asian Scholarship Essay!!
3 - This part is where you go wrong, I think. ow about changing this sentence to say this: Wesleyan...
Scholarshiphahahaha122 - Jan 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|The real reason behind my choice of Colorado College - CC Supplement
Scholarshipsalbazili - Jan 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|APIASF Scholarship- how you plan to help fulfill the needs of your community
NEW - In 500 words or less, please describe how you plan to help fulfill the needs of your community after...
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|"the great gift of talent in English" - Gates Millenium Scholarship Essays
Scholarshipvfudo1 - Jan 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 18, 2010
|"People helping people" Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipreina92 - Jan 12, 2010 / reina92 - Jan 18, 2010
|Ikea beds = hell (a time when you did something good alone)
Scholarshippalmtrees123 - Jan 17, 2010 / NTabachnik - Jan 17, 2010
|Racism, Injustice (others were treated unfairly)
4 - ...my grandmother asking me to stop at a store on my way down to purchase a package of instant...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2010
|My Challenge of being a Team Player (all kinds of sports) - scholarship essay
Scholarshipdanlee92 - Oct 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Jan 16, 2010
|Math, science - Subjects excelled.
4 - I like the thought you express in the first paragraph, but you use too many words to express it....
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 16, 2010
|SOP for Scholarship (CS field)
4 - The essay seems to be lacking a personality. If you could include one story instead of the entire scope...
Scholarshipleonardo092 - Dec 26, 2009 / danlee92 - Jan 16, 2010
|Math: Essay about the subjects in which you excel or have excelled.
3 - There seems to be a little lack in voice in the essay. A more descriptive detailed story of how...
ScholarshipKenny Z - Jan 9, 2010 / danlee92 - Jan 16, 2010
|Medea from Jason and the Argonauts, Essay on One of the Mythological Characters
10 - Oh, ha ha... yeah, contributing is not really so much about being a skilled writer or knowledgeable grammarian......
ScholarshipEnvie - Jan 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|"the weights" - Bard College DSS Scholarship
NEW - Prompt: Write about a stimulating and enjoyable experience you have had in science, mathematics, or computing. This might be...
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|3 adjectives to describe myself & how i will contribute it --brief essays
2 - I want to give back to others just as people have done for me, I am really enthusiastic about...
Scholarshipu1004h - Jan 15, 2010 / yf8651 - Jan 15, 2010
|Out of the Crowd
4 - He held his stare for what seemed like two minutes but felt more like two hours, though it probably...
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 15, 2010
|Cancer - JAMES "RHIO" O'CONNOR MEMORIAL SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
NEW - Diagnosed with Cancer If I were faced with the same challenges that Rhio went through, having been told...
Scholarshipjcicchini - Jan 14, 2010 / — -
|Obstacles in my life (no father, sick mother, and diseases consuming my family)
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010 / tom8820 - Jan 13, 2010
|"The Cuban Refugee Musician" -- 250 word essay.
4 - Our differences helped me understand the commodities in which I indulge. in . Within me grew a second-hand...
ScholarshipFrydafly - Jan 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 12, 2010
|Leaders are made, not born - leadership experience essay
2 - It would strengthen your essay if you included examples of your interaction with others that helped your brother. You...
Scholarshiplowcal - Jan 10, 2010 / linmark - Jan 11, 2010
|Dual Enrollment Program - Courses that are difficult for me
2 - The sudden passion for history,(delete comma) kindled the research of my origins. DiscoveringI discovered that I came from...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 10, 2010 / ScatterBrain - Jan 10, 2010
|Long and short term goals (to be a pharmacist)
NEW - PROMPT: Discuss your short and long-term goals. Are some of them related? Which are priorities? Be specific in describing...
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 10, 2010 / — -
|Volunteering + Against Tabacco: Why my community is important to me?
2 - Although this rule is often broken, it is better not to start a sentence with a conjunction: And ...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 10, 2010
|Commonapp essay - Encounter a beggar
3 - So overall, I don't think this says enough about you to be your personal statement. If you really want...
Scholarshiphbrad8002 - Jan 4, 2010 / twizzlestraw - Jan 10, 2010
|Gates-unfair situation- I had a voice and I wanted it to be heard.
