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GKS-U Personal Statement for Industrial Engineering Major; build an effective and efficient industry

3 - @cosmojays Try to remove " I need " or " I want " instead use this "accomplish", don't be...

Scholarshipcosmojays - Aug 18, 2021 / shreyasrivastava - Aug 30, 2021
Fascination with Korean culture and psychology - personal statement for KGSP - Psychology major

3 - @Arisama Try to be professional writer don't get immersed in portraying yourself IT will sound them rude as far...

ScholarshipArisama - Aug 18, 2021 / shreyasrivastava - Aug 30, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship, agriculture major

6 - @Maeve you should write it like professional not emotional. tell them about your talent and capacity sell yourself because...

ScholarshipMaeve - Aug 24, 2021 / shreyasrivastava - Aug 30, 2021
Being a leader has been my passion in life - Chevening Scholarship essay

NEW - Chevening Scholarship essay on Leadership skills and Influence Being a leader has been my passion in life and...

ScholarshipTJ13 - Aug 28, 2021 / — -
I can't wait to challenge myself. PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP/GKS UNDERGRADUATE 2022

3 - Thank you so much for checking my essay! I'm going to fix my essay right now....

Scholarshipodereyn - Aug 23, 2021 / odereyn - Aug 24, 2021
POTENTIAL NETWORKING - it opens up opportunities for international collaboration; CHEVENING ESSAY

2 - This presentation is more geared towards referrals rather than network building. While a referral is a simple networking method,...

Scholarshipieywa - Aug 21, 2021 / Holt - Aug 22, 2021
Recommendation letter for a student specialized in electronics - undergraduate GKS Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thanks for your advice @Holt...

ScholarshipYoona - Aug 18, 2021 / Yoona - Aug 19, 2021
GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT - Architectural Engineering Major

2 - The reviewer wishes to get to know the applicant through lien own words. The constant use of citations in...

ScholarshipTitannxx - Aug 16, 2021 / Holt - Aug 17, 2021
Nutrition scholarship - Strength and Weakness Essay

2 - The first strength is too simple to represent a notable skill. That presentation is also one that is common...

Scholarshipnauliani - Aug 15, 2021 / Holt - Aug 16, 2021
The role of Local Government to Develop Local Industries

3 - Hello Holt, thank you very much for your review, I really appreciate it....

Scholarshipveron1k4 - Dec 21, 2020 / veron1k4 - Aug 15, 2021
Sharing Knowledge Could Help Efficiency At Work - Leadership and Influence Essay for Chevening

3 - @Holt Thank you so much sir for the feedback, actually it's my real draft. I will revise mine and...

Scholarshipieywa - Aug 13, 2021 / ieywa - Aug 14, 2021
GKS - U 202x Biology Philippines

2 - Reminder: There is no such thing as a practice application essay. The applicant has used her one free essay...

Scholarshiprukki_pazz - Aug 11, 2021 / Holt - Aug 12, 2021
GKS-U 2022 Personal letter - applying to this program to get a chance to learn Korean

2 - Since the applicant is already employed full-time, there is a great chance of this application being rejected since the...

Scholarshiplemonadelemon - Aug 11, 2021 / Holt - Aug 12, 2021
GKS-U 2022 essay; language study plan

3 - Thank you so much for reviewing my essay and giving me some nice tips. I will immediately get back...

Scholarshipwinter pill - Aug 10, 2021 / winter pill - Aug 11, 2021
Medicine and Healthcare - [Australia Awards] How did you choose your proposed course and institution

2 - Remove the ranking references of the universities. Do not indicate a first or second choice either. The applicant must...

Scholarshipmipsydibbles - Aug 10, 2021 / Holt - Aug 11, 2021
GKS U 2022, RUNN FOR A BETTER LIFE, MY BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION'S ESSAY

3 - @Holt Thank you soo much for your response, I will try my best to fix it...

Scholarshipjanuaryy - Aug 9, 2021 / januaryy - Aug 10, 2021
GKS Scholarship (Personal Statement) P.H.D program for Mathematics

3 - Hey, I think you have to tell about your family's background more and "If I speak about my experience...

Scholarshipmanzoorahmed - Aug 1, 2021 / odereyn - Aug 9, 2021
GKS U 2022 - Personal Statement for computer science

3 - @Holt Hello, I changed my essay and revised some parts. Can you give your opinion?...

Scholarshiphonokame12 - Aug 1, 2021 / honokame12 - Aug 7, 2021
Just thirty-six percent of women own small businesses. Personal statement KGSP undergraduate

2 - For starters, reviewers do not admire any student whose motivation for studies was influenced by a fictional movie character....

