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I chose to pursue my Master degree in Business Administration because I want to improve my abilities in Business Sector in order to support business development in Cambodia, specifically small and medium enterprises (SMEs). While helping with my family business that deals with equipment and power tools. I have gained hands-on experience in customer relations and basic management and I realize that a majority of decisions in local business rely on experience rather than actual knowledge of business. In addition, there is shortage of skillful human resources despite of the population of SMEs and the number of supports on local business and products in Cambodia has risen. The situations limit the possibility of potential growth, competitive advantage and sustainability.
I selected the University of Melbourne that provides wide range of subjects and real-world practices. The Innovation boot camp and Immersive Business Experience (IBE) attract me the most because they will bridge the gap between theory and real business world, which provides practical skills to develop business strategies, improve decision making skills, and boost innovation and creativity. Through this program, I hope to meet and build connections with professionals from diverse backgrounds thus expanding my career opportunities and gain access to diverse perspectives.
Alternatively, I also chose to study MBA at Monash University that specializes in digital transformation, financial management and leadership. Therefore, I can get better at digital marketing, communication, networking and better decision- making that are significant for my future intention to expand market of my business and share my knowledge and skills through social media platforms and online communities to support SMEs grow sustainably to adapt their business with the rapid changes of current economic environment and expand their business during this challenging economic environment.
I chose to pursue my Master degree in Business Administration because I want to improve my abilities in Business Sector in order to support business development in Cambodia, specifically small and medium enterprises (SMEs). While helping with my family business that deals with equipment and power tools. I have gained hands-on experience in customer relations and basic management and I realize that a majority of decisions in local business rely on experience rather than actual knowledge of business. In addition, there is shortage of skillful human resources despite of the population of SMEs and the number of supports on local business and products in Cambodia has risen. The situations limit the possibility of potential growth, competitive advantage and sustainability.
I selected the University of Melbourne that provides wide range of subjects and real-world practices. The Innovation boot camp and Immersive Business Experience (IBE) attract me the most because they will bridge the gap between theory and real business world, which provides practical skills to develop business strategies, improve decision making skills, and boost innovation and creativity. Through this program, I hope to meet and build connections with professionals from diverse backgrounds thus expanding my career opportunities and gain access to diverse perspectives.
Alternatively, I also chose to study MBA at Monash University that specializes in digital transformation, financial management and leadership. Therefore, I can get better at digital marketing, communication, networking and better decision- making that are significant for my future intention to expand market of my business and share my knowledge and skills through social media platforms and online communities to support SMEs grow sustainably to adapt their business with the rapid changes of current economic environment and expand their business during this challenging economic environment.
