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|The size of your network is a pointer to your net worth. Networking Essay
2 - Babatunde, you have made very, very little, almost negligible changes to this essay from the original that you used...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Sep 30, 2018 / Holt - Oct 1, 2018
|Leadership is crucial to success, and it's not about position. Chevening "leadership" essay
3 - Babatunde, one way of improving your essay presentation is by presenting the quote from John Quincy Adams as a...
Scholarshipbtoguntade - Sep 30, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|"Cutting My Own Hair" - National Merit Essay: Meaningful Experience
2 - You may want to lose the information in the parenthesis such as (No offense Dad) and (I wasn't). It...
Scholarshipericy135 - Sep 29, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|CHEVENING APPLICATION ESSAY- NETWORKING TOGETHER IS BETTER
2 - Ahmad, this is not a clear nor effective essay presentation. Your networking skills, development process, and usability does not...
Scholarshipahmdard - Sep 29, 2018 / Holt - Sep 30, 2018
|KGSP University Track - Tourism Business
3 - Hello, thank you for your advice. I am very appreciated. However, I got a review from a professional writer...
Scholarshiprafikatr - Sep 26, 2018 / rafikatr - Sep 29, 2018
|Starting my own clothing business - Leadership and Influence essay
5 - Thank you very much for your input. I will be taking your consideration and focus on showcasing my leadership...
Scholarshipruthmargaretha21 - Sep 27, 2018 / ruthmargaretha21 - Sep 28, 2018
|Chevening Scholarship Leadership Response - the potential to be a leader
3 - Clay, you are not really responding to the task requirement as indicated by the Chevening prompt. There is no...
Scholarshipdalmr885 - Sep 26, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|KGSP personal statement .. applying for second time after a rejection
6 - Nguyen, you only have one side of the A4 sized paper to write on. In order to properly present...
ScholarshipzaraSmart - Sep 9, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|I possess qualities of a good leader and I can prove it. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP QUESTION
3 - Abubakar, please remove the opening paragraph that relates to your definition of leadership. That is irrelevant to the essay...
Scholarshipsadiqadama - Sep 26, 2018 / Holt - Sep 27, 2018
|Competitive educational system - MY PERSONAL STATEMENT #2 FOR KGSP
5 - Hi. i have just read your essay and i have some opinion First, i agree with both comments above...
Scholarshiproykim - Sep 7, 2018 / Tranduyen - Sep 26, 2018
|Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5
Scholarshipjimjimnie - Sep 24, 2018 / jimjimnie - Sep 26, 2018
|Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?
3 - Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it doesn't...
ScholarshipYuchime - Sep 24, 2018 / Yuchime - Sep 25, 2018
|My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship
3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018 / Holt - Sep 24, 2018
|Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening
5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018 / Holt - Sep 23, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship by DAAD Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design
2 - hi ariel.. i just read your letter of motivation and compared it to the daad guidelines. they require you...
Scholarshiparielpvasconcelo - Sep 20, 2018 / ahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018
|I do my best to develop my network and communication skills for my professional career
6 - I can definitely relate to your feelings about writing these essays. Initially I had moments of "ups and downs"...
ScholarshipKing Ahmos - Sep 21, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 23, 2018
|Department of Energy Resources Engineering - KGSP/scholarship. Personal Statement
Scholarshipiamrmk - Sep 20, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
|Economics and Policy Development - Chevening Studying in UK Essay
3 - Well, your essay is ok and focused just avoid repetition such as ''I choose this course'' in all paragraphs,...
ScholarshipSutan Rajo Lelo - Sep 22, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
|There are so many points that have made me influenced for applying in Korean government scholarship
NEW - Personal statement for KGSP What to include: - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Personal...
ScholarshipKylee - Sep 21, 2018 / — -
|CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders
2 - Ahmad, this is not really a leadership essay in the sense that Chevening is looking for. This does not...
Scholarshipahmdard - Sep 17, 2018 / Holt - Sep 21, 2018
|My life in a few words - KGSP - UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT .... HELP
3 - Alejandra, this essay is definitely too long for the size of paper that you are being asked to complete...
Scholarshipaleja2624 - Sep 20, 2018 / Holt - Sep 21, 2018
|Networking Skill as Powerful Weapon at Work_ Chevening Scholarship
2 - Sherly, this is an example of a competitive networking essay. It really showcases your national networking skills to a...