Scholarshipmuffin - Aug 3, 2021 / Holt - Aug 5, 2021
KGSP Personal Statement - Graduate Program - Applied Linguistics

2 - The total presentation is highly verbose and yet, contains improperly structured sentences and paragraphs. The presentation needs to be...

Scholarshipagnyuhtod - Jul 30, 2021 / Holt - Jul 31, 2021
Commonwealth split site scholarship developmental impact 2021

2 - Revise the paragraph presentations. The current 2nd paragraph has a far more interesting hook than the existing first paragraph....

Scholarshipgarkalatul - Jul 30, 2021 / Holt - Jul 31, 2021
LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN FOR GKS-U (3 PAGES)

3 - @Holt Thank you a lot! So the only thing I need to add might be "get TOPIK Level 1...

Scholarshiptamxdd123 - Jul 30, 2021 / tamxdd123 - Jul 30, 2021
Development essay for the next commonwealth scholarship window 2022-2023

3 - Thanks @Holt for the feedback and suggestions...

ScholarshipMullah - Jul 28, 2021 / Mullah - Jul 29, 2021
GKS Personal Statement for Environmental Engineering - "dreaming bigger"

6 - Hi, I think it is too much. You should to check and follow the requirement. Good luck!...

Scholarshipnoxious19 - Jul 8, 2021 / vikedarliyasi - Jul 22, 2021
THE OPPORTUNITY TO GRAB WITH BOTH HANDS - GKS IN MEDIA AND COMMUNICATION PERSONAL STATEMENT

3 - @Holt Hey I saw what all you have suggested and I appreciate that but can I have one to...

Scholarshipsimranmavi03 - Jul 16, 2021 / simranmavi03 - Jul 17, 2021
Application Essay for United World College (2022-2024) - personal statement

2 - The writer has not responded to the prompt at all. The information provided is only cut and paste information...

Scholarshipabhi2312 - Jul 8, 2021 / Holt - Jul 9, 2021
Scholarship application essay for a Masters in Global Health Sc and Epidemiology

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback....

Scholarshipketu2 - Jun 28, 2021 / ketu2 - Jun 30, 2021
Turning Points in My Life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement

2 - The scholarship application and appropriate written interview requirements will not be available until September - October. The information requirements...

Scholarshipukh_nisa - Jun 29, 2021 / Holt - Jun 30, 2021
GKS-U SCHOLARSHIP /STUDY PLAN - LANGUAGE COURSE/

5 - Your essay has many errors so I think you should try to write a new one with clear grammar....

Scholarshipdxqos - Jun 24, 2021 / Harinn - Jun 27, 2021
GKS U scholarship application - to innovate for business and economics sectors in Indonesia

2 - This essay is confusing to read due to grammatical inaccuracies. Though the essay does its best to respond to...

Scholarshipkeyshara - Jun 23, 2021 / Holt - Jun 25, 2021
Study Plan for GKS-G Scholarship - Study Plan - Computer Science Undergraduate

3 - @Holt Thank you Very much for your opinion...

Scholarshipjunhao820 - Jun 20, 2021 / junhao820 - Jun 20, 2021
Agriculture and Pest Management - Personal statement for commonwealth scholarship

2 - Save for some researched information, this essay is devoid of any actual content that relates to the given prompts....

ScholarshipNana_Kwabena - Jun 18, 2021 / Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting.

2 - While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more...

Scholarshipducklaconvit - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Personal Statement for apply GKS-U 2022 - Dept. of Nuclear Engineering

3 - @Holt Thank you for your review. I'll be back to you with the new personal statement in the next...

ScholarshipChanihyuck - Jun 3, 2021 / Chanihyuck - Jun 10, 2021
Battling against cancer - Research interest for a PhD application

2 - You need to balance the discussion between 3 aspects: - Your research interest - The potential importance of...

Scholarshipayuhutami - May 31, 2021 / Holt - Jun 1, 2021
Elevate Mental Health Awareness Scholarship

3 - In my opinion, the entire story has yet to justify your decision of becoming a nurse. I think it...

Scholarshipsjplumphippos - May 28, 2021 / ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
Australia Award Scholarship for Master of Architecture - proposed course and institution choice

2 - This is not a competitive presentation. You sound like you are writing a personal statement than a professional motivation....

Scholarshipjhatesnakeu - May 29, 2021 / Holt - May 30, 2021
IMSISS 2020 Personal Statement - Scholarship declined

2 - Please do not think or believe that you were not considered for the scholarship based on a weak motivation...

ScholarshipJourneyman - May 28, 2021 / Holt - May 29, 2021
South Korea is developed technologically - GKS-U Personal statement review

3 - @Holt Oh, sorry I didn't mentioned earlier but this essay is from last year's application. We were instructed to...