3 - Thank you for the suggestion. I can see where the teen rebellion comes into play, but the rest of...
ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 8, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 9, 2010
|Leadership.Football, School, Family
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010 / chuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010
|Math and science - discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 6, 2010 / shaistak143 - Jan 8, 2010
|Long and short term goals (to become a world renowned doctor)
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010 / chuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010
|Essay in subjects in which you have excelled.To what factors do you attribute it
Scholarshiplic12 - Jan 7, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 8, 2010
|Subjects you've had difficulty with.
3 - Overall the essay didn't answer the prompt's underlying question. It started off very blantantly obnoxious for the reading to...
Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 7, 2010 / NT159 - Jan 8, 2010
|Gates Scholarship-An Unfair Experience
7 - You should conclude by emphasizing what the experience says about you, as in you believe in being fair and...
Scholarshipakil71192 - Dec 29, 2009 / badromance - Jan 7, 2010
|The Human Body: My Passion -- short essay.
2 - Captivating introduction! Love the details :) I think you need to clarify how your neighbor's small business/home opened your...
ScholarshipFrydafly - Jan 7, 2010 / CalLover - Jan 7, 2010
|Discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled. Your success?
Scholarshipmelisa814 - Jan 5, 2010 / limpbizkit - Jan 7, 2010
|SMU Hunt Scholarship Essay-- How should I start????
7 - Thanks Janson I appreciate the feedback. So I should start my essay with an ancedote about my leadership abililtes...
Scholarshipericao2010 - Jan 2, 2010 / ericao2010 - Jan 7, 2010
|scholarship: saving poverty housing
Scholarshippcvrz34g - Dec 29, 2009 / smallick13 - Jan 5, 2010
|Blackbird by the Beatles -- the work of music that inspired me. 250 word essay.
2 - Couple of pointers "among other things" VAGUE. I would just remove or put in a more specif bit...
ScholarshipFrydafly - Jan 3, 2010 / bilodeau54 - Jan 3, 2010
|Engineering and Mathematics, subjects in which you excel or have excelled.
Scholarshipxue - Dec 30, 2009 / xue - Jan 2, 2010
|Holt Endowed scholarship essay - VIETNAM CAN DO
Scholarshiptramchip - Dec 31, 2009 / tramchip - Dec 31, 2009
|Defeating the Silent Killer
NEW - Applicants must submit a personal statement that provides information about their community involvement, career goals and desire to contribute...
Scholarshiplowcal - Dec 30, 2009 / — -
|Scholarship: inspiration from faure
Scholarshippcvrz34g - Dec 28, 2009 / pcvrz34g - Dec 29, 2009
|"Anything is possible if you wish hard enough"Founder's scholarship to study abroad!
Scholarshipsymmetrybox - Dec 21, 2009 / meisj0n - Dec 22, 2009
|Study Abroad Essay (to become a psychologist)
Scholarshipjustin504 - Nov 10, 2009 / justin504 - Dec 18, 2009
|"My desire for flight" scholarship essay help wanted
3 - Thank you for your help. I am glad you found it interesting, but is it interesting enough to compel...
Scholarshipmelb - Dec 14, 2009 / melb - Dec 16, 2009
|The field of accounting + paid experience + scholarship action - Syracuse Essay
Scholarshiptmac - Dec 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 6, 2009
|Essay for Rice/Baylor Medical Scholars Program
4 - This was ten years ago and my motivations for pursuing medicine have changed -- but my aspiration to become...
Scholarshiptanyaann - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|Morrill Scholarship Essay for OSU
Scholarshipmicaredi - Nov 29, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
|Scholarship essay: community service activity Hurricane katrina
Scholarshippcvrz34g - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|I didn't earn my internship in Changzhou American International School easily
Scholarshipcamboj - Nov 24, 2009 / camboj - Nov 24, 2009
|Mathematics is my passion - Saint Louis University Scholarship Essay
3 - ^These are all singular but you talk about soccer and mathematics :/ I would imagine that this...
Scholarshipryman522 - Nov 19, 2009 / Llamapoop123 - Nov 20, 2009
|a surfeit of mortgages - BU Scholarship Essay
4 - Ah!! It will be better if you take a side, or say something assertive in that first paragraph! Don't...
Scholarshipraven - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
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