ScholarshipAnanta - Sep 19, 2018 / Holt - Sep 20, 2018
|Chevening Leadership and Influence essay - Establishing a cost-free learning center
4 - Go with the learning center since that is where your biggest accomplishments in terms of leadership and influencing. Bring...
ScholarshipLegecy - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
|University environment is a representation of our world.
2 - Nicole, you have written more than the 500 word maximum for this essay even without the mention of the...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
|Leadership and Influence - the special touch which leaves an impression inside of human soul
3 - @Holt ... Thanks so much for the review and your observations are duly noted and will be effected. Thanks...
Scholarshipattahdavid - Sep 13, 2018 / attahdavid - Sep 18, 2018
|An intriguing concept, theory, or topic you have explored; fascinated by geography
2 - Anthony, your essay is good, but lacking in terms of response to "How do you want to further explore...
Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|For me, the leadership isn't just a tittle but it is an ability to lead people to reach their goals
2 - Aju, this is definitely not going to be able to compete for a Chevening scholarship. The writing is weak....
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|Study in UK academic or professional experience and your plans for the future
2 - Aju, this is a Chevening study plan essay. This essay in its totality is not applicable because you are...
Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|Embassy track - SCHOLARSHIP Personal Statement
4 - Shahriar, since you have a friend who is a KGSP passer, I thought you did not require my professional...
Scholarshipshahriar10 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
|The context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations, and accomplished your successes
3 - Anthony, the essay is strong, but with a lot of grammatical errors that requires professional editing in order for...
Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
|"Senior Developer" - Chevening Leadership essay question draft answer
3 - Wafaa, this is not a leadership and influencing essay. This only a paragraph form of your resume. This is...
ScholarshipwAly - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
|Strong professional relationship building skills; respect to others and managing personal emotions
2 - Miguel, it appears to me that you accidentally titled this post "networking" when it is clearly a leadership and...
ScholarshipMiguel Pugliesi - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Trying to apply for the KGSP program - writing essay based on the guidelines below
4 - Nrayani, do not insult the intelligence of the Korean reviewer by downscaling your language. If you wish to be...
ScholarshipPhoenix91 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Networking is crucial to succesfully fulfilling my job duties. Chevening
2 - You need to rethink this essay. You are trying to overwhelm the reviewer with so much information that he...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|I was presented with the Achievement and Leadership award at graduation ceremony. Chevening essay
3 - Nicole, while I understand why you should be proud of every leadership and influencing experience that you have had...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 13, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
|Personal statement for Scholarship; Motivation, Family background, Experience, Activities, and Skill
NEW - Hi, I'm Nat Could you check my personal statement? study in the developed country - South Korea ...
Scholarshipmilenatnat - Sep 15, 2018 / — -
|As Chevening awardee, I will further enhance my networking skills and widen my circle
ScholarshipMHD - Sep 11, 2018 / MHD - Sep 14, 2018
|Mom's Motorola Razr and My Identity- Questbridge Scholarship Biographical Essay
3 - Aman, your aunt and uncle are not the one's applying for this scholarship. So why are they the focal...
ScholarshipMrBean1978 - Sep 13, 2018 / Holt - Sep 14, 2018
|One of my cardinal principles is influencing my immediate environment and my country at large
ScholarshipMayor1981 - Aug 30, 2018 / Mayor1981 - Sep 13, 2018
|Professional networking has become an integral to modern life-Chevening
3 - @Holt Oh thank you so much. this is the best thing for me this morning. I appreciate your time...
ScholarshipSsekyanzi - Sep 12, 2018 / Ssekyanzi - Sep 13, 2018
|Chevening Essay - Empathy and Vision as the core abilities for future leaders or influencers
3 - Hi Mary Rose @holt Thank you so much for your kind words and valuable feedback - all of which are very...
Scholarshipadrnknnths - Sep 11, 2018 / adrnknnths - Sep 12, 2018
|Leadership is totally mandatory if you want to be a great architect. CHEVENING
3 - Ana, as I keep telling the current crop of Chevening applicants, you are wasting the time of the reviewer...
ScholarshipMPAULINO55 - Sep 11, 2018 / Holt - Sep 12, 2018
|Looking forward to a promising career in development sector - Chevening Career Plan Question
2 - Shreya, you are missing the point. Your post study plan needs to show how your career plans will coincide...
