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|UW Honors/ Good citizenship comes from good scholarship
6 - Nice analysis! But, perhaps you can create a more interesting first sentece. If one does not fully understand the...
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|"Explore Whatever you wanted for one year" has really put me in a corner.
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|"Page 87" Autobiography-VCU Scholarship Essay
5 - I like to trim out the unnecessary phrases: Monkeys screeching, exotic birds chirping -- my early morning wake up...
Scholarshipst21 - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2009
|"Life is always full of T-junctions" - A scholarship essay: personal statement
4 - ...living as alternatives to farming. The number of abandoned fields are increasing, year after year . This scene creates...
Scholarshiphavan89 - Nov 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2009
|Guideline for Motivation Essay writing (graduate admission and scholarship)
3 - I think the most important thing is to write with your PURPOSE in mind. What is your purpose with...
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|Motivational essay for scholarship at cbs.
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|"Good citizenship comes from good scholarship." - U Washington,Seattle (Honors)
Scholarshippmr1692 - Nov 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
|$70,000 Scholarship essay - Community leadership/involvement
3 - I think you start off quite emotionally, so you need to explain more about that frightened patient. And yes,...
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|"fairly knowledgeable of the Bible" - Scholarship Essay
4 - I think that the revision is better from a purely objective essay perspective. If I were grading it, this...
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|What can you contribute to ___ essay? - alumni scholarship
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|Spiral - a scholarship application
4 - Thanks for the feedback. I see your point about the first sentence, in writing it I seem to have...
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|IvySelect Scholarship Personal Statement
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|The image of the young boy; Scholarship/ Lancaster
2 - Pretty good. Some minor stuff: This drew me to study economics because e conomists are able to explain...
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|How to get scholarship to study abroad? (architecture)
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|"A good teacher is like a candle" - Scholarship Essay
5 - ^You do not answer this very important part of the essay prompt well enough. Your essay rambles a...
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|"Perseverance is failing 19 times and succeeding the 20th." Rhodes Scholarship Essay
7 - Hello Simone, Once again i am extremely thankful and truly appreciate your efforts in this regard.Thank you ever...
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|Scholarship Essay: Passion for Computer Science
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|Scholarship essay, Challenges/factors in life that make you who you are
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|MSU Personal Statement and Scholarship Essay
4 - Actually, 36 is OK. Twenty, thirty, forty, and the like should be spelled out, but compound numbers like thirty-six...
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|Scholarship essay question help, your sense of humor, your personality
5 - Yes, that's a start. From this, we can learn that you are observant, empathic, and culturally sensitive. We also...
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|SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY:MY ASPIRATION CAREER AS A LAWYER.
3 - You might start by asking yourself what sort of lawyer you want to become. Civil? Criminal? If the former,...
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|Music scholarship personal statement
NEW - this is the personal stament for the master's degrees in music it's really long,,,,and i'm not sure about my...
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|MBA Scholarship Short Personal Statement
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|What should be the right format for my scholarship essay?
ScholarshipKumalein - Jul 5, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jul 10, 2009
|What should I do with the opening? (applying for a scholarship)
7 - Conciseness is good. That said, the best writers employ a variety of sentence lengths and structures to keep their...
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|medical doctor for a postgraduate scholarship
6 - If you like, your cover letter can simply ask for consideration and identify the attached application items. If, however,...
Scholarshipmarilyn007 - Jul 5, 2009 / EF_Simone - Jul 5, 2009
|I need some advice on ideas - "Why do I deserve the scholarship" 2
42 - ^ Sorry I don't really understand what you meant, but certainly I'm going for this schlarship (: I know...
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|'Bournemouth University has one of the most advance educations in the world' - BU scholarship essay
31 - thank you very much simone and sean... i really appreciate your help.. yes i've learnt a lot.. and definitely...
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|I have studied intensively, especially maths and physics for the past twelve years - scholarship
38 - "This scholarship will allow me focus on a career that no other university in Vietnam can do." Um, I...
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|Scholarship Essay on How High School Sports Influenced you
8 - Congratulations! Don't forget to spread the joy by helping others with their scholarship or admissions essays!...
