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Business administration major - I'm planning apply for KGSP 2020 scholarship


NurLiana 1 / -  
Sep 26, 2019   #1
I'm planning apply for KGSP 2020 scholarship and need help with my study plan. Wish you could help me, thankyou in advance.

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Study plan for bachelor degree course


(Please state the reason you choose such universities and departments (or majors), your academic goals, specific plans (including timeline) to achieve them, and future plan after completion of your study. In case that preferred departments (or majors) of the preferred universities are different, please mention about them separately.


Being a student under business administration major has been my dream since I was a teenager. To achieve this dream of mine, I have chosen 3 top universities in South Korea as my preferred universities to further my study. I have been doing a lot of research on top or best universities in South Korea for business administration major and also have been asking a GKS Scholarship alumni majored in business administration in Korea University Business School for advices regarding this matter and have come to a conclusion to choose Hanyang University as my first choice, Korea University as my second choice and Yonsei University as my third choice of university. These 3 universities have been listed as the top 5 universities for business administration major, along with Seoul National University and Sungkyunkwan University, which is the first reason why I decided to choose these universities as my preferred universities to further my study. All of the mentioned universities have produced a lot of notable alumni especially in business sector such as Suh Kyung Bae, the chairman of AmorePacific Corporation who graduated from Yonsei University. For someone who has been dreaming of becoming a successful entrepreneur or a successful businesswoman in the future, those lists of notable alumni really have an encouraging effect on me. I feel so encourage to be a successful person in business sector like them in the future, thus feeling that being admitted to one of these universities I've listed before will give me a big help to achieve my dream. Those 3 universities also give so much support for international students in adjusting to Korea such as Korea University provides a free tutoring program for international student meanwhile Yonsei university offers more than 1000 English lectures, which I believe will become a big help for me while I'm there.

I believe someone should have goals in everything they do because without goals, they will become less motivated in doing or pursuing something which means they will get unfavorable result at the end of it. This leads me to set a few goals that I want to achieve when I'm in Korea. I would like to challenge myself to maintain a GPA of at least 3.70 or higher for every semester while I'm there. During my diploma days at my previous university, I followed my own everyday study timetable and for me, it was the study timetable that made it possible for me to maintain my GPA. I planned to do the same when I'm in Korea because I do believe that a proper study timetable will become a big help for me to maintain my GPA. I also planned to join any entrepreneurship club activities in my future university as a preparation for me to become a successful entrepreneur in the future. I have done some research and I'm really excited about Hanyang University Center for Global Entrepreneurship Program and would like to join it if I'm given a chance to enroll as a student there. Like Hanyang University Center for Global Entrepreneurship, Yonsei University also offers Yonsei Enterprise Support Foundation that supports foundation building for business start-up, technician cultivating and supports student venture which I believe will really help me achieving my dream as a successful entrepreneur after I graduated.

Since the first time I aspire to become a successful entrepreneur in the future, I have been planning every little step that I need to take to achieve my dream. My future plan after I graduated with a bachelor degree in business administration major is to further my studies to Master's level in Master of Business Administration or famously known as MBA. I have been planning to enroll in Stanford University in California to achieve this dream of mine. After I graduated from Master of Business Administration, I planned to return to my home country, Malaysia and work in a related field to contribute to my country development for a few years before starting my own business in fashion industry. I planned to work hard to become the next Vivy Yusof, a successful entrepreneur in Malaysia and also the co-founder of FashionValet and The dUCk Group.
Spark00eh - / 7  
Sep 26, 2019   #2
just a little rewording

Since the time I firstaspired to become a successful entrepreneur in the future, I have been planned every little step that I need to take is necessary to achieve my dream. My future plans after I graduated graduate with a bachelor degree
Maria - / 1,098 389  
Sep 27, 2019   #3
@NurLiana
Hi there! Welcome to the forum. That's great that you're planning ahead - this will certainly help propel your application. I hope this comprehensive feedback can help you in your writing endeavors.

Spacing is critical when writing. This is not the regular spacing, but the pacing of your writing and the manner by which you separate your content from each other. Remember that paragraphs tend to avoid lasting more than 4 sentences. And this is for a good reason: maintaining a decent structure is critical for academic writing. Implement this with the first paragraph.

The transition between thought A and B needs work as well. Take, for instance, the first paragraph's introductory sentences. From tackling your childhood dream of partaking business administration courses, you immediately jumped into your aspirations for Korea. There was no mediation that could have helped make the transition a bit more smoother. Work on this as well.


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