ScholarshipShreya19 - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
|Chevening Essay - Question one - Leadership
2 - Nada, this essay is too unimpressive for a Chevening leadership and influencing essay. It is not very appropriate for...
Scholarshipwin92dy - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
|Leadership and influence means to me making a positive change and a lasting impact on people
2 - Ruona, you don't sound like you need this scholarship. Why do I say that? You can manage to run...
Scholarshipgracefoundme - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
|CHEVENING Leadership essay - Turning around one of the largest Geothermal development project
4 - Thanks a lot for the feedbacks Holt, RU_IS on your feedback.. Will certainly tweak the essay accordingly....
Scholarshipessaytesting - Sep 8, 2018 / essaytesting - Sep 10, 2018
|What engineering means to me - pursuing success in Korea (mechanical engineering field)
3 - hello. your essay is quite smooth and almost all the topics are covered. I think it could be better...
ScholarshipPaulscs - Sep 8, 2018 / zaraSmart - Sep 9, 2018
|Chevening Scholarship Networking Question - I have grown as a professional
3 - Shreya, remove all references to LinkedIn within your essay. That is not considered a real network as there are...
ScholarshipShreya19 - Sep 8, 2018 / Holt - Sep 9, 2018
|Trust, honesty, hard work - CHEVENING NETWORKING ESSAY
2 - Daniel, the requirement for the Chevening Networking essay is as follows: Chevening is looking for individuals with strong...
Scholarshipdanielsaps - Sep 7, 2018 / Holt - Sep 8, 2018
|Chevening Networking Essay - High-trust Relationships for Ever Lasting Networking
2 - Bayu, please stop defining your understanding of terms and referencing your college education at this point in your application....
Scholarshipimbws - Sep 7, 2018 / Holt - Sep 8, 2018
|My aim is to produce innovative technologies that would fulfill people`s needs. SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
3 - Avoid overly dramatic presentations such as having your grandmother withhold food until you spoke to her in Russian to...
Scholarshipnilu228 - Sep 6, 2018 / Holt - Sep 7, 2018
|My network include several politicians; members of Congress and ministers, as well as public figures
3 - @valeriavbv I think you have to focus on one or two experiences and be more detail, rather than only...
Scholarshipvaleriavbv - Aug 27, 2018 / imbws - Sep 7, 2018
|Endeavour Scholarship / Proposed Program: Sustainable Design
4 - The admin has decided that your question warrants a response. So here is my detailed explanation regarding the reasons...
Scholarshipcaroweis22 - Sep 5, 2018 / Holt - Sep 7, 2018
|Chevening Leadership Essay - LEADING THROUGH INNOVATION
3 - Holt, thanks for your feedback. Definitely going to review my essay according to your feedback....
Scholarshipimbws - Sep 6, 2018 / imbws - Sep 7, 2018
|Writing my personal statement for KGSP 2019 Undergraduate - I'm applying for Computer Science major.
2 - if i were you I would started my essay like this, because u just start your essay by restating...
Scholarshipmohamedmamoon01 - Sep 5, 2018 / Parahat111 - Sep 6, 2018
|Study in UK - Chevening Essay - The Importance of Visual Design in Museums.
ScholarshipJeleetah - Sep 4, 2018 / Jeleetah - Sep 5, 2018
|Leadership and influence at a tech startup - Chevening (Leadership & Influence essay)
2 - Gloria you are only summarizing your accomplishments as a project coordinator. A PC is a Personal Computer. Do not...
ScholarshipAury23 - Sep 4, 2018 / Holt - Sep 5, 2018
|Critical Analysis of the Essay with regard to statement and conditions under subject is required!
4 - Hey qamaradeel, I think you have the examples to make an essay shine, what I think could help is...
Scholarshipqamaradeel - Sep 2, 2018 / Aury23 - Sep 5, 2018
|Biomedical engineer - Personal statement - I'm interested to apply for KGSP scholarship
4 - @bxddxst I really appreciate your help and I'm totally sure that I am going to make a new one,...
Scholarshipairam - Sep 3, 2018 / airam - Sep 4, 2018
|I recognized my natural leadership abilities and I always endeavored to improve these skills
Scholarshipblocket - Sep 3, 2018 / blocket - Sep 4, 2018
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