I build my network working in Human Resources Management at "Electrolux Egypt Company"

Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community ...

Human resources Management is a supportive function for all departments of the organization, so my working in Human Resources Management at "Electrolux Egypt Company" allow me to build and expand my network within local and international network communities.

Electrolux Egypt Company created a great internal training community and the working in this community is a voluntary work, and to join this community as a trainer you should firstly pass some exams. I became a volunteer at this community as a trainer of "soft skill and technical courses" such as (Team Work, Communication Skills, Time Management, Problem Solving & Decision Making, Excel and Power Point), through this community I gave a lot of training Courses for employees from different departments such as (Marketing, Supply Chain, Purchasing, IT, Finance, Audit, and Legal) which allowed me to stretch and build a strong professional networking. And this professional network supported me during my Postgraduate studies when the professor of Strategic Management required a research about "evaluation of the strategic management in your company through the vision, mission, goals, and SWOT analysis for each department". This required me to make a one to one meetings with key person in each department and they were fully supportive. And they helped me to expand profoundly my understanding of business, and during my postgraduate I built strong network with the professors and teaching assistant in different majors.

Helping people to grow is my hobby and passion. During the past years, I built a professional network and I am willing to grow this network more and more.

I believe that chevening gathers the "crčme" of the ambitious and influencers Alumni worldwide. Belonging to such a multinational community with different backgrounds, ideas, and cultures would be an edge. I would be glad to be part of this community that similar to pieces of puzzle gathering to format a wonderful picture, if each community in each country meets to discuss and brainstorm to develop their country it's mean we are going to change the world.

I will cooperate and committed with the community of chevening Alumni in Egypt to brainstorm and generate creative ideas about how to increase the industrial sector in Egypt? And how to strength the mutual commercial relationship between Egypt and United Kingdom? And also I will be participating actively through the social media of Alumni community such LinkedIn and Facebook etc.

Mahmoud, the essay is great. Your approach to the development of your networking skills and the way that you were able to use it for the betterment of your career is refreshing. It displays the ability that you have to not only use your current network, but also provide a new network through existing contacts. I am wondering though if you never had the opportunity to allow other people to use this network? Somehow, I feel that the uniqueness of your essay will be further enhanced if you can present an actual use of this network outside of your own needs. That is what sets this essay apart from the others. As for that single sentence about how helping people is your hobby, it requires more development in line with the prompt requirements for it to actually help add some context to your essay. If you can't add relevant information to that line, I suggest that you lose it instead.

I am not sure about the last paragraph that you have posted. Why do you have question marks in it? Are you asking me or telling me about this information? Kindly clarify that point. By the way, don't mention facebook and linkedIn towards the end. Digital networks are difficult to defend in such a reality based network essay discussion.

I think you should add some more detail on what you will also contribute to the chevening community as well.

@Holt
Firstly, i would like to thank you about your reply and valuable adding to my essay , and i actually use my network outside my need

Here is my essay after editing, i wrote what i edited by green ink, and i'm waiting to your supportive feedback

... and during my postgraduate at Cairo University I built strong network with ...

Helping people to grow is my hobby and passion, and I depend on my experience in training and my networking to support others people or make a link among them.

... relationship between Egypt and United Kingdom. And also I will be participating actively with chevening Events.

@Holt
please, can you review my essay about chosen university