I'm planning to apply for AAS Scholarship and I need your help to review my support statement about proposed course and institution.
Thank you for your help.
WHY DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION?
As an employee of Telecommunication Company that is not only focused on profitability but also customer experience, analytical skills using data are crucial to achieving those goals. I remember when I first had to promote new products through a door to door without knowing the profiles or habits of people in the area, I had struggled to find customers. Especially, when they already have bad experiences with similar products. Therefore, it is important to identify our target customers, areas, and products. To strengthen the analysis, data becomes one of the important things and to explore the role of data in decision making and strategy, data science courses are the best choice as an essentials skill to tackle any challenges and provide better insights. And also, after these 6 years of working with responsibility on making performance reports, my interest in data analysis has increased as well as to pursue a career in the field of data such as data scientist, data analyst or data engineer. As we all know, The University of Melbourne is one of the best universities not only in Australia but also in the World. And I believe this title was given due to several factors, such as alumni profile, curriculum, and teacher quality, networking through professional life, and their impact on society. Taking a Data Science course at the University of Melbourne will not only give me technical and analytical skills about Data but also open up opportunities to be part of the international community of various professions.
Second, I choose Master of Computing at Australian National University (ANU) because ANU has strong research. Therefore, this University will be focus on explicit fields of study and the students will get access to top specialists and the most recent research.