As a student I have always aimed to become a highly skilled electrical engineer after graduation
... I don't see a reason to have the part "as a student". I like if you remove that part
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As an ambitous student, I hope to become more than a student and this fast track program satisfy this need.
.... well .... what sort of ambitiousness is that? you need to be a little specific as it is not clear...
Also, I like if you spoke about your capability to handle study pressure as this is going to put you on tremendous pressure in order to keep up with double courses.
Since tuition fees for international students, living cost abroad are usually expensive when converted to Nigeria currency.
.... this is a logical reason .