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Chevening scholarship essay: Networking with work related professionals by using LinkedIn and Alumni

Iqbal3993 3 / 6 5  
Oct 30, 2019   #1
Dear experts, please put your valuable comments on this essay. Any remarks will be regarded as guidelines.

Chevening is looking for individuals with strong professional relationship-building skills,

who will engage with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Please explain how you build and maintain relationships in a professional capacity, using clear examples of how you currently do this, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.

To me, networking is about establishing and cultivating relationships with people from diverse and same interest group and maintain regular communication with them by sharing ideas and information in order to grow professionally.

While developing an analytical method for Gastro-resistant Tablets, I was repeatedly experiencing the problem of a sudden decrease in the active content of the drug material even after applying several techniques. Even after the consultation with my supervisor, the problem persisted as the product was new for us to develop. I thought of presenting this problem with international pharmaceutical R&D community through LinkedIn as the professionals of this field across the world are experienced dealing with similar issues. I found some groups comprised of highly experienced professionals across the world and approached them highlighting every detail of the problem and, to my surprise, I was given some practical suggestions with a detailed explanation of underlying reasons. They advised me to use amber colour glass apparatus as the drug material is susceptible to light and they also suggested me to use a special coating in order to protect the drug material from being affected by acidic medium. These measures enabled us to come up with the solutions to develop the product and more importantly, I was appreciated by my supervisor for being in touch with the global community of my field. I have been maintaining active connection with some professionals and often get benefited when they share their ideas and problem-solving experiences. Furthermore, I was referred to be a member of the RAPS (Regulatory Affairs Professional Society), an international association offers seminars and training on regulations and guidelines generated by various regulatory bodies like FDA, MHRA. This has opened an avenue for me to stay connected with the pioneers of my field.

Earlier, Jagannath University Alumni association allowed me to stay connected to Chemists who have been graduated from the same university and have been working in various related fields. Most importantly, my connection to the seniors who are members of the Alumni, helped me a lot for landing my first job. When I was seeking jobs after postgraduation, I was referred by a member of the Alumni who had been working for Renata Limited. His positive recommendation and my overall performance at the interview contributed to secure the position of a Research Chemist at the R&D Department. Since then, I was more involved in the association and have been an active part of the organization. By using this platform, I have been able to broaden my horizon and have a wide range of active contacts working in various sectors who will be of great help in future being recommended for senior Chemistry related positions in different organizations.

As pharmaceutical sector is highly regulated by the regulatory body like MHRA, my professional goals push me to build strong relevant networking which can be attained by meeting and interacting with the Chevening community consisting people of diverse and same interest group that will propel my career back in my home country.

Maria - / 1,100 389  
Nov 1, 2019   #2
Hello there! I will do my best to help you in writing. Don't be afraid to approach us again should you have more questions.

While I appreciate the introductory paragraph or sentence, I think that you could still improve this part of your essay if you integrated a briefing on what you will be discussing in the latter parts of the text. Just a quick summation on what they should anticipate from your text can be helpful for your case. This also helps enhance the overall appearance of your written work because it gives readers a more structured format to follow in your essay.

In the second to the last paragraph, it would be great if you can quantify your successes. This is one step that is often overlooked by other applicants. What will truly boost your application is if you can properly give the evaluators an idea of why you believe that this is a form of success.

Your concluding paragraph should also be treated with the same regard. Try to expound properly this portion to ensure that you are delivering the message with ease.

Best of luck.
OP Iqbal3993 3 / 6 5  
Nov 1, 2019   #3

Thank you so much for your useful insight and I will certainly rewrite the essay considering your input. I wish I could show you the essay after rewriting.

However, I would be extremely grateful if you could please review my essay on Leadership and Influence that I submitted in this forum. I am providing the link below.


That essay may contain the same issues you addressed above that providing hints at the introduction about what points I am going to focus on in the following paragraphs. I will correct both the essays according to your comment.


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