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|Scholarship Essay: Graduate Education in Chemical Engineering
Scholarshipcalyx - May 28, 2009 / calyx - Jun 1, 2009
|Personal Essay - Something I've learned through a personal experience
6 - Great essay. I love the way you cross-cut your experience learning the bass guitar with your volunteer experience. The...
ScholarshipTheAnswer - May 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
|"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay
8 - Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter your message....
Scholarshipmishmon - May 24, 2009 / EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
|Contributions to the Field of Sonography
10 - Guys, I wanted to thank all of you millions! I have received the scholarship. Could not have done it...
Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 22, 2009 / fuzzy - May 16, 2009
|Scholarship Essay - My Perseverance Goal
8 - Your answer is excellent. Good job. It can't have been easy cutting down that much when you had so...
Scholarshipbabydoll - Apr 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
|The Scholarship Jacket
3 - "Throughout the course of life, individuals work towards a goal to reap its benefits. This reward is self explanatory...
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|My own engineering firm; Scholarship (Educational Goals)
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|Scholarship Essay - Effect of Presidential Election
4 - Yeah, don't use the forum quite that way. It should not be a resource the enable students to avoid...
Scholarshipcali - Apr 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
|Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future
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|What is the biggest obstacle that have had to overcome in Life?
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|Samoan Govt Scholarship - Information Technology Course
4 - Up at the top, you said to me, "I really appreciated." That's a common mistake, but you are supposed...
Scholarshipambster - Mar 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
|Expanding my knowledge; Scholarship (the United World Colleges)
6 - "This college offers me many different opportunities and resources to take the road of success." You might want to...
Scholarshipstefan - Mar 25, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 28, 2009
|Scholarship application essay for review (UK university)
4 - Working at this forum, I have something in common with admissions officers. I see enough of these essays to...
ScholarshipKhalil - Mar 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
|I hopefully graduate suma cum laude in Cinematography
5 - For the sake of making that first paragraph well-structured, I think you should find a way to add one...
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|The final input came from my brother-in-law, cardiologist - why did you choose this career?
Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 7, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
|NUS Scholarship App Essay - Achievements & academic interests
3 - My interests in economics, business and finance have been long standing. Since youth , I have always been particularly...
Scholarshipkids_jessy - Mar 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
|Explain why you feel you merit consideration as an applicant for an award or scholarship
Scholarshipmolzeeee - Mar 1, 2009 / sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
|Career Goals Essay for scholarship -- Love of numbers leads to accounting
NEW - I need help with a scholarship essay... I need to know what one thinks of this essay.. What can...
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|Philip A. Hart Scholarship
ScholarshipJohnBabyDoe - Mar 14, 2009 / isgluska - Mar 15, 2009
|'The perfect way of voicing my opinion' scholarship essay (everyone has an opinion)
3 - Thanks so much for the feedback and peer-editing, it really helped, and yep it's for questbridge, so wish me...
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|"Education is an admirable thing" - Scholarship Essay
3 - The pain of discipline was tough, at times, but it was more welcoming than the pain of regret I...
Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
|In my own words: Why is a scholarship important to you?
Scholarshipneonnelson - Mar 1, 2009 / neonnelson - Mar 10, 2009
|Scholarship Essays - Volunteer job and Education. (Deadline March 09)
8 - The dream sequence was really very well done -- you should be proud of it. Good job, and good...
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|Scholarship Personal Statement (my dream of becoming a doctor)
9 - Just remember that you need to convey the idea that you desperately need the scholarship while simultaneously showing the...
Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
|Scholarship Essay - degree vs a positive contribution to society
Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
|Scholarship Essay, a love of writing and education
4 - Your writing involves a high level of diction, which is good, and general grasp of grammar and appropriate academic...
Scholarshipmckyle - Feb 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
|Scholarship application essay - demonstrating outstanding ability to lead
3 - No, don't trash the first part! But get rid of that weak first sentence. Then, start by telling: ...
Scholarshipsweethypnotic - Feb 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
|Scholarship essay, person I admire (my dead Uncle)
6 - Ha ha, I was going to say that is a cool idea, because the most influential person could indeed...
Scholarshipsuehatesyou - Feb 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 8, 2009
|Short write-up on internship application Qn
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|Scholarship Essay: education and experience at OIT and my goals.
3 - You have a fairly strong first draft here. Revising for conciseness is always a good idea. Of course, that...
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