Engineering has been my passion since very early age
I don't see anything wrong with grammar here and your writing seems quite good.However I think your intro has the potential to be much more interesting to the reader if you pay some more attention and arrange its flow of ideas giving some more emotional touch .
During the childhood, I had been involved in servicing and troubleshooting of various home appliances. I began to incline towards engineering when I heard one of my teachers saying "Everything in universe is engineering, even the rise of sun and flight of birds have some engineering behind."
I suggest some thing like;
I still remember my love for servicing electrical appliances at home when I was a kid. I was the first hand support to my mom every time she had an issue with home appliances. However, it is this saying of my teacher, "Everything in universe is engineering, even the rise of sun and flight of birds have some engineering behind", that made me seriously inclined towards the field of engineering.I got interest in Biomedical engineering as my career for life because of its unique blend of life sciences with the technical skills of engineering.
Good sentence.Biomedical is among the most rapidly growing discipline
s with the most attracting area for research and development.
However, I am keen
interested toon pursu
eing my further studies in nanoscience and nanotechnology
The advancement of nanotechnology and the effects it has had on civilization has always
put drove my
attractionserious attention towards it.
GOOD JOB n GOOD LUCK!!!