ScholarshipDeanRuno - May 25, 2021 / DeanRuno - May 28, 2021
WHY DID YOU PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION - AAS MASTER OF PUBLIC HEALTH

2 - Immediately connect this statement to dentistry. Most applicants for this come from medical health fields so it is...

ScholarshipVi_Dar - May 27, 2021 / Holt - May 27, 2021
AAS Scholarship: Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - Master of Public Policy

2 - Which is? You don't need to discuss it in detail here as you will do that in the...

Scholarshipannisar - May 26, 2021 / Holt - May 27, 2021
Reasons for choosing Korea as study abroad destination

4 - You fail to respond to the prompt properly. You need to explain why South Korea attracts you as a...

Scholarshipmelseonnn - May 23, 2021 / techmind20 - May 26, 2021
Plan After Study - Posco Asia Fellowship

3 - Try to breakdown your plans into three parts: short-term, mid-term, and long-term plan. Short term plan is the goal...

ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 23, 2021 / Ulaai - May 26, 2021
AAS - Why did you choose this - Economic Growth

2 - Your reasons for wanting to pursue higher studies are purely research based. It would help if you could offer...

Scholarshipimsyw - May 25, 2021 / Holt - May 25, 2021
I was not selected and I want to know why! | Personal statement of KGSP/GKS 2021

4 - In my opinion, the first paragraph of your essay could have been more unique. "Clean buildings, fantastic scenery, ..."...

Scholarshipapiw - May 21, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
Renewable energy - Study goal - Posco Asia Fellowship

6 - Just learning is not a valid study goal. What is the goal and professional application of your research? What...

ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 18, 2021 / Holt - May 23, 2021
Why Master of International Sustainable Tourism Management as a graduate program in Australia? AAS

2 - Huh? You never mentioned what that was. You better offer a clearer professional motivating factor. You should...

Scholarshipshy2shine - May 22, 2021 / Holt - May 22, 2021
Pharmacobiochemistry and environmental biochemistry; Study objective for Fullbright students program

2 - Restate this part to create a global impact on this field of study. The scholarship gives weight to...

Scholarshipimaoakpe - May 20, 2021 / Holt - May 21, 2021
Essay for a medical 'PAINWEEK' conference scholarship

2 - The essay should lose the "We" references since this in an individual rather than group application. The reference to...

Scholarshipgpatama - May 20, 2021 / Holt - May 21, 2021
When Angklung being the Learning Instrument in Europe (Motivation Letter for applying PETaL EMJMD)

3 - @Holt okay, thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it...

Scholarshipmad_amran - May 20, 2021 / mad_amran - May 20, 2021
Starting a business - AAS Scholarship Questions

3 - thank you for your advice...

Scholarshippkla - May 19, 2021 / pkla - May 19, 2021
MSMEs Development - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? (AAS)

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback I totally get your point Will revise accordingly...

Scholarshipsaritasph - May 17, 2021 / saritasph - May 19, 2021
AAS Scholarship - Contribution to solving problems

2 - Work on presenting your work background first. Establish how or what your observations wire that led to the research...

Scholarshiphoangnam - May 18, 2021 / Holt - May 18, 2021
Life is only a chance - Personal Statement for GKS (Global Korea Scholarship)

3 - @Holt Hi, thankyou in advance for giving me a response. Actually I wrote this essay for GKS Undergraduate Program....

Scholarshipvidyainjiela - May 14, 2021 / vidyainjiela - May 16, 2021
Artificial intelligence engineer - Essay for bachelor's degree scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I agree with you . But they asked me in another paragraph to...

Scholarshipyesmin - May 14, 2021 / yesmin - May 15, 2021
THE REPLY FOR AAS ESSAY - MY THREE PRACTICAL EXAMPLES AND POTENTIAL CONSTRAINTS

4 - @Holt thank you very for your feedback....

Scholarshipmiumiu18 - Apr 26, 2021 / miumiu18 - May 13, 2021
The Ministry of Finance - STUDY OBJECTIVE FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM

2 - Your study/research objective is limited to your local career path alone. As a Fulbright scholar, your main objective should...

Scholarshipgonzforever - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
AAS Supporting Statement - Master of Urban Design and Master of Urban Planning

2 - Start the essay by introducing your academic background and relevant work experience. Do not make that information selective based...

ScholarshipJeffrisip - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 8, 2021
AAS Application Supporting statement - justify postgraduate study in transportation choice

2 - Use the opening paraghap to explain your work related reasons for choosing these courses. That means, you will need...

Scholarshipputri famelia - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
The reason why I choose the Public Health course

4 - @Holt thank you for your feedback. it is very helpful...

Scholarshipkurulu - Apr 15, 2021 / kurulu - May 6, 2021

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