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'to become a teacher' what inspires you to pursue a post-high school education & why?


vung 2 / 5  
Oct 16, 2011   #1
Please check my essay and help me correcting with the grammar this is for my scholarship i wrote it. I am not sure with my grammar words, because mu English is not good enough yet. Please someone check it for me as soon as possible, because it's due on October 21.

I was inspires to become a teacher when i was in elementary school. My teacher mrs. Nai Nai Aye had the biggest influence on my desire to teach others. She was always loving and just was there when i heeded a help. I was not so good in all subject and i was always felt so sad. When i felt sad she was the only person understood my felling. She always gave me with a smiley face. Also she told me to just word harder , not to weary of my future, but look forward to it. her gentle tone always made me feel comfortable letting her into my complete life. She was great, generous, passionate, kind and patient. She also lived a hard life which helped her related to me even more. I wanted to be able to relate to my students on a personal level just she did with me. She helped me with a schedule change to helping me fine how to set a better life. Without her caring heart on me i will be lost my future. Now i have my head on straight and ready to help others and teach them the way of living life not because me, but because her.

I wanted to be a pr-k teacher for making positive difference on the future of children. Teacher can taught the future and they can change it before it even arrives. I have always love to give young people the best start in life.Interacting with kids is great. Also Being with children with has positively influenced me as well. They always remind me that there's is so many thing i should be thankful for and should appreciate. I am always reminded me to say please, thank you, and you're welcome, that can i still be silly even thought i am already a grown up and many other things that i neglect most of the time. Also, teacher can help set them the right path maybe even guide the children to create a better tomorrow. I love housekeeping and decorating with full color it really make me feel more fresher. Be recreational activities, it is a lot more fun interacting and learning with kids. As a hobby, i been helping my brother with his home work and tutor him when i have a spare time. I also have been helping to kids as a student worker at Migrant Education program with the homework after school. I am thankful for these job experiences. They have prepare me mentally and financially. This is important in that i am now more mature and responsible to become a teacher.
Didi94 1 / 2  
Oct 16, 2011   #2
I was inspired to become a teacher when i was in elementary school. My teacher mrs. Nai Nai Aye had the biggest influence on my desire to teach others. She was always loving and was always there when i heeded help . When i felt sad for not doing well in school , she was the only person who understood my fellings. She always gave me with asmiled to me and Also she told me to just work harder, not to worry about my future, but look forward to it. Her gentle tone always made me feel comfortable letting her into my complete life. She was great, generous, passionate, kind and patient. She also lived a hard life which helped her related to me even more. She helped me with a schedule change to helping me fine how to set a better life.Without her caring heart on me i will be lost my future . Now i have my head on straight and ready to help others and teach them the way of living life not because of me, but because of her.I want to be able to connect to my students personally just like how she did with me.

I wanted to be a pr-k teacher who makes positive difference on the future of children. Teacher can taught the future and they can change it before it even arrives. I have always love to give young people the best start in life.Interacting with kids is great. Also , being with themwith has positively influences me as well. They always remind me that there's so many things i should be thankful for and should appreciate. I am always reminded me to say please, thank you, and you're welcome, that can i still be silly even thought i am already a grown up and many other things that i neglect most of the time. Also, Teachers can help set them the right path maybe even guide the children to create a better tomorrow. I love housekeeping and decorating with full color it really make me feel more fresher. Be recreational activities, it is a lot more fun way of interacting and learning with kids. As a hobby, i have been helping my brother with his home work and tutoring him when I have spare time. I have also been helping to kids as a student worker at Migrant Education program with childrens homework after school. I am thankful for these job experiences. They have prepared me mentally and financially. This is important in that i am now more mature and responsible to become a teacher.

There are some lines I didn't understand & colored them in blue. I get the point of your essay, but you keep jumping from the past to the present and then to the past again, which is quite confusing
OP vung 2 / 5  
Oct 16, 2011   #3
I was inspired to become a teacher when i was in elementary school. My teacher mrs. Nai Nai Aye had the biggest influence on my desire to teach others. She was always loving and was always there when i heeded help. When i felt sad for not doing well in school, she was the only person who understood my fellings. She always smiled to me and told me to just work harder, not to worry about my future, but look forward to it. Her gentle tone always made me feel comfortable letting her into my life. She was great, generous, passionate, kind and patient. She also lived a hard life which helped related to me even more. Her caring heart on me and reminded me not to backward was made me to set my future to be something really . Now i have my head on straight and ready to help others and teach them the way of living life not because of me, but because of her.I want to be able to connectto my students personally just like how she did with me.

I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher who makes positive difference on the future of children. I want to be a teacher like my teacher Mrs. Nai Nai Aye. I know that i'will able to do the way of what is a kindergarten teacher responsible . I know my self that i am a patient person can make the kids fell warmers. I have always love to give young people the best start in life.Interacting with kids is great. Being with them positively influences me as well. They always remind me that there's so many things i should be thankful for and should appreciate. I am always reminded me to say please, thank you, and you're welcome, that and many other things that i neglect most of the time. Teachers can help set them the right path maybe even guide the children to create a better tomorrow. I love recreational activities, it is a lot fun way of interacting and learning with kids. I have been helping my brother with his home work and tutoring him when I have spare time. I have also been helping as a student worker at Migrant Education program with childrens homework after school. I am thankful for these job experiences. They have prepared me mentally and financially. I am now more mature and responsible to become a teacher.

Please read it for me again check it the grammar mistake and the way i wrote. Do you think is it will be good or do i need to adding more. Please help. Thanks you for your good feed